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1、Lecture 4 情景作文寫作（二）情景作文寫作（二） 1考研英語情景寫作常見問題考研英語情景寫作常見問題1.1. 無話可說，難以下筆。無話可說，難以下筆。 2.2. 有話可說，但不對路。有話可說，但不對路。 3.3. 文章安排，極不合理。文章安排，極不合理。 4.4. 結(jié)構(gòu)混亂，缺乏關(guān)聯(lián)。結(jié)構(gòu)混亂，缺乏關(guān)聯(lián)。 5.5. 語言表達，錯誤繁多。語言表達，錯誤繁多。 6.6. 用詞貧乏，句式單一。用詞貧乏，句式單一。 7.7. 時間限制，無法完成。時間限制，無法完成。 8.8. 字跡不清，影響閱卷。字跡不清，影響閱卷。 多讀、多寫、多改多讀、多寫、多改2審題（審題（Analyze the que

2、stion）構(gòu)思（構(gòu)思（Brainstorm）列提綱（列提綱（Outline）寫作（寫作（Write up）檢查（檢查（Check up）英語情景寫作步驟英語情景寫作步驟31圖，表提示 1) 圖表作文2) 圖畫作文2純文字提示 1）提綱式2）規(guī)定情景式英語情景寫作題目類型英語情景寫作題目類型4DIRECTIONS:A)Title:WHERETOLIVE-INTHECITYORTHECOUNTRY?B)Timelimit:40minutesC)Wordlimit:120-150words(notincludingthegivenopeningsentence)D)Yourcompositions

3、houldbebasedontheOUTLINEbelowandshouldstartwiththegivenopeningsentence.E)YourcompositionmustbewrittenclearlyintheANSWERSHEET.OUTLINE:1.Conveniencesofthecity2.Attractionsofthecountry3.Disadvantagesofboth4.Mypreference一提綱式作文一提綱式作文5Where to LiveIn the City or the Country? Many people appreciate the con

4、veniences of the city. People can enjoy a colorful life there. They are well-informed because they have the access to news. They are well-paid because they have stable jobs. They are well-fed and well-dressed because there is an adequate supply of goods. They often have a wonderful time because ther

5、e are many places for recreation and relaxation. On the contrary, others are attracted by the country. They like clear streams, fresh air and high mountains. In the country, people feel closer to naturethe very nature that gives man life. However, both the city and the country have their disadvantag

6、es. Air pollution is very serious in the city. Moreover, it is so crowded that many people dont want to go out. In the country, it is inconvenient to buy things. Besides, people can find no way to kill the long and tedious nights. I prefer to live in the city for a time and then go to the country fo

7、r a change.6Where to LiveFormanypeople,toliveinacityisagreatfortune.Withitscinemasandtheatres,shopsandrestaurants,acityoffersthembenefitsofthelatestscientificachievementsineveryrespect.Theyjustcantimaginelivinginthecountryside,wheretoomanyinconveniencesandlittleentertainmentareintolerable.Forsomepeo

8、ple,however,happinessliesinthecountryside.Withitspeaceandquiet,freshandcleanair,andbeautifulandnaturalviews.Theycanbefreedfromthenoiseandbustleofthecity,anddonthavetoworryaboutairpollutionandtrafficaccidents,whicheveryoneinthecitysuffersfrom.Ichoosetoliveinasuburbsoastoenjoytheadvantagesandavoidthed

9、isadvantagesofboth.7DIRECTIONS:A. Study the following set of pictures carefully and write an essay in no less than 120 words.B. Your essay must be written clearly on the ANSWER SHEET.C. Your essay should cover all the information provided and meet the requirements below:a) Interpret the following pi

10、ctures.b) Predict the tendency of tobacco consumption and give your reasons.二、圖表作文8 From the above set of pictures, we can see that there were a total of 14.364 billion pounds of tobacco produced in 1994 and 14.2 billion pounds in 1995. Because the amount of tobacco production is falling yearly, it

11、can be predicted that the tendency of tobacco consumption would also be falling yearly. There are many reasons. Firstly, smoking wastes money. Every year there are two hundred billion dollars “burnt” in the cigarette “fire”, secondly, smoking would hardly do people any good and it can even cause can

12、er. Every year there are three million people “buried” in the cigarette “tomb.” Although tobacco consumption is falling, there are too many people who smoke. The population in the world is 5.8 billion, but about twenty percent of the population, that is to say 1.1 billion people smoke. So the situat

13、ion is serious and the movement against smoking is still a difficult task.9Asshowninthepictures,wecanseethatthetotaltobaccoproductis14.364billionpoundsin1994,whileitis14.2billionpoundsin1995.Thewholepopulationofearthis5.8billion,butthehumanbeingswhokeepssmokingis1.1billion,maintainingtheproportionof

14、20percent.Owingtothecigarette,200billiondolarswerewasted,3millionpeopledieofsmokingannually.Fromthefiguregiveninthechart,wecancometoaconclusionthatthetotaltobaccoconsumptionwilldecrease.Therearereasonsforthedroppingconsumption.First,moreandmorepeoplebelivesmokingdoharmtohealth,wastemoney.Soalotofpeo

15、plebegintogiveupsmoking.Second,forbiddingsmokinginpublicareascausepeopleconsciousthatsmokingisabadhabbit.Therefor,Ibelivemoreandmorewillgiveupsmokingwiththeadvancenentofsocity.10圖表作文寫作常識圖表作文寫作常識1、圖形種類及概述法 2、常用的描述用法 3、圖表中的數(shù)據(jù) (Data) 具體表達法 相關(guān)常用詞組相關(guān)常用詞組 1、主章開頭 2、表示數(shù)據(jù)變化的單詞或者詞組 3、其它在描述中的常用到的詞 考研英語圖表寫作套句精選

16、考研英語圖表寫作套句精選 11三、 圖畫作文2003Directions:Studythefollowingpicturescarefullyandwriteanessayabout200wordsbasedonthefollowing1.describethesetofdrawingsandinterpretitsmeaning2.pointoutitsimplicationsinourlife.12 It goes without saying that the drawings aim at revealing a common and serious problem in China:

17、 how to educate and cultivate the young. Lets take a closer look at the drawings. In an ideal condition, the flower blooms. But when moved out of the green house, it perishes under the rain and storm. It is obvious that the flower in greenhouse cant withstand wind and rains. Nowadays the young gener

18、ation in China, like the flower in the greenhouse, live under the full protection from their parents. Parents want to show all their love to their children. They give their children all the best things they can afford and do not let their children do anything at home. Self-centeredness and arbitrari

19、ness have become a trait of the young generation. Once leaving their parents, many young people cannot make a living of their own. They get lost when stepping into the complex reality and cannot face any hardships and difficulties. Child education has become one of the most popular topics discussed

20、not only by educational experts, but also by people in all walks of life. The failure of child education does more harm to the development of our society and our civilization than to the children themselves. Thus, its high time that parents, educators and the government made concerted efforts to put

21、 an end to this situation.13作文模式作文模式Model1:Problem-solutionModel2:Positive-enhancementModel3:GraphsandtablesModel4:ContrastandComparisonModel5:Proverb（PracticeMakesPerfect）14WritingPractices TopicOne: Directions: Studythefollowingpicturecarefullyandwriteanessayentitled“WasteinHumanResources”. Inthee

22、ssayyoushould 1)describethepictureandinterpretitsmeaning, and 2)giveyourcommentonthephenomenon. Youshouldwriteabout200wordsneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.(20points)15WasteinHumanResources Asisdepictedinthecartoon,amanistryinginvaintofitabulbintoasocket,forthebulbandthesocketsimplydonotfit.Fromthepicturewecans

23、eeclearlythatthebulbrepresentsthetalentandthesockethis/hercorrespondingposition.Thesymbolicmeaningofthecartoonisobvious:thejobthetalentdoesisnotfitforhisspecialty. ThephenomenonrevealedbythecartoonisnotrareinChina,acountryshortoftalent.Whereveryougo,youcanseeahostofresearchworkersandtechniciansareas

24、signedtodojobswhichhavelittleornothingtodowiththeirtraining.Asaresult,timeandefficiencyareinevitablylostandhumanresourceswasted.16 Butwhatonearthgivesrisetosuchphenomenon?Infact,thereasonsarenotdifficulttoseek.Firstofall,itistheold-fashionedpersonnelmanagementsystemthatisresponsibleforthegreatlossof

25、thefreeflowoftrainedexpertsandhencehinderstheoptimalallocationofhumanresources.Secondly,inefficientplanningandthelackofbudgetresultintheunevendistributionoftalent,withasurplusinoneareaandashortageinanother.Finally,thewagesysteminChinaisyettobeperfected.Currently,thewagesystemisnotfavorabletotheintel

26、lectualprofessionals.Luredbygainfulemployment,theytendtogiveuptheirtrainedprofessionandtakeupsometechnicallylesschallengingjobs.Understandably,hundredsorthousandsoftheelitegoabroadeitherforbettercareeropportunitiesorforhigherincome. Chinasdevelopmentdependstoalargemeasureontheelitegroup.Thereforeits

27、urgentforthegovernmenttoworkoutmorefavorablepoliciestostopthebraindrainandwasteofhumanresources.Onlyinthiswaycanwefurthervitalizeournationinthepost-WTOeraandstaycompetitiveintheworldmarket.(332words)17TopicTwo Directions: Studythefollowingpicturecarefullyandwriteanessayentitled“BeRoundorBeSquare?” I

28、ntheessayyoushould 1)describethepictureandinterpretitsmeaning,and 2)giveyourcommentonthephenomenon. Youshouldwriteabout160-200wordsneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.(20points)18BeRoundorBeSquare? Thisisacaricatureinwhichwefindamanwhohasbroughtwithhimtwoabsolutelydifferentreports.Whenheisinfrontofhisbosswitha“rou

29、nd”head,hewillpresenthimwithareportdescribedina“round”way.Butwhenheturnstoanotherbosswhohasa“square”head,hecaterstohimwithareportwrittenintermsof“square”.Obviously,themanischeatinghisbossesandIthinkheshouldbeseverelycriticizedbythepublic.19 Firstly,whatthemandoescoversupthetruth.Itsquitepossiblethat

30、thefactsinthemanstworeportsareneither“round”nor“square”.Asaresult,hisbossesmaygetatotallyfalseideaaboutwhatisactuallygoingonandmakewrongdecisionwhichmaysooneroflaterleadtograveconsequences.Itsnotsurprisingtoinducethatthewrongdecisionsbasedonwhatthemanhasreportedwillgiverisetoabiglosstotheenterprise.

31、 20 Secondly,themansdeceptionsshouldbecondemnable.Thewaysheflexiblyreactstodifferentpeopleonlyshowsthathesutterlyunreliable.Itsnothardtoimaginethathewillelaboratehisreportswitha“triangle”wayifthebosshappenstoholdan“trianglar”opinion.Whoknows?Forsuchadeceitfulperson,youareneversurewhetherhestalkingab

32、outtruthornot. Toconclude,weshouldnotonlybealertaboutthissortofdishonestpeople,butalsoreproachtheirbadconductsandmisdeeds. (248words)21Directions Studythefollowinggraphcarefullyandwriteanessay. 1)mostvaluedobjectsinthehomein2001,and 2)yourcommentonthepossibleeffects Youshouldwriteabout160-200wordsne

33、atlyonANSWERSHEET2.(20points) (p132)22MostValuedObjectsintheHome “Whatobjectsinyourhomedoyouvaluethemost?”Ifthisquestionisposedtochildren,parentsandgrandparents,theanswerasindicatedinthegraphcanbequitedifferent.Letusconsideritindetail. Furnitureisvaluedmostbyparents.Everybodywillagreethatchildrendon

34、otshowmuchinterestinfurniture;theyarefondofplay.Grandparentsarealsolessinterestedinfurniturethanparentsare.Thereasonmaybethatolderpeopleshowlessaffectionformaterialthings,butmoreaffectionformemoriesandotherimmaterialthings.23 Televisionisfavoredmostbychildren.Itiscommonknowledgethatchildrenlovetowatchtelevision,especiallyanimatedcartoons.Gran