備戰(zhàn)208年高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)書面表達(dá)?？妓夭乃儆迷掝}04家庭環(huán)境與教育含解析

1、家庭環(huán)境與教育裾題解讀家庭教育和教育類是在高考作文測試中比擬常見的,與社會(huì)類和環(huán)境類并稱為作文話題三劍客,同學(xué)們?cè)趶?fù)習(xí)的時(shí)候,命題者可能會(huì)圍繞這三類話題：1教育的功能中學(xué)階段應(yīng)當(dāng)提供通才教育還是專才教育要不要延長義務(wù)教育年限要不要讓農(nóng)村地區(qū)的學(xué)生更容易上學(xué)老師要教學(xué)生如何判斷是非嗎 對(duì)于社會(huì)角度,學(xué)生們可以從促進(jìn)經(jīng)濟(jì)開展、增加社會(huì)流動(dòng)性、維護(hù)社會(huì)穩(wěn)定這幾個(gè) 方面來展開,對(duì)于個(gè)人,可以寫改變思維模式、有利于就業(yè)和便利生活這幾個(gè)方面來寫2學(xué)校的科目應(yīng)當(dāng)由誰選擇比方說：政府選課or老師選課學(xué)生選擇所有的科目 or根據(jù)興趣自行選擇還有一種是讓你分析學(xué)習(xí)各類科目的重要性.比方：要不要學(xué)歷史要不要中學(xué)階段

2、就學(xué)習(xí)外語要不要學(xué)數(shù)學(xué)哲學(xué)這類的科目3什么樣的教學(xué)方式最好一般會(huì)考到的話題有：私立學(xué)校好不好留學(xué)好不好要不要分快慢班小組學(xué)習(xí)還是單獨(dú)學(xué)習(xí)好現(xiàn)在還出現(xiàn)一種考題就是：遠(yuǎn)程教育的利弊,同學(xué)們可以關(guān)注一下.4學(xué)費(fèi)應(yīng)該誰來付這些話題都有一個(gè)共同的特征,就是題目中往往會(huì)說：高等教育只對(duì)學(xué)生自己有好處,因此學(xué)生應(yīng)當(dāng)為高等教育買單.同學(xué)們?cè)谶M(jìn)行寫作時(shí),可以先反駁這種理由,再交代學(xué)生自己支付學(xué)費(fèi)的后果 .5學(xué)生需要參加社會(huì)實(shí)踐嗎當(dāng)代大學(xué)生對(duì)于課外活動(dòng)的態(tài)度 學(xué)生要不要參加無償社會(huì)勞動(dòng)畢業(yè)后需要去農(nóng)村鍛煉嗎要不要從小遠(yuǎn)離父母居住在這類題目中,學(xué)生可以闡述一下現(xiàn)在大學(xué)生對(duì)于參加社會(huì)實(shí)踐的態(tài)度,并說明參加社會(huì)實(shí)踐的好

3、處.6家庭教育與學(xué)校教育遇到這一類的題目,同學(xué)們可以寫一下家庭教育與學(xué)校教育各自的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn).另外,家庭教育中還會(huì)出現(xiàn)這樣的題目：窮人家的孩子是否早當(dāng)家要不要把孩子趁早送到學(xué)校去老師對(duì)兒童的智力和社會(huì)開展所起的作用大于家長嗎教育類話題做題技巧首先審題,看清題目要你表達(dá)的是什么內(nèi)容.對(duì)于個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)類題目：第一段 ：開頭段,開門見山,闡述題目背景并引出自己的觀點(diǎn).第二段：第一個(gè)分論點(diǎn),正面舉例論證你的觀點(diǎn).第三段：第二個(gè)分論點(diǎn),可依然正面舉例論證,也可反面論證你的觀點(diǎn).第四段：自然結(jié)尾,重申主題.學(xué)必求其心得,業(yè)必貴于專精對(duì)于題目給出觀點(diǎn)的題目：第一段：一般題目中會(huì)給出兩個(gè)觀點(diǎn),學(xué)生可以先說明題目中觀點(diǎn)

4、各自闡述的內(nèi)容并分析觀點(diǎn)沖突的原因.第二段：論證第一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)的合理性,與其不合理性.第三段：論證第二個(gè)觀點(diǎn)的合理性與不合理性.第四段：結(jié)尾,并引出個(gè)人觀點(diǎn).素材積累.話題常用單詞1. parenting/upbringing家長對(duì)孩子的教育2.schooling 學(xué)校對(duì)學(xué)生的教育3.awareness 意識(shí)4.cultivate=develop=nurture=foster 培養(yǎng)5.creative 有創(chuàng)造力的6 .physical 身體的7 . psychological 心理的8 .peer同齡人9.motivation 動(dòng)力10 .motivated 有動(dòng)力的11 . adapt to 適

5、應(yīng)12 .discipline 紀(jì)律13 .stimulating令人思維活潑的14.mental development 智力開展15 .physical development身體開展16 .promote 促進(jìn)17 .attend school 上學(xué)18.innate先天就具有的19. help students to sharpen their skills幫助學(xué)生提升某種技能20.social sciences社會(huì)科學(xué)二.話題常用短語1. adapt oneself to the development of使自己適應(yīng)的開展2.scope of knowledge 知識(shí)面灌輸高尚的道

6、德觀3. instill high moral values減輕一的負(fù)擔(dān)學(xué)必求其心得,業(yè)必貴于專精4. lighten / relieve / ease the burden of5. comprehensive knowledge淵博的知識(shí)6. enrich the teaching method豐富教育手段7. impart / inculcate knowledge傳授知識(shí)8.receive education 接受教育9. schooling upbringing 學(xué)校教育10.parenting vocational education家庭教育11。 long-distance ed

7、ucation遠(yuǎn)程教育12。 narrow down the gap between 縮/J、的差距13.downto earth / practical 切合實(shí)際的14. enjoy equal rights 享有平等權(quán)利15. solid professional working experience扎實(shí)的職業(yè)工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)16.exchange experience 交流經(jīng)驗(yàn)17.undertake the obligations承當(dāng)責(zé)任18. offer a chance of education 提供教育時(shí)機(jī)19.vocational guidance職業(yè)指導(dǎo)20.vocational t

8、raining職業(yè)練習(xí)21。 face up to possible pressure and competition勇敢面對(duì)可能的壓力和競爭22。 Exam oriented Education應(yīng)試教育23.Quality oriented Education (Quality Education)素質(zhì)教育三、參考語句話題常用句型1。 Although this view is wildly held, this is little evidence that education can be obtained at any age沒有g(shù)raduation.人and at any place

9、 .盡管這一觀點(diǎn)被廣泛接受,很少有證據(jù)說明教育能夠在任何地點(diǎn)、任何年齡進(jìn)行.2。 No one can deny the fact that a persons education is the most important aspect of his life.人能否認(rèn)：教育是人生最重要的一方面.3。 When it comes to education , the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study說到教育,大局部人認(rèn)為其是一個(gè)終生的學(xué)習(xí)4.An increasing number of people

10、are beginning to realize that education is not complete with越來越多的人開始意識(shí)到教育不能隨著畢業(yè)而結(jié)束5.People seem to fail to take into account the fact that education does not end with graduation.們似乎無視了教育不應(yīng)該隨著畢業(yè)而結(jié)束這一事實(shí).學(xué)必求其心得,業(yè)必貴于專精6. People believe that computer skills will enhance their job opportunities or promoti

11、on opportunities人們相信擁有計(jì)算機(jī)技術(shù)可以獲得更多工作或提升的時(shí)機(jī).7. The information Ive collected over last few years leads me to believe that this knowledge may be less useful than most people think.從這幾年我搜集的信息來看,這些知識(shí)并沒有人們想象的那么有用.8. Now, it is generally accepted that no college or university can educate its students by th

12、e time they graduation.現(xiàn)在,人們普遍認(rèn)為沒有一所大學(xué)能夠在畢業(yè)的時(shí)候教給學(xué)生所有的知識(shí)9. There is a general discussion these days over education in many colleges and institutes. One of thequestions under debate is whether education is a lifetime study.當(dāng)前高校和研究機(jī)構(gòu)關(guān)于教育問題存在著大量爭論.其中一個(gè)問題就是教育是否是個(gè)終身學(xué)習(xí)的過程.1。 .This issue has caused wide pub

13、lic concern.這個(gè)問題已經(jīng)弓I起了廣泛關(guān)注.11.As for me, Im in favor of the opinion that education is not complete with graduation, for thefollowing reasons: 就我而言,我同意教育不應(yīng)該隨著畢業(yè)而結(jié)束的觀點(diǎn),有以下原因：2。 .Even the best possible graduate needs to continue learning before she or he becomes an educated person.即使最優(yōu)秀的畢業(yè)生,要想成為一個(gè)博學(xué)的人也

14、要不斷地學(xué)習(xí).13。 Now people in growing numbers are beginning to believe that learning new skills and knowledgecontributes directly to enhancing their job opportunities or promotion opportunities. 現(xiàn)在越來越多的人開始相信學(xué)習(xí)新的技術(shù)和知識(shí)能直接幫助他們獲得工作時(shí)機(jī)或提升的時(shí)機(jī)14。 There is a general debate on the campus today over the phenomenon

15、of college or high school students doing a part-time job .對(duì)于大學(xué)生或高中生打工這一現(xiàn)象,校園里進(jìn)行著廣泛的爭論.15。 By taking a major related part-job , students can not only improve their academic studies, butgain much experience they will never be able to get from the textbooks.通過做份和專業(yè)相關(guān)的工作,學(xué)生不僅能夠提升他們的專業(yè)水平,而且能獲得從課本上得不到的經(jīng)驗(yàn).

16、16。 Although people s lives have been dramatically changed over the last decades, it must be admittedthat, shortage of funds is still the one of the biggest questions that students nowadays have to face because that tuition fees and prices of books are soaring by the day.近幾十年, 盡管人們的生活有了驚人的改變,但必須成認(rèn),由

17、于學(xué)費(fèi)和書費(fèi)日益飛漲,資金短缺仍然是學(xué)生們面臨的最大問題之一.17。 Consequently , the extra money obtained from part-time job will strongly support students to continue to their study life .因此,業(yè)余工作掙來的錢將強(qiáng)有力地支持學(xué)生們繼續(xù)他們的求學(xué)生活.18。 From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that part-time job can producea farreac

18、hing impact on students and they should be encouraged to take part time job , which will benefitstudents and their family, even the society as a wholeO通過上面的討論,我們不難得出結(jié)論：業(yè)余工作對(duì)學(xué)必求其心得,業(yè)必貴于專精學(xué)生們會(huì)產(chǎn)生深遠(yuǎn)的影響,我們應(yīng)鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生從事業(yè)余工作,這將有利于學(xué)生和他們的家庭,甚至整個(gè)社會(huì).快例剖析【典例01】2021 年?胡南卷Directions : Write an English composition accor

19、ding to the instructions given below請(qǐng)以老師當(dāng)眾表揚(yáng)你為話題,用下面所給的句子開頭,續(xù)寫一篇英語短文.As a student, I can tell you that there is nothing better than being praised by my teacher before my classmates.1 .將所有句子寫在做題卡上；2 . 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)不少于 120個(gè)；3 .不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱.【寫作指導(dǎo)】本文是一篇開放性作文,考生只要根據(jù)所給的信息進(jìn)行寫作即可.題中給出的內(nèi)容是：作為一名學(xué)生,在同學(xué) 面前受老師表揚(yáng)是世界上最好的事

20、.故事、感想等寫作空間很大,可以自由發(fā)揮.可主要圍繞受表揚(yáng)的原因、感受來寫.寫作時(shí)人稱主要采用第一人稱,時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過去時(shí).寫作步驟:(1)續(xù)寫一件當(dāng)眾受到老師表揚(yáng)的經(jīng)歷;(2)總結(jié)這次經(jīng)歷對(duì)自己產(chǎn)生的影響.寫作時(shí)要注意恰當(dāng)使用一些連詞,使文章自然、流暢.適當(dāng)使用一些高級(jí)句型和詞匯以提升作文檔次.范文賞析】As a student I car td you tliat there is nothing better tliai being praised by my leader before my dassmats. Never will I forget one expeiience i

21、n an En5Jish dass last year.I felt extreniely nervous the iistmit the ckss ban. The reason was that the new En典ii teacher Mr.Zliaiig miglit amioLinoe the exam resuli and tiut I would protMbly get scolded as Wcre. Suipiiyinywhen ecteriiig tb dassroonij te ghuoed al us f saying genllyToday ,1 wont tal

22、k atwut the epcam. resulL bul I am eadted to tell youLiJiawrote an excellent English article in the exam. I do hope he will makemore progress with great efforts . On學(xué)必求其心得,業(yè)必貴于專精hearing what he said,I couldn t hold back my tears . It was for the first time that Igot praised beforemy classmates . Fro

23、m then on , I fell in love with English. You can t imagine how grateful I am toMr.Zhang . Without his praise . I couldn t have gone so far in my English study .【典例02】2021廣東實(shí)驗(yàn)高三10月月考假設(shè)你是李華,已經(jīng)被大學(xué)錄取,即將進(jìn)入大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí).請(qǐng)你用英語給好友Sam寫一封信,談?wù)勥M(jìn)入大學(xué)后的打算.短文應(yīng)包含以下要點(diǎn)：1、盡快適應(yīng)環(huán)境；2、注重水平開展.注意：1 .全文100詞左右；2 .書信的開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.可以適當(dāng)

24、增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫.Dear Sam,How are you getting along with your life recently? Yours sincerely , Li Hua 【寫作指導(dǎo)】本文是一篇書信類作文,要求用英語給好友Sam寫一封信,談?wù)勥M(jìn)入大學(xué)后的打算.要點(diǎn)包括：1.盡快適應(yīng)環(huán)境；2.注重水平開展.注意要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容是高度概括的,需要增加細(xì)節(jié),充實(shí)內(nèi)容.寫作時(shí)人稱主要采用第一人稱,時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般將來時(shí).寫作步驟：1舉例說明如何適應(yīng)新環(huán)境；2培養(yǎng)哪些方面的水平.寫作時(shí)要注意恰當(dāng)使用一些連詞,使文章自然、流暢.適當(dāng)使用一些高級(jí)句型和詞匯以提升作文檔次【范文賞析】Deal Sa

25、m,How aie you getting 就口口目 witlilife icoently? Today Fm writiiig lo talk about my phu 萩 ccllege life ixthe near fiioc.College life is both a joy and 3 olullcnge to me. Therefore, m由皿ing myself qiicUy to the new cjraimsianoeis the first thnig I wifl deal with For 11 try to gd used to ihc oollcgG Kbed

26、ulc ss soon 巒 possibk and Til make some 狂運(yùn)nds so that I can feel * else in college.Next, various abilities should be developedBesides beuig iidcpciidait in study and lift 1 will enter for學(xué)必求其心得,業(yè)必貴于專精meaningful activities to get more social practice and develop my strong points.Can you give me some

27、advice ? As a sophomore , you must have a lot to tell me.Yours sincerely ,Li Hua【典例03】2021廣東省中山一中高三上二次聯(lián)考假定你是高中學(xué)生李華,你的美國朋友Jim即將升入中國的一所高中學(xué)習(xí),想讓你給他一些學(xué)習(xí)建議.請(qǐng)你給他寫一封電子郵件,內(nèi)容包括：1.與老師交流,征求老師意見；2.上課積極參與討論,專心聽講,做好筆記；3 .課后積極完成作業(yè),穩(wěn)固知識(shí).注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫 .Dear Jim ,Yours , Li Hua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本文是一篇書信類作文,要求給美國朋友

28、Jim寫一封電子郵件,提供一些學(xué)習(xí)建議.要點(diǎn)包括：1.與老師交流, 征求老師意見；;2.上課積極參與討論,專心聽講,做好筆記； 3.課后積極完成作業(yè),穩(wěn)固知識(shí).這篇作文的要點(diǎn)比擬詳細(xì),學(xué)生要將它們表達(dá)清楚,不能遺漏 ,但是需要注意不能逐字逐句譯.寫作時(shí)人稱主要采用第二人稱,時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí).寫作時(shí)要注意恰當(dāng)使用一些連詞,使文章自然、流暢.適當(dāng)使用一些高級(jí)句型和詞匯以提升 作文檔次.【范文賞析】 Dear Jim,Having learned that youll be 3. senior student, bow delighted am Ju youi last email you me

29、ntioiied fliat you aic by how to- study well in senior high school. Now；d like to my study lips with you.Fiift, youd better conmiuiucate with, youi Kguhily. In this way, they may 即m千不印I advice qu both youf study srd life. S優(yōu)why um involve yourself in each cIhae ictiv,dy, to the teaehM attentively an

30、d tnke notes cifeiully so tliai you can review latei? Third, it e a good idea to do yom homework on time soon after sdiooL wtidi will hdp you practice what you have Icamol and male it fk3tl in your mind.學(xué)必求其心得,業(yè)必貴于專精I(xiàn) sincerely hope my advice can be helpful to you and that you can enjoy your new sch

31、ool life.Best wishes !Yours,Li Hua【典例04】2021安徽省合肥第一中學(xué)高三階段眾所周知,課堂是每個(gè)學(xué)生實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想的地方,然而,有一局部同學(xué)沒有很好地利用它.請(qǐng)以Howshould we makegood use of classes ?為題,寫一篇文章,應(yīng)包含以下要點(diǎn)；1.簡要說明課堂的意義；2.目前課堂中存在的主要問題；3.分析原因并提出建議.注意：1 .可根據(jù)內(nèi)容需要適當(dāng)拓展,以使行文連貫；2 .詞數(shù)100左右.How should we make good use of classes?【寫作指導(dǎo)】本文是一篇提綱作文,考生只要根據(jù)所給的信息進(jìn)行寫作即可.

32、話題是Howshould wemake good use of classes?題中給出三個(gè)要點(diǎn)：1.簡要說明課堂的意義；2.目前課堂中存在的主要問題；3.分析原因并提出建議.寫作時(shí)人稱主要采用第一人稱,時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí).寫作時(shí)要注意恰當(dāng)使用一些連詞,使文章自然、流暢 .適當(dāng)使用一 些高級(jí)句型和詞匯以提升作文檔次.【范文常析】How should we make good use of classed?As 用地 all inow, chss if a place whete students ought to work hard to icalize thek dieams. Howev

33、er, theie aie some Etudcnte cot UEing CUss properly, makiiig things go ftom bad to worae. For example, some xtudeaits play mobile phones or fleepinchss, wisling quantilies ofpieciousWha也 woise, same ftudexts enjoy chattiiigWitt 0111s. Not only docs it aifect their own study, but also it will do 113n

34、li to otters.學(xué)必求其心得,業(yè)必貴于專精As far as I am concerned , the main reason is that they dont realize the importance of study. To solve this problem , they have to understand making full use of class is the best way to improve the efficiencyof study. After all , time waits for no man.假定你是李華,寒假期間應(yīng)邀去紐約的孔子學(xué)院要

35、點(diǎn)：1 .闡述漢語的廣泛用途；2 .介紹學(xué)習(xí)漢語的方法.注意：1 .詞數(shù)100左右；2 .可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)工,以使行文連貫；3 .開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù).Dear friends,(1),并與該校學(xué)生交流.請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要求寫出發(fā)言稿.I am honored to have a chance to be with you todayThanks a million !【范文】Dear friends,I am honored to have a chance to be with you today.As is well known to all, with a good knowled

36、ge of Chinese , you will get a better understanding of China, a 2000-year old multi-cultural country . Furthermore , learning Chinese is an upto date trend you don t want to miss. It is likel y that you can make lots of Chinese friends as well.As for the tips of learning Chinese , I would say that R

37、omewasn t built in a day, so learning Chinese takes time. Please use what you learn in class whenever you can the more you use Chinese,學(xué)必求其心得,業(yè)必貴于專精the better you will learn it . Besides , listening to tapes , watching films and reading stories in Chinese are of great help.I hope you all become flue

38、nt Chinese speakers in the near future. Thanks a million ! 【寫作指導(dǎo)】本文要求根據(jù)以下要求寫出發(fā)言稿,要點(diǎn)包括：1闡述漢語的廣泛用途,2介學(xué)薦句漢語的方法, 要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容只是一個(gè)提綱,具體內(nèi)容要學(xué)生拓展,考生在寫作時(shí)首先要畝清楚題目,將所要表達(dá)的語言點(diǎn)都 表到達(dá)位j不要遺漏了某一點(diǎn),同時(shí)應(yīng)燼量選擇自己最熟悉的單詞、句型來表達(dá)自己的意思口在寫作過程 中注意使用起承轉(zhuǎn)合的連詢和高姓同匯n這樣作文就能得到比擬高的分?jǐn)?shù)【亮點(diǎn)說明】文童使用了很好的短語和句子：gelabetter uiidentaiidi理of更好地理解,up-to-date tr

39、end最 罰洌流 ss fiw 至于,of great heS 很有副助I j As is wLL-knowii to all with a good knowledge of Chinese, you will get a better understanding of China, a 2000year old multi cultural country . 這句話使用了 非限制性定語從句,It is likely that you can make lots of Chinese friends as well.這句話使用省略句和 it 做形式主語,As for the tips of

40、 learning Chinese, I would say that Rome wasn tbuilt in a day, so learningChinese takes time.這句話使用諺語 ;Please use what you learn in classwhenever you can-the more you use Chinese, the better you will learn it. 這句話使用了賓語從句,還有范文使用了Furthermore , besides這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫.總之,范文使用大量高中教材中出現(xiàn)的高級(jí)短語和句型,考生應(yīng)該能做到學(xué)以致用.(

41、2)假設(shè)你是高三一班班長李華,學(xué)校安排你在新學(xué)年的升旗儀式中發(fā)言,請(qǐng)你談?wù)劯咧须A段需要學(xué)習(xí)什么,怎 么學(xué)習(xí).注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右.2.發(fā)言稿開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù).Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to make a speech here.Thank you!【范文】Good morning , everyone ! It is my honor to make a speech here. I will share with you whatto learn in senior high school and how.As you a

42、ll know , high school is a period of discovery. First, what is the most fundamentalis the basic knowledge on which our future will be built. It is so vital that we should make ourefforts to learn it. Besides, to achieve your academic goals, a good learning habit is of greatsignificance too . What s

43、more, you should attach importance to physical exercise for the reasonthat it does good to your studies . Last but not least , you are supposed to show respect to your teachers and get along with your classmates.Only in this way can you enjoy a rich and colorful life in high school.Thank you !【寫作指導(dǎo)】

44、這是一篇開放式作文.文章要求給高一新生做個(gè)發(fā)言n介紹高中學(xué)習(xí)中要注意什么.學(xué)生要以此為中 心,拓展寫作內(nèi)容,要言之有物,內(nèi)容充實(shí),確定內(nèi)容后要考慮使用正確的人稱和時(shí)態(tài),根據(jù)內(nèi)容確定使 用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和第一人稱“還要注意遣詞造句,平時(shí)可以背誦一些佳句,簡單句和復(fù)合句可以搭配使用, 使句式富有變優(yōu),多使用高中英語中學(xué)到的短語和句型F另外還要注意使用關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫二二 【亮點(diǎn)說明】此文語言流暢,言簡意賅,要點(diǎn)齊全.關(guān)聯(lián)詞語運(yùn)用得恰到好處,使整個(gè)語篇銜接緊密,邏輯清楚.而短文中較多高級(jí)詞語和句式的使用也提升了文章的得分檔次.關(guān)聯(lián)詞語：in addition to , what s more ,la

45、st but not least 等.亮點(diǎn)詞匯： a period of discovery, fundamental, of great significance, show respect to, enjoy arich and colorful life 等.高級(jí)句式:it 作形式主語(It is so vital that we should make our efforts to learn it .);倒裝句(Only in this way can you enjoy a rich and colorful life in high school.) 等.(3)高考過后,總有一些

46、學(xué)習(xí)用品商家千方百計(jì)在高考狀元身上下工夫,讓狀元們說是使用過他們的產(chǎn)品后才取得優(yōu)異成績.請(qǐng)你用英語寫一篇 100詞左右的短文,談?wù)勛约旱目捶?內(nèi)容應(yīng)該包括以下要點(diǎn)：1簡要描述這種現(xiàn)象；2個(gè)人對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象的看法3給狀元們提一點(diǎn)建議注意：1可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫參考,匯：狀元 Number one scholar ( NOS【范文】After the wllege euliiiie examinatioiis. some companiffi that sell laming products are always trying to d-o anything they car io make

47、 full use of Number One Scholar in order to sell than prodDGts.In 出ct, ifs not easy fbi students lo become Number One Sdiclar, Mjosl of fhcni succoed not because of the products, but theii proper way cf learning 2nd hard woik Eveiy student has his own way of 疝dying so the NOSs experionce may not be

48、suitable ft all the studente. Most iniporlaiit cf all, not all cf these pfoducte arc good enough to help us study.I do hope that NOS can think of the poor students instead of themselves only.【寫作指導(dǎo)】本次寫作是提綱類書面表達(dá),考生要先審清題目要求,確定好作文人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、寫作要點(diǎn)、段落等根本內(nèi)容.本文是關(guān)于商家利用高考狀元宣傳自己產(chǎn)品的問題,內(nèi)容有：1簡要描述這種現(xiàn)象；2個(gè)人對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象的看法3給狀元們提一

49、點(diǎn)建議,要點(diǎn)不夠詳細(xì),給考生發(fā)揮的余地較大,也增加了難度,考生要適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),使內(nèi)容充實(shí),結(jié)構(gòu)完整,明確作文的根本內(nèi)容后,就是選用準(zhǔn)確的詞匯和恰當(dāng)?shù)木渥觼肀磉_(dá).在寫作的過程中,要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型,讓文章更有文采.同時(shí)在列舉舉措的時(shí)候要使用適宜的連接詞如：Besides, What s more等,讓文章看起來很有條理,也很流暢.【亮點(diǎn)說明】藏的特點(diǎn)是使用了一些很好的詞組并且句式多變,山業(yè)即1詠a充分利用,be suitable fee 適合, Mb?t iupMlmit cf all 最重要的是After the college entrance aomniatiorLS,. som

50、e ccmp疝es that sell Irafring products aie always tiying to do anything they can to make full use of Number One Scholar in order Io 瞿U iheii products一這是一個(gè)長句,使用了兩個(gè)定語從句和不定式做目的狀語,In由ctjfs ncteisy for studwits to tweorne Number Que Sctiolar,這句話用 了 it 做形式壬語,Most of ttem succeed not because N the 阿疝的 but t

51、heirproper way of learning and hard work. 這句話用 了 notbut 結(jié)構(gòu), not all of these products are goodenough to help us study.這句話用了局部否認(rèn), I do hope that NOScan think of the poor students instead of themselves only這句話對(duì)謂語進(jìn)行了強(qiáng)調(diào).(4)假設(shè)你叫李華,今年暑假即將跨入高三的學(xué)習(xí),壓力很大,想和父母說說心里話,請(qǐng)你用英文在你的博客上用 書信形式表達(dá)出來.主要內(nèi)容如下：知心話感恩感謝父母的關(guān)心、鼓勵(lì)對(duì)

52、父母的期望1.多加交流2.適時(shí)提供幫助學(xué)習(xí)打算考生自擬至少與兩點(diǎn)注意：1.短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮.2.詞數(shù)：120左右開頭與結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入詞數(shù).Dear Mom and Dad,With the Senior Three approaching , I really hope to have a heart-to-heart talk with youMom and Dad, I am quite confident about my future. Wish you good health and a happy life.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【范文】Dear Mom and Dad,With the Senior Three approaching, I really hope to have a heart-toheart talk with you!During th