英語寫作文容易出現(xiàn)的問題

1、英語寫作文容易出現(xiàn)的問題1、用詞不當。學生們寫的作文里或多或少都會有一些用詞不當?shù)膯栴}，但是要注意的是一些最最基本的錯誤是不能犯的。2、時態(tài)錯誤。一般作文使用的是現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，除了拿過去的事情舉例子時，用過去時態(tài)。3、句子中出現(xiàn)中國式的英語。4、拼寫錯誤。這里的拼寫錯誤不是指在考試時候的手誤，而是本身對詞匯拼寫記憶的錯誤。5、例子穹張。切記例證要符合實際，可以有些適當?shù)目鋸垺?、固定搭配用法錯誤Tosomeextends,Iagreewiththeauthor'sgeneralassertionthatifparentsalsohaveacomprehensivesenseofprofes

2、sionalknowledge.Tosomeextends應改為Tosomeextent7、成分多余AccordingtoacomprehensiveinvestigationwhichiscarriedoutbyChineseAcademyofSocialSciencesshowsthatthereisanincreaseinthenumberofuniversitystudentswhoaretakingpart-timejobs.該句中的showsthat是多余的成分。8、詞性混亂However,thequestionssuchas'Haveyoueverregrettedmar

3、ryingyourhusband"maybeveryprivacyandembarrassingly.句子中的privacy和embarrassingly應該改成private和embarrassingo可以有些適當?shù)目鋸?。切記例證要符合實際、固定搭配用法錯誤Tosomeextendso學生們寫的作文里或多或少都會有一些用詞不當?shù)膯栴}，但是要注意的是一些最最基本的錯誤是不能犯的。2、時態(tài)錯誤、句子中出現(xiàn)中國式的英語、拼寫錯誤。這里的拼寫錯誤不是指在考試時候的手誤。一般作文使用的是現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，除了拿過去的事情舉例子時。6。3,用過去時態(tài)1、用詞不當。4,而是本身對詞匯拼寫記憶的錯誤。5、

4、例子夸張，Iagreewiththeauthor*sgeneralassertionthatifparentsalsohaveacomprehensivesenseofprofessionalknowledge.Tosomeextends應改為Tosomeextent7成分多余AccordingtoacomprehensiveinvestigationwhichiscarriedoutbyChineseAcademyofSocialSciencesshowsthatthereisanincreaseinthenumberofuniversitystudentswhoaretakingpart-

5、timejobs.該句中的showsthat是多余的成分。8、詞性混亂However,thequestionssuchas&quoto【譯文】Dearclassteacher:Yourmorningtoeveningeveryday,duediligencework.Howselflessyouare,howgreat!Youalmosthavecomelatereachday,self-study,inordertobedifficultforusforthesestudentstoanswer.Yourunaroundforourfuture,intakingthetimetoth

6、eInternettocollectinformationtosharewithuselite.Whenstudentsviolateschoolrules,youdonothavetoabandonthem,buttalkwiththemsincerelyandearnestly.Whenevertheweatherchangesunexpectedly,youcanplaytheroleofparents,concernedaboutourfoodandclothing,drawingourattentiontohealth.Butyouknowwhat?Asyourstudents,ho

7、wmuchIcareaboutyourhealth.Teachers,pleasetakecareforus.Youarenotourparentslikeowningparents,yourheartoutthesedutiesforus,guidedusdownabrightroad.Inthejuniorhighschool,Iamhonoredtobecomerepresentativeofthenumberofsubjects.Buteverydayproblemsencountered,andmyheartwillinevitablyfear,overwhelmedbythispr

8、oblem.WheneverIwalkedinfrontofyouholdingoperation,youarerepeatedlytoldIhavetolearnscience,andIsaid：domoreexercises,whatdonotunderstandyouarealwayswelcometoaskme!"I'malwaysleftearrighteartolistentooutthinkyouhadtoomuchnagging.MathematicsachievementthatIonlyhad75pointsthatnightyoucalledmeinto

9、office,thesubjectof11ofmymistaketoexplain."Whythisresultisnotsatisfactory?''Youasked,puzzled.Iamgettingimpatient,said:"Sometopicswillnotdo,eithertheirowncarelessness.Z/YouNaZhaobiandpapertaughtmetoanswerinthenextmethod,referredtoIunderstandsofar.AhaIf-hourlater,youfinallyfinished,a

10、ndIlikethefreedomofsmallbirdsandsailingaway,theywereyoustopped.Youaresayingwithgreatearnestness：,Thesetopicsarementioned,thelasttoaskyou,doyousaythattounderstandah!Everyoneshould'knowthemasknowit,IdonotknowasIdonotknow,thatisknowledge*!”Uponhearingthis,myfacelikeabrightredapple,Ifeelsoashamed.Fr

11、omthatlater,Iappreciateyourgoodintentionscherished.Nowyouhaveremindedmewanttolearnafewphysicsandchemistry,everytimeIwouldlethimforgetit."Carryingaheart,anddoesnotgowithasemi-grassroots.”Thisisnotatruereflectionofyoudo?!Youarethedisseminatorsofknowledge,isthehumansoul.Yournoblecharacterilluminat

12、eourpureheartsandminds.WheneverseeyourCeciTssilver-haired,Ifeelverysad.Idecidedhe：Besuretolearnmathematics.Problemslikestumblingblock,inyourfearbeforethemcheekycolor,theywillappeartriumphant,grimaceinpain.Weshouldwelcomeedgeinthepreviousracetobuilduptheconfidenceofsailing,inthefullstrengthoftheseaof

13、competitionandfirmforward.Summervacation,Iwilldevelopaneffectivewayoflearning.Withscience,morequestionsinbasis,broadentheirhorizons.Inordertoovercomeproblemsasthegoal,wouldprefertohavesleeplessnightstoachievethedesiredobjectives.Morewiththeliberalarts,Iwillread,surflessonsintheancientandmodernlitera

14、turebitbybitofthenutrients,sothattheirownobservationofthingsinamorenuanced,richviewoftheirownpointofviewofthings,standingontheshouldersofgiantsoverlooking,sothattheirownvisionbrighteropen.Iamconfidentthatthroughtheirownefforts,Examinationontheidealhighschool,withresultstorewardyouforyourgracetomyedu

15、cation.Teacher,forgettheknowledgeyougatherasourceofyouthgiventhecarefulcasting;notforgettoteachyourtirelessstretchofthebeautifulface;notforgetyouarediscouragedinthefaceofagirlgiventheencouragementandkindwords.Chu：Goodhealth!Smiling!Flourishing!o在初中階段學生基本上沒有進行正規(guī)系統(tǒng)的寫作訓練。英語語言的基礎(chǔ)也比較差，主要表現(xiàn)在以下幾個方面：（一）詞匯貧乏

16、且運用能力差詞匯是英語寫作必不可少的基本要素，要寫好一篇作文以表達自己的思想，必須以足夠的詞匯量為基礎(chǔ)，但實際上大多數(shù)學生掌握的詞匯量都達不到規(guī)定的要求，因而在寫作時也就不能隨心所欲地表達自己的思想。出現(xiàn)的問題往往有拼寫錯誤，影響理解，詞語誤用，表達不準確；某一詞語反復使用，語言表達缺乏變式，文章顯得單調(diào)乏味；文章中出現(xiàn)大量自己的“造詞”，讓人看了啼笑皆非等。顯然詞匯量不足己成為制約學生寫作的瓶頸。（二）句式單一枯燥文章的內(nèi)容固然重要，但是形式也不容忽視。然而很多同學作文中的句子都是同一句式，長短相近，所用句型也多是些therebe類的句子，而且全都是主語、謂語、賓語、的單一順序，缺少變化，讀

17、起來乏味、枯燥：平時學到的很多語法、句法，比如從句、強調(diào)句型、感嘆句、虛擬語氣等等在單項選擇題中很順手的東西這時卻派不上用場，仿佛它們只是用來對付選擇題的。（三）段落、文章的邏輯性差傳統(tǒng)的英語教學把語言知識放在首位，忽視了文章的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)和段落，因此學生寫出來的東西往往是信息感不強，邏輯性差，很少有主題句，學生們大多想的是：我盡量多寫,寫夠字數(shù)就算完成任務了。偶爾有了主題句，下面的支持細節(jié)也不能很好地說明主題句。文章整體內(nèi)容缺乏一致性，連貫性，內(nèi)容安排上也無主次之分，所以讀完之后有時甚至全然不知所云，僅僅是句子的堆砌，意思的重復。（四）中英句式差異分辨不清學生們在完成寫作題時，總是按照漢語的習慣

18、來思考這個句子怎么寫，寫出來的句子大部分都是單詞的堆砌，有的句子甚至錯的都有點離譜，所以英語語言的特點也是學生們寫作需要克服的一個難點。mydearfriends,welcometoourschool,andiamamemberofthestudent*sunion,tomysurprise,youfinallychoseourschool,whichreallymeansabighonortouseveryone.itisyourfirsttimetocometochina,andiamwillingtoofferyousomesuggestions,sothatyoucanhaveaper

19、fecttimeinourschool,firstofall,inmyopinion（iconsider）,itisnecessaryforyoutolearnthelanguagewelltofollowlessons.Despitetheproblemsoflanguage,youmustadjusttothecultureofchina,youcanmakesomeChinesefriendstohelpyouwiththis,atthesametime,whatyoucanalsodoisthatyoushouldreadsomebooks,andunderstandChinesecu

20、lture.ihopemysuggestioncanhelpyoutosomeextent,andwishyouallthebestinthelifeandprocessinourschool.僅是根據(jù)我的理解，按照您的意思寫的，不過考研的話，分數(shù)倒是高不了（有點像高一水平）。多背誦寫作常用句型，自己寫的時候，即使話題不一樣，很多句型都是可以套用上的,換換其中幾個單詞就是了下面我搜集的資料送給你，希望對你的寫作提高有所幫助！高考作文經(jīng)典句型100句1.ItisimportantforeveryonetolearnEnglishwellinourrapidlydevelopingworld.在這

21、個迅速發(fā)展的世界里，對每個人來說，學好英語是非常重要的。額外成就感同樣句型包括：Itisimportant/（necessary,difficult,convenient,possible）forsb.todosth伊（Itisnecessarytoshakehandswhenyoufirstmeetsomeone.與第一次見面的人握手是非常必要的。2.Theharderyouworkatit,themoreprogressyouwillmake.你I：作越努力，你取得的進步就越大。額外成就感The+比較級。，the+比較級。比較級+and+比較級(Theworldisgettingsmall

22、erandsmaller.)3.Ifeveryonemakesacontributiontoprotectingtheenvironment,theworldwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful.如果每個人都為保護環(huán)境做出貢獻，世界會變得更加美好。額外成就感類似的句型還有：Ifnecessary，theycan*,e4.Thebestwaytoremembernewwordsistopracticethemeveryday.記憶新單詞最好的方法是每天操練這些單詞。5.Theatmosphereinmyfamilyisfantastic我的家庭氣氛溫馨和睦。6.Thereaso

23、nwhypeoplechoosetoliveinthecityisthatthelifeismoreconvenientandcolorful.人們?yōu)槭裁催x擇生活在城市的原因是因為城市的生活更方便、更多彩。7.IhadagreatfirstimpressionofAmericanpeople.我對美國人民有了很好的第一象。8.Wehavelotsofconfidenceinourabilitytosolveanyproblem.我們對自己解決問題的能力有足夠的信心。9.Withtherapiddevelopmentofmoderntechnology,theInternethasbecomea

24、necessarypartofourdailylifeandwork.隨著現(xiàn)代科技的迅速發(fā)展,互聯(lián)網(wǎng)已經(jīng)成為生活和工作中必不可少的一部分。10.Youshouldreadasmanybooksasyoupossiblycan.大家應該盡可能的多讀書。11. Chinaisbecomingmoreandmoreprosperousbecauseofthereformand"openingup”policy.由于實施了改革開放政策,中國變得更加繁榮了。12.Weallneedcleanairtobreathe;weallneedcleanwatertodrink;weallneedgre

25、enplacestoenjoy.我們都需要呼吸清新的空氣，我們都需要飲用潔凈的水，我們都需要綠地來享受。13. Let'sworktogethertomakeourworldabetterplace.讓我們一起努力把世界變得更加美好。14.Weshouldmakefulluseofourtimetodousefulandproductivethings.我們應該充分利用好時間去做有用的、富有成效的事。15. Weshouldgetintothegoodhabitofusingourtimewisely.我應該養(yǎng)成一個好習慣，明智地利用時間。16.WhatIreallywanttokno

26、wiswhetherhewillgoabroadnextmonth?我的確想知道的是，他是否會在下個月出國。17. Televisionisharmfultodevelopingminds.電視不利J,開發(fā)心智。18.Childrenusuallyhavefarmorepotentialthantheirparentshadrealized孩子們都有很大的潛能，而父母卻沒有意識到這一點。19. Inthepast10years,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourschool.(V.過去的10年里，我們學校發(fā)生了巨大的變化。20.Peoplewhospendmoret

27、imewiththeirfamiliesareusuallyhealthierandhappier.那些花更多時間和家人在一起的人通常會更健康更幸福。21. Thejobwashard,whichmademesotiredthatIalmostquithalfway.這份工作太辛苦，差點使我半途而廢。額外成就感直接使用：sothat例句：Thejobwassotired,boringandseemedendlessthatIalmostquithalfway.這份工作太累、太無聊，而且沒完沒了，這使我差點半途而廢。高級句型挑戰(zhàn)：Thejobwashard,boringandseemedendl

28、ess,whichmademesotiredthatIalmostquithalfway.這份工作太辛苦、太無聊，而且沒完沒了，這使我非常累，差點半途而廢。能夠增加句子層次的高級連詞還有：(Notonly-butalso)、(Because*)、(becauseof)、(Aslongas)、(solongas)22.TheRedStarTelevisionFactory,whichproducesTVsetsofquality,wassetupinthe1980's.生產(chǎn)高品質(zhì)電視的紅星電視機廠，始建于1980年。23. TheE-readingroom,wherewecansende

29、-mailstoallpartsoftheworld,isopentobothteachersandstudents.我們可以向世界每個地方發(fā)電子郵件的電子閱覽室,對老師和同學都同樣開放。24.IfeelIwillbefitforthejobneededinyourcompany.我感覺我會是你們公司所需要的人。25. Thenumberofworkersandengineershasrisen(更高級詞匯：increased)toover2000,and80%ofthemarecollegegraduates.工人和工程師的數(shù)量己超過了2000人,而且他們有80%都是大學學歷。26.Ther

30、eisanincreasingtendencythatstudentsowntheirmobilephonesoncampus.在校園內(nèi),學生擁有手機的趨勢在不斷增長。27. Nowintheruralareas,therearemanychildrenoutofschool.Ithinkoneofreasonsisthattheirfamiliesaretoopoortoaffordtheir0TheProblemsthatIhaveMetinEnglishStudyinglearningEnglishisnotveryeasy.Ihavemanyproblemsinlearningit.F

31、irst,spokenEnglishisthemostdifficultproblemforme.Iwasalsoafraidtospeakinclass,becauseIthoughtmyclassmatesmightlaughatme.Secondly,listeningisanotherproblem.Englishisoursecondlanguage,itwasn*teasyformetounderstandtheteacherwhenshetalkedThirdly,IusuallymakemistakesingrammarLastbutnotleast,Ifindtorememb

32、erthewordsisahardjob.BecauseChineseisdifferentfromEnglish.Rememberringsomanywordsisreallyhardforus.ThoughtherearemanyproblemsinEnglishlearning.ButItrustthatIcandoitwell,ifIpaymuchattentiontoit.AstoexperienceofEnglishlearning,I'mafraidIdon'thavemuchmoretosaythanwhatIhavewritteninthearticleofC

33、hineseversionthatIwrotetheotherday.OnethingthatIoftensaytomyfriendsisabouttimearrangement.Inmyopinion,timeislikewaterinsponge,younevergetanyunlessyousqueezeit.Timeisconsideredthemostvaluablethingbymanywhofinallymakethegradeinlife,andIhopeI'11beabletojointhem.Somepeople,though,arewillingtospendaf

34、ewhourstryingtogetatenormoreyuanoffthelistpriceofacoat;theyarealsoalwaysreadytochitchatwitheachothertilltheendoftime.Communicationdoesplayanimportantpartinourlife,huh.Ittakestime,though.Let*stalkaboutthebalanceamongfouraspectsofEnglishstudythen.It'sactuallysimple.Afteryou'vereadforsometime,y

35、oumightgettiredandfeelbored.It'sthetimeyoustopreadingandgetuptohavesomelisteningcomprehensiontraining.Repeatwhattheysayandhowtheysaywhenlistening.Gosomewherewithnopeoplearoundifyoufinditweirdtodoso.BydoingthisyouarepractisingyourspokenEnglish.Aftersometimeofsuchstudy,you'11beinthemoodtowrite

36、something,usingwhathavelearnedoverthedaysorweeks.Yourwritingskillsimprovecontinuouslyonceyoukeepwritingbecauseothersmayreplytoyouafterreadingyours,andtobearesponsivewriter,you*11justhavetofollowandmakethetopicfurtherdiscussed.WithluckyouaredrawingattentionfromthosewhoseEnglisharebetterthanyoursandby

37、exchangingideaswiththisgroupyouarebeneficiallyinfluenced.Ontheotherhand,though,thechanceisthesamethatyoumightbeadverselyinfluencedbysomelousilywrittenreplieswithchattingstyleEnglishhighandlowinthereply.Justbecarefulthen.YouarenotfarwrongwhenassumingIhavetodomyeverydayerrands;Iwasn*tborntothepurple,a

38、nyway.You'11havetoagreethatwhencleaningyourhouseordoingsomelaundry,it'sagoodtimetoputonyourearphoneofthemp3playerandgetsomelisteningworktodo.It'struethatyoucan'tspinandreelallatthesametime,butintermsofgettingsomelisteningcomprehensionitalldepends.Englishissomethingthatyou'lllosebeforeyouknowifyoudon'tkeepusingit.Itafterallisnotourmothertongue.EnglishforumsonInternetareagoodplacetouseyourEnglishlikenoothers.Younotonlygethelpandencouragementthere,butyoubuildupyourinterestandconfidenceaswell,seeinghowyouareprogressing.Iamnottryingtosugarthepillabitb