高三英語寫作專練

1、高三英語寫作專練 ( 一 一 . 寫作指導(dǎo) ( 句字類型 對英語句子的認(rèn)識意義:英語的句式與中文的不同。我們在學(xué)習(xí)英語的時(shí)候要注意到這 一點(diǎn)。有的同學(xué)在學(xué)習(xí)中對此沒有足夠的認(rèn)識,常常受中文的干擾。在寫作中表現(xiàn)出不 能寫出正確的句子。I. 什么是句子?長的是句子,短的是詞。× 無論字?jǐn)?shù)多少, 只要有主語和謂語 (動詞 , 而且能表達(dá)完整的意義的一句話就是一 個句子。I am tired.Pressing ones palm together and resting ones head on theback of ones hand while closing the eyes as i

2、f sleeping means “I am tired. ” (雙手合攏,閉上眼,把頭靠在手背上像睡覺的 樣子,意思是說“我累了。 ” 這兩個句子都具備了主語和謂語。都是完整的句子。要記住:在英語中,一個句子必須 且只能有一個謂語。1. 省略主語的句子Come in, please. (You Open the door. Sit down. Stand up. What a day! (What a terrible day it is!2. 一個句子不能同時(shí)有兩個謂語。典型錯誤:1 The old man likes take a walk in the village after su

3、pper. The old man likes to take a walk in the village after supper.2 I enjoy talk with him over a cup of coffee. I enjoy talking with him over a cup of coffee.3 The boy ran to his mother cry. The boy ran to his mother crying.4 After write the notice, he put it up on the wall. After writing the notic

4、e, he put it up on the wall.After he wrote the notice, he put it up on the wall.3. 不要把從句的謂語當(dāng)成句子的謂語 , 或把主句的謂語當(dāng)成從句的謂語。如果是一個復(fù)合句,主句和從句都應(yīng)該分別有自己的主語和謂語。典型錯誤:1 1 Those who eat too much will easily ill. Those who eat too much will easily get ill.2 When he walking in the park, he felt a little tired. When he

5、was walking in the park, he felt a little tired.3 When I at school, I studied very hardWhen I was at school, I studied very hard. II. Practice: 判斷以下是否是句子。1. Birds can fly2. The birds in the cage which I bought yesterday3. Wait for me at the station4. If you know how to play with words to make people

6、 laugh5. A way of saying “Im sorry”6. Patting the stomach before a meal7. The bread my mother makes is much better than what you can buy at the store.8. To make friends in the school which was not far from my new home9. If you want to know what it feels like to fall through the air, take off in a ro

7、cket, fly a helicopter or fight alien creatures in outer spaceIII. 常見的句子結(jié)構(gòu)由于英語動詞種類的不同, 構(gòu)成了不同的句子類型。 和中文不同的是, 英語的動詞分為 及物動詞和不及物動詞。表達(dá)同一個意思時(shí),有的是及物動詞,有的就是不及物動詞。 如:表示“聽” 這個意義時(shí), listen 是不及物動詞; hear 是及物動詞。表示 “看” 這 個意義時(shí), look 是不及物動詞, see, watch和 notice 就是及物動詞。 表示 “到達(dá)” , arrive 是不及物動詞, reach 是及物動詞。不及物動詞是不能接賓語的

8、。只能加上一個介詞, 才能接賓語。如:listen to, look at, arrive in等等。1. 主語 + 不及物動詞e.g. He came in.The airplane from Hong Kong arrived at four p.m.How did the accident occur?In July, the ship set out for the Pacific.Australia has changed a lot in the past forty years.2. 主語 + 系動詞 + 表語常見的系動詞有:be, seem, appear, become, g

9、o, get, grow, turn, look, sound, feel, taste, smelle.g. She is very happy. (×She very happyHe became nervous when thinking of stealing.To become a top gymnast, it is important to start when very young.Its much cheaper to camp than to stay in a hotel.I got caught in the traffic.He seemed to have

10、 misunderstood you.3. 主語 + 及物動詞 + 賓語e.g. We learn English at school.He wondered whether Bill had managed to escape.I didnt mean to be so rudeI hope that one day I shall be able to repay you.被動:English is learnt at school.These goods will be sent to the flooded area.4. 主語 + 及物動詞 + 間接賓語 + 直接賓語有些動詞需要接兩

11、個賓語。間接賓語一般由人擔(dān)任,直接賓語一般由物擔(dān)任。give, offer, teach, tell, read, ask, bring, pass, lend, return, write, throw, allow,send,cost ,make, buy, do, get, save, cook, sing, find等。e.g. My brother gave me a boo.I wont tell you anything about it.Can you sing us an English song?這樣的句子變?yōu)楸粍訒r(shí)可根據(jù)需要,將任何一個賓語作為句子的主語。e.g. I w

12、as given a book. A book was given to me.5. 主語 + 及物動詞 + 賓語 + 賓補(bǔ)e.g. Unfortunately they find it difficult to repay this money.The growth in population made New York the largest city in the USA.Do you think it possible to finish it in one day?We are making our country more and more beautiful.【模擬試題】改錯練習(xí)

13、:1. Please speak louder so that everybody can listen you.2. Great changes have been taken place in my hometown.3. Listen! Someone knocking at the door.4. He told me dont call him before 9 oclock.5. Does your parents allow you make your own decision?6. Although it is only August, but the weather is g

14、etting worse daily.7. Because the professor had fallen ill, so he was not able to be present at the conference.8. In Japan, a person sees the “OK” gesture may think it means money.9. When I past his room, I heard him singing an English song.說出下列句字類型1. When she saw this, she turned red.2. They remain

15、ed in sad poverty.3. The reason for my lateness is that I missed my bus.4. He found his new job rather boring.5. I think it possible to finish everything in one week.6. He noticed a crowd of people shouting and cheering.7. He kept his eyes shut and stayed where he was.8. He handed me a letter.9. He

16、offered to lend me some books.10. She could not help feeling depressed.11. I wonder whether you could give me some advice.12. The sun is rising.13. Her temperature came down in the morning.二. 寫作。 (記敘文記敘文主要是記述所發(fā)生的事情和經(jīng)歷。常見的形式有:故事、傳記、游記、日記、新聞 報(bào)道等1. 要交代清楚五要素的內(nèi)容即:where, when, what, who, how 。2. 事件可按時(shí)間或空間

17、順序敘述。3. 時(shí)態(tài)通常是與過去有關(guān)的時(shí)態(tài)。 (如果是當(dāng)前的經(jīng)常性事件,自然,社會現(xiàn)象。通常 用與現(xiàn)在有關(guān)的時(shí)態(tài)2. 開頭 the beginning-交代必要的背景,如:時(shí)間,地點(diǎn),人物等。中間 the middle-交代故事情節(jié)(事情的主體 。如:事件的發(fā)生,發(fā)展和前因后果 結(jié)尾 the ending-事情的結(jié)果或感想,愿望等(the result or feeling記敘文的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)調(diào)整 First . Then . Next . FinallySome . Some . OthersThe boys . The girls .;Some Ss . Tome others . The r

18、est of us / them .時(shí)間順序:Early in the morning / In the early morning;In the middle of the day / At noon;Late in the afternoon / In the late afternoon;Far / Deep into the night;In the past / At present / In the future ;First, second, next, then, finally;At first, in the beginning; at last, in the end;S

19、hortly afterwards, at once, immediately, all of a sudden, suddenly, soon; The moment, as soon as,the first time, not until, next time, before, after, etc;模擬試題一 . 假如你是李華, 昨天學(xué)校為你們舉辦了 18歲成人儀式。請你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)給你在美 國的筆友發(fā)一封電子郵件,描述儀式過程并簡述你的感受。1. 成人宣誓2. 感謝家長和老師的教育培養(yǎng)3. 老師送賀卡4. 表演節(jié)目注意:(1郵件必須包括以上要點(diǎn),可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;(2詞數(shù):100左右;(3開頭結(jié)尾已為你寫好。生詞:宣誓:make an oath 儀式:ceremony參考答案Dear TomIt is great to receive your email. Now Id like to tell you something that took place yesterday._ Dear Tom,It is great to receive