怎樣才能寫出一篇優(yōu)秀作文

1、怎樣才能寫出一篇優(yōu)秀作文，而在中考中獲取高分呢？一、寫作決竅總體把握，要點(diǎn)齊全；人稱時(shí)態(tài)，邏輯清楚；關(guān)鍵詞匯，動(dòng)詞第一；組詞成句，結(jié)構(gòu)完整；組句成文，連詞增色；此路不通，繞道迂回；字跡工整，留好印象；從句適量，高分有望。  二、寫作步驟1.認(rèn)真審題。審題包括要點(diǎn)、格式、詞數(shù)以及此篇文章要傳遞給讀者什么樣的信息，告誡讀者什么(即寫作目的)。2.確定文體和時(shí)態(tài)。確定文體后，根據(jù)不同文體的特點(diǎn)和要求進(jìn)行組織材料；同時(shí)確定出該篇文章的總時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)態(tài)的變化。3.寫完要點(diǎn)，但不隨意發(fā)揮。4.先草稿，后抄寫。三、習(xí)作點(diǎn)評(píng)2004年全國(guó)中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)能力競(jìng)賽初賽初三組 (14分)Choose o

2、ne of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers.·What exactly your hobby is;·When and how you became interested in this hobby;·Why you enjoy your hobby;·About your hopes and plans for the future.寫作要求：1.根

3、據(jù)所提供的內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)拓展想象空間，靈活地將提供的信息體現(xiàn)在文章中。2.條理清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，書寫清晰、規(guī)范。3.詞數(shù)60-80.學(xué)生習(xí)作AMy hobby is read books.When I was seven years old.I became interested in reading books.I like needing books because there are a lot of useful things in books.I can learn a lot of knowledge from books. Books also can teach me how to

4、be a good person.Books even can solve many problems for me.I will read more good books to improve myself.改為reading books，動(dòng)詞作表語(yǔ)時(shí)應(yīng)該用動(dòng)名詞。also的位置應(yīng)放在can之后。點(diǎn)評(píng)：檔次9-11分。要點(diǎn)不全，漏掉最后一個(gè)要點(diǎn)。句子基本無(wú)誤，能正確傳遞信息給讀者但文章不流暢，句子與句子之間過(guò)渡不自然，給讀者感覺(jué)在回答上述問(wèn)題。有少量錯(cuò)誤。學(xué)生習(xí)作BMy hobby is reading.Reading books is very enjoyable.When I was y

5、oung ,my mother used to tell me a story before.I went to bed every night.The stories were so interesting that I always felt they werent enough.So I began to read books by myself.Little by little Ibecame interested in reading.I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world.W

6、hen I read books,I can enjoy the beautiful sentences.At the same time I canimprove my writing.I want to be a writer in the future,so I must study hard and read more books so that my dream can come true.開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山、點(diǎn)題。真情流露，理由充分。文中帶圈的連詞使用得恰當(dāng)，使文章過(guò)渡自然、巧妙使用句型以表決心。點(diǎn)評(píng)：檔次13-14分。清楚表達(dá)寫作目的，要點(diǎn)齊全。語(yǔ)言表達(dá)靈活多樣，字里行

7、間流露出真情實(shí)感，文章有感染力。恰當(dāng)使用連詞和從句，語(yǔ)言流暢，且無(wú)錯(cuò)誤，是一篇高質(zhì)量的作文。高分突破文體：記敘文。要點(diǎn)：what when how why hope and plan for the future.時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，一般過(guò)去時(shí)，一般將來(lái)時(shí)的自然變化。內(nèi)容具有開(kāi)放性，但它也是“控制性”的寫作試題，因此不能隨意發(fā)揮，要善于抓信息，寫完要點(diǎn)。選用這兩篇學(xué)生真實(shí)習(xí)作，一是因?yàn)樗麄冞x材相同，二是因?yàn)樗麄兌际怯⒄Z(yǔ)成績(jī)優(yōu)秀的同學(xué)。同學(xué)B靈活使用連詞sothat,so,little by little,when,so that等，恰到好處地使用新句型和短語(yǔ)used to,became inte

8、rested in,come true等，使內(nèi)容豐富，讀起來(lái)優(yōu)美流暢。其實(shí)這些表達(dá)同學(xué)A也會(huì)，只是缺乏技術(shù)加工。通過(guò)這兩篇作文點(diǎn)評(píng)，同學(xué)們便能悟出其中的奧妙。四、培養(yǎng)途徑1.根據(jù)老師布置的寫作內(nèi)容，獨(dú)立完成一篇寫作。2.與同伴合作，交流自己的寫作，通過(guò)交流找出各自作文中寫得好的地方和優(yōu)美的句子，合作創(chuàng)造一篇新的文章，供大家欣賞。3.找老師點(diǎn)評(píng)，請(qǐng)求老師指點(diǎn)，尤其是怎樣潤(rùn)色。4.自己糾錯(cuò)，寫下反思。五、備考演練      A縉云山是重慶著名的游覽勝地，每天有大量的游客。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提供的信息寫一篇報(bào)道，說(shuō)明現(xiàn)在的游客在環(huán)境保護(hù)方面的變化。寫作要求

9、：1.詞數(shù)在100左右。2.條理清楚，語(yǔ)句通順。3.開(kāi)頭已寫好，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest B閱讀電視廣告詞：“If we dont save water,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.”根據(jù)提示，寫一篇60-80詞的短文。提示：1.生活離不開(kāi)水。2.可飲用水在減少。3.水污染嚴(yán)重。4.應(yīng)保護(hù)水源，再利用水。思路點(diǎn)撥與參考答案A. 思路點(diǎn)撥：文體：記敘文。時(shí)態(tài)：一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。采用正反對(duì)比的寫作手法，增加感染力。寫作目的：告訴讀者保護(hù)環(huán)境的重要性。

10、Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest.Every day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. But a few years ago,some of them paid no attention to protecting the environment.They threw their rubbish,such as plastic bags,fruit skins and waste paper

11、on the ground.Sometimes they broke trees,picked flowers and killed birds. Some even made fires in the woods to cook food.How dangerous it was.Luckily,great changes have taken place here.Tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins,and they are doing their best to protect t

12、he birds and plants as well.They bring their own meals instead of cooking toprevent starting a forest fire in the mountains.All these changes make us very happy.B. 思路點(diǎn)撥：夾敘夾議(說(shuō)明現(xiàn)狀，談?wù)劯邢?。時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。廣告詞的含義水很重要，應(yīng)保護(hù)和再利用(寫作意圖)。Water is very important to humans.We cant live without water.The

13、water we can drink is falling.But some people dont seem to care about it.They waste a lot of water.They pourdirty water into rivers and lakes.Water pollution is getting more and more serious.So we must do something to stop the pollution.We not only protect the water but also find ways

14、 to reuse it.If we dont do this,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop. 寫好中考英語(yǔ)作文只需五步一、認(rèn)真審題，確定時(shí)態(tài)人稱，同時(shí)關(guān)注題材格式時(shí)態(tài)：故事性文章一般用過(guò)去時(shí)，其中表達(dá)感受時(shí)可用現(xiàn)在時(shí)。說(shuō)明性或議論性文章一般用現(xiàn)在時(shí)，舉例時(shí)可用過(guò)去時(shí)。根據(jù)題目要求也會(huì)出現(xiàn)時(shí)態(tài)的交錯(cuò)使用，如過(guò)去和現(xiàn)在的對(duì)比等。如果句中出現(xiàn)了時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)，時(shí)態(tài)則要遵循時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)。如ago，last過(guò)去時(shí)；next，in將來(lái)時(shí)等人稱：注意在句子中人稱的統(tǒng)一。例如：Thanks to the teachers, we have improved ou

15、r English.其中we和our就是人稱的統(tǒng)一。格式：注意書信格式的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾。二、找全信息點(diǎn)，緊扣主題，突出重點(diǎn)切忌只看表格中或所列1、2、3中的信息點(diǎn)。一定把題讀全，找齊信息點(diǎn)，建議用鉛筆標(biāo)出，寫完后再涂掉。根據(jù)題目，可適當(dāng)增加合理內(nèi)容。特別注意文章要有開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾。三、成文時(shí)表述正確，文字流暢切忌與漢語(yǔ)提示的一一對(duì)應(yīng)，使用所學(xué)表達(dá)方法將語(yǔ)義表達(dá)出來(lái)即可。首先考慮句子結(jié)構(gòu)（如主謂賓，主系表等）。同時(shí)注意短語(yǔ)的正確使用和單詞的拼寫，最好使用課本上學(xué)過(guò)的短語(yǔ)和句式。四、文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，重點(diǎn)句型出彩，可使文章在得分上提高一個(gè)檔次考慮文章的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)，使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接短語(yǔ)，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。常用連接詞：

16、1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/SecondAnd then, Finally, In the end, At last2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系的：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系的：However, On the contrary, butAlthough+clause（從句）, In spite of+n/doingOn the one hand On the other handSome, while

17、others4.表因果關(guān)系的：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result5.表?yè)Q一種方式表達(dá)：In other words6.表進(jìn)行舉例說(shuō)明：For example，句子；For instance，句子；such as+n/doing7.表陳述事實(shí)：In fact8.表達(dá)自己觀點(diǎn)：As far as I know, In my opinion9.表總結(jié)：In short, In a word. In conclusion, In summary文中正確使用兩三個(gè)好的句型，如：賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句、動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)等。賓語(yǔ)從句舉例：I beli

18、eve Tianjin will be more beautiful and prosperous.狀語(yǔ)從句舉例：If everyone does something for the environment, our hometown will become clean and beautiful.動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)舉例：Reading books in the sun is bad for our eyes.It's bad for our eyes to read books in the sun.常用狀語(yǔ)從句句型：1）時(shí)間：when, notuntil, as soon as2）目的：so that+clause; to do（為了）3）結(jié)果：sothat+clause, tooto do（太以至于）4）條件：if