PEP小學(xué)英語五年級上冊各單元作文范例及點評

1、PEP小學(xué)英語五年級上冊各單元小學(xué)英語五年級上冊各單元作文范例及點評作文范例及點評 My English Teacher Miss Tang is my English teacher. Shes very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play ga

2、mes in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her.【要領(lǐng)點評【要領(lǐng)點評】 這篇作文的題目是這篇作文的題目是“我的英語老師我的英語老師”，是一篇介紹人物的作文。小作者開門見山，是一篇介紹人物的作文。小作者開門見山，直接點題，首先介紹了英語老師的姓名，然后逐一介紹了她的外貌特征、喜好、英直接點題，首先介紹了英語老師的姓名，然后逐一介紹了她的外貌特征、喜好、英語水平、上課特點以及師生情感等。語水平、上課特點以及師生情感等。 小朋友們在寫作文時，要注意使用自己最熟悉的詞小朋友們在寫作文時，要注意使用自己最熟悉的詞組組，以免寫

3、出一些錯句子。，以免寫出一些錯句子。寫作時要注意意思連貫、語句通順、標(biāo)點正確、書寫清晰、規(guī)范等。寫作時要注意意思連貫、語句通順、標(biāo)點正確、書寫清晰、規(guī)范等。 My Days of the week Im a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six oclock every day. I have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven oclock. I have classes from Monday to Saturday. I have an English class o

4、n Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday. I dont have to go to school on school, and I like to go swimming on that day.【要領(lǐng)點評【要領(lǐng)點評】 這篇作文的題目是這篇作文的題目是“我的一周我的一周”，小作者沒有說一些空話，而是從自己的，小作者沒有說一些空話，而是從自己的親身經(jīng)歷寫起，敘述了自己一周七天的所作所為，并特別強(qiáng)調(diào)了星期天的喜親身經(jīng)歷寫起，敘述了自己一周七天的所作所為，并特別強(qiáng)調(diào)了星期天的喜好，寫得自然、流暢。好，寫得自然、流暢。 小朋友們寫作文時要注意人稱及謂語動詞的

5、變化，要依據(jù)提示，結(jié)合自己小朋友們寫作文時要注意人稱及謂語動詞的變化，要依據(jù)提示，結(jié)合自己的實際，寫自己身邊熟悉的事情。的實際，寫自己身邊熟悉的事情。 My Favourite Food Do you know what this is? Guess! Its colour is yellow. Its long and thin. It looks like a small boat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Guess again! Its colour is orange. Its round.

6、 It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like then a lot. I like ice-creams. I like to chew gum. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much. How about you? Whats your favourite food?【要領(lǐng)點評】MyFavouriteFood是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是簡單地列舉出自己最喜歡的每一種食物，而是有詳有略地進(jìn)行介紹。整篇文章用詞準(zhǔn)

7、確、語言流暢、沒有語法錯誤。另外，文章中出現(xiàn)了一些生詞，可見小作者是用心查字典了。 I can help do housework I am a girl. My name is Li Ling. Im in Class Three, Grade Five. Im helpful at home. I can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. After meals, I can help my mother do the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What

8、 about you? Are you helpful, too?【要領(lǐng)點評】本篇作文的題目是“我可以幫助做家務(wù)”，作者主要敘述自己在家?guī)椭龅氖虑椋榻B自己的名字，所在年級及在家能做的家務(wù)，很詳細(xì)，到位。小朋友們在寫作時，應(yīng)盡量寫一些親自經(jīng)歷的事情，這樣會避免在作文時顯得太空，因為只有自己經(jīng)常做的事情印象才會特別深刻。寫作時還要注意大小寫和時態(tài)。 My Village My village is very beautiful. There are many houses in the village. Near the village, there is a forest. A small river is in front of the village. The water in it is very clean. We can see some fish in the river. Near the river, you can see a mountain. Some flowers and grass are on the mountain. I like my village. Welco