2020-2021年英語(yǔ)中考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)及答案

1、2020-2021年英語(yǔ)中考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)及答案一、中考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)（含答案詳細(xì)解析）1 .假如你是班長(zhǎng)李華，今天你們班對(duì)即將到來(lái)的暑假計(jì)劃進(jìn)行了討論。你們班的外教David對(duì)此很感興趣。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下信息，給 David寫一封電子郵件，告訴他討論的情況及 你自己本人的計(jì)劃及原因。比例計(jì)劃原因50%去國(guó)內(nèi)外旅游1.放松;2.欣賞美景30%多讀一些書1.增長(zhǎng)知識(shí)；2.培養(yǎng)興趣20%參加社會(huì)實(shí)踐1.鍛煉自己；2.結(jié)識(shí)朋友你的計(jì)劃?（至少一個(gè)）?（請(qǐng)你補(bǔ)充）汪思：（1）郵件應(yīng)包含所有要點(diǎn)（2）詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）；（3）不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分注： 社會(huì)實(shí)

2、踐 social practice activitiesDear DavidI'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.Best wishes!YoursLi Hua【答案】Dear DavidI'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation. Half of the

3、students plan to travel at home and abroad. They want to relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery. Thirty percent of students plan to read more books. They believe that reading can increase knowledge. Reading books can make people smart and develop interests. 20% of them plan to take part in social pra

4、ctice activities. They want to exercise themselves and make new friends.I'm going to take part in social practice activities, too. I want to learn something new and get good experience from these activities.Best wishes!Yours Li Hua 【解析】 【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如 how to do, spend a meaningf

5、ul summer vacation , half of, plan to do , travel at home and abroad , enjoy the beautiful scenery , take part in , social practice activities , make new friends 等。而斗£謂語(yǔ)動(dòng) 詞結(jié)構(gòu) The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation./ Reading books can make people smart

6、and develop interests.和賓語(yǔ)從句 They believe that reading can increase knowledge.的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。 在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏 輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理 后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要 盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得 到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。2.書面表達(dá)在本周班會(huì)課上，同

7、學(xué)們對(duì) 初中生什么時(shí)候放學(xué)比較合適？”這一問(wèn)題進(jìn)行了熱烈的討論。大部分同學(xué)認(rèn)為初中生應(yīng)該在5點(diǎn)左右放學(xué)，下表所列里大家的發(fā)言記錄。請(qǐng)你寫篇短文介紹大家的想法并闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。Time to leave schoolActivities to do after school at 5 o ' clock at 4:45 at 5 o ' clock .exercise to keep healthy and read books do what we want, such as listening to music take a part-time job.注意：(1)短文必須包括

8、表格中所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；(3)詞數(shù)：80-100;(4)短文開頭僅供參考，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。This week we haveThis week we have held a短文開頭：“What time should junior high school students leave school?held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.【答案】"What time should junior high school students

9、leave school? class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 'clock. They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, becau

10、se they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.A few think 5 o 'clock is the best time to finish school. After school, they can do part-time jobs, such as collecting discarded plastic bottles to sell for money.I am in favor of leaving school at five o'clock

11、. Besides having time to play tennis, I can also draw some pictures I like.【解析】 【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如 hold a class meeting , talk about, the result of , keep healthy, after school , have more time to do , want to do , such as, listen to music , in favor of, clean the room , play tennis 等。而

12、復(fù)雜并歹U結(jié)構(gòu)They canexercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school. 和 Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 'clock./ Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening

13、to music.等復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化；同時(shí) Most students think/Some think /A few thnk述條理，層次分明，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總 結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有 條理。【點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理 后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要 盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得 到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。3.世界衛(wèi)生組織的一項(xiàng)研究報(bào)告顯示，我國(guó)青少

14、年近視率居世界第一。2019年全國(guó)兩會(huì)當(dāng)中 小眼鏡”成關(guān)注重點(diǎn)，防控青少年近視迫在眉睫。以下表格是學(xué)校針對(duì)本校學(xué)生近 視問(wèn)題做的調(diào)查表，假如你是校報(bào)編輯Jack,請(qǐng)根據(jù)所提供的信息，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇調(diào)查報(bào)告，陳述學(xué)校調(diào)查結(jié)果，并表明你自己的觀點(diǎn)和理由。我校學(xué)生的近視問(wèn)題調(diào)查情況60%的本校學(xué)生戴眼鏡。原因1 .不良的看書習(xí)慣，如在床上或陽(yáng)光下看書2 .長(zhǎng)時(shí)間玩手機(jī)、看電視、玩電腦3 .學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間長(zhǎng)，作業(yè)多建議1 .認(rèn)真做眼保健操2 .多吃胡蘿卜等對(duì)眼睛有益的食物3.參考詞匯： 近視nearsighted注意：1.內(nèi)容須包括所提示的信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2 .文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3 .詞

15、數(shù)：80-100,開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest inChina.【答案】 According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest in China. As we all know that the eyes are very important for

16、us. So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight ? First, don't keep your eyes work for a long time. Don't spend too much time on mobile phones, TV and computers. Secondly, pay attention to the following: Don't read in the sun; don&#

17、39;t read in bed or in a moving bus. And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. And thirdly, do eye-exercises every day. You should eat more carrots and other eyefriendly foods. It will also help you keep good eyesight. I think, you may prevent your eyesight fro

18、m becoming nearsighted.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)表格中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下如何保護(hù)視力。所提供的表格中列舉 了近視的原因和建議。主要從原因和建議兩個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。注意作文 中必須包含表格上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，盡量使用 我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。語(yǔ)法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配 及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫作中要注意使用祈使句，使上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具 有條理性?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縎o it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. 所以

19、保持良好的視力對(duì)每個(gè)人都很重 要。本題運(yùn)用句型：It is +形容詞+for sb. to so sth.【高分句型二】And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot.當(dāng)你讀這本書的時(shí)候，你應(yīng)該把它從你的眼睛里移開一英尺。when you read 是由 when 引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。4 （題文） 書面表達(dá)在中學(xué)生機(jī)器人大賽上，出現(xiàn)了一種專門照顧老人的新型家用智能機(jī)器人，它的主要功能有：1.定時(shí)做飯、洗衣服； 2. 陪老人聊天、下棋、做運(yùn)動(dòng)；3. 處理緊急情況（如：撥打 120 ）假

20、如你是該機(jī)器人的發(fā)明者，請(qǐng)你介紹這個(gè)產(chǎn)品，并談?wù)勀愕奈磥?lái)設(shè)想。要求：1. 意思連貫，語(yǔ)句通順；2. 詞數(shù)80 詞左右；短文的開頭已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）3. 參考詞匯： at a fixed time 定時(shí)emergency 緊急情況ccompany sb. 陪伴某人Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I d likme ytonienwtroindvuecnetion to all of you.【答案】 Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our

21、 robot show. Now I d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do somewashing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also accompany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. What s mo

22、re, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, ifan old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.I m sure my new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這篇習(xí)

23、作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，例如thank you for doing ， I d like to d，ointroduce sb. to ， all of you ， at home ， do some washing ，at a fixed time ， have a chat ， play chess， do exercise ， deal with ， a great help ， in the future等。而 Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainl

24、y to help theelderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots. 等非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞和復(fù)雜從句的運(yùn)用，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。5 假如你是李華 ,

25、 你的美國(guó)筆友Bill 給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件, 想了解你的夢(mèng)想職業(yè)。請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面的郵件, 根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容和你的實(shí)際情況給他寫封回信。To: lihua china. comFrom: bill006 america. comSubject: Your dream jobDear Li Hua,Our teacher told us China is developing fast. You are lucky enough to live in China. Would you please tell me about your dream job in the future?What is

26、 your dream job? Why do you like the job? Do you think your personality is suitable for the job? Why or why not? What do you need to do for your dream job?Drop a few lines if you have time.Best wishes,Bill要求：1.參考提示語(yǔ)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2 .語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；3 .文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實(shí)信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4 .詞數(shù)：不少于70詞（開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。Dea

27、r Bill,Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job.Yours, Li Hua【答案】 例文 Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve problems. I am outgoing and he

28、lpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the school's environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making f

29、or your dream?Tell me about your ideal job! Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本題通過(guò)描寫夢(mèng)想中的職業(yè)，讓學(xué)生對(duì)未來(lái)有憧憬，給一部分提示詞，讓學(xué)生有話可說(shuō)?！驹斀狻渴紫然卮鹇殬I(yè)是教師。然后解釋為什么喜歡該工作，因?yàn)榭梢园炎约旱闹R(shí)分享給孩子們，并且喜歡學(xué)校的環(huán)境。為了實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢(mèng)想，正在為此作出努力。最后向 Bill 提出問(wèn) 題，結(jié)束全文。【點(diǎn)睛】本文首先開篇功能句 Thank you for your letter. 然后開始主要內(nèi)容，運(yùn)用多種連接詞，比如 because， Besides， To realize my dream, 等使文章

30、連貫性強(qiáng)，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，讀起來(lái)朗朗上 口，不失為一篇佳作。6 “ inspire 一詞的漢語(yǔ)解釋是” “激勵(lì)；鼓舞；賦予靈感；或啟發(fā)思考”等。請(qǐng)以 “ Theperson who inspired me 為題寫一篇不少于 ”80 詞的短文，向校報(bào)的英語(yǔ)園地投稿。要點(diǎn)： 1. What kind of person is he/ she ？2. How did he/ she inspire you ？要求： 1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名。2. 語(yǔ)言流暢，字跡清楚?！敬鸢浮?The person who inspired meMany people around gave me deep i

31、mpressions. They helped me, encouraged me and inspired me. But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng.Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes. He doesn't talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face. He is warm-hearted and ready to help others. If I

32、 need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out. As a good student, he studies very hard. In the early morning, you can see him stand near a tree and read English intensively. Few students can arrive at school as early as he is. He also does well in many sports, such

33、as badminton and ping-pang. He got the first prize in last year's ping-pang competition.You can see the good personality and the spirit of persistence in this small body. He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以 The person who inspired me 為題，介紹一個(gè)曾經(jīng)激勵(lì)過(guò)你的人。題

34、目中用問(wèn)題的形式給予了提示，審題可知，短文應(yīng)包括兩個(gè)部分的內(nèi)容：首先介紹這個(gè)激勵(lì)過(guò)你的人是誰(shuí)，他是怎樣的一個(gè)人；然后介紹他是如何激勵(lì)你的。學(xué)生們可以這兩個(gè)問(wèn)題為提綱，發(fā)揮想象力，充實(shí)細(xì)節(jié)信息，組織語(yǔ)言，連貫成文。短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主來(lái)敘述，人稱是第三人稱和第一人稱，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式的變化。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先要符合題目要求，包括題目中要求的所有信息，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意上下文的銜接。其次應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不要按照漢語(yǔ)思維逐詞翻譯。應(yīng)該從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)入手，寫完整的句子。可以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，輔以并列句、復(fù)合句。為提升文章檔次，應(yīng)使用高級(jí)詞匯以及復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)。同時(shí)

35、語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成 分使文意連貫、自然。 【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，介紹了一個(gè)曾經(jīng)激勵(lì)過(guò)自己的人。短文有以下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，層次清晰，短文分三段，第一段先介紹了這個(gè)人是誰(shuí)，第二段描寫了這個(gè)人身上的品質(zhì)以及對(duì)自己的應(yīng)選；最后一段結(jié)尾。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理，主次分明。其次短文中使用了正確的人稱和時(shí)態(tài)，文章以第三人稱和第一人稱為主來(lái)敘述，主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，動(dòng)詞形式變化準(zhǔn)確，注意了第三人稱單數(shù)形式以及過(guò)去式形式的變化，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范。用詞準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言得體，句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文中使用了一些較好的句型和短語(yǔ)，如 But the person

36、 who inspired me most,I think, is my friend Wang Peng. 、 Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes. 、 He doesn't talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face. 、 If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out. 、 He also does well in many spo

37、rts, such as badminton and ping-pang. 、 He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is. 等等。7 書面表達(dá)初中即將畢業(yè)，同學(xué)們都感到壓力很大。就此問(wèn)題，老師要求你在英語(yǔ)課上做一個(gè)以 “ Less Pressure Makes Life Better 為題的報(bào)告，談?wù)勀愕淖龇ǎc同學(xué)分享經(jīng)驗(yàn)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要求 ”寫一份發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容包括：1 .普遍存在的壓力：同學(xué)關(guān)系；考試2 . 我過(guò)去的壓力：父母的期望；學(xué)習(xí)3 .我成功緩解壓力的辦法及效果；要求：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校

38、名；2. 詞數(shù)80 左右，短文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Less Pressure Makes Better LifeHello, everyone!Pressure is a serious problem in today s world. Most students in our class are under too muchpressure. 【答案】 Hello, my classmates!Pressure is a serious problem in today's world. Most students in our class are under too mu

39、ch pressure. Some students can't get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.I was always under pressure, too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class. They always sent me to all kinds of after-classes on weekends.I had a talk with my paren

40、ts and told them I had done my best. Finally, they understood me. In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies.Less pressure makes better life. Thank you.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們針對(duì)現(xiàn)在同學(xué)們普遍感到壓力大這種現(xiàn)象，以 Less Pressure Makes Life Better 為題，談?wù)勛约旱目捶?，和同學(xué)們分享一下自己的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。審題可知，文章中應(yīng)主要包括以

41、下幾個(gè)內(nèi)容：首先介紹同學(xué)們普遍感到壓力這種現(xiàn)象；然后講述自己過(guò)去曾面對(duì)的壓力；最后介紹自己如何成功緩解壓力。題目中只給出了大概的提綱，其中具體的內(nèi)容應(yīng)由學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力來(lái)補(bǔ)充，并用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。學(xué)生們可以從自身的經(jīng)歷和體會(huì)出發(fā)，選取生活中常見(jiàn)的場(chǎng)景進(jìn)行介紹。文章應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，注意根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)，并變化謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，這樣的句式表達(dá)簡(jiǎn)潔、明了，易于掌握。但為提升作文檔次，應(yīng)穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句，或使用一些復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)，如非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞、被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)等。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目

42、要求，談了自己對(duì)同學(xué)們普遍感到壓力大這種現(xiàn)象的看法，并分享了自己的經(jīng)歷。短文有如下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，且層次清晰，文章分成了四段，每一段的中心話題也很明確。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式準(zhǔn)確。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，敘述清晰、簡(jiǎn)潔。也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句的結(jié)構(gòu)，如賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句等。短文中使用了豐富的句式，如 Some students can't get on well withtheir classmates, while others may worry about their exams

43、too much. 、 My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class 、 In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies 等等。8 書面表達(dá)假如你是華,你的英國(guó)筆友對(duì)中國(guó)文化很感興趣,想到中國(guó)旅行感受中國(guó)文化。你想請(qǐng)他來(lái)你的家鄉(xiāng)一安徽一游，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示用英文給他寫一封電子郵件。1 位置 : 中國(guó)東部 , 安做省南部:2 .氣候 :春暖花開 ,秋季涼爽3 .景點(diǎn) : 山和古村落:4 .文化 :茶、黃梅戲5 .建議

44、提示詞 :黃梅戲 Huangmei Opera注意 :1.詞數(shù) 80-1002 .可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),使行文連貫。3 .文中不得出現(xiàn)自己真實(shí)的校名和人名4 .開頭和結(jié)展己給出 ,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù) Dear DaveI know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my home town, to have fun? 【答案】 Dear Dave，I know you are interested in Chinese

45、 culture and I m glad you are planning a trip to China. Whynot come to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.Anhui Province lies in the east of China. The best time to come he re is in autumn, because it sreally cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For exa

46、mple, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture, don t forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. What s more,and watch Huangmei Oper

47、a. It s easy to understand and won t let you down!Welcome to Anhui! I m lofokrwinagrd to seeing you here! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【詳解】 這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給自己的筆友Dave 寫信，邀請(qǐng)他來(lái)你的家鄉(xiāng) 安徽一游，題目中列出了文章的提綱，審題可知，短文應(yīng)從以下幾個(gè)內(nèi)容敘述：首先介紹家鄉(xiāng)的位 置；然后介紹來(lái)這里最好的時(shí)候；接下來(lái)是介紹家鄉(xiāng)的景點(diǎn)和文化，并給出建議。短文應(yīng) 使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)合理安排幾個(gè)內(nèi)容，分清主次，并 注意上下文的連貫。

48、另外，英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，因此寫作時(shí)不能按照漢語(yǔ)思 維逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，寫完整的句子。如可以使用簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)，易于掌 握，不容易出錯(cuò)。但為提升文章檔次，也應(yīng)穿插一些并列句結(jié)構(gòu)或復(fù)合句，以及使用一些 復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)，如非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞、被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)等。 【點(diǎn)睛】 這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求邀請(qǐng)Dave來(lái)自己的家鄉(xiāng)旅游，并介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的景點(diǎn)和文化。短文有如下幾個(gè)特點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有內(nèi) 容，并對(duì)細(xì)節(jié)進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充和修飾，使內(nèi)容更加充實(shí)、豐富。短文先對(duì)Dave發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)，然后具體介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的位置、景點(diǎn)、文化等，并提出了建議。全文敘述清晰，層次清楚，主次分 明。第二

49、，短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合 英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來(lái)敘述，注意了謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞第三人稱單數(shù)形式的變化。 句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了并列句、賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句等復(fù)合句，還有一些好的 句型，如 The best time to come here is in autumn, because it s really cool and you can just takesome light coats 、 Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun

50、and so on. 、 What s more, come and watch Huangmei Opera. It s easy to understand and won t let youdown!、I ' m looking forward to seeing you here等。9 .請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)Zhang Ying的一些表現(xiàn)的提示用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，把她介紹給你的外國(guó)朋 友 Mary。TimeGood habitsBad habitsIn the morningGet up earlyEat junk food for breakfastIn classAsk some q

51、uestionsQuarrel (爭(zhēng)吵)with her classmates sometimesAfter schoolAlways exerciseGo home lateIn the eveningHelp her parents with houseworkWatch TV or play computer games for more than an hour要求：1、語(yǔ)言要通順，表達(dá)要正確。2、文章要求包含表格中的所有提示。3、詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)英語(yǔ)單詞。4、文章開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。【答案】 One possible version Dear Mary,I ' m v

52、ery glad to introduce介紹) my classmate Zhang Ying to you. She is a 14-year-old girl. She has a lot of good habits. She gets up early every morning. In class she likes to ask her teachers some questions. After school she always exercises (for a long time ) . After supper she helps her parents with hou

53、sework. (She is really a good girl. ) But she has some bad habits, too. She often eats junk food for breakfast. Sometimes she quarrels with her classmates in class. She doesn ' t go home on time and she always watches TV or plays computer games for more than an hour in the evening. (This makes her parents unhappy. ) I think Zhang Ying is a very good girl. Do