四六級(jí)萬(wàn)能作文模板(經(jīng)典)

1、大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四六級(jí)考試萬(wàn)能作文模板在 CET4/6 試題中，有兩個(gè)拉分最厲害的部分，一是聽(tīng)力題，一是作文題。 跟漢語(yǔ)作文的 “起承轉(zhuǎn)合 ”類似，英語(yǔ)作文其實(shí)也有固定模式，我到那里一看，果然有五個(gè)模板，認(rèn)真拜讀一遍之后，不由得大吃二驚。第 一驚的是：我們中國(guó)真是高手如林，多么復(fù)雜、困難的問(wèn)題，都能夠迎刃而解， 實(shí)在佩服之極。第二驚的是： “八股文 ”這朵中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的奇葩，在凋謝了一百 多年之后，竟然又在中華大地上重新含苞怒放，真是可喜可賀。感慨之后，轉(zhuǎn)入正題。這五個(gè)模板，在結(jié)構(gòu)上大同小異，掌握一種即可，所 以我從中挑選了一個(gè)最簡(jiǎn)單、最實(shí)用的，稍加修改，給各位介紹一下。這個(gè)模板 的中文大意是：在某種

2、場(chǎng)合，發(fā)生某種現(xiàn)象，并提供一些相關(guān)數(shù)據(jù)，然后列出這 種現(xiàn)象的三個(gè)原因， 并將三個(gè)原因總結(jié)為一個(gè)最主要原因， 最后提出避免這種現(xiàn) 象的兩個(gè)辦法。總的來(lái)說(shuō)，利用這個(gè)模板寫(xiě)英語(yǔ)作文，是相當(dāng)容易的，您只要將 適當(dāng)?shù)膬?nèi)容， 填寫(xiě)到對(duì)應(yīng)的方括號(hào)中， 一篇通順的英語(yǔ)作文即可完成。 下面就是 這個(gè)模板。Nowadays, there are more and more 某種現(xiàn)象 in 某種場(chǎng)合 . It is estimated that 相關(guān)數(shù)據(jù) . Whyhave there been so many 某種現(xiàn)象 ? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. T

3、he first one is 原因一 . Besides, 原因二 . The third one is 原因三 . To sum up, the main cause of 某 種現(xiàn)象 is due to 最主要原因 . It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing, 解決辦法一 . On the other hand, 解決辦法二 . All these measures will certainly reduce the number of 某種現(xiàn)象 .大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四六級(jí)考試萬(wàn)能作文試題模版(I )說(shuō)明原因型

4、 模塊(一) Nowadays,there are more and more XXin some big cities . It is estimated that ( 1 ).Whyhave there been so manyXX? Maybethe reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is that ( 2 ) .Besides,( 3 ) . The third reason is ( 4 ).To sum up ,the main cause of XX is due to ( 5 ) .It is high time t

5、hat something were done upon it. For one thing ,( 6 ). On the other hand ,( 7 ). All these measures will certainly reduce the number of XX .注釋：(1) 用具體數(shù)據(jù)說(shuō)明XX現(xiàn)象( 2)原因一( 3)原因二( 4)原因三( 5)指出主要原因( 6)解決建議一(7)解決建議二 Generation gap between parents and children Nowadays , there are more and more misunderstandi

6、ng between parents and children which is so- called generation gap . It is estimated that (75 percentagesof parents often complain their children's unreasonable behavior while children usually think their parents too old fashioned).Whyhave there been so muchmisunderstanding between parents and c

7、hildren? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows . The first one is that ( the two generations, having grown up at different times, have different likes and dislikes ,thus the disagreement often rises between them) . Besides(due to having little in common to talk about , they are not willing to s

8、it face to face ) . The third reason is (with the pace of modern life becoming faster and faster , both of them are so busy with their work or study that they don't spare enough time to exchange ideas ).To sum up ,the main cause of XX is due to ( lake of communication and understanding each othe

9、r) .It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing (children should respect their parents ).On the other hand ,( parents also should show solicitue for their children). All these measures will certainly bridge the generation gap . 第二天： (I )說(shuō)明原因型 模塊( 2)In recent years , xx has caused

10、 a heated debate on ( 1 ).The factors for ( 2 ) .First of all ,( 3 ).Then , there comes a case that ( 4 ). Moreover , ( 5 ) . Especially when ( 6 ) .Indeed, these unique points can be collected theo remind people that ( 7 ).In this way ,we should behave just like ( 8 ).The impact of TelevisionIn rec

11、ent years , with the development of science and technology ,80 percent of all homes in China have satellite TV , offering as many as 50 channels .It has caused a heated debate on (the impact of television on children ). Many parents are worried about the impact of so much television on children.The

12、factors for (parents' worry is that children are indulge intelevision and spend too much time on it .) .First of all ,(with so many programs to choose from , children are not getting as much exercise as they should ).Then , there comes a case that ( some studies have show that excessive watching

13、 of television by millions of children has lowered their ability to achieve in school ).Moreover , ( the effect on children's minds are more serious than the effect on children's bodies ) . Especially when ( the children are too small to judge what programs are suit to them ) . Indeed, these

14、 unique points can be connected to remind parents that ( they should pay close attention to and responsibilities for supervising their children's TV viewing ).In this way ,children will not be influented too deeply .(I )說(shuō)明原因型 模塊( 3)Currently,XX has been the order of the day .This does demonstrat

15、e the theory - nothing is more valuable than XX .It is clear that (1). If you (2), as aresult , your dreams willcome true . On the contrary, if you (3 ).Failure will be following with you .It turns out that all your plan falls through .No one can deny another fact that (4) .You donn't haveto loo

16、k very far to find out the truth , in respect that we all know ( 5 ) .It will exert a profound influence upon (6 ).With reference to my standpoint ,I think (7 ).注釋：1 ： XX 的第一個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn) 2: 支持XX的做法 3:不支持XX的做法 4: XX的第二個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn) 5:舉例證明優(yōu)點(diǎn)二 6:說(shuō)明XX優(yōu)點(diǎn)三的影響第三天我寫(xiě)的相應(yīng)作文： The importance of self-confidenceCurrently, self-confi

17、dence has been the order of the day .This does demonstrate thetheory - nothing is more valuablethan self-confidence.It is clear that (self-confidence means trust in one's abilities ).If you ( are full of self-confidence ,it will bring your creative power to play , arouse your enthusiasm for work

18、, and help you overcome difficulties ), as a result , your dreams willcome true .On the contrary, if you ( have no confidence in yourself, there is little possibility that you would ever achieve anything ). Failure will be followingwith you 。It turns out that all your plan falls through .No one can

19、deny another fact that (self-confidence gives you light when you are in dark and encouragement when you are dismayed) . You donn't have to lookvery far to find out the truth , in respectthat we all know (the secret of MMe.Curie lies in preserverence and self-confidence,the latter in particular)

20、. It will exert a profoundinfluence upon ( the achievement of one's ambitions ).With reference to my standpoint ,I think (he that can have self-confidence can have what he will).(I )說(shuō)明原因型 模塊( 4)For most of us today ,( 1 ).From above ,we can find that the reasons why ( 2 ) are as follows.The prim

21、ary reason ,i think,is (3)Second,( 4 ).The third reason, actually,is (5)The significance for (Therefore ,(7).注釋：(1)人們針對(duì)XX的態(tài)度和舉措( 2)歸納現(xiàn)狀( 3)第一個(gè)原因( 4)第二個(gè)原因( 5)第三個(gè)原因( 6)重申造成現(xiàn)狀的最重要原因6)(7)我的建議我寫(xiě)的模塊(4)的相應(yīng)的作文，僅供參考pollutionmost of us today (recognize that environmental pollution hasbeen a greatly serious pr

22、oblem . lots of plants trees corps are destroyed by bad air .many fish die of poisonous water . thousands of people die from eating poisoned fish or breathing in gas . therefore , environmental pollution should be responsible for these diseases that are disabling ,or bringing death not only to human

23、 beings , but also to wild life .)from above ,we can find that the reasons why (environment are pollutedmore and more seriously) are as follows.the primary reason ,I think , is (the reason of harmful substances into environment . for example ,to prevent insects ,farmers make use of great amounts of

24、insecticides, so as to have bumper harvests . however ,they pollute air ,water and land ).second,(the gas coming from the car engines and factories also makeenvironment polluted badly ).the third reason actually is (the result of a growing population in the world . everyday , so much litter and wast

25、e are poured out from houses ,also pollute the environment ).the significance for (controlling pollution ) noted that it's high time that more effective measures should be taken . therefore ,(new laws should be passed to limit the amount of pollutants from factories . moreover ,in the households

26、 ,there is an obvious need to reduce litter and waste . let's make our good efforts ,and the world will be a safer place to live for us ).(I )說(shuō)明原因型 模塊( 5)These days we often hear that ( 1 ).It is common that ( 2 ).Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing ,( 3 )

27、.For another,( 4 ). What is more, since ( 5 ),it is natural that ( 6 ).To solve the problem is not easy at all ,but is worth trying .We should do something such as ( 7 ) to improve he present situation ,and i do believe everything will be better in the future .(1) 提出論題(2) 說(shuō)明現(xiàn)狀(3) 理由一(4) 理由二(5) 理由三(6

28、) 理由三引起的后果(7) 解決方法 我寫(xiě)的模塊( 5)的相應(yīng)的作文 pollution of environmentThese days we often hear that (our living conditions are getting more and more serious because of the destruction of our environment ).It is common that (many trees and animals are near extinction, and the all-important food chain has been d

29、estroyed .).Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? Forone thing ,(the population of the world is increasing so rapidly that the world has been so crowded. ).For another,(the overuse of natural resources has influenced the balance of natural ecology ). What is more , since ( th

30、e industrial revolution ) ,it is naturalthat (a great number of factories have been springing up like mushrooms .The smoke and harmful chemicals released from factories also pollute the environment ).To solve the problem is not easy at all ,but is worthying .We should do something such as (planting

31、more trees , equipping cars with pollution-control devices and learning to recycling natural resources )to improve the present situation ,and i do believe everything will be better in the future .CET-4寫(xiě)作中拓展主題句的有效途徑大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)考試中的短文寫(xiě)作部分是考核學(xué)生用英語(yǔ)進(jìn)行書(shū)面表達(dá)的能力 , 也 就是語(yǔ)言的運(yùn)用能力 , 但不是自由作文 , 而是有控制的作文 , 即對(duì)作文的每一部 分內(nèi)容有較明

32、確的要求 , 用各種明確的方式如提綱、圖表、關(guān)鍵詞等加以規(guī)定 . 而提綱常用中文給出 , 學(xué)生需自擬主題句 , 因此,對(duì)主題句常有以下要求 :(1) 意義 完整: 主題句必須是一個(gè)意義完整、 符合語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的句子 ;(2) 表意清晰 :主題句不 能包含兩種或兩種以上的意義 , 要易于識(shí)別、確認(rèn) ;(3) 避免籠統(tǒng)而抽象的概述 . 如 :The book is interesting in content.比 The book is interesting. 更好些.(4)不宜采用問(wèn)句的形式,像"Is it worthwhile to go after fashion?" 不

33、宜作為主題句 . 主題句是作者思維的起點(diǎn)、 切題的準(zhǔn)繩、闡述的對(duì)象 , 拓展好主題 句關(guān)系到文章的成敗 . 本文就如何拓展主題句從語(yǔ)言形式上和內(nèi)容上加以闡述 .、語(yǔ)言形式上1. 平行結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用平行結(jié)構(gòu)作為一種使句子變得緊湊而錯(cuò)落有致的寫(xiě)作方式 , 有以下功效 : 句 式優(yōu)美、表達(dá)清晰、重點(diǎn)突出 , 使用盡可能少的詞傳達(dá)了盡可能多的信息 .例如: 主題句為 Video games are a kind of entertainment.利用平行結(jié)構(gòu)拓展為 :They bring pleasures to youngsters, train them to respond quickly, sti

34、mulate their imagination in electronics.不難看出 , 此處內(nèi)容豐富具體、行文流暢 , 有極強(qiáng)的說(shuō)服力 .2. 句式靈活多變?nèi)粑闹械暮?jiǎn)單句出現(xiàn)得太多 ,就會(huì)顯得單調(diào)、含混、不生動(dòng). 要寫(xiě)出生動(dòng)而鮮 明的句子 ,可通過(guò)喬姆斯基的轉(zhuǎn)化生成語(yǔ)法中的嵌入方式來(lái)實(shí)現(xiàn) . 一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句 ,嵌 入定語(yǔ)、狀語(yǔ)、補(bǔ)語(yǔ)后 , 變得生動(dòng)有趣 . 如: Books telling people how to adapt themselves to the society are worth reading.讀起來(lái)比 Books are worthreading. 更耐人尋味 , 是

35、由于前一個(gè)句子中的主語(yǔ)前加了一個(gè)復(fù)雜的定語(yǔ) . 再 如:Harry stood at the edge of the path, watching the cars running.這是一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句后附上了伴隨狀語(yǔ) , 使句子更加生動(dòng) .在拓展主題句時(shí) , 注意適時(shí)地變換句式 ,是一種有效的寫(xiě)作策略 , 同時(shí)能使文 章產(chǎn)生意想不到的文學(xué)效果 .3. 使用符合英美人表達(dá)習(xí)慣的習(xí)語(yǔ)能將諸如 attach great importance to, leave a deep impression on, in due course, get the jump on 等習(xí)語(yǔ)運(yùn)用到文章中 , 反映了作者一定

36、的語(yǔ)言功 底和較高的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)水平 .4. 連接手段的補(bǔ)充準(zhǔn)確地使用一些 signal words, 總能讓松散的拓展句自然地銜接起來(lái) , 而且 整個(gè)段落層次分明、前后連貫 .常用于表示因果關(guān)系的連詞有 :so, hence, thus, therefore, as a result 等.常 用 于 表 示 遞 進(jìn) 關(guān) 系 的 連 詞 有 :besides, moreover, furthermore, additionally 等 .常用于表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的連詞有 : however, nevertheless, but, yet, on the other hand 等.常用于表示對(duì)比關(guān)系的表達(dá)

37、方式有 :Some prefer.otherslong for.;Wecan compare A with B.;.have something in common;Each has its positive and negative aspects. 等.常用于舉例說(shuō)明的表達(dá)方式有:A simple example is.;Take.as anexample.;An illustration will make the point clear.; First, consider the case of.常用于總結(jié)全文的表達(dá)方式有 :in a word, to sumup, in short,

38、 thus, the reason why we must.; On account of this we find that.; From this point of view.、內(nèi)容上1. 化抽象的概述為細(xì)節(jié)的描述抽象的概述總會(huì)給人言之無(wú)物的感覺(jué) , 若再進(jìn)行具體的描述 , 文章內(nèi)容頓時(shí) 充實(shí)起來(lái) , 變得有血有肉 , 不再枯燥乏味 , 似乎有生命力了 . 例如 :Music is everywhere. 這是一個(gè)內(nèi)容抽象的主題句 , 我們找到切入點(diǎn)后 , 可在 everywhere 上做文章 , 于是接下來(lái)可拓展為 :We can hear it in restaurants, airp

39、orts,hospitals, supermarkets and many other public places.再如 :People canacquire skills through recreation. 這也是個(gè)概述 , 若充實(shí)以下內(nèi)容就豐富多 了,即: They can learn to fish, paint, plant flowers and do paper cutting. 另外, 這里的 learn to 正好與 acquire 相對(duì)應(yīng).2. 從不同角度選材選材時(shí)應(yīng)考慮到段落的單一性和完整性 , 單一性即一個(gè)中心思想 , 完整性就 是要避免支離破碎或內(nèi)容僅局限在某一狹窄

40、的范圍內(nèi) . 材料要做到涵蓋面廣 , 而 且愈典型愈好 ,但也不能憑空編造 ,應(yīng)以事實(shí)為基礎(chǔ) ,這樣一來(lái) ,就避免了片面性 或謬誤.例如:主題句為 Science and technology benefits human being much.（ 科學(xué)技術(shù)給人類帶來(lái)益處 ）, 在展開(kāi)此主題句的過(guò)程中 , 可從農(nóng)業(yè)、 醫(yī)學(xué)、電訊業(yè) 等不同角度來(lái)補(bǔ)充材料 , 行文如下 :Science makes it possible for a nation to ensure food and clothing（ 農(nóng) 業(yè) 方 面 ）, science can make people live longer

41、（ 醫(yī)學(xué)方面 ）, and it's science that makes it a small world（通訊方面）.當(dāng)然,提高寫(xiě)作水平非一日之功 , 要注意平時(shí)不斷地積累 , 盡可能增加語(yǔ)言的 輸入量,才能厚積薄發(fā) ,寫(xiě)作時(shí)才能得心應(yīng)手 ;這樣,假以時(shí)日,自然而然就提高了 用英語(yǔ)流暢地表達(dá)思想的能力 .- liglei【樓主】 （34）: 寫(xiě)作絕招 寫(xiě)作絕招 寫(xiě)作絕招 1 開(kāi)頭萬(wàn)能公式一：名人名言 有人問(wèn)了，“我沒(méi)有記住名言，怎么辦？尤其是英語(yǔ)名言？”，很好辦：編！ 原理：我們看到的東西很多都是創(chuàng)造出來(lái)的， 包括我們欣賞的文章也是， 所以盡 管編，但是一定要聽(tīng)起來(lái)很有道理呦！而且

42、沒(méi)準(zhǔn)將來(lái)我們就是名人呢！對(duì)吧？ 經(jīng)典句型：A proberb says, “ You are only young once. ” （適用于已記住的名言） It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. （適用于自編名 言） 更多經(jīng)典句型：As everyone knows, No one can deny that, 2 開(kāi)頭萬(wàn)能公式二：數(shù)字統(tǒng)計(jì) 原理：要想更有說(shuō)服力，就應(yīng)該用實(shí)際的數(shù)字來(lái)說(shuō)明。 原則上在議論文當(dāng)中十不應(yīng)該出現(xiàn)虛假數(shù)字的， 可是在考試的時(shí)候哪管那三七二 十一，但編無(wú)妨，只要我有東西寫(xiě)就萬(wàn)事大吉了。所以不妨試用下面

43、的句型： According to a recent survey, about 78.9 of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.看起來(lái)這個(gè)數(shù)字文鄒鄒的， 其實(shí)都是編造出來(lái)的， 下面隨便幾個(gè)題目我們都可以 這樣編造：Honesty 根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示，大學(xué)生向老師請(qǐng)假的理由當(dāng)中78都是假的。Travel by Bike根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示， 85的人在近距離旅行的時(shí)候首選的交通工具是 自行車。Youth 根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示，在某個(gè)大學(xué)，學(xué)生的課余時(shí)間的70都

44、是在休閑娛樂(lè)。Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work? 根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示， 98的人同意每周五天工作日。 更多句型：A recent statistics shows that ,寫(xiě)作絕招 結(jié)尾萬(wàn)能公式： 1 結(jié)尾萬(wàn)能公式一：如此結(jié)論 說(shuō)完了，畢竟要?dú)w納一番，相信各位都有這樣的經(jīng)歷，領(lǐng)導(dǎo)長(zhǎng)篇大論，到最后終 于冒出個(gè)“總而言之”之類的話， 我們馬上停止開(kāi)小差， 等待領(lǐng)導(dǎo)說(shuō)結(jié)束語(yǔ)。 也 就是說(shuō)，開(kāi)頭很好，也必然要有一個(gè)精彩的結(jié)尾，讓讀者眼前一亮，這樣，你就 可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子：Obviously （此為過(guò)渡短語(yǔ)） , we can

45、 draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果讀者很難“顯而見(jiàn)之”，但說(shuō)無(wú)妨，就當(dāng)讀者的眼光太淺罷了！ 更多過(guò)渡短語(yǔ)：to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus 更多句型：Thus, it can be concluded that, Therefore, we can find that, 2 結(jié)尾萬(wàn)能公式二：如此建議 如果說(shuō)“如此結(jié)論”是結(jié)尾最沒(méi)用的廢話， 那么“如此建議”應(yīng)該是最有價(jià)值的

46、 廢話了，因?yàn)檫@里雖然也是廢話， 但是卻用了一個(gè)很經(jīng)典的虛擬語(yǔ)氣的句型。 拽！ Obviously, it is high time that wetook somemeasures to solve the problem. 這里的虛擬語(yǔ)氣用得很經(jīng)典， 因?yàn)榭脊俦緛?lái)經(jīng)常考這個(gè)句型， 而如果我們自己寫(xiě) 出來(lái)，你說(shuō)考官會(huì)怎么想呢？ 更多句型：Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.寫(xiě)作絕招 寫(xiě)作的“七

47、項(xiàng)基本原則”：一、長(zhǎng) 短 句原則 工作還得一張一馳呢， 老讓讀者讀長(zhǎng)句， 累死人！寫(xiě)一個(gè)短小精辟的句子， 相反， 卻可以起到畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛的作用。 而且如果我們把短句放在段首或者段末， 也可以揭 示主題：As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meetthe primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar. 如此可見(jiàn)，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，

48、抑揚(yáng)頓挫，豈不爽哉？牢記！ 強(qiáng)烈建議：在文章第一段（開(kāi)頭）用一長(zhǎng)一短，且先長(zhǎng)后短；在文章主體部分， 要先用一個(gè)短句解釋主要意思， 然后在闡述幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)的時(shí)候采用先短后長(zhǎng)的句群 形式，定會(huì)讓主體部分妙筆生輝！文章結(jié)尾一般用一長(zhǎng)一短就可以了。二、主 題 句原則 國(guó)有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。否則會(huì)給人造成“群龍無(wú)首”之感！相 信各位讀過(guò)一些破爛文學(xué)， 故意把主體隱藏在文章之內(nèi)， 結(jié)果造成我們稀里糊涂！ 不知所云！所以奉勸各位一定要寫(xiě)一個(gè)主題句，放在文章的開(kāi)頭（保險(xiǎn)型）或者 結(jié)尾，讓讀者一目了然，必會(huì)平安無(wú)事！ 特別提示：隱藏主體句可是要冒險(xiǎn)的！To begin with, you must w

49、ork hard at your lessons and be fully preparedbefore the exam （主題句）. Without sufficientpreparation,you can hardlyexpect to answer all the questions correctly.三、一 二 三原則 領(lǐng)導(dǎo)講話總是第一部分、第一點(diǎn)、第二點(diǎn)、第三點(diǎn)、第二部分、第一點(diǎn) , 如此 羅嗦?？僧吘惯€是條理清楚。 考官們看文章也必然要通過(guò)這些關(guān)鍵性的“標(biāo)簽” 來(lái)判定你的文章是否結(jié)構(gòu)清楚， 條理自然。破解方法很簡(jiǎn)單， 只要把下面任何一 組的詞匯加入到你的幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)前就清楚了。1

50、）first, second, third, last（不推薦，原因：俗）2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（不推薦，原因：俗）3）the first, the second, the third, the last（不推薦，原因：俗）4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly （不推薦，原因：俗）5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（強(qiáng)烈推薦）6）to start with, next, in additio

51、n, finally（強(qiáng)烈推薦）7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（強(qiáng)烈推薦）8）most important of all, moreover, finally9）on the one hand, on the other hand （適用于兩點(diǎn)的情況）10）for one thing, for another thing（適用于兩點(diǎn)的情況）建議：不僅僅在寫(xiě)作中注意，平時(shí)說(shuō)話的時(shí)候也應(yīng)該條理清楚！四、短語(yǔ)優(yōu)先原則 寫(xiě)作時(shí)，尤其是在考試時(shí)，如果使用短語(yǔ)，有兩個(gè)好處：其一、用短語(yǔ)會(huì)使文章 增加亮點(diǎn)， 如果老師們看到你的文章太簡(jiǎn)單，

52、看不到一個(gè)自己不認(rèn)識(shí)的短語(yǔ)， 必 然會(huì)看你低一等。 相反，如果發(fā)現(xiàn)亮點(diǎn)精彩的短語(yǔ)， 那么你的文章定會(huì)得高分 了。其二、關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻思維短路， 只有湊字?jǐn)?shù)， 怎么辦？用短語(yǔ)是一個(gè)辦法！ 比如： I cannot bear it.可以用短語(yǔ)表達(dá)： I cannot put up with it.I want it. 可以用短語(yǔ)表達(dá)： I am looking forward to it. 這樣字?jǐn)?shù)明顯增加，表達(dá)也更準(zhǔn)確。五、多實(shí)少虛原則 原因很簡(jiǎn)單，寫(xiě)文章還是應(yīng)該寫(xiě)一些實(shí)際的東西， 不要空話連篇。 這就要求一定 要多用實(shí)詞， 少用虛詞。我這里所說(shuō)的虛詞就是指那些比較大的詞。 比如我們說(shuō) 一個(gè)很好的時(shí)候

53、， 不應(yīng)該之說(shuō) nice 這樣空洞的詞， 應(yīng)該使用一些諸如 generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之類的形 象詞。再比如：走出房間， general 的詞是： walk out of the room 但是小偷走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō)： slip out of the room 小姐走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō)： sail out of the room 小孩走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō)： dance out of the room 老人走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō)： stagger out of the room 所以多用實(shí)詞，少用虛詞，文

54、章將會(huì)大放異彩！六、多變句式原則1）加法（串聯(lián)） 都希望寫(xiě)下很長(zhǎng)的句子，像個(gè)老外似的，可就是怕寫(xiě)錯(cuò)，怎么辦，最保險(xiǎn)的寫(xiě)長(zhǎng) 句的方法就是這些， 可以在任何句子之間加 and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后關(guān) 系或者并列關(guān)系。比如說(shuō)：I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar. 如果是二者并列的，我們可以用一個(gè)超級(jí)句式： Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm. 其它的短語(yǔ)可以用： besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover2）轉(zhuǎn)折（拐彎抹角） 批評(píng)某人

55、缺點(diǎn)的時(shí)候， 我們總習(xí)慣先拐彎抹角說(shuō)說(shuō)他的優(yōu)點(diǎn)， 然后轉(zhuǎn)入正題， 再 說(shuō)缺點(diǎn)，這種方式雖然陰險(xiǎn)了點(diǎn)，可畢竟還比較容易讓人接受。所以呢，我們說(shuō) 話的時(shí)候，只要在要點(diǎn)之前先來(lái)點(diǎn)廢話，注意二者之間用個(gè)專這次就夠了。 The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.The coat was thin, but it was warm. 更多的短語(yǔ)： despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding3）因果（ so, so,

56、so ） 昨天在街上我看到了一個(gè)女孩， 然后我主動(dòng)搭訕， 然后我們?nèi)タХ葟d， 然后我們 認(rèn)識(shí)了，然后我們成為了朋友 , 可見(jiàn)， 講故事的時(shí)候我們總要追求先后順序， 先 什么，后什么， 所以然后這個(gè)詞就變得很常見(jiàn)了。 其實(shí)這個(gè)詞表示的是先后或因 果關(guān)系！The snow began to fall, so we went home. 更多短語(yǔ)：then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that4）失衡句（頭重腳輕，或者頭輕腳重） 有些人腦袋大，身體小，或者有些人腦袋小，身

57、體大，雖然我們不希望長(zhǎng)成這個(gè) 樣子，可如果真的是這樣了， 也就必然會(huì)吸引別人的注意力。 文章中如果出現(xiàn)這 樣的句子，就更會(huì)讓考官看到你的句子與眾不同。 其實(shí)就是主語(yǔ)從句， 表語(yǔ)從句， 賓語(yǔ)從句的變形。舉例： This is what I can do.Whether he can go with us or not is not sure. 同樣主語(yǔ)、賓語(yǔ)、表語(yǔ)可以改成如下的復(fù)雜成分： When to go, Why he goes away,5）附加（多此一舉） 如果有了老婆，總會(huì)遇到這樣的情況，當(dāng)你再講某個(gè)人的時(shí)候，她會(huì)插一句說(shuō)， 我昨天見(jiàn)過(guò)他；或者說(shuō)，就是某某某，如果把老婆的話插入到我們

58、的話里面，那 就是定語(yǔ)從句和同位語(yǔ)從句或者是插入語(yǔ)。The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.I don ' t enjoy thatbook you are reading.Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going. 其實(shí)很簡(jiǎn)單，同位語(yǔ)- 要解釋的東西刪除后不影響整個(gè)句子的構(gòu)成； 定語(yǔ)從句 借用之前的關(guān)鍵詞并且用其重新組成一個(gè)句子插入其中，但是whom or that 關(guān)鍵詞必須要緊跟在先行詞之前。6）排比（排山倒海句） 文學(xué)作品中最吸引人的地方莫過(guò)于此， 如果非要讓你的文章更加精彩的話， 那么 我希望你引用一個(gè)個(gè)的排比句， 一個(gè)個(gè)得對(duì)偶句， 一個(gè)個(gè)的不定式， 一個(gè)個(gè)地詞， 一個(gè)個(gè)的短語(yǔ)，如此表達(dá)將會(huì)使文章有排山倒海之勢(shì)！Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated