廣州市中考英語(yǔ)作文專題復(fù)習(xí)(一)

1、廣州市中考英語(yǔ)作文專題復(fù)習(xí)（ 一 ）1、 與專題相關(guān)的話題項(xiàng)目：Personal information/ Daily routines/ personal interests/ feelings and moods2、 與話題相關(guān)的知識(shí)準(zhǔn)備：1. 相關(guān)單元：七上Unit 2 Daily life, Unit8 Collecting things七下 Unit 8 From hobby to career八下 unit 8 Life in the future2. 語(yǔ)法相關(guān)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)3. 詞語(yǔ)相關(guān)：描寫(xiě)人物外貌特征的形容詞有：tall， short, old, you

2、ng, thin/slim, strong, heavy, beautiful, attractive, handsome, fat/plump, well built 等描寫(xiě)人物性格特征的形容詞：kind, friendly, smart, outgoing， funny, cute, serious, clever, quiet, lovely, honest, shy,lovely , hard-working, generous, careful, confident, active。描寫(xiě)興趣愛(ài)好時(shí)可能用到的單詞或短語(yǔ)有：hobby, favorite , be interested

3、in, be fond of, enjoy /like doing, be keen on ,be friendlyto ,prefert等。4. 經(jīng)典句型：? I study at Middle School.? I'm in Class Grade .? I am good at? My best subject is? I am keen on? I am interested in? My hobby is doing? I enjoy doing very much.? I think it is to .? I study very hard at school.? I w

4、ant to be in the future.7 / 6? I used to be ? I m interested in ? I often ? I practice very hard.? I am glad ? I want to when I grow up.? My favourite subject is ? You are the candle lighting my future. （你就像一支蠟燭，照亮我的前程）二、經(jīng)典例題：（2009年廣州市中考考題）你叫李華，你校將開(kāi)展一個(gè)題為“All aboutme的英文寫(xiě)作活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)按要求寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。內(nèi)容包括：1、你的愛(ài)好；2、

5、你的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)；3、用具體事例說(shuō)明你的某個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)或缺點(diǎn)。注意：1、詞數(shù)80左右（文章的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）；2、不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。All about meMy name is Li Hua and I ' m from Class 2, Junior 3.解題思路：1 .審題：a.本文共有3個(gè)要點(diǎn)b.時(shí)態(tài)主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)c.人稱是 I2.可能用到的短語(yǔ)和句型a.你的愛(ài)好enjoy /like doing, be friendly to ,prefer 等。 to ? My hobby is doing .? I am keen on .b.你的優(yōu)點(diǎn)ha

6、rd-working, generous, careful, confident, active? My best subject is .? I am good at? My favourite subject isc.你的缺點(diǎn)? My weakest subject is? I am poor at .3 .成文：I like playing football and basketball. I am always playing basketball on P.E. lesson. At my free times, I often play football with my frien

7、ds. We are enjoy ourself. At study, I good at maths, but I poor in English. I can ' t get high grade at my English. I can' t get high gradeam my Englishdo more English exectrise so that I can improve my English. I should do more in my study.點(diǎn)評(píng)：整篇文章對(duì)要點(diǎn)的把握基本到位，但是拼寫(xiě)和簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤較多。部分句子的表達(dá)過(guò)于 中式4 .檢查思

8、路：完成作文自查表：1 .如果沒(méi)有問(wèn)題的，請(qǐng)?jiān)陧?xiàng)目后打 M2 .如果有問(wèn)題，請(qǐng)?jiān)陧?xiàng)目中圈出來(lái)，并在文中做出修改。項(xiàng)目第一次自查第二次自查布局與內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)人稱時(shí)態(tài)、主ilFTt動(dòng)詞搭配、介詞搭配拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤好詞好句分項(xiàng)分檔評(píng)分表項(xiàng)目要素給分表內(nèi)容6分切合題意, 體現(xiàn)要點(diǎn)65. 554.54.54-3.53-2.521.510有所發(fā)揮準(zhǔn)確 性語(yǔ)法6-5.554.54-3.53-2.521.510詞匯6分機(jī)械性：大 小寫(xiě)，拼寫(xiě) 和格式等錯(cuò) 誤4流暢 性3分結(jié)構(gòu)3-2.52-1.5210.50000自評(píng)總分：10.55.參考例文：My name is Li Hua and I ' m from Cl

9、ass 2, Junior 3. I like pop musico Ilected a lot of CDs and I always do my homework with music on. My friends think I am a happy boy and they like to spend time with me. But I ' m not a ve-workrdg student like some of my friends. I often go to movies during weekends, sometimes I watch TV late at

10、 night and play sports a lot even before important exams. My parents feel worried about me, but I still do well at school. Maybe I should study harder, then I can learn better.（曾力口正能量，給老師好印象0三、練習(xí)：假如你叫李芳，昨天從報(bào)紙上看到海珠區(qū)要組織一次全民學(xué)英語(yǔ)”活動(dòng)，在暑假要招聘一批英語(yǔ)志愿者的廣告，你想應(yīng)聘。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封簡(jiǎn)短的書(shū)信，根據(jù)表格提供信息，表示愿 意為廣州市民服務(wù)姓名年齡15身高160cm健康

11、狀況良好性格外向（outgoing）愛(ài)好體育運(yùn)動(dòng)英語(yǔ)，唱歌，跳舞其他情況E-mail address： lifang1521cn.Dear Sir,I read your advertisement in the newspaper yesterday, I am writing to tell you I volunteer for the Haizhu district.注意：1.詞數(shù)80-100個(gè)2 .文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地址和姓名3 .可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。解題思路：1 .審題：a.本文共有一個(gè)要點(diǎn)b.時(shí)態(tài)主要采用c.人稱是2 .可能用到的詞語(yǔ)（寫(xiě)在要點(diǎn)旁邊）3 .可能用到的句型4 .成文:檢查思

12、路：完成作文自查表：1 .如果沒(méi)有問(wèn)題的，請(qǐng)?jiān)陧?xiàng)目后打 M2 .如果有問(wèn)題，請(qǐng)?jiān)陧?xiàng)目中圈出來(lái)，并在文中做出修改項(xiàng)目第一次自查第二次自查布局與內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)人稱時(shí)態(tài)、主ilFTt動(dòng)詞搭配、介詞搭配拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤好詞好句參考例文：Dear Sir,I read your advertisement in the newspaper yesterday, I am writing to tell you I' d likvolunteer for the Haizhu district.My name is Li Fang. I am fifteen, and I am 160 cm. I am an outgoing girl,so I wouldlike to make friends with others . In my free time , I like doing some sports,such as running, swimming, playing table tennis and so on. I think it is good for ourhealth