江蘇英語(yǔ)高考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)范文+評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

1、精選優(yōu)質(zhì)文檔-傾情為你奉上One possible version:As is illustrated in the report, Chinese parents, especially those born in the 1980s, have spent a large sum of money on extracurricular education to give their children an edge, but experts dont agree with it.I fully understand that parents wish their children to h

2、ave competitive advantages, yet I dont believe its a wise choice to cram in too many expensive classes. First of all, spending too much money on extracurricular education does not necessarily bring about what parents desire. Secondly, so much extracurricular education might affect childrens normal l

3、ife, thus doing harm to their development or even mental and physical health. Besides, parents may be overburdened with extra expenses paid for childrens education and unable to make ends meet, further weakening the quality of life.Accordingly, I suggest parents reflect on the trend of extracurricul

4、ar education, choosing a suitable way for their children to gain an edge.(150words)The discussion about happiness has recently aroused peoples attention. According to the survey conducted last week, 40% of the students in our school link happiness to a life without worry. Another 30% equal happiness

5、 to achieving good grades in study and the rest believe true friends company offers them a strong sense of happiness.Different people may have different interpretations of happiness based on their own life experiences. To me, we can achieve happiness through reaching small goals. We are supposed to

6、constantly reflect on ourselves to make clear our strengths and weaknesses, which form the basis to decide the achievable goals. After accomplishing each of them, we will find a sense of satisfaction. In addition to that, happiness can also be attained through helping people in need. To some extent,

7、 we all depend on others in society for a happy life. Our small act of kindness can make a big difference to people around. By bringing happiness to others, we can gain such emotions as self-esteem and contentment, which in turn bring us more joy. 書面表達(dá)評(píng)分建議一、 評(píng)分原則1 本題總分為20分，按5個(gè)檔次給分。2 評(píng)分時(shí)，可先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言

8、初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來(lái)衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。3 少于110詞或多于150詞的，從總分中酌情減去1-2分。4 評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、運(yùn)用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性、上下文的連貫性及語(yǔ)言的得體性。5 拼寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面，評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮。英美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。6 如字跡難以辨認(rèn)，以致影響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。二、 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn) 1. 簡(jiǎn)要描述圖表內(nèi)容; 2. 談?wù)勀愕男腋Ｓ^及獲得幸福的途徑（至少兩點(diǎn)）。三、 各檔次的給分范圍和要求第五檔完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。l 覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。l 語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯有個(gè)別

9、小錯(cuò)誤，但為盡量使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞匯所致；具備較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。l 有效地使用了銜接手段，全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，內(nèi)容連貫。完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。（很好）（1720分）第四檔完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。l 雖漏掉一、二個(gè)次重點(diǎn)，但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容。l 應(yīng)用的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求。l 語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯方面應(yīng)用基本準(zhǔn)確，少許錯(cuò)誤主要是因?yàn)閲L試較復(fù)雜語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯所致。l 應(yīng)用簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)句間的銜接手段，全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，內(nèi)容較連貫。達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。（好）（1316分）第三檔基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。l 雖漏掉一些內(nèi)容，但基本覆蓋主要內(nèi)容。l 應(yīng)用的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求。l 有一些語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤，但不影響理解。l 應(yīng)用簡(jiǎn)單的銜接手段，內(nèi)容基本連貫。l 整體而言，基本達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。（中等）（912分）第二檔未恰當(dāng)完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。l 漏掉或未清楚描述某些主要內(nèi)容，寫了一些無(wú)關(guān)內(nèi)容。l 語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)單一，所用詞匯有限。l 有一些語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤，影響了對(duì)所寫內(nèi)容的理解。l 較少使用銜接手段，內(nèi)容缺少連貫性。信息未能清楚地傳達(dá)給讀者。（較差）（58分）第一檔未完成試題規(guī)定的任