012019英語一寫作寶典12章

1、驚喜關(guān)注【最強】WeLearn 寫作寶典英語一第一章、英語寫作（一）簡介達Part ADirections: Suppose you are a librarian in your university. Write a notice about 100 words, providing the newly-enrolled international students with relevant information about the library.You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.Do not sign your own name

2、 at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. Do not write the address. (10 points)Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following your essay, you should1. describe the pictures briefly,2. interpret its intended meaning, and3. give your comments.picture inYou should writ

3、e neatlyon the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)第二章、英語寫作（一）評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)2 分首段描述The picture shows the father to play games, son let fathers. The other is a father1主講：達驚喜關(guān)注【最強】WeLearn 寫作寶典英語一and son study together.6 分首段描述This comic picture the two family life respectively that express dramaticly different education wa

4、ys to their child. A father who is watching TV order his son to do his homework seriously in the first picture. But in the second picture, the situation is another way round that the child of his hardworking father isadmiring him.10 分首段描述In the left picture, we see a room placed a sofa, where sits a

5、 man watching TV and making a demand of his son studying efficiently just as in an undisturbed environment. On the contrary, the father in the right picture studies hard withhis son even at 9:00 in the night.14 分首段描述We can see in the first picture a little boy writing his homework as well as his fat

6、her who is watching TV saying “focus on your study”. However, in the second picture, instead of amusing himself, the father is reading together with his littleson.18 分首段描述The two pictures compare two distinct methods of fostering children. In the picture on the left, a young boy his attention obviou

7、sly distracted by the TV program his father is watching behind is urged repeatedly by the latter to focus on his homework. In the picture on the right, however, the student and his father are working on their own assignments by desks at about nine in theevening.【評分細(xì)則】2主講：達驚喜關(guān)注【最強】WeLearn 寫作寶典英語一第五檔

8、A 節(jié)（9-10 分）B 節(jié)（17-20 分） 很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。包含所有內(nèi)容要點；使用豐富的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；語言自然流暢，語法錯誤極少；有效地采用了多種銜接手法，文字連貫，層次清晰；格式和語域恰當(dāng)貼切。對目標(biāo)讀者完全產(chǎn)生了預(yù)期的效果。第四檔 A 節(jié)（7-8 分）B 節(jié)（13-16 分）較好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。包含所有內(nèi)容要點，漏掉 1、2 個次重點；使用較豐富的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；語言基本準(zhǔn)確，只有在試圖使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級詞匯時才有個別語法錯誤；采用了恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯邮址ǎ瑢哟吻逦M織較嚴(yán)密；格式和語域較恰當(dāng)。對目標(biāo)讀者完全產(chǎn)生了預(yù)期效果。第三檔 A 節(jié)（5-6 分）B 節(jié)（9-1

9、2 分） 基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。雖漏掉一些內(nèi)容，但包含多數(shù)內(nèi)容要點；應(yīng)用的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的需求；有一些語法及詞匯錯誤，但不影響理解；采用了簡單的銜接手法，內(nèi)容較連貫，層次較清晰；格式和語域基本合理。對目標(biāo)讀者基本完全產(chǎn)生了預(yù)期的效果。第二檔 A 節(jié)（3-4 分）B 節(jié)（5-8 分） 未能按要求完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。漏掉或未能有效闡述一些內(nèi)容要點，寫了一些無語法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)、詞匯項目有限；有較多語法結(jié)構(gòu)及詞匯方面的錯誤，影響對于寫；的理解；3主講：達驚喜關(guān)注【最強】WeLearn 寫作寶典英語一未采用恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯邮址ǎ瑑?nèi)容缺少連貫性；格式和語域不恰當(dāng)。未能清楚地傳達信息給讀者。第一檔 A

10、節(jié)（1-2 分）B 節(jié)（1-4 分） 未完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。明顯遺漏主要內(nèi)容，且有許多不相關(guān)的內(nèi)容；語法項目和詞匯的使用單調(diào)、重復(fù)；語言錯誤多，有礙讀者對內(nèi)容的理解，語言運動能力差；未采用任何銜接手法，內(nèi)容不連貫，缺少組織、分段；無格式和語域概念。未能傳達信息給讀者。零檔 （0 分）所傳達的信息所使用語言太少，無法評價；內(nèi)容與要求無關(guān)或無法辨認(rèn)?！娟P(guān)于內(nèi)容要點】6 分范文In our daily life, there are a majority of parents looking like the man in the left picture. They may have a heav

11、y work during the day, so that they watch TV when they come back home to relax. Meanwhile, the child asked to study may feel upset and unwilling. While there are also some parents looking like the right man, they work alongside the child studying hard, do the things that they wantchild to do rather

12、than ask.14 分范文Education methods, undoubtedly, exert enormous influence on childrens lives. The father neglects the childs feeling nothing more than ordering him. According to the recent research, as the demands are made by parents constantly, teenagers will have a tendency to rebel. Seldom can they

13、 taste thefruits of success. Conversely, the qualified father knows the principalrequirement of the childs domestic education is being a m, giving4主講：達驚喜關(guān)注【最強】WeLearn 寫作寶典英語一atmosphere of study. Consequently, his son has a good command of studyingvoluntary without fathers demands. The child bounds t

14、o succeed in the end.【關(guān)于語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯】（外刊好詞好句）Just as drones（無人機） can make up for poor roads, the theory goes, mobile phones can overcome a lack of well-functioning banks, portable solar panels can stand in for missing power stations and free learningapps can substitute for patchy education.（學(xué)生）We live in

15、 different countries, speak different languages, but loveis something common to us all. But howdifferent people in different countries.to showlovemay be differentwith（如何豐富語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯）例 1：年輕人應(yīng)該學(xué)會相互尊重。例 2：大多數(shù)老年人都渴望安度晚年?！娟P(guān)于語言錯誤】（2009 年范文）As is illustrated in the cartoon, eachsits in theirown work room. In

16、front of them is a computer. Everyone looks at the screen carefully, and communicate with their colleagues through the net instead of talking face to face. Their work places are placed like a net. And below thecartoon, there is a topic which says: the near and far among the Internet.5主講：達驚喜關(guān)注【最強】WeL

17、earn 寫作寶典英語一一眼可識別的語言錯誤整（主要表現(xiàn)為缺少謂語）句子成分句子成分多余（主要表現(xiàn)為連寫謂語或連寫句）名詞短語類錯誤（主要表現(xiàn)為冠詞、單復(fù)數(shù)、可數(shù)不可數(shù)）常見搭配(動詞短語、形容詞短語和名詞短語)例 1：There are many ways to keep fit. Swimming, skating, climbing, jogging,and so on.例 2：Many people are afraid of making choices. Because they fear that whatare not chosen might turn out to be b

18、etter.例 3：Quite a few young people think that protect the environment is none oftheir businesses.7 分范文As is shown in the picture, a women make a elation who are holding a girl, looked innocent. When the girl grow up a beautiful lady, she came to the sameplace with her mother and the sis full of resp

19、onsibility and wisdom. As afamily member, we should support each other in our life.3 分范文Theres no doubt that this picture is touched me. When the girl was a child, shes mother was held her hand. Now the little girl has grown-up and she is supports her mother. The picture illustrates that the accompa

20、niment is the best love.【關(guān)于結(jié)構(gòu)和連貫性】（2002 年范文）There is no reason to make a fuss about this phenomenon.6主講：達驚喜關(guān)注【最強】WeLearn 寫作寶典英語一With the rapid development of technology and economy, the world is becoming smaller and smaller, and international cultural exchanges have become more and more frequent, wh

21、ich is inevitably improving our mutual understanding andfriendship with other countries.（2012 年學(xué)生）Some people are always positive toward difficulties in life,while others are easy to give up. Whats worse, its a common sense that life is always hard, and difficulties, failures and so on may happen in

22、 our daily lives. So, how can we deal with this fact? Maybe, keeping a positive attitude to life can help us to turn the difficulties into favorable situations. What's more, we should also take actions at once to handle problems. Instead, what a pity it willbe if we fail to see hope and just giv

23、e up.A 節(jié)范文精講Directions: You have just come back from Canada and found a music CD in your luggage that you forgot to return to Bob, your landlord there. Write him a letter to1) make an apology, and2) suggest a solution.You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET.Do not sign your own name at

24、the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.Dear Bob,How are you these days? Please say hello to Liz and Maple.Ive got to say apology to you, due to my carelessness and the crammed schedule before I left Canada, I forgot to return to you the music CD of M.J. I discovered that only when I arrived ho

25、me and started to unpack myluggage. Fortunately, one of my colleagues is leaving for your city next week,7主講：達驚喜關(guān)注【最強】WeLearn 寫作寶典英語一and he has promised to take the some small gifts from my family.All my best wishes!CD to you directly. Also, hell take to youYours,Li MingB 節(jié)范文精講“火鍋”，既美味又營養(yǎng)Inthe picture above is a large hot pot. But differenthot pot, in which you see beef or lamb, luncheonfrom the traditionalmeet, mushrooms,and a variety of vegetables, in this hot pot are various “cultural foodstuffs” ofbothand foreign origins: Confucious, Aristotle, and Shakespea