新教材高中英語Unit1AnewstartPeriod5Writing練習外研版必修第一冊

1、Period 5 Writing 應用文寫作日記技法指導日記是一種常用記事文體，可分為記事型、議論型、描寫型和抒情型。寫英語日記應注意以下要點：(1) 一事一記，要選擇當天感受最深刻、最有意義的事件來描述，不要寫成流水賬。(2) 日記的內容多是親身經(jīng)歷和耳聞目睹的事情，所以要用第一人稱來寫。(3) 日記多是記述當天發(fā)生過的事情， 因此常使用過去時， 但使用時必須靈活掌握。 例如：進行時可用于描寫當時正在進行的動作，馬上要發(fā)生的事件，以及在某事、某動作正在進 行當中，又發(fā)生了另外一個事件或動作；描寫天氣、景色等，為了描寫生動，也可以使用 現(xiàn)在時，以表現(xiàn)當時的情景；文末，發(fā)表感想或評論可用現(xiàn)在時或

2、將來時。(4) 日記應條理清楚，寫出真實感。(5) 注意格式，英文日記通常由書端和正文兩個部分組成。書端包括日期、星期和天氣，左上角是日期和星期，右上角寫當天的天氣情況。正文寫在星期和日期的正下方，可以頂格寫，也可以內縮3 至 5 個字母的空間。(6) 在日期和天氣的下一行中間可以寫上日記小標題，也可以不寫標題。(7) 在句式上，盡量使用簡單句，以防繁雜，造成句型、語法錯誤。經(jīng)典句式1 常用開頭句式：It is sunny and very hot today.今天天氣晴朗，非常炎熱。Yesterday was my birthday, so some of my classmates sen

3、t me presents.昨天是我的生日，所以有幾位同學送我禮物。It is the second day of our summer holiday.今天是暑假的第二天。2 常用主體段句式：On this day, all the family members gather together at home to celebrate this special occasion.在這一天，家庭成員歡聚一堂，慶祝這一特殊時刻。In the afternoon, I watched TV at home.下午，我在家看電視。My classmates are all friendly and h

4、elpful. I was very impressed with .我的同學都很友好，對我也是很有幫助的。我對留下了深刻印象。When it came to the question answer period, I couldnt wait to ask him some questions, and he answered them with great interest and patience.當問答時間到來時，我迫不及待地問他一些問題，他帶著極大的興趣和耐心回答了它們。3 常用結尾句式：However, this special day left a deep impression

5、 on me.然而，這個特別的日子卻給我留下了深刻的印象。All in all, its a wonderful day today.總之，今天是美好的一天。To sum up, the above mentioned rules are the very duties of a student.總而言之，上述規(guī)則就是一個學生應盡的責任。典例演練假設你是李華，今天是你上高中的第一天，請你根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇日記來記錄高中生活第一天的情況。內容包括：1 學校的總體情況；2 同學和老師的情況；3 你的感受。注意： 1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右 （ 開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)） ；2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)

6、，以使行文連貫。MondaySeptember 2 FineIt s Mondaytoday . 精彩范文 MondaySeptember 2 FineIt s Mondaytoday . It is my first day at senior high. My new school is much larger than my previous one, and the classrooms are amazing with a computer in each. My classmates are all friendly and helpful. Wehelped each other

7、 to find the dormitories.Whats more, I was very impressed by my teachers different teaching methods. At the first lesson, I felt nervous at first, but I soon felt relaxed after our teacherasked us to introduce ourselves to each other. I like my new school very much. I thinkI can make great progress

8、in this school.總評 這是一篇記敘型的日記。結構嚴謹，中心突出，有選擇地記錄了當天的見聞 人或事 和感受，并加以分析和評論。完成了題目規(guī)定的全部任務，達到了預期的寫作目的。同時，該文內容豐富，語句流暢，使用了新學的語法和句式，學以致用。 亮點呈現(xiàn) (1)My new school is much larger than my previous one使用了比較級結構，使表達更準確、生動。(2) 過渡詞 Whats more 的使用使文章連貫自然、結構緊湊。(3)be impressed by 和 make great progress 短語的使用令文章增色不少。跟蹤演練假設你是李

9、華，剛上高中一周左右。請你按以下內容寫一篇日記，簡單記錄你的學校、老師和自己的情況：1 有 60 個班， 3,500 多名學生；2 教室配有電腦；3老師友好熱情，教學方法與初中截然不同，上課方式很有趣；4 與同學相處融洽，積極參加各種課外活動。注意： 1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右 ( 開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)) ；2可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Tuesday March 2 FineI ve been at Senior High school for more than a week.精彩范文Tuesday March 2 FineI ve been at Senior High scho

10、ol for more than a week My new school is a famous school with a long history, covering an area of three times as big as our Junior High school. There are 60 classes and over 3,500 students in my school. Its amazing that every room has a computer. Our teachers are enthusiastic and friendly. Their tea

11、ching methods are interesting and nothing like those of our previous teachers.Im getting along very well with my classmates and I take an active part in after school activities like football, basketball, volleyball and so on. I like my Senior High school life.課外拓展閱讀一一中國優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化專題練閱讀下面材料，在空白處填入適當?shù)膬热?1個

12、單詞)或括號內單詞的正確形式。Situated in the Haidian District, northwest of Beijing, the Summer Palace is 15kilometers away from the downtown area. Being the _1_ (large) _and most well一preserved royal garden in China, it _2_ (great)_influences Chinese horticulture(園藝)and landscape with _3_ (it) famous natural vie

13、ws and the works of humankind.Originally _4_ (name) Qingyi Yuan or the Garden of Clear Ripples, theSummerPalace was first constructed in 1750. It later _5_ (become) the main residence of royal members at the end of the Qing Dynasty. However, like most of the gardens in Beijing, the Summer Palace _6_

14、 (destroy) by fire and was razed to the groundby the Anglo French Allied Forces. Rebuilt in 1886, it was supposed to serve _7_a summer resort for the Empress Dowager Cixi. In 1900, the Summer Palace sufferedanother hit by the Eight Power Allied Forces. Then the government spent two years_8_ (repair) it. In 1924, it was open to _9_ public. The Summer Palace was added to the World Heritage Sites by UNESCO in 1998, and became one of the first national AAAAA tourist _10_ (spot) in China.1 . 2. 3. .8.9.10.答案：1.largest6. was destroyed2.greatly 3.its7.as 8.d9.the5