中文論文中的英文寫(xiě)作一些較常見(jiàn)的問(wèn)題

1、 中文論文中的英文寫(xiě)作：中文論文中的英文寫(xiě)作：一些較常見(jiàn)的問(wèn)題一些較常見(jiàn)的問(wèn)題中國(guó)醫(yī)學(xué)科學(xué)院中國(guó)醫(yī)學(xué)科學(xué)院北京協(xié)和醫(yī)學(xué)院北京協(xié)和醫(yī)學(xué)院腫瘤研究所腫瘤研究所周傳農(nóng)周傳農(nóng)題目題目題目題目太繁太繁 雙側(cè)迷走神經(jīng)和頸總動(dòng)脈聯(lián)合切斷法雙側(cè)迷走神經(jīng)和頸總動(dòng)脈聯(lián)合切斷法 建立急性腦缺血大鼠動(dòng)物模型的實(shí)驗(yàn)研究建立急性腦缺血大鼠動(dòng)物模型的實(shí)驗(yàn)研究 Bilateral vagotomy and carotid arteries combined cutting method Establishment of rat model of acute focal cerebral ischemia animal mod

2、el experimental study 雙側(cè)迷走神經(jīng)和頸總動(dòng)脈聯(lián)合切斷法建立急性腦雙側(cè)迷走神經(jīng)和頸總動(dòng)脈聯(lián)合切斷法建立急性腦缺血大鼠動(dòng)物模型缺血大鼠動(dòng)物模型 Establishment of a rat model of acute focal cerebral ischemia by combined bilateral vagotomy and carotid artery cutting題目題目太大太大 兒童單純性肥胖模型的制作兒童單純性肥胖模型的制作 Establishment of Childood Simple Obesity Animal Model 兒童單純性肥胖兒童單純性

3、肥胖小鼠小鼠模型的制作模型的制作 Establishment of a mouse model of childhood simple obesity （本文只作了小鼠實(shí)驗(yàn)，未涉及其他動(dòng)物）題目題目太籠統(tǒng)太籠統(tǒng) 不同測(cè)壓方法測(cè)試大鼠結(jié)腸破裂壓不同測(cè)壓方法測(cè)試大鼠結(jié)腸破裂壓 A comparison of different pressure testing systems for hollow organ of laboratory animals Comparison of different methods for testing the colon rupture pressure in

4、 rats題目題目不能反映原意、用錯(cuò)單詞不能反映原意、用錯(cuò)單詞 基因工程大鼠研究進(jìn)展基因工程大鼠研究進(jìn)展 Process in Rat Genetics Progress in research on rat genetic engineering題目題目濫用縮寫(xiě)濫用縮寫(xiě) 乳酸調(diào)控大鼠腸黏膜微血管內(nèi)皮細(xì)胞乳酸調(diào)控大鼠腸黏膜微血管內(nèi)皮細(xì)胞NF-B信號(hào)通路的研究信號(hào)通路的研究 Lactic acid inhibits NF-B signaling pathways in RIMMVECs 讀者看不懂讀者看不懂 RIMMVECs是什么；是什么；“的研究的研究”可以省去?？梢允∪?。題目題目濫用縮寫(xiě)濫用

5、縮寫(xiě) 哺乳動(dòng)物哺乳動(dòng)物 ES 細(xì)胞與細(xì)胞與 EG 細(xì)胞研究細(xì)胞研究進(jìn)展進(jìn)展 哺乳動(dòng)物哺乳動(dòng)物 胚胎干細(xì)胞胚胎干細(xì)胞與與 胚胎生殖胚胎生殖 細(xì)胞細(xì)胞研究進(jìn)展研究進(jìn)展 ES embryonic stem cells EG embryonic germ cells題目題目 拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤 comparision of hematological parameters in germ-free and conventional guinea pig comparison of hematological parameters in germ-free and conventional guinea

6、pig題目題目 用錯(cuò)單詞用錯(cuò)單詞 適度深吸氣呼吸控制部分乳腺外照射時(shí)基于適度深吸氣呼吸控制部分乳腺外照射時(shí)基于不不同參照物同參照物配準(zhǔn)對(duì)銀夾構(gòu)成幾何體分次內(nèi)位移的配準(zhǔn)對(duì)銀夾構(gòu)成幾何體分次內(nèi)位移的影響影響 Influence of registration based on the different reference markets on the displacement of the geometry consisted of all clips in the cavity for external-beam partial breast irradiation at moderate d

7、eep inspiration breath holding markers署名與單位署名與單位署名署名大小寫(xiě)大小寫(xiě) Li bao-ming , wang zhida，liu xiaowen，yao tao,ouyang xiaotong,su jiagang Li Bao-ming , Wang Zhi-da，Liu Xiao-wen，Yao Tao, Ouyang Xiao-tong, Su Jia-gang 姓名大寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)姓名大寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)單位單位錯(cuò)詞、錯(cuò)名、大小寫(xiě)錯(cuò)詞、錯(cuò)名、大小寫(xiě) The forth Applicated Hospital of Suzhou University

8、 the Forth Affiliated Hospital of Soochow University歷史形成的傳統(tǒng)地名，已成為這所大學(xué)的正式名稱(chēng)，不可用現(xiàn)今的漢語(yǔ)拼音代替單位單位不全不全 Academy of Military Sciences Academy of Military Medical Sciences單位單位大小寫(xiě)大小寫(xiě) Department of , The Fifth Central Hospital of Tianjin, Tianjin 300162, china. Department of , The Fifth Central Hospital of Tian

9、jin, Tianjin 300162, China.寫(xiě)錯(cuò)單位名稱(chēng)寫(xiě)錯(cuò)單位名稱(chēng) Wantwanthospital, Changsha 410016, China Wang Wang Hospital錯(cuò)誤的注釋錯(cuò)誤的注釋注釋錯(cuò)誤注釋錯(cuò)誤 糖尿病糖尿病 (diabetic mellitus ) 糖尿病糖尿病 (diabetes mellitus)注釋錯(cuò)誤注釋錯(cuò)誤 腺病毒（腺病毒（adenoviral） 腺病毒（腺病毒（adenovirus）注釋錯(cuò)誤注釋錯(cuò)誤 單純皰疹病毒單純皰疹病毒 （herpes simple virus） 單純皰疹病毒單純皰疹病毒 （herpes simplex virus）錯(cuò)

10、誤注釋錯(cuò)誤注釋 無(wú)特定病原體無(wú)特定病原體 (special pathogen free，SPF) 無(wú)特定病原體無(wú)特定病原體 (specific pathogen free，SPF) 注釋錯(cuò)誤注釋錯(cuò)誤 獨(dú)立通風(fēng)籠具獨(dú)立通風(fēng)籠具 (Individually wentilate cagesdul，IVC) (Individually ventilated cages，IVC) 注釋錯(cuò)誤注釋錯(cuò)誤 集落形成抑制法集落形成抑制法 (human tumor cell cloning assay , HTCA ) (colony formation inhibition assay )注釋錯(cuò)誤注釋錯(cuò)誤 自然殺

11、傷細(xì)胞自然殺傷細(xì)胞 (natural kill cell，NK) 自然殺傷細(xì)胞自然殺傷細(xì)胞 (natural killer cell，NK)注釋錯(cuò)誤注釋錯(cuò)誤 神經(jīng)生長(zhǎng)因子神經(jīng)生長(zhǎng)因子（never growth factor，NGF） 神經(jīng)生長(zhǎng)因子神經(jīng)生長(zhǎng)因子（nerve growth factor，NGF） 全文多處，全都錯(cuò)用這個(gè)單詞參考文獻(xiàn)的參考文獻(xiàn)的書(shū)寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤書(shū)寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤參考文獻(xiàn)參考文獻(xiàn)作者作者丟失第一作者、姓與名顛倒丟失第一作者、姓與名顛倒 Jeongmi An, Hee-Jin Y, Kimoon Park，et al. (原雜志原雜志) Jeoum Lee, Jeongmi An，Hee-

12、Jin Yang，Byung-Woo Kim, Kimoon Park. Lee J, An J, Yang HJ，et al. 參考文獻(xiàn)參考文獻(xiàn)作者作者姓名拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)姓名拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào) Gordon MN,K ing DL,D iam ond DM et al. Gordon MN, King DL, Diamond DM, et al. 參考文獻(xiàn)參考文獻(xiàn)作者作者姓與名顛倒、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)姓與名顛倒、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào) Maria WW,Edward P,Dennis L,et al . Werner-Wasik M, Pequinot E, Leeper D, 原文：原文：Maria Wern

13、er-Wasik, Edward Pequinot, Dennis Leeper, et al. 參考文獻(xiàn)參考文獻(xiàn)作者作者不可用怪異的寫(xiě)法不可用怪異的寫(xiě)法 Giuseppe VerdileSamuel E Gandy Ralph N. Martins. Giuseppe Verdile G, Gandy SE, Martins RN. 參考文獻(xiàn)參考文獻(xiàn)作者作者etc./et al. Tyler KL, Barton ES, Ibach ML,ETC. Tyler KL, Barton ES, Ibach ML, et al. 拉丁文：etc. 是指物，例如 apple, banana, etc

14、.et al. 是指人，例如 Gordon MN, King DL, Diamond DM, et al. 不可混淆。參考文獻(xiàn)參考文獻(xiàn)不可出現(xiàn)兩批作者不可出現(xiàn)兩批作者 Vanini G, Wathen BL, Lydic R, et al. Baghdoyan,et al.Endogenous GABA Levels in the potine Vanini G, Wathen BL, Lydic R, et al. Endogenous GABA Levels in the potine 參考文獻(xiàn)參考文獻(xiàn)作者作者不可用數(shù)字不可用數(shù)字11代替文字母代替文字母ll、姓與名顛倒、大小寫(xiě)、姓與名顛倒

15、、大小寫(xiě)、etc. Wi11iam Luyties, Peter J. Bredenbeek, Ans F.H. noten etc. Luytjes W, Bredenbeek PJ, Noten AF, et al. 參考文獻(xiàn)參考文獻(xiàn)錯(cuò)寫(xiě)中國(guó)作者、標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)寫(xiě)中國(guó)作者、標(biāo)點(diǎn) Yuhuan W,Xinming T,Charles H,et al. Wang YH, Tu XM, Humphrey C, et al. 原文：原文：Yuhuan Wang, Xinming Tu, Charles Humphrey, 參考文獻(xiàn)參考文獻(xiàn)引錯(cuò)作者、文題拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、雜志拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤引錯(cuò)作者、文題拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、雜志拼寫(xiě)

16、錯(cuò)誤 Schmitt CA, Lowe SW. Apoptosis cell death following exposure to fluoride in rat alveolar macrophage. Arch Toxical, 1996, 70: 249-251 Hirano S, Ando M. Apoptotic cell death following exposure to fluoride in rat alveolar macrophages. Arch Toxicol, 1996, 70: 249-251參考文獻(xiàn)參考文獻(xiàn)缺雜志、缺標(biāo)點(diǎn)缺雜志、缺標(biāo)點(diǎn) Age-related

17、 increase inducible atrial fibrillation 201021(1):88-93. Age-related increase inducible atrial fibrillation. J Cardiovasc Electrophysiol 2010，21(1): 88-93. 參考文獻(xiàn)參考文獻(xiàn)文題首詞丟失文題首詞丟失Campylobacter jejuni infection in different mice strains Primary Campylobacter jejuni infection in different mice strains 參考

18、文獻(xiàn)參考文獻(xiàn)丟了作者、寫(xiě)了單位丟了作者、寫(xiě)了單位 Cleveland Clinic Foundation, Cleveland, OH, USA. The global epidemiology of heart failure. Med Clin N Am 2004, 88: 1135-1143. Young JB. The global epidemiology of heart failure. Med Clin N Am 2004, 88: 1135-1143. 參考文獻(xiàn)參考文獻(xiàn)文題脫漏文題脫漏 Fossella FV, DeVore R, Kerr RN, et al. Random

19、ized phase III trial of docetaxel versus vinorelbine or ifosfamide in patients with advanced non-small-cell lung cancer previously treated with platinum-containing chemotherapy regimens. The TAX 320 Non-Small Cell Lung Cancer Study Group. J Clin Oncol, 2000，18: 2354-2362. 濫用縮寫(xiě)濫用縮寫(xiě)濫用縮寫(xiě)濫用縮寫(xiě) Ca.C 中中sur

20、vivn陽(yáng)性陽(yáng)性 “Ca.C”是什么？是什么？ （一張照片的說(shuō)明） （文內(nèi)根本就沒(méi)有見(jiàn)到過(guò)“Ca.C” ） （猜想是癌細(xì)胞的意思）英文摘要英文摘要濫用縮寫(xiě)濫用縮寫(xiě) To screen the genes differentially expressed in human renal cell carcinoma (RCC) cell lines using SSH. To screen the genes differentially expressed in human renal cell carcinoma (RCC) cell lines using suppression subtr

21、active hybridization (SSH).（摘要首句）濫用縮寫(xiě)濫用縮寫(xiě)英文摘要英文摘要 IHC analysis on TMA revealed that Immunohistochemical analysis on tissue microarray revealed that 濫用縮寫(xiě)濫用縮寫(xiě)英文摘要英文摘要 Objective： To observe the affect of RGZ and ATRA on the growth of myeloma xenograft in nude mice and RGZ rosiglitazone ATRA all-trans-r

22、etinoic acid affect effect用錯(cuò)詞用錯(cuò)詞錯(cuò)詞錯(cuò)詞 大鼠給予藥液灌胃大鼠給予藥液灌胃 All rats were lavaged with KFL solution. All rats were gavaged with KFL solution.錯(cuò)詞錯(cuò)詞 神經(jīng)上皮移植神經(jīng)上皮移植 Neuralepithelial transplantation Neuroepithelial transplantation錯(cuò)詞錯(cuò)詞 巴馬小型豬巴馬小型豬12只只 12 Obama mini-pigs were randomly divided into 12 Bama mini-pigs

23、 were randomly divided into 錯(cuò)詞錯(cuò)詞 Low does Low dose High does High dose通篇如此錯(cuò)詞錯(cuò)詞 RT-PCR was used to amplification the full-length sequence of RT-PCR was used to amplify the full-length sequence of 錯(cuò)詞錯(cuò)詞 GeneBank GenBank 錯(cuò)詞錯(cuò)詞用詞顛倒了用詞顛倒了 正常、特異抗原正常、特異抗原批內(nèi)批內(nèi)變異系數(shù)分別為變異系數(shù)分別為8.3%和和6.4%，批間批間平均變異系數(shù)分別平均變異系數(shù)分別為為9.7

24、%和和11.5%. The inter-assay coefficient of variation of normal antigen and special antigen was 8.3% and 6.4%, and the intra-assay average coefficient of variation was 9.7% and 11.5%, respectively 錯(cuò)詞錯(cuò)詞 評(píng)價(jià)其抗癌作用評(píng)價(jià)其抗癌作用 To access the anti-tumor effect To assess the anti-tumor effect 錯(cuò)詞錯(cuò)詞 探討其作用機(jī)理探討其作用機(jī)理 To

25、 explicit the molecular mechanism of To explore the molecular mechanism of 英文摘要首句錯(cuò)詞錯(cuò)詞 系統(tǒng)性感染系統(tǒng)性感染 Systematic infection Systemic infection單復(fù)數(shù)單復(fù)數(shù) The level of P24 antigen in the supernatant were tested continuously. The level of P24 antigen in the supernatant was tested continuously. 其他其他不好的文章首句不好的文章首句

26、 MG患者通常有眼肌受累，患者通常有眼肌受累， 重癥肌無(wú)力（重癥肌無(wú)力（myasthenia gravis，MG）患者通常有眼肌受累，患者通常有眼肌受累， 不好的摘要首句不好的摘要首句 To Investigate the mechanism of NAFLD in gerbils To Investigate the mechanism of non-alcoholic fatty liver disease (NAFLD) in gerbils 中英文的語(yǔ)氣應(yīng)該一致中英文的語(yǔ)氣應(yīng)該一致 結(jié)論結(jié)論 Ezrin、E-cadherin和和CD44V6在在NSCLC的生長(zhǎng)和轉(zhuǎn)移的生長(zhǎng)和轉(zhuǎn)移過(guò)程中發(fā)

27、揮著重要的調(diào)控作過(guò)程中發(fā)揮著重要的調(diào)控作用，用， Ezrin, E-cadherin and CD44V6 probably play an important role in the regulation ofgrowth and meastasis of lung cancer. 材料與方法材料與方法 Methods Rats were divided randomly into 2 groups. Methods One hundred and twenty healthy adult male rats were randomly divided into two groups.英文無(wú)

28、頓號(hào)英文無(wú)頓號(hào) The values of Ri, Re, Cl, MVV, FVC, Fev0.2, Fev0.2/FVC, FEF25-75%, PEF were 1.81 (0.94-4.10) cm H2O/mLs、1.83 (0.71-3.57) cm H2O/mLs、0.15（0.05-0.29）mL/cm H2O、144.65 (77.28-256.20) mL/min、8.49 (5.82-12.70) mL、5.72 (3.62-7.01)mL、68.12 (39.14-85.28)%、34.11 (28.25-46.87) mL/min、38.28 (30.75-50.25) mL/min, respectively.（9個(gè)參數(shù)）英文無(wú)頓號(hào)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤 主要組織相容性復(fù)合體主要組織相容性復(fù)合體II類(lèi)類(lèi) (majorhistocompatibilitycomplex II, MHC II)