雅思作文-100句第6次課76-90句翻譯

1、76. 免費(fèi)上大學(xué)使得家景不好的學(xué)生有同等的上學(xué)機(jī)會(huì)正確的句子:Freeuniversityeducationmakesitpossibleforstudentsfromlesswell-offbackgroundstohaveequalaccesstotertiaryeducation.我的句子：Freetuitionfeesencourages主謂不一致studentsfrompoorfamiliestohavetheequalopportunitytoaccesstoeducation.(haveequalopportunitiestoreceiveaneducation)形式主語：It

2、ispossibleforstudentsfromlesswell-offbackgroundstohaveequalaccesstotertiaryeducationduetofreeuniversityeducation.Haveequalaccessto對.有平等機(jī)會(huì)Access不可數(shù)n前面不用加定冠詞或不定冠詞。等同availableHaveeasyaccessto更容易Access(v)接觸到信息動(dòng)詞形式用的較少上大學(xué):Highereducation/universityeducation/collegeeducationFreetuition不可數(shù)美式/freetuitionfee

3、s英式可數(shù)/Freeuniversityeducation免費(fèi)上大學(xué)fromlesswell-offbackgrounds省略whoare家境不好或disadvantaged/deprived窮well-offbackgrounds家境好Freecolegeoduedtionallotsthestudentwhocannotoffordedhaveequallytrancetostudy.Thestudent表示特指沒有必要用students情態(tài)動(dòng)詞Can后接動(dòng)詞原形do改為affordHaveequallychance此處equally是副詞不修飾名詞應(yīng)改為equal且本句語意不對，應(yīng)改為t

4、ostudyatuniversity改：Freecollegeeducationallowsstudentswhocannotaffordtuitionfeestohaveanequalchancetostudyatuniversity.Rifr!-lj'Mliryfduirn,aiiI.r，smf*rfri'Hmdr'I上m1以七為mHmi*ipiir?.耳m_一_Mbiilir=-主謂不一致Students前不用加theGetequalaccessto不準(zhǔn)確一般用have改：Freeuniversityeducationallowsstudentsfromdisad

5、vantagedbackgroundstohaveequalaccesstoeducation.uirntd&aJmtanill匡loriluderits.ffomibkgroiinde-qudltducaliori-定語從句沒有謂語應(yīng)加areMakeitpossibleforsbtohaveaneducation/receiveanequaleducation改：Freeuniversityeducationcanmakeitpossibleforstudentswhoarefromdisadvantagedtohaveanequaleducation.77. 很多人覺得自己有必要趕

6、時(shí)尚。正確的句子:Manypeopleconsideritnecessarytofollowfashion.我的句子:Alargenumberofpeoplethinkitisnecessarytochase不要直譯fashion.形式主語：Itisnecessaryforpeopletofollowfashion但是沒有體現(xiàn)覺得的意思覺得：Consider/think097Tonya31趕時(shí)尚:Followfashion/keepupwithfashion/keepuptodatewithfashion不時(shí)髦：Outoffashion/behindthecurve(非正式，可以用在口語里)M

7、anypeoplefeelitnecessarytofollowfashion.Feelitnecessary直譯feel用在feelcomfortable較合適應(yīng)用thinkorconsider改:Manypeopleconsideritnecessarytofollowfashion.manypeoplethinkthatthe>arenecessarytocatchfashion沒有sbisnecessarytodosth這種表達(dá)一般catchthetrain較多書面語一般不用catchfashion.改:Manypeoplethinkitnecessarytokeepupwith

8、fashion78. 經(jīng)費(fèi)削減讓很多年輕人很難接受大學(xué)教育。正確的句子:Budgetcutsmakeitdifficultformanyyoungpeopletoreceiveacollegeeducation.我的句子：Budgetcutsmakeithardforyoungpeopletoreceivethe(a)universityeducation.削減經(jīng)費(fèi)：Budgetcuts(n)主語是復(fù)數(shù)，謂語動(dòng)詞為原型/cuttingthebudget謂語動(dòng)可數(shù)n預(yù)算之內(nèi)詞為單數(shù)Budget自己或組織可用的錢預(yù)算Statebudget政府經(jīng)費(fèi)Withinbudgetliveonatightbu

9、dget生活很困苦窮游：budgettraveltax/job/spending/paycuts一般用復(fù)數(shù)形式Cut(cn)表示reduction時(shí)，有詞伙：78.Th*budgetreducediscoursesmanyyodogpeopletoretfivetertiaryeducation.Discourage不鼓勵(lì)v沒有budgetreduce用budgetcutsTertiaryeducation不要裸奔加不定冠詞改:Budgetcutsdiscouragemanyyoungpeopletoreceiveatertiaryeducation.79. 有時(shí)候，很難去評估人類行為的環(huán)境代

10、價(jià)。正確的句子:Sometimes,itisdifficulttoevaluatetheenvironmentalcostofhumanactivities.我的句子:Sometimes,itisdifficulttoassesstheenvironmentalcostcausedbyhumansdailybehavior.再用這個(gè)詞寫人類行為我就打死你Sometimesadv有時(shí)候，偶爾表頻率Sometime一段時(shí)間Sometimes幾次不能用sbisdifficultCost可數(shù)/不可數(shù)表代價(jià)時(shí)為了達(dá)成某個(gè)目的失去的東西/成本Environmentalcost環(huán)境代價(jià)不要用price.Pr

11、ice指錢的價(jià)格Raiseenvironmentalawareness環(huán)境的意識評估assess/evaluate不強(qiáng)調(diào)結(jié)果，強(qiáng)調(diào)審核過程Judge評判，強(qiáng)調(diào)結(jié)果人類行為：behavior不可數(shù)n短暫的行為humanactivities詞伙Sometimes,itishardtoasses5theenxironinentalcostofhumanbehavious.Behavior不可數(shù)不能加s改:Sometimes,itishardtoassesstheenvironmentalcostofhumanactivities.Sometimes.itishardtoevaluateenviron

12、mentalexpensesofpeople'sbehaviors.Environmentalexpenses錯(cuò)誤Expense話費(fèi)cost成本/代價(jià)expenditure開支Revenue收入毛利（會(huì)計(jì)）governmentrevenue政府收入profit利益純利潤（會(huì)計(jì)）Behavior不可數(shù)不能加s且用humanactivities詞伙改：Sometimes,itishardtoevaluateenvironmentalcostofhumanactivities刁ItdifficulttoevaluatetheenvironmentcostoFhumandctivitieiti

13、me.Environmentcost應(yīng)為environmentalcostSometimes才是正確寫法改:Sometimes,itisdifficulttoevaluatetheenvironmentalcostofhumanactivities.80. 在大城市有一些貧困的社區(qū)。正確的句子:Therearesomeeconomicallydeprivedcommunitiesinlargecities.我的句子:Therearesomedisadvantaged(deprived)communitiesinbigcities.Therebe句型不能出現(xiàn)兩個(gè)v貧困的社區(qū)：economical

14、lydeprived副詞修飾形容詞或用poor也可以Povertyneg.Thecountriesinpoverty.貧窮的Poverty-stricken貧窮的countries/areasM7LiivG0121Disadvantaged修飾人指的是一群因?yàn)闆]錢沒法成功的人Therearesomepovertycommunitiesin津I日gecity.4184Six0107Poverty為n不能修飾名詞改為communitiesinpoverty改：Therearesomecommunitiesinpovertyinalargecity.Inpoorcondition.Condition

15、為可數(shù)n但不表示貧窮表示狀況糟糕In(a)poorcondition改：Inbigcities,therearesomecommunitiesinpoverty.81. 按照能力分班和學(xué)生的成績沒有明顯的聯(lián)系。正確的句子:Thereisnoclearlinkbetweengroupingstudentsbyabilityandtheirlevelsofattainment.我的句子：Thereisnoobviouscorrelations前面是is這里用復(fù)數(shù)？且單詞用錯(cuò)betweenstudentsgrades表示分?jǐn)?shù)andgroupingclassesbyabilities.Byabilit

16、yby為做某事的方法同bycar/bus/train等或用accordingtotheirabilities.根據(jù)他們的能力明顯obvious/clear/apparent按能力分組groupstudentsbyability或用stream/track這兩個(gè)單詞已經(jīng)表達(dá)按照能力分班后不用加abilityThereisnoclearlinkbetweenstreamingstudentsandtheirlevelsofattainment.分組不要用divide把整體分成部分divideintoclassify屬于哪個(gè)小組或階層的意思此處運(yùn)用不恰當(dāng)成績：Academicperformance/

17、levelofattainment(學(xué)識，成就)level可數(shù)n另1J裸奔Theirlevelofattainment前面有形容詞性物主代詞后面名詞可單可復(fù)不要用score或者mark表示分?jǐn)?shù)不表示學(xué)術(shù)表現(xiàn)No后可加可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)/復(fù)數(shù)形式82. 體育課可以促進(jìn)身體健康，增強(qiáng)信心。正確的句子:ThePEclassimprovesstudents'physicalconditionsandbooststheirconfidence.我的句子:ThePEclasscanimprovestudents'physicalhealthandboosttheirconfidence.體育課P

18、Eclass/PElesson/PEcoursePhysical表示body,notmindPhysicaleducation表示體育這門科目PEImprove:makessthbetterPromote:encouragesthtoincrease/develop此處用恰當(dāng)因?yàn)閔ealth是沒法increase/develop促進(jìn)身體健康:Improveone'sphysicalcondition/bodyhealth/physicalfitnessffan.tangliarothePEclasscanimprovesphysicalhealthandboostsconfidence

19、Can后面接動(dòng)詞原形改：ThePEclasscanimprovephysicalhealthandboostconfidence.南IPErlasffls1c»Jtprcum村studentybfiflilthcar*andanhsii尸強(qiáng)cmfiriTtraPromote使用不準(zhǔn)確用improveHealthcare指醫(yī)療不指健康改：PEclassescanimprovestudents'physicalconditionsandboosttheirconfidence.Physicaleducation表示科目主謂不一致改：PEclasseshelptoimprovest

20、udents'physicalhealthandboosttheirconfidence.83. 競爭激烈，一些城市處于弱勢，因?yàn)槿鄙儋Y源，比如：天然氣和化石燃料。正確的句子:Thecompetitionisintenseandsomecountriesareatadisadvantagebecauseofthelackofresourcessuchasnaturalgasandfossilfuels.我的句子:Thecompetitionisintenseandsomecitiesareatadisadvantagebecausetheylacknature(natural)reso

21、urcessuchasnature這是名詞啊!naturalgasandfossilfuels處于弱勢:Atadisadvantage詞伙表示sbhasadisadvantageAdvantaged優(yōu)越性的(adj)有錢有地位Disadvantaged貧窮的競爭激烈stiff/intense/fierce(程度較深)competitionCompetition表示競爭是為單數(shù)不可數(shù)n不能加s表達(dá)上匕賽意時(shí)，為可數(shù)neg.aphotographycompetition城市cities/countries缺少lack用法同accesslacksth(vt)a/thelackofsth(n)Eg.S

22、helackssth(vt)Becauseofthe/alackof(n)天然氣naturalgas化石資源：fossilfuels，176rro-rkDl14f1:掙TEtH-n1(iH啟獎(jiǎng)ltrmpy®1n-riurdvotjblepositImGettrappedin在.中困住困在不好的情況口語Position位置有situation的意思beinapositiontodosth能做什么事情Unfavorableposition沒有這么用的此處不適用應(yīng)用atadisadvantage改：Thecompetitionisintenseandsomecitiesareatadisa

23、dvantagebecausetheylacknatureresourcessuchasnaturegasandfossilfuels.Disadvantaged貧窮的不表示不利的意思缺少lack用法同accesslacksth(vt)a/thelackofsth(n)Eg.Shelackssth(vt)Becauseofthe/alackof(n)天然氣naturegas改:Somecitiesareatadisadvantageduetothelackofnaturegasandfossilfuels.84. 在發(fā)展中國家開設(shè)新的分公司可以降低生產(chǎn)成本，產(chǎn)生巨大的利潤。正確的句子：Open

24、ingnewbranchesindevelopingcountriescanreducethecostofproductionandgeneratehugeprofit/generateahugeprofit.我的句子:Settingupnewcompaniesindevelopingcountriescanreduceproductioncostandcreate沒有這個(gè)表達(dá)hugeprofits動(dòng)名詞做主語謂語動(dòng)詞單數(shù)開新公司open/start/setup/establishnewcompany/branchesBranch已經(jīng)表示公司的意思了不要加company降低生產(chǎn)成本:Theco

25、stofproduction/productioncost/manufacturingcostProfit可數(shù)/不可數(shù)利潤Makeaprofit/makeprofit或Earn/Generatehugeprofit產(chǎn)生利潤發(fā)展中國家:Developingcountries發(fā)達(dá)國家：Developedcountries35“XX一EcffLif*tuBiBbtric±L9EcajijanymIhtjpirmCDLritne£cadi.Z.h&castonjiaJucticc.euictiKtsetiiatjjEofit-Branch已經(jīng)表示公司的意思了不要加compa

26、nyThecostof為固定搭配巨大的用big或huge產(chǎn)生不用create用make/generate改：Runningnewbranchesindevelopingcountriescanreducethecostofproductionandgenerateprofit.85. 生活方式的輕微變化也能夠產(chǎn)生巨大的變化，并且可以減少我們?nèi)粘；顒?dòng)對環(huán)境的影響。正確的句子：Smalllifestylechangescanmakeahugedifferenceandcanreducetheenvironmentalimpactofourdailyactivities.我的句子:Slightcha

27、ngesinlifestylescanleadto沒有這個(gè)表達(dá)hugedifferenceandreducetheenvironmentalimpactcausedby可以這樣表達(dá)但是啰嗦一個(gè)of可以搞定了ourdailyactivities.Somechangesinlifestylescanmakehugedifferences.Change表式改變時(shí)有可數(shù)/不可數(shù)SmallchangesinlifestylescanEnvironmentalimpact環(huán)境影響詞伙Healtheffect健康影響詞伙日?；顒?dòng)dailyactivitiesDaily為adj當(dāng)daily為副詞時(shí)表示每日的e

28、g.Onadaily(adj)basis詞伙(每天)輕微的small/slightadj一些alittle表示肯定的含義表示有一些后面加不可數(shù)名詞Little否定含義幾乎沒有后面加不可數(shù)名詞Few用在肯定句表示少后面加可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式Afew用在肯定句表示有一點(diǎn)后面加可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式Light燈光(n)很輕的(adj)eg.Lightfeather產(chǎn)生巨大的變化makeabig/majorchange/makeahuge/big/majordifferencetheittlechangeoflihedy岫canmaxpahitiQBdiflenercpandreducetheimpactofn

29、urdailyiactrviiiesonttieerrwiFor*mtBfineLhdrigHclbringhugedillBnencESdrdfeIieveLhe"vrcmnnentImpdtlfromhiiimar小沒有thelittle且用在否定語言中較多只有l(wèi)ittle/alittleLifestyle別裸奔Environmentalimpact用詞伙較準(zhǔn)確改：Smallchangesinlifestylescanmakeahugedifferenceandreducetheenvironmentalimpactofourdailyactivities.Finechanges

30、沒有這種表達(dá)fine表示小的時(shí)候是很難注意到和難以理解的意思用在這里不恰當(dāng)fine(adj)表示很好動(dòng)詞時(shí)為罰款沒有bringhugedifferences這種表達(dá)一般用makeahugedifferenceDifference前一般力日make/showRelieveimpact沒有這種表達(dá)一般用reduce/mitigate(使緩和，使減輕)impactRelieve為減輕身上重?fù)?dān)的意思感到很欣慰2CgtJIC114AsmallifMrtylechangescammakeahuedifferpricpandcanreduceimpacttotheernr-ornnemtlor時(shí)rdsily

31、sctivrties-Asmalllifestylechanges前面用a后面加復(fù)數(shù)5.5分Impacttotheenvironmentforourdailyactivities太啰嗦般用詞伙environmentalimpactof改：Smallchangesinlifestylescanmakeahugedifferenceandreducetheenvironmentalimpactofourdailyactivities.-4Lllie-_1_Sifaghdyofliltlty*CJiHnlik*indCifirtdiKttfi#iTilturXtofhuPrUilKtivithK*f

32、rlYifOrlilWiLSlightly為副詞不能修飾名詞改：Slightchangesinlifestylescanmakeahugedifferenceandreducetheenvironmentalimpactofourdailyactivities.86. 因?yàn)闆]有實(shí)習(xí)機(jī)會(huì)，對他們來說提升工作技能是很難的。正確的句子：Itisdifficultforthemtoimprovejobskillsbecausetherearenoworkplacements.我的句子:Becausetheyarenoworkplacements,itishardforthemtoimprovethei

33、rjobskills.實(shí)習(xí)機(jī)會(huì)：workplacements可數(shù)名詞別裸奔或者internship可數(shù)名詞Intern實(shí)習(xí)生工作技能jobskills/employmentskills用are不用is是因?yàn)閜lacements為可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)therebe句型是就近原則be動(dòng)詞的形式跟最近的名詞保持一致Skill可以用learn/hone/developaskill學(xué)習(xí)發(fā)展技能87. 大學(xué)生沒辦法賺到錢即使他們獲得文憑。正確的句子：Universitystudentscannotearnmoneyeventhoughtheyhavegainedqualifications.我的句子:Though

34、表示盡管的意思，不是即使的意思undergraduateshavegainedqualifications,theycannotearnanymoney.Qualification文憑（可數(shù)n）Degree學(xué)位（postgraduatedegreecertificate證書（eg.計(jì)算機(jī)二級）大學(xué)生：undergraduates/universitystudents/collegestudents可數(shù)graduates表示畢業(yè)了的人postgraduates研究生即使evenif/eventhough連詞前可加逗號獲得文憑:get/gain/obtain/acquirequalificatio

35、nshave是有，不是獲得的意思S7+Underqrodirte5cannotmoneywhichcanhelpthemtoqet定語從句運(yùn)用不當(dāng)導(dǎo)致語意偏差這里的意思是掙得可以幫助他們獲得學(xué)位的錢。改：Universitystudentscannotearnmoneyeventhoughtheyhavegainedqualifications.DO?Lly<50121GradiaEestudentscannotearnthemoneyeven（houghtheyacquiredtnediploma.Graduatestudents不表示大學(xué)生用undergraduates前面一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)

36、后面過去時(shí)時(shí)態(tài)混亂Earnmoney中間不用加the文憑此處不能用diploma改：Undergraduatescannotearnmoneyeventhoughtheyhaveacquiredqualifications88. 因?yàn)楦偁幨羌ち液图夹g(shù)的迅速發(fā)展，現(xiàn)在經(jīng)營一家公司是一個(gè)艱巨的任務(wù)。正確的句子:Runninganorganisationintoday'sworldcanbeadauntingtask,becausethecompetitionisstiffandtechnologyisdevelopingrapidly.我的句子:Becauseofthestiffcompe

37、titionandthefastdevelopmentofthetechnology,itisahardtasktorunacompany.Nowadays現(xiàn)在或intoday'sworldDauntingtask表示讓你沒有那么自信的任務(wù)（詞伙）Because引導(dǎo)原因狀語接句子或者用becauseof后面接短語technologicaldevelopment詞伙科技發(fā)展89. 事實(shí)是，一些工作已經(jīng)被砍掉，因?yàn)闄C(jī)械化的原因。正確的句子:Thefactisthatsomejobshavebeenmaderedundantbecauseofmechanisation.我的句子:Infact,somejobshavebeencutbecauseof