高中英語期末復習---記敘文概要寫作

1、精選優(yōu)質文檔-傾情為你奉上期末復習-記敘文概要寫作記敘文體的閱讀材料，相比其他文體而言，寫概要相對容易。在寫概要前，除明確文章主題外，還應抓住六個要素：when, where, who, what, why, how。在這六個要素中，所占內容比重最大的是 what。練習 1I took a trip to a big lake in Indonesia with my family two years ago. It was really a huge lake with beautiful scenery all around. People were amazed by the endle

2、ss view in front of our eyes.Later on, unlike other girls, I volunteered to go water-skiing alone. I put on the life jacket, got on the motorboat immediately and started my engine as soon as possible.The lake seemed broad and endless. I was so thrilled(激動) to enjoy my trip among themountains and wat

3、ers that I sped my motorboat. Then, after some time, I found myself in the middle of the endless lake. A sudden fear came around me. I didnt know where I was or even how far I had gone from the shore. What was worse, it began to rain and it became very cold and foggy. I rode everywhere but couldnt f

4、ind my way back. It was useless for me to cry or shout for help. I was so terrified that I began to think about all kinds of horrible things. After floating on the water helplessly and hopelessly for a long time, suddenly I heard someone calling my name. Soon, a big steamboat sailed to me and they p

5、ulled me up to the deck and asked me if I was hurt. I couldnt say a word but cried in my fathers arms.答案Once the writer was on a trip to a very big lake where she went water-skiing alone.（beginning）.6分 She was excited and sped up , having a very good time,but soon she got lost.She was frighted and d

6、esperate （ progress ） .6 分 .Fortunately, her father finally came to her rescue.（ending） .6 分（45 words） 練習 2After her husband had gone to work, Mrs Richards sent her children to school and went upstairs to her bedroom. She was too excited to do any housework that morning, for in the evening she would

7、 be going to a fancy dress party with her husband. She intended to dress up as a ghost and as she had made her costume the night before, she was impatient to try it on. Though the costume consisted only of a sheet, it was very effective. After putting it on, Mrs Richards went downstairs. She wanted

8、to find out whether it would be comfortable to wear.Just as Mrs Richards was entering the dining-room, there was a knock on the front door. She knew that it must be the baker. She had told him to come straight in if ever she failed to open the door and to leave the bread on the kitchen table. Not wa

9、nting to frighten the poor man, Mrs Richards quickly hid in the small store-room under the stairs. She heard the front door open and heavy footsteps in the hall. Suddenly the door of the store-room was opened and a man entered. Mrs Richards realized that it must be the man from the Electricity Board

10、 who had come to read the meter. She tried to explain the situation, saying Its only me, but it was too late. The man let out a cry and jumped back several paces. When Mrs Richards walked towards him, he fled, slamming the door behind him.答案Mrs. Richards had dressed up as a ghost and was just going

11、into the dining room when there was a knock on the door. Thinking it was the baker, she hid in the storeroom under the stairs. She heard footsteps in the hall and then the man from the Electricity Board opened the storeroom專心-專注-專業(yè)door. Though she wanted to give explanation. When she walked towards

12、him, he fled, slamming the front door behind him. (79 words )練習 3Mary and her husband Dimitri lived in the tiny village of Perachora in southern Greece. One of Marys prize possessions was a little white lamb which her husband had given her. She kept it tied to a tree in a field during the day and we

13、nt to fetch it every evening. One evening, however, the lamb was missing. The rope had been cut, so it was obvious that the lamb had been stolen.When Dimitri came in from the fields, his wife told him what had happened. Dimitri at once set out to find the thief.He knew it would not prove difficult i

14、n such a small village. After telling several of his friends about the theft, Dimitri found out that his neighbour, Aleko, had suddenly acquired a new lamb. Dimitri immediately went to Alekos house and angrily accused him of stealing the lamb. He told him he had better return it or he would call the

15、 police. Aleko denied taking it and led Dimitriinto his back-yard. It was true that he had just bought a lamb, he explained, but his lamb was black. Ashamed of having acted so rashly, Dimitri apologized to Aleko for having accused him. While they were talking it began to rain and Dimitri stayed in A

16、lekos house until the rain stopped. When he went outside half an hour later, he was astonished to find that the little black lamb was almost white. Its wool, which had been dyed black, had been washed clean by the rain !答案When Dimitri came home, Mary told him that her white lamb had been stolen. On

17、learning that his neighbour, Aleko, had acquired a lamb, Dimitri went to Alekos house and accused him of stealing it. When Aleko showed his lamb, Dimitri saw it was black, so he apologized. After staying in Alekos house for a while because it had begun to rain, Dimitri got a surprise outside when he

18、 found the lamb was almost white. It had been dyed black! (80 words)練習 4Last year my company was brought by a large corporation and most of the managers lost their jobs. That was when i decided to do something I d always wanted to do become afreelance writer(自由作家）. Changing professions has meant tha

19、t my lifestyle has changed in a number of ways.I work about as much as I did before-between 45 and 50 hours a week but myschedule is much less fixed than it used to be. Before, I worked from 8 am to 5 pm, everyday, with a few extra hours on weekends. Now, however, I work when I feel like it. For ins

20、tance, sometimes I work until midnight or 2.am, then sleep until noon. I really prefer this kind of schedule.While I was working as a manager, I never exercised. I already felt tired after work, so I just came home in the evening and watched TV. However, last year I joined a health club and began to

21、 do regular exercise. As a result I have lost over 10 pounds and I feel much better, Ive also started to eat more healthfully. I used to eat a lot of fast food, but now I do my own shopping. I buy lots of fruits and vegetables and cook them at home.Of course, not all the changes have been that easy.

22、 For example, I dont feel as safe financially as used to. When I was working as a manager. I never worried much about money. I could always count on getting my paycheck every two weeks. Working freelance, I dont have a regular paycheck. So now I have to make sure that theres enough money until the n

23、ext check arrives.范文：After the author quit his previous job and became a freelance writer. Some changes his life. The work schedule became more flexible. He has also done more exercise and ate healthy. But he might not get regular wages. He found that the present lifestyle is suitable for him.練習 5概要

24、寫作 14 The real kindness and generosityThis was an unforgettable and wonderful experienceIt happened about three years ago and it has had a strong effect on meI would like to show respect here for the man I do not know personally but whose actions gave a new meaning to the words kind and generousI wa

25、s walking down a busy street on a cold, windy day in early winter. A homeless man, probably about 60 andwithout wearing any shoes, was begging for change on a street cornerA BMW car pulled up on the other side of the street and an executive（主管）who was perfectly dressed stepped out of the carHe was p

26、robably about 60 years oldHe was wearing a blue business suit with a deep red silk tieHe walked directly across the street and over to the homeless manWithout saying anything, he first gave him a lot of money and then he sat down and took off his leather gloves, beautiful black leather shoes and his

27、 black dresssocksThen he handed them to the homeless manThe homeless man took them and stared at him with an open mouthAs he drove off, I couldnt help thinking that it was probably the first time he had pressed the pedal（ 踏 板 ）of that top-brand BMW car with a bare foot! I stood there and the looks o

28、f astonishment appeared on my face and the homeless mansTwo men of about the same age but very different lives had met and the one who was successful in materials had offered more than his shoesHe had left this BMW car and stepped down fromhis high positionHe lifted up the other man when he offered

29、respect, kindness and real generosity參考答案：On a freezing winter day, a successful businessman of 60 happened to come across a poor beggar of the same age. He walked out of his BMW and gave the beggar a lot of money and even his own shoes and socks. As a witness, the author was as astonished as the be

30、ggar. This unforgettable experience taught the author the new meaning of kindness and generosity. (66 words)練習 6Yesterday Matt was sick.I picked up Archie from the sitter and Eloise from school and decided to run to Target for a few things.I had hoped to be in and out quickly.I found a line with jus

31、t one person ahead of me and began organizing my items on the conveyor.After placing my items，I looked up to see that the person ahead of me was an elderly woman. She was paying for her items with change and wanted to purchase each separately.I was frustrated with this woman and the inconvenience sh

32、e had placed on me.But then I watched the young employee with this woman.I watched him help her count her change， ever so softly taking it from her shaking hands. When she asked if she had enough to buy areusable bag，he told her she did and went two lines over to get one for her and then repackaged

33、her items.Never once was this employee angry.He was nothing but patient and kind.As I was watching him，I saw that Eloise was too.She was standing next to the woman，watching the employee count the change.I realized I hadnt been inconvenienced at all.That my daughterwas instead witnessing kindness and

34、 patience and being taught this valuable lesson by a complete stranger.When the woman was finished，the employee began ringing up my items and thanked me for mypatience.I then thanked him for teaching us patience and kindness by his treatment of that elderly woman.When he was finished I pushed my car

35、t through the store trying to find the manager.I wanted her to know of the employees kindness and patience and how much it meant to me.After tracking her down and sharing the story with her，we left Target with a cart full of consumable items，but what is more，a heart full of gratitude for such an inv

36、aluable lesson.If you are ever in the Glendale Target，give Ishmael a smile and a nod.The world could use morepeople like him.答案One day，the author with two children went to Target for shopping.(要點 2)While waiting in line， she found an old lady was troublesome，but the young employee treated her patien

37、tly.(要點3)Seeing that，the author was touched by his kindness and patience and she thought her children would learn a lot from this experience.(要點 4)練習 7On a damp, boring, stay-in-the-house kind of day, I was a 4-year-old artist armed with a new treasure: my own big box of crayons（蠟筆）. Somehow, the us

38、ual paper wasnt special enough for these 64 perfect, sweet-smelling sticks of vivid color. I looked around for a bigger canvas（畫布）. If only there were hidden walls. Walls like the ones in Mom and Dads closet.Slipping quietly down the hall to the bedroom, I stood on tiptoe to reach the string for the

39、 closet light. Words and images filled my mind faster than my hands could make them.A brilliant rainbow was seen on one wall, with a cheery golden sun peeking out from above.Below, a giant shade tree supported a swing for stick-figure children. Around them, flowers bloomed everywhere.My masterpiece!

40、 All my very own magic! I took in the walls, the colors and the brightness. Joy swelled inside me. But as my creativity wound down, a thought popped up: Ive got to show Mom! Suddenly I was still.Mom called out, “Dinners ready.”After a short time, her footsteps approached, and then finally, the close

41、t door opened. I stood nervously in the corner.Mom breathed in sharply, then stood frozen. Only her eyes moved as she slowly looked over my masterpiece. She was quiet for a long, long time. I didnt dare breathe.Finally, she turned to me.“I like it,” she said. “No, I love it! I feel like I have a new

42、 closet!”Now, 45 years later, my childhood artwork is still there. And in my own house, the closet walls are masterpieces, too, created by my own daughters when they were little girls.Every time I open a closet door, I remember that, as big as that box of crayons and white walls seemed when I was li

43、ttle, my mothers love was the biggest thing of all.【范文 1】One day when I was little, I created a beautiful picture on the walls in parents closet. Although satisfied with it, I couldnt imagine moms reaction. Instead of criticizing me for ruining the closet, mom thought highly of my artwork. Now I und

44、erstand how much she loves me and I do the same to my children to develop their creativity.A great many people are often willing to sacrifice higher to pay for the privilege of becoming white collar workers. This can give rise to curious situations, as it did in the case of Alfred Bloggs who worked

45、as a dustman for the Ellesmere Corporation.When he got married, Alf was too embarrassed to say anything to his wife about his job. He simply told her that he worked for the Corporation. Every morning, he left home dressed in a smart black suit. He then changed into overalls (n. 工 作 服 ) and spent the

46、 next eight hours as a dustman. Before returning home at night, he took a shower and changed back into his suit. Alf did this for over two years and his fellow dustmen kept his secret. Alfs wife has never discovered that she married a dustman and shenever will, for Alf has just found another job. He

47、 will soon be working in an office as a junior clerk. He will be earning only half as much as he used to, but he feels that his rise in status is well worth the loss of money. From now on, he will wear a suit all day and others will call him Mr. Bloggs, not Alf.答案Many people prefer to give up higher

48、 pay to become white collar workers ,which may cause some curious situation like the dustman,Alfred Bloggs . When he got married, he lied to his wife saying he worked for a Corporation .He dressed in a suit every morning, and changed into overalls at work .At night he changed back into suit before g

49、oing home .He wont be found outbecause he will be an office worker in future.專題限時集訓(四)概要寫作訓練 2 A閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內容寫一篇 60 詞左右的內容概要。Peter loved to shop used articles.Almost a month ago，he bought a popular word game that used little pieces of wood with different letters on them.As he was purchasing it，the sa

50、lesgirl said，“Oh，look，the game box hasnt even been opened yet.That might be worth some money.”Peter examined the box and，sure enough，it was completely covered in factory-sealed plastic.And he saw a date of 1973 on the back of the box.“You should put that up for auction(拍賣) on the Internet，and see what happens，