英語四級作文14.12

1、英語四級作文14.12大學(xué)英語四級考試在2014年12月20日上午已 經(jīng)結(jié)束了，小編第一時間為大家提供英語四級作 文的解析，供大家參考。由于考試是以花卷的形式來考查的，今年主要有三個話題：分別是A course that has impressed youmost in college （大學(xué)中給你印象最深的一門課）：A campus activity that hasbenefited most （使你受益最深的一項校園 活動）Aclassmate of yours who has in fluenced you most incollege （大學(xué)中對你影響最深的一位同學(xué)）。這三個話題均為

2、我們所熟悉的話題性作文，寫作 手法可以采用敘議結(jié)合的方式，完成難度相對較 低?？忌梢院莒`活的套用考前文都老師給大家 準(zhǔn)備的相關(guān)模板句。對于下面的功能句，如果能 收放自如的靈活應(yīng)用，考取高分絕對是輕而易舉 的事情。一、開頭句：主題詞has been playing an increasingly importa nt rolein in dividuals growth. It hasbrought a lot of ben efits.（已在個人的成長中，扮演著越來越重要的角 色它給我們帶來了許多好處。）這里的主題詞可以換成我們這次的 有意義的課 程/活動”（themeaningful co

3、urse/activity）、深厚的友誼”（the deep friendship）直接替換 即可。二、中間段：在具體展開原因時，可以從主次的角度來展開：mainly owing to the fact that .and partlydue to the fact that .（主要原因是.次要原因 是.）例如，這次題目二就可以直接套用：The activity orga ni zed by the campus is the mostmeanin gful for me mai nly owi ng to the fact that it canstre ngthe n our body

4、and partly due to the fact that itmakes me realize the spirit of teamwork.（由學(xué)校組織的體育比賽對我來講是非常有意義的，主要原因是 由于它有助于增強我們的身體素質(zhì)，次要原因是 由于它讓我們意識到了團隊精神。）作文中能寫出這樣的句子，無疑屬于高分亮點 句。三、結(jié)尾段：至于結(jié)尾部分可以直接套用下列句型，簡潔收尾。Taking all these factors into con siderati on, In aturally come to the conclusi on that把所有這些因素加以考慮，我自然會得出結(jié)論

5、Taking into acco unt all these factors, I mayreas on ably come to the con clusi on that考慮所有這些因素，我可能會得出合理的結(jié)論Hence/Therefore, Id better come to thecon clusi on that因此，我最好得出這樣的結(jié)論There is no doubt that.毫無疑問的是 對你影響最大的同學(xué)A classmate of yours who has in flue need you most incollegeRose is my roommate, class

6、mate and my best frie nd inmy college. She has a round face and a little plump.One can always find a nice smile on her face, whichreflects her amiable and pleasa nt character. Our friendship attributes to her great in flue nce on me.In terms of study, she is good at En glish, while En glishis not my

7、 cup of tea. Whe n I am con fused aboutteachers expla nati on oftexts, she always in terprets them to me in an explicitway. I really appreciate her help.Besides, she also imparts me a fewIan guage lear ning tips and recomme ndati ons whicharouse my learning in terest.In additi on, in the leisure tim

8、e, she helps me a lot aswell. Because I am not the local stude nt and myhometow n is far away from here, sometimes I feelhomesick. However, I always have Rose on my side.Her accompa ny gives me great comfort.I feel so lucky that I could have such a good friend, whoteaches me and help me in my study

9、and leisure life, soshe is the classmate that has in flue need me most incollege.TwoI have met so many frie nds in my college life. Theyhave exerted eno rmous in flue nee on my life.However, one of my most impressive frie nds is myroommate, Li Ming.In the class meeti ng on the first day of school, L

10、i Mingdid not impress us at all.We started to no tice him because he was always latefor classes. We were thus impressed by his laz in ess. Icame to know him and his situati on because we wereroommates and spe nt much time together: his motherwas seriously ill and sick abed in Ion g-term, his fatherl

11、eft him and his mother mercilessly. Hen ce, it was himthat shouldered the heavy burde n of tak ing care of hissick mother support ing the whole family. Fin ally, under great pressures, he bala need his life and studyperfectly: he was no Ion ger always late, took good careof his mother and eve n won

12、the scholarship manyyears in a row.The experie nee of Li Ming can be one of the mostconvincing cases of the power of persistence and will.He left a deep impressi on and imposed a durable influe nce on me. In deed, frie nd such as him can beregarded as asset and property in our life. We haverights to

13、 choose our own friends,but we should alsobe prude nt and sen sible eno ugh to choose frie ndswho can bring us“positive energy”. (228 words)【參考譯文】在我的大學(xué)生活中，遇到了很多朋友。他們對我 的人生產(chǎn)生了重大的影響。然而，我印象最深的 朋友是我的室友李明。在開學(xué)第一天的入學(xué)班會上，他沒有給全班同學(xué) 留下任何印象。李明讓我們開始認識他，是因為 他總是上課遲到，同學(xué)們都以為是個懶惰的人。 因為我們是室友，平時的交往比較多，后來我才 慢慢了解到他的情況：原來

14、他的母親罹患重病，長期臥床，父親殘忍地離開他們而去，照顧生病 的母親和養(yǎng)家重任只能由他來承擔(dān)了。 令人驚訝 的是，在重壓之下，他將自己的生活和學(xué)業(yè)平衡 地很好：他不再總是遲到，將媽媽照顧的很好并 且連續(xù)幾年獲得獎學(xué)金。李明的經(jīng)歷是堅持和意志的作用的最有說服力 的例子之一。他給我留下的印象無法磨滅，他對 我造成的影響持續(xù)深遠。的確，這樣的朋友被視 為我們生活中的財富和資產(chǎn)。我們有權(quán)利選擇自 己的朋友，然而交友的過程中，我都應(yīng)該足夠理 智和謹(jǐn)慎，選擇那些能夠給我們帶來正能量的真 正的朋友。最深刻的一門課A course that has impressed you most in collegeT

15、here are many courses in each college year. But thecourse which impressed me most in college is Advaneed En glish Audio-Visual & Speak ing. The reas onswhy I like this course are as follows.The first reas on is that I have lear nt a lot from thiscourse. My liste ning ability, speak ing ability a

16、s well astran slati on ability has improved greatly after tak ingthis course. The sec ond reas on is that I like theteacher of this course, Mr. Qin, very much. He is acharming gentleman with great patie nee. His oral English is perfect, sounding like America n speakers. Hetreated us very strict but

17、we still like him extremely.Just as the proverb goes,“A strict teacherproduces outstanding students.”Thanks toMr. Qins guidanee and teachings in this course, allmy classmates have made great progress in En glishlear ning.【參考譯文】大學(xué)中給你印象最深的一門課大學(xué)階段各個年級都有很多課程，但給我印象最 深的一門課是高級視聽說”。之所以喜歡這門 課，有很多原因，現(xiàn)將原因列舉如下。

18、喜歡這門課的第一個原因是我在這門課上學(xué)到 了很多東西。我的英語聽力水平、口語水平和翻 譯水平都得到了很大提升。喜歡這個課程的第二 個原因是我很喜歡教我們這門課的老師一一秦 老師。他是一個既有魅力又有耐心的人。他的英語口語很棒。乍一聽，完全就是美國本土人在講 英語。他對我們要求很嚴(yán)格，但我們依然很喜歡 他。正如諺語所說：嚴(yán)師出高徒”。多虧秦老師在這 門課上的悉心指導(dǎo)和教誨，我們班同學(xué)的英語水 平都得到了空前的提升?！緦懽髦R點】形容“記么說？簡單句的類型：（1）肯定陳述句：somethi ng forever.（2）否定陳述句：somethi ng.（3）隱否定陳述句：Somethi ng be

19、 unforgettable.（4） 改述陳述句：Something give somebody deepimpressi on.Better choice:某事深深植根于某人的記憶當(dāng)中。Somethi ngbe deeplyin ones memory/mind.主語系語 狀語表語主語補足語例如：童年時代，我有過一次永生難忘的痛 苦經(jīng)歷。The horribleexperienee in my childhoodis deeply rooted in my memory.萬能“亮點”句：Somebody rememberSomebody never forgetrooted我敢說這段美好的經(jīng)

20、歷我永生難忘。I am sure that this great experie nce+非謂語動詞作后置定語+ will be deeply rooted in my/your memory.【2014年12月真題】【題目一】A course that has impressed you most incollege.（大學(xué)中給你印象最深的一門課）例子：I am sure that this great experienee takingthis course will be deeply rooted in my/your memory.【題目二】A classmate of yours

21、who has in flueneed you most in college.（大學(xué)中對你影響最深的一位同學(xué)）例子：I am sure that this great experienee makingfriends with him/her will be deeply rooted in my/yourmemory.【題目三】A campus activity that has ben efitedmost.（使你受益最深的一項校園活動）例子：I am sure that this great experieneeparticipatingthis activity willbe dee

22、ply rooted in my/your memory.運用技巧：（1）歡迎信歡迎留學(xué)生題目要求以學(xué)生會的名義給即將到來的外 國留學(xué)生寫一封歡迎信，并為他們的校園生活提 出一些建議?！纠洹縄 would like to extend mywarmestwelcome to all of you. I am sure that this greatexperience visiting our university will be deeply rootedin your memory.（2）推薦信一一推薦電影題目要求給好友推薦一部自己喜歡的電影?！纠洹縄 would like to re

23、commend an Americanmovie, Titanic, to you. I am sure that this greatexperience seeing this film will be deeply rooted in yourmemory.（3） 告示招募志愿者愿者【例句】We would like to extend thein formati on that we will recruit 100 volun teers for thecomi ng in ter nati onal conference on globalizati on onMarch 20,2

24、010 in our college. I am sure that this greatexperience participating this activity will be deeplyrooted in your memory.題目要求要為一個全球化國際會議招募志(4)申請信 資助希望工程題目要求希望參與希望工程，表達資助欲望 及捐贈計劃。【例句】I would like to request your assista nce tofind a child in a remote area as the beneficiary of myfinancialaid. I aisure that this great experie nce support ing a child inpoverty will be deeply rooted in my memory.(5)題目要求告訴老板辭職的決定，對公司提供的機會，領(lǐng)導(dǎo)的認可和同事的幫助表示感謝，