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1、Tips on how to enhance the effectiveness of your writingCriteria and requirements for NMET .覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容；覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容；應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯(cuò)構(gòu)和詞匯；語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯(cuò)誤，但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞誤，但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞匯所致；應(yīng)用簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，匯所致；應(yīng)用簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊；達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的。使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊；達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的。第五檔（很好）（第五檔（很好）（2125分）：分）：

2、 策略策略1. 使用較高級(jí)的詞匯使用較高級(jí)的詞匯3. 使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞詞匯反映你知識(shí)貯存量的詞匯反映你知識(shí)貯存量的多少，也是衡量英語(yǔ)水平多少，也是衡量英語(yǔ)水平的一個(gè)重要標(biāo)志。的一個(gè)重要標(biāo)志。運(yùn)用得當(dāng)?shù)木渥咏Y(jié)構(gòu)可以運(yùn)用得當(dāng)?shù)木渥咏Y(jié)構(gòu)可以給文章增色不少，從而使給文章增色不少，從而使整篇文章因此而生輝整篇文章因此而生輝 。使用恰當(dāng)連接詞，對(duì)寫(xiě)一使用恰當(dāng)連接詞，對(duì)寫(xiě)一篇有篇有“英語(yǔ)味英語(yǔ)味”的文章很的文章很重要，能使文章上下銜接重要，能使文章上下銜接自然、緊湊。自然、緊湊。2. 使用較豐富的句式使用較豐富的句式1. Because the weather was good, our j

3、ourney was comfortable.2.We all think he is a great man.3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.4.The students there neednt pay for their books. 5. As a result the plan was a failure.The plan turned out / proved to be a failure.Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.一、怎樣使用較高級(jí)的詞匯一、怎樣使用較

4、高級(jí)的詞匯We all think highly of him .A good idea occurred to me. A good idea suddenly struck me.Books are free of charge for the students there.A good idea flashed into my mind.Owing to/Due toWe all regard him as great man.A good idea came to me in a flash. 6. When she heard he had died, she went pale w

5、ith sorrow.7. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.At the news of his death, she went pale with sorrow.The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.On hearing that he had died, she went pale with sorrow.巧用習(xí)語(yǔ)巧用習(xí)語(yǔ)-增加文采增加文采 8.In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms. 9.You can find my hous

6、e easily. 10.Many houses are being built.Our school consists of twentysix classrooms.Youll have no trouble finding my house. Many houses are under construction. .洋味十足洋味十足-才是好文章才是好文章11. I dont want to live with a stranger in a hotel room.12. I was very eager to go home.13. She shouted loudly , “Ive s

7、ucceeded!”I dont want to share a hotel room with a stranger.I couldnt wait to go home. I hunger for going home. / I long for going home. /I am dying to go home.She shouted at the top of her voice, “Ive made it!”1 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用V-ing形式）.2. To his surprise, the little gi

8、rl knows so many things.（使用名詞性從句）3. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (使用as倒裝句)4. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型) 5. I won the competition because of her help.(用虛擬語(yǔ)氣）On his arriving, please give me an e-mail.What surprises him is that the lit

9、tle girl knows so many things.二、怎樣使用較豐富的句式二、怎樣使用較豐富的句式Weak as I am, Ill make the effort. It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. I couldnt have won the competition but for your help. 6. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用過(guò)去分詞)7

10、. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式)8.I wont believe what he says. （使用讓步狀語(yǔ)從句） 9.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句）10He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒裝句)No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad

11、.Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.Singing and laughing, they went back to school.No matter what he says, I wont believe. Study hard and youll make rapid progress.正確連接分句 1. The book was interesting, I read it rapidly. The book was interesting, and I read it rapidly. 2. The girls c

12、leaned the desks and chairs, the boys mopped the floor. The girls cleaned the desks and chairs, and the boys mopped the floor. 避免誤置修飾語(yǔ) 3. At the age of six my father began to teach me English. My father began to teach me English when I was six. 注意邏輯主語(yǔ) 5. To be well-informed, reading newspaper is a g

13、ood habit. To be well-informed, we should read newspaper every day. 6. Coming out of the classroom, my heart was beating very fast. Coming out of the classroom, I felt my heart beating very fast. 避免人稱(chēng)代詞混淆 7.We had been on the plane for eighteen hours, and you got pretty tired of sitting that long. W

14、e had been on the plane for eighteen hours, and we got pretty tired of sitting that long. 避免重復(fù) 8.In my opinion, I think we should ask them for advice. In my opinion, we should ask them for advice. I think we should ask them for advice. 盡量避免漢語(yǔ)干擾 9. The books in our library are getting more and more.

15、There are more and more books in our library. The number of books in our library is getting bigger and bigger. 10. There is a man wants to see you downstairs. A young man wants to see you downstairs. There is a man who wants to see you downstairs. 11. They will come to visit you when you are conveni

16、ent. They will come to visit you when it is convenient to you. They will come to visit you at your convenience. 注意時(shí)態(tài)一致 12. I went shopping yesterday. There were many people in the supermarket. People are carrying baskets or taking carts. I struggled in the crowds picking up the things I need. When I

17、 finished my shopping I am so tired.wereneededwas三、怎樣使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞三、怎樣使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞邏輯角度邏輯角度合適的過(guò)渡性詞匯合適的過(guò)渡性詞匯時(shí)間順序 first, second, then, finally/at last , soon immediately, suddenly空間順序here, there, on one sideon the other side,in front of, at the back of, next to 對(duì)稱(chēng)順序for one thing, for the other thing, on one han

18、d,on the other hand轉(zhuǎn)折順序but, however, while, though, otherwise因果順序because, since, as, thanks to, as a result (of)條件順序as long as, so long as, on condition that, if, unless讓步順序though, as, even if/though, whether, who (what,when, where)ever遞進(jìn)順序whats more, besides, to make the matter worse,whats worse表示總

19、結(jié)in a word, altogether, all in all, in general一一.補(bǔ)充句子補(bǔ)充句子 根據(jù)中文意思，將下列英文句子補(bǔ)充完整。根據(jù)中文意思，將下列英文句子補(bǔ)充完整。1.你給了我許多幫助，也給了我許多鼓舞?？傊?，沒(méi)有你我不能成功。 You gave me much help and encouragement. _ _ _, I couldnt have succeeded without you.In a word 三、怎樣使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞三、怎樣使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞 2.總的說(shuō)來(lái)，你的回答不太令人滿(mǎn)意?？偟恼f(shuō)來(lái)，你的回答不太令人滿(mǎn)意。 _ _ _, your answ

20、er is not so satisfying. 3.一般說(shuō)來(lái)物理比數(shù)學(xué)難學(xué)得多。一般說(shuō)來(lái)物理比數(shù)學(xué)難學(xué)得多。 , physics is much more difficult than mathematics.All in all Generally speaking 4.令我滿(mǎn)意的是，他數(shù)學(xué)考試得了滿(mǎn)分。令我滿(mǎn)意的是，他數(shù)學(xué)考試得了滿(mǎn)分。 _ _ _, he got full marks in the mathematics exam. 5.令我驚恐的是，令我驚恐的是， 我看見(jiàn)他從樹(shù)上摔了下來(lái)。我看見(jiàn)他從樹(shù)上摔了下來(lái)。 _ _ _, I saw him fall down from the

21、 tree. 6.這輛自行車(chē)真的很漂亮，然而我沒(méi)錢(qián)買(mǎi)。這輛自行車(chē)真的很漂亮，然而我沒(méi)錢(qián)買(mǎi)。 This bike is really very beautiful. , I have no money to buy it.To my satisfaction To my horror Nevertheless 7.他首先去了法國(guó)，然后又去了美國(guó)。他首先去了法國(guó)，然后又去了美國(guó)。 First, he went to France; _ he went to America. 8.令我高興的是，令我高興的是， 我終于說(shuō)服她改變了主我終于說(shuō)服她改變了主意。意。 _ _ _ . I finally pe

22、rsuaded her to change her mind.then To my joy 9.一開(kāi)始他反對(duì)我的計(jì)劃，一開(kāi)始他反對(duì)我的計(jì)劃， 但最后他支持我的計(jì)劃了。但最后他支持我的計(jì)劃了。 At first he was against my plan, but _ _ _ he was for it. 10.你必須購(gòu)買(mǎi)一些生活必需品。你必須購(gòu)買(mǎi)一些生活必需品。 你必須了解一些關(guān)于你必須了解一些關(guān)于這個(gè)國(guó)家的信息。總之，這個(gè)國(guó)家的信息?？傊?， 你必須為這次旅行做好準(zhǔn)備。你必須為這次旅行做好準(zhǔn)備。 You should buy some living necessities. You shou

23、ld learn something about this country. _ _ _, you must get everything ready for this journey.In the end In a word 二二. 行文邏輯訓(xùn)練行文邏輯訓(xùn)練 閱讀短文，選擇適當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)渡性詞匯填空閱讀短文，選擇適當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)渡性詞匯填空。first, whats worse/more, besides/in addition, now, in my opinion, As far as Im concerned, in my view, from the point of my view. _1_ m

24、any middle school students are fat and there are reasons for it. Some eat too much met and too many snacks. Some sit too long but seldom exercise. Getting fat has quite a few disadvantages. _2_, being fat makes it difficult for one to walk or move as others.Now First _3_ , to be fat usually means to

25、 be weak, and it is easy for a fat person to suffer from many kinds of diseases. At the same time. A fat person gets tired easily, which decreases his study efficiency. _4_, to be fat is not a good thing for us middle students. We should try to eat less meat but more vegetables. _ we should try our best to take part in all kinds of sports. If so, we are sure