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1、范文講評:旅游事業(yè)要求要求:旅游事業(yè)對我國具有舉足輕重的作用。請以Ways to Improve Chinas Tourism為題為我國旅游事業(yè)的發(fā)展提幾點建議。(提示:擴大宣傳,改善旅游設施,提高服務質量)范文Ways to Improve chinas tourismTourism is now becoming a major industry throughout the world. However,tourism in China is not as developed as it should be. If the following is done,Chinas tourism
2、 will definitely be improved.First,our places of interest should be better advertised throughout the world to attract more tourists. Second,facilities should be provided to ensure that tourists enjoy their trip. Finally,the quality of service should be improved.Dont tell people their ideas are bad u
3、nless youve got a good one.評語本文第一段提出問題,第二段解決問題,“first”,“second”,“finally”等詞的使用,使整篇文章條理格外清晰。范文講評:如何利用空余時間要求題目:你將參加校園英語講演比賽。現(xiàn)在需要寫出一份簡要的底稿,底稿應包含以下基本要點。隨著工作時間的縮短,空余時間越來越多了。如何利用空余時間。利用空余時間的益處。題目自擬。范文Use of Free TimeSome people may be so busy that they never have a spare moment,but it would be hard to fin
4、d such people in contemporary times. Working hours are shorter and vacations longer,and there are more and more ways to spend the weekends. Aside from eating and sleeping,what do people do during the many hours when they are not at work or at school?Use of free time often discloses much about ones t
5、astes,values,interests and personality. What may be one mans leisure,however,might be another mans work. In leisure hours,some may turn to the humanities:literature,magic,art and here we might also mention movies and television. Others participate in sports,politics,voluntary work or hobbies at home
6、. Still others like parties,travelling,or just loafing.Obviously,the use of free time is a good means of relaxation,but its benefits go beyond this. All things people do in leisure hours enable them to gratify their wishes. This can contribute to intellectual growth and promote social activities as
7、well.So the good use of free time will make life rich,colorful and rewarding.評語這篇文章寫得很有水平。說理深入淺出,語言豐富曉暢,例證詳實,句式靈活多變,使得文章生動并吸引人。開篇用問句,引出下文;結尾點題,總結全文。并且很有文學性。范文講評:旅行要求暑假就要到了,許多同學都會選擇旅游作為度假的一種方式。的確,旅游對一個人的身心健康頗有好處。那么就請你以下面三句話分別作為三段段首的主題句,寫一篇旅游的文章。Travel is a very good means of broadening a persons pers
8、pective.Travel may relieve a person of boredom and gloom.Travelers can choose different modes of transportation which have advantages and disadvantages.范文TravelTravel is a very good means of broadening a persons perspective. It makes you come into contact with different cultures,meet people of diffe
9、rent colors and go through peculiar rites and ceremonies. Travelling much,you will not only enrich your knowledge and experiences,but also be aware of the vastness of nature.Travel may also relieve person of boredom and gloom. Travel brings you enjoyment and attraction. It gives you a pleasant exper
10、ience,which will disperse your boredom and make you forget whatever annoys you. Travel broadens your mind and leaves you good memories. Later,you may go over these memories and enjoy your past experiences,thus keeping a fresh and sunny mind.The fields his study,nature was his book.Travelers can choo
11、se different modes of transportation which have advantages and disadvantages. Airplanes are the fastest but also the most expensive. Buses and trains are less expensive,but they soon make you feel cramped and uncomfortable. Ships provide you with comfort unless you get seasick. Most people can affor
12、d traveling by bicycle,which,although slow,can limber up your muscles and get you closer to nature.評語本文首先陳述了旅游能夠開闊人們眼界的原因,接著指出為什么旅游能夠消除煩悶、抑郁的心情,最后說明進行旅游可采取的不同交通工具的優(yōu)缺點。本篇各段解釋言簡意明,主題突出?!癱ome into contact with”,“enrich you knowledge and experiences”,“be aware of the vastness of nature”,“disperse your b
13、oredom”,“broaden your mind”等詞語的恰當搭配,生動而準確地表現(xiàn)出了旅游的益處。范文:大型企業(yè)和小型企業(yè) Large Companies and Small CompaniesDirections:Write a composition on the topic Large Companies and Small Companies in thirty minutes. You should write no less than 120 words and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese)be
14、low.1.大學畢業(yè)后有的人希望在大公司工作。2.有的人則認為在小公司工作更能鍛煉人。3.我的看法。參考范文:Large Companies and Small CompaniesUpon graduation from college,young men and women face the first choice in their career life:to go to a large company or a small one? Although many graduates are attracted by the prestige of large companies,I be
15、lieve the small one will afford more chances of success and more opportunities to develop your ability.There are two basic differences between the large and small enterprises. First,working in the small company you operate primarily through personal contacts;you have more chance to develop your comm
16、unication ability and the ability to handle various kinds of personalities. In contrast,in the large company there are established policies and fairly rigid procedures. Even the man at the top is only a cog in a big machine: you neednt make any decision and cant see the effect of your work Second,in
17、 a small business you are normally exposed to all kinds of experiences and expected to do a great many things without too much help or guidance. Thus,you may acquire much more skills and experience,and develop the ability to handle different,complicated things. But in the large corporation,since you
18、 are normally taught one thing and limited to one procedure,you may become the man who knows more and more about less and less.Obviously if you want to gain more experience and ability needed in business organizations and to become an excellent manager or executive in your future career,working in a
19、 small company is your best choice.范文:名人隱私 Privacy of Famous PeopleDirections:you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay no less than 120 words on the following topic.Newspapers and magazines have special interest in the private lives of famous people.What can you explain it?What effect it will ha
20、ve on the people being exposed?And what is your opinion of it?范文:Privacy of Famous PeopleIn recent years,many newspapers and magazines focus on the activities of film stars,pop singers and some other famous men and women. Reporters disguise their identities,infiltrate the subjects business and famil
21、y,or even bug and wiretap themto get the news by whatever means are necessary.It is not difficult to explain the reason for their surprising amount of interest in famous peoples lives. They are in the spotlight,renowned or notorious,they are the topic of ordinary people who like to know everything a
22、bout them. To satisfy their curiosity,or “the peoples right to know”,journalists often find it their duty to report their activities.More over,what matters to a newspaper or a magazine is the number of readers. A large readership means the rise in the circulation of their publications,hence a huge p
23、rofit. Since film stars and pop singers are newsworthy figures,and their stories draws far more attention than those of other people,it is natural that the press tries to attract them to buy their magazines by featuring private lives of famous people.How ever,those exposed people can be severely inj
24、ured by such press attention. Sensational stories about their private lives cause great unhappiness to them. To escape reporters,they cant even lead a normal life. Sometimes their lives will be in danger. For example,Princess Diana died in a car accident as she attempted to escape photographers in a
25、 chase through Paris.Famous people are also citizens. They have the right to keep their own privacy like ordinary peoplethe basic right which should be respected,protected and guaranteed by our laws in whatever circumstances.范文:給校長的一封信 A Letter to the University PresidentDirection:For this part,you
26、are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic:A letter to the university president about the canteen service on campus,you should write at least 100 words,and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:假設你是李偉,請你就本校食堂的狀況給校長寫了一封信,內容涉及食堂的飯菜質量、價格、環(huán)境、服務等等,可以是表揚,可以是批評建議,也
27、可以兼而有之。參考范文:January 11th,2003Dear Mr. President,As a regular student at our college,I have some complaint to make about the canteen service on campus.Firstly,the canteen environment is very bad. Actually,it is becoming more and more crowded and noisy with an ever larger presence of vocational studen
28、ts every term. Secondly,the canteen workers are bad-mannered. Far from being warm and kind-hearted,they always seem to be cold and rude to us students. Thirdly and most importantly,the dishes at our canteen are too expensive,though they are by no means good quality or delicious. The survey the Stude
29、nt Union carried out last week reveals that on average a student will spend 10 to 12 yuan on meals every day. This is for more than the food expenses of students in the neighborhood colleges.Nutritious and delicious meals well within the studentsmeans are very important for young students. I really
30、wish measures could be taken to improve our canteen service.范文:知識和經(jīng)驗 Knowledge or ExperienceDirections:You are allowed 40 minutes to write an essay no less than 150 words on the following topic.1.some emphasize book knowledge2.others stress practical experience3.which one is more important?Give your
31、 reasons to illustrate your opinion.范文:Which is more important in life,knowledge from the books you read,or personal experience you gain in reality?The answer may vary from person to person. The young,educated may emphasize the former,and the old may stress the later. But in my opinion,they are of t
32、he same importance.Experience is priceless. How to become an efficient secretary?How to prepare for your first child to come into the world?There is so much experience we need in careers,in life and even in academic studies. It helps one deal with the problems with ease and confidence. Especially ac
33、tivities and to accumulate experience of different kinds is more crucial.Experience,however,is limited in terms of time and space. For one thing,it is impossible for anyone to experience all the important events and meet all the famous people. For another,as the speed with which skills are obsolete
34、and new problems crop up is unprecedented because of the fast development of society,experience is far less adequate. Depending too much on it only leads to narrow-mindedness and prejudice.One way to compensate for it is to read books. Books of various kinds can bring us almost unlimited additional
35、experience. From books you can not only trace back to the wisdom of our antecedents,but keep up with the latest developments of science and technology. To be sure,its secondhand experience. But it is the ideal supplement to our own limited experience. Few of us can travel around the world,or live lo
36、ng beyond one hundred years,but all of us can live many lives by reading books.Both book knowledge and personal experience are essential. While experience makes one more resourceful,book knowledge makes one more learned.范文:出國學習 Going abroad for studiesDirections:You are allowed 40 minutes to write a
37、n essay no less than 150 words on the following topic.1.Going abroad for studies costs a large sum of money.2. But even so it attracts many young people.3.Do you like to join them if you have an opportunity?why?Give your reasons.范文:Going abroad for StudiesThe other day I announced that I would go ab
38、road for further studies right after my college education. My decision evoked the immediate objection of my family:Why?Why should I borrow a huge sum of money for overseas studies while I might receive the same education at home at relatively low cost? My answer is:in addition to knowledge,I can gai
39、n experience that those who stay at home will never have.First,experience is the opportunity for the real-life use of foreign languages. While a person can study a foreign language at home,the effect can never be compared with constant use of the language in academic and everyday life. There is no b
40、etter opportunity to improve second-language skills than living in the country in which it is spoken. Living in English-speaking countries such as America and Australia for several years,for example,my English will be as perfect as native speakers.Second,living and studying abroad offers me a differ
41、ent perspective of the world. On a university campus,foreign students are likely to encounter their counterparts from different countries and areas and are exposed to different ideas and values. This helps me to have a meaningful understanding of different societies and inevitably sees my own countr
42、y in a new light.Third,overseas experience,frustrating and painful as it may be,is helpful. A person going abroad for study often experiences much more difficultydifficulty in adapting to a new culture and in dealing with all problems alone. Yet,the difficulty,coupled with the frustration brought on
43、 by culture shock,is a rewarding experience for ones future life and development of personality.Although going abroad is expensive and perhaps painful,the payoff is worthwhile. For the benefit is not merely knowledge gained,but the experience desirable in ones personal life.范文:論習慣 On Habits1習慣是養(yǎng)成的;2
44、好習慣是福氣;3壞習慣必須克服。寫作導航習慣不論好壞都是后天形成的,一旦形成,就很難改變;好習慣是祝福,許多成功人士都承認守時、早起、誠實和毅力等是早期形成的;壞習慣如粗魯、懶惰、說謊、偷盜和誹謗等惡習是我們應努力避免的。范文Habits,whether good or bad,are generally acquired. When a person does a certain thing once and again,he is impelled by some unseen force to do the same thing repeatedly;thus a habit is fo
45、rmed. Once a habit is formed,it is difficult,and sometimes impossible,to shake it off. It is therefore very important that we should take great care in the formation of habits. Some bad habits formed in childhood may remain lifetime. Older persons also form bad habits,and in some cases they are ruin
46、ed by these bad habits.There are good habits which,when formed in early life,are great blessings. Many successful people declare that they owe much of their success and prosperity to the formation of such good habits as punctuality,honesty,and perseverance in early life.Such habits as rudeness,lazin
47、ess,stealing and slandering are bad habits. If we want to be useful to society,we ought to keep away from ail these vices,and strive to acquire those habits that are proven to be good for ourselves and others.范文:“建設和諧社會”倡議書假設你是李明,是“某某一中”的學生。請你圍繞“建設和諧社會的主題,根據(jù)下面所給出的要點提示,用英語給全省中學生寫一封倡議書。要點提示:1人與社會:祖國、家
48、鄉(xiāng)、學校,熱愛關心2人與人:家人、師長、同學,誠信互助3人與自然:能源、環(huán)境、動植物,愛惜保護4你的態(tài)度:(內容由考生自己擬定)Dear fellow students,Our government is aiming to build a “harmonious society”. I think it is every citizen's duty to work hard to achieve this goal.As high school students,what should we do?First of all,we should love our motherland
49、. Let's take a great interest in the development of our hometowns and take an active part in our school and activities.Secondly,let's fill the world with love. We should show our respect for old people,our parents and our teachers. We should also care for each other and help those in need. M
50、ore importantly,all of us must be faithful and honest in our daily life.Finally,let's work together to save energy and protect our natural environment,including animals,trees,flowers and grass.As for myself,I will study even harder and try my best to do all the above.Dear fellow students,let'
51、;s start fight now and spare no effort/efforts to do a little bit every day,every hour,and every minute!Li Ming范文:用英語記日記 On Keeping a Diary in English提綱:1、用英語記日記的好處2、所涉及到的困難3、我的建議On Keeping a Diary in EnglishKeeping a diary in English is one of the effective ways to improve our English writing abili
52、ty. Compared with other forms of writing,it is shorter and takes less time. It can help us to cultivate the habit of thinking in English. If we persist in his practice,gradually we'll learn how to express ourselves in English.In keeping a diary in English,we inevitably run up against a lot of di
53、fficulties. In the first place,it often happens that we have trouble finding appropriate words and phrases to give expression to our mind. Secondly,there are many idiomatic ways of saying things in Chinese. And it is extremely hard for us to put them into English properly. Certainly,there are some o
54、ther roadblocks we may come across in our keeping a diary in English.As far as I'm concerned,my suggestion is that we should always have a note book and a Chinese-English dictionary within easy reach. Whenever something beats us,we can first put it down in our notebook and then consult our dicti
55、onary. We can also turn to our English teacher for help,if necessary. In short,it is of great use to keep a diary in English for the development of our writing skills.范文:有獎競猜 Are Prizes a Good Thing?Directions:In this part,you are to write an essay of about 200 words within 40 minutes. Your essay sh
56、ould be based on the OUTLINE below.提綱:1. 有獎競猜的好處2. 有獎競猜引起的問題3. 我的看法Are Prizes a Good Thing?There is no denying the fact that competitions with prizes can bring people's initiative into full play. Encouraged by a strong desire to win a prize,one will go all out to seek his greatest success. In ad
57、dition,he will make special efforts and resort to effective measures to achieve his purpose. Consequently,the best results will be obtained in game with awards.Everything,however,has two sides. The prompting of a prize does not always lead to desirable results. There are always people who would stop
58、 at nothing to get what they are greedy for. For example,a competitor who cannot overcome the temptation of prize is likely to take a stimulant. And the hopeless competitor sees nothing but the prize,which might cause improper behavior. Let's have another example In my opinion,the remedy lies in moral education of competitors,This will help
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