高考英語寫作技巧

1、I. To know the standards of a good writing.II. To improve writing skills.III. To polish a possible version.IV. To write an article(浙江卷浙江卷2012) 1. 書寫書寫美美3. 詞匯美詞匯美2. 結構美結構美4. 句式美句式美5. 銜接美銜接美 五五 美美 技技 巧巧1. 使用較高級的詞匯使用較高級的詞匯3. 使用恰當?shù)倪B接詞使用恰當?shù)倪B接詞詞匯反映你知識貯存量的詞匯反映你知識貯存量的多少，也是衡量英語水平多少，也是衡量英語水平的一個重要標志。的一個重要標志。運用

2、得當?shù)木渥咏Y構可以運用得當?shù)木渥咏Y構可以給文章增色不少，從而使給文章增色不少，從而使整篇文章因此而生輝整篇文章因此而生輝 。使用恰當連接詞，對寫一使用恰當連接詞，對寫一篇有篇有“英語味英語味”的文章很的文章很重要，能使文章上下銜接重要，能使文章上下銜接自然、緊湊。自然、緊湊。2. 使用較豐富的句式使用較豐富的句式Pairwork你校正在進行你校正在進行”英語讀書周英語讀書周”活動，該活活動，該活動動要求學生摘錄名言佳句（要求學生摘錄名言佳句（quote）并相互）并相互交流。以下是某同學摘錄的句子：交流。以下是某同學摘錄的句子：”Yourfuture depends on many things

3、 but mostly on you”：請按下列要求用英語寫：請按下列要求用英語寫一篇一篇100-120個詞的短文：個詞的短文：針對摘錄句中的觀點談談你的看法；針對摘錄句中的觀點談談你的看法；舉例說明理由舉例說明理由Writing -Writing -（2012 2012 浙江高考）浙江高考）注意：短文的開頭已給出（不計詞數(shù)）注意：短文的開頭已給出（不計詞數(shù)） In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this: “Your future depend

4、s on many things but mostly on you. “_1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.2.We all think he is a great man.3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.4.The students there neednt pay for their books. 5. As a result the plan was a failure.The plan turned out to be a failure.Thanks t

5、o the good weather, our journey was comfortable.一、怎樣使用較高級的詞匯一、怎樣使用較高級的詞匯We all think highly of him .A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck me.Books are free for the students there.6. When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow.7. She went to Austria in order to study mus

6、ic. 8. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.9.In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms.10.You can find my house easily. She went to Austria for the purpose of studying music.At the news of his death, she went pale with sorrow.The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.Our school is ma

7、de up of twentysix classrooms.Youll have no trouble finding my house. PracticePractice1. 1. 改變時態(tài)改變時態(tài)The bell is ringing now. (一般一般)2. 2. 改變語態(tài)改變語態(tài) People suggest that the conference be put off. (一般一般)There goes the bell. (There goes the bell. (高級高級) )It is suggested that the conference be put off.It

8、is suggested that the conference be put off. (高級高級)3. 3. 使用不定式使用不定式4. 4. 使用過去分詞使用過去分詞He is so kind that he can help me. (一般一般)He is so kind to help me.He is so kind to help me. (高級高級) She walked out of the room and many students followed her. (一般一般)Followed by many students, she .Followed by many st

9、udents, she . (高級高級)Once it is seen, it can never be forgotten . (一般一般)Once seen, it can .Once seen, it can . (高級高級)5. 5. 使用使用v-ingv-ing形式形式When he arrives please give me an e-mail. (一一般般)If the weather permits, Ill come tomorrow. (一一般般)On his arriving/ arrival, please give.On his arriving/ arrival,

10、 please give. (高級高級)Weather permitting, Ill come tomorrow.Weather permitting, Ill come tomorrow. (高級高級) Now our school has three teachers. They teach 48 pupils. (一般一般) Now our School has three teachers, teaching 48 Now our School has three teachers, teaching 48 pupils.pupils. (高級高級) It disappointed

11、everybody that he didnt turn up. (一般一般)I happened to have met him. (一般一般)6. 6. 使用名詞性從句使用名詞性從句 The fact that he didnt turn up disappointed The fact that he didnt turn up disappointed everybody.everybody. (高級高級)It happened that I had met him.It happened that I had met him. (高級高級) To his surprise, the

12、little girl knows so many things. (一般一般)What surprised him is that the girl.What surprised him is that the girl. (高級高級)7. 7. 使用狀語從句使用狀語從句I wont believe what he says. (一般一般)If you come back before six oclock, you can go out. (一般一般)The meal was very nice. We all enjoyed it very much. (一般一般)No matter w

13、hat he says, I wont believe.No matter what he says, I wont believe. (高級高級)You can go out on condition that you come back before.You can go out on condition that you come back before. (高級高級)The meal was so nice that we all.The meal was so nice that we all. (高級高級)8. 8. 使用定語從句使用定語從句The girl is spoken h

14、ighly of. Her composition was well written. (一般一般)The girl whose composition was well written was The girl whose composition was well written was spoken highly of.spoken highly of. (高級高級)I studied Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer at school. (一般一般)The subjects I studied at sch

15、ool included Chinese, The subjects I studied at school included Chinese, mathsmaths, English., English. (高級高級)9. 9. 使用虛擬語氣使用虛擬語氣The ship didnt sink because there were the efforts of the captain. (一一般般)I wasnt invited to the party, so I didnt attend it. (一般一般)If I had been invited to the party, I wou

16、ld have If I had been invited to the party, I would have attended it.attended it. (高級高級)But for the efforts of the captain, the ship would But for the efforts of the captain, the ship would have sunk.have sunk. (高級高級)10. 10. 使用強調句、倒裝句、感嘆句使用強調句、倒裝句、感嘆句Regular radio broadcasts began in 1920. (一般一般)It

17、was not until 1920 that regular radio.It was not until 1920 that regular radio. (高級高級)Weak as I am, Ill make the effort.Weak as I am, Ill make the effort. (高級高級)Though Im weak, I will make the effort. (一般一般)How glad we were to see the crops and.!How glad we were to see the crops and.! (高級高級) We were

18、 glad to see the crops and vegetables growing very well. (一般一般)11. 11. 使用并列句使用并列句If you go through the gate, youll find the entrance to Bear Country. (一般一般)Go through the gate, and youll find.Go through the gate, and youll find. (高級高級)I got up late this morning, otherwise I could have I got up late

19、this morning, otherwise I could have caught the early bus.caught the early bus. (高級高級)I got up late this morning. I didnt catch the early bus. (一般一般)The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.The more he spoke, the more excited he felt. (高級高級)When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. (一般一般)Pair

20、workA Possible Version to be ImprovedLadies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school.This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978. People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look. The school here

21、was very small. Now it has been rebuilt. The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys . It is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here. They enjoy free education in it. Thank you.Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school ! Ladies and gentlemen, Welc

22、ome to our school! This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 2000 . People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look. This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500

23、people. It used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 2000 and has been developing very fast. People here live a much better life than before . Now it is taking on a new look. In the past, the school here was very small . Now it has been rebuilt. The newly built teaching building has

24、4 storeys . It is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here. They enjoy free education in it. Thank you. In the past, the school here was very small and most children couldnt afford to go to school. But now it has been rebuilt and which has 4 storeys is t

25、he most beautiful one in the village. All the school-age children can study here. Whats more, they enjoy free education. May you enjoy your stay here.the newly built teaching building/ May you have a pleasant time here! Thank you. 你校正在進行你校正在進行”英語讀書周英語讀書周”活動，該活活動，該活動動要求學生摘錄名言佳句（要求學生摘錄名言佳句（quote）并相互）并

26、相互交流。以下是某同學摘錄的句子：交流。以下是某同學摘錄的句子：”Yourfuture depends on many things but mostly on you”：請按下列要求用英語寫：請按下列要求用英語寫一篇一篇100-120個詞的短文：個詞的短文：針對摘錄句中的觀點談談你的看法；針對摘錄句中的觀點談談你的看法；舉例說明理由舉例說明理由Writing -Writing -（2012 2012 浙江高考）浙江高考）注意：短文的開頭已給出（不計詞數(shù)）注意：短文的開頭已給出（不計詞數(shù)） In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates re

27、commended a quote to us, which goes like this: “Your future depends on many things but mostly on you. “_ 完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，覆蓋完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點。所有內(nèi)容要點。 應用了較多的語法結構和詞匯。應用了較多的語法結構和詞匯。 語法結構和詞匯方面有些錯誤，但語法結構和詞匯方面有些錯誤，但 為盡力使用較復雜結構或較高級詞匯為盡力使用較復雜結構或較高級詞匯所致；具備較強的語言運用能力。所致；具備較強的語言運用能力。 有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，有效地使用了語句間的連接

28、成分，使全文結構緊湊。使全文結構緊湊。 書面表達評分最高標準書面表達評分最高標準Thank you for your cooperation！書面表達如何寫？書面表達如何寫？五個步驟1、審題、審題文字信息文字信息圖畫信息圖畫信息題材、人稱、時態(tài)、要點題材、人稱、時態(tài)、要點2、以詞及點：用一兩個單詞或短語寫出每句、以詞及點：用一兩個單詞或短語寫出每句 話的細節(jié)要點。話的細節(jié)要點。3、聯(lián)詞成句：用聯(lián)詞成句的方法將上述要點、聯(lián)詞成句：用聯(lián)詞成句的方法將上述要點 的詞語擴展成句子。的詞語擴展成句子。4 聯(lián)句成文：聯(lián)句成文：注意：注意：主語和謂語主語和謂語背景（適當增加時間、地點條件等）背景（適當增加時

29、間、地點條件等）邏輯關系邏輯關系開頭與結尾開頭與結尾語篇銜接語篇銜接5、檢查修改，規(guī)范抄寫、檢查修改，規(guī)范抄寫I. To know the standards of a good writing.II. To improve writing skills.III. To polish a possible version.IV. To write an article(浙江卷浙江卷2012) 完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，覆蓋完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點。所有內(nèi)容要點。 應用了較多的語法結構和詞匯。應用了較多的語法結構和詞匯。 語法結構和詞匯方面有些錯誤，但語法結構和詞匯方面有些錯誤

30、，但 為盡力使用較復雜結構或較高級詞匯為盡力使用較復雜結構或較高級詞匯所致；具備較強的語言運用能力。所致；具備較強的語言運用能力。 有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊。使全文結構緊湊。 書面表達評分最高標準書面表達評分最高標準2007 2007 浙江省優(yōu)秀高考作文浙江省優(yōu)秀高考作文 語言表達流暢;層次分明;連接不夠;得27分.有少許語言錯誤;得27分2008 2008 浙江省優(yōu)秀高考作文浙江省優(yōu)秀高考作文 2009 2009 浙江省優(yōu)秀高考作文浙江省優(yōu)秀高考作文 1. 書寫書寫美美3. 詞匯美詞匯美2. 結構美結構美4. 句式美句式美5. 銜接美銜接美

31、五五 美美書寫是否工整清晰會影響書寫是否工整清晰會影響答卷得分。卷面不整潔，涂答卷得分。卷面不整潔，涂改多；大小寫改多；大小寫; ;標點符號標點符號; ;書書寫不清，得分會很低！寫不清，得分會很低！給閱卷人以好的第一直觀印象給閱卷人以好的第一直觀印象分段（高考作文?？煞譃槿危┓侄危ǜ呖甲魑某？煞譃槿危?.Heading點題；一兩個句子；概括性；暗示性2. Body 中心記述部分；層次分明3. Ending 小結；呼應主題 技技 巧巧1. 使用較高級的詞匯使用較高級的詞匯3. 使用恰當?shù)倪B接詞使用恰當?shù)倪B接詞詞匯反映你知識貯存量的詞匯反映你知識貯存量的多少，也是衡量英語水平多少，也是衡量英語

32、水平的一個重要標志。的一個重要標志。運用得當?shù)木渥咏Y構可以運用得當?shù)木渥咏Y構可以給文章增色不少，從而使給文章增色不少，從而使整篇文章因此而生輝整篇文章因此而生輝 。使用恰當連接詞，對寫一使用恰當連接詞，對寫一篇有篇有“英語味英語味”的文章很的文章很重要，能使文章上下銜接重要，能使文章上下銜接自然、緊湊。自然、緊湊。2. 使用較豐富的句式使用較豐富的句式1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.2.We all think he is a great man.3.Suddenly I thought out a go

33、od idea.4.The students there neednt pay for their books. 5. As a result the plan was a failure.The plan turned out to be a failure.Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.一、怎樣使用較高級的詞匯一、怎樣使用較高級的詞匯We all think highly of him .A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck me.

34、Books are free for the students there.6. When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow.7. She went to Austria in order to study music. 8. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.9.In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms.10.You can find my house easily. She went to Austria for the

35、 purpose of studying music.At the news of his death, she went pale with sorrow.The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.Our school is made up of twentysix classrooms.Youll have no trouble finding my house. PracticePractice1. 1. 改變時態(tài)改變時態(tài)The bell is ringing now. (一般一般)2. 2. 改變語態(tài)改變語態(tài) People suggest

36、that the conference be put off. (一般一般)There goes the bell. (There goes the bell. (高級高級) )It is suggested that the conference be put off.It is suggested that the conference be put off. (高級高級)3. 3. 使用不定式使用不定式4. 4. 使用過去分詞使用過去分詞He is so kind that he can help me. (一般一般)He is so kind to help me.He is so k

37、ind to help me. (高級高級) She walked out of the room and many students followed her. (一般一般)Followed by many students, she .Followed by many students, she . (高級高級)Once it is seen, it can never be forgotten . (一般一般)Once seen, it can .Once seen, it can . (高級高級)5. 5. 使用使用v-ingv-ing形式形式When he arrives pleas

38、e give me an e-mail. (一一般般)If the weather permits, Ill come tomorrow. (一一般般)On his arriving/ arrival, please give.On his arriving/ arrival, please give. (高級高級)Weather permitting, Ill come tomorrow.Weather permitting, Ill come tomorrow. (高級高級) Now our school has three teachers. They teach 48 pupils.

39、(一般一般) Now our School has three teachers, teaching 48 Now our School has three teachers, teaching 48 pupils.pupils. (高級高級) It disappointed everybody that he didnt turn up. (一般一般)I happened to have met him. (一般一般)6. 6. 使用名詞性從句使用名詞性從句 The fact that he didnt turn up disappointed The fact that he didnt

40、turn up disappointed everybody.everybody. (高級高級)It happened that I had met him.It happened that I had met him. (高級高級) To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. (一般一般)What surprised him is that the girl.What surprised him is that the girl. (高級高級)7. 7. 使用狀語從句使用狀語從句I wont believe what he s

41、ays. (一般一般)If you come back before six oclock, you can go out. (一般一般)The meal was very nice. We all enjoyed it very much. (一般一般)No matter what he says, I wont believe.No matter what he says, I wont believe. (高級高級)You can go out on condition that you come back before.You can go out on condition that

42、you come back before. (高級高級)The meal was so nice that we all.The meal was so nice that we all. (高級高級)8. 8. 使用定語從句使用定語從句The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. (一般一般)The girl whose composition was well written was The girl whose composition was well written was spoken highly o

43、f.spoken highly of. (高級高級)I studied Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer at school. (一般一般)The subjects I studied at school included Chinese, The subjects I studied at school included Chinese, mathsmaths, English., English. (高級高級)9. 9. 使用虛擬語氣使用虛擬語氣The ship didnt sink because there

44、 were the efforts of the captain. (一一般般)I wasnt invited to the party, so I didnt attend it. (一般一般)If I had been invited to the party, I would have If I had been invited to the party, I would have attended it.attended it. (高級高級)But for the efforts of the captain, the ship would But for the efforts of

45、 the captain, the ship would have sunk.have sunk. (高級高級)10. 10. 使用強調句、倒裝句、感嘆句使用強調句、倒裝句、感嘆句Regular radio broadcasts began in 1920. (一般一般)It was not until 1920 that regular radio.It was not until 1920 that regular radio. (高級高級)Weak as I am, Ill make the effort.Weak as I am, Ill make the effort. (高級高級)

46、Though Im weak, I will make the effort. (一般一般)How glad we were to see the crops and.!How glad we were to see the crops and.! (高級高級) We were glad to see the crops and vegetables growing very well. (一般一般)11. 11. 使用并列句使用并列句If you go through the gate, youll find the entrance to Bear Country. (一般一般)Go th

47、rough the gate, and youll find.Go through the gate, and youll find. (高級高級)I got up late this morning, otherwise I could have I got up late this morning, otherwise I could have caught the early bus.caught the early bus. (高級高級)I got up late this morning. I didnt catch the early bus. (一般一般)The more he

48、spoke, the more excited he felt.The more he spoke, the more excited he felt. (高級高級)When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. (一般一般)To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名詞性從句）（使用名詞性從句）What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.(That the littler girl knows

49、so many things surprises him.It surprises him that the littler girl knows so many things .)（2）He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用強調句型 .It was .not until) It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.Not until he h

50、ad read the news in the newspaper did he know what had happened. （3）She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (用過去分詞)Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.（4）They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式)Singing and laughing, they went back to school.（5

51、）I wont believe what he says. （使用狀語從句No matter what he says, I wont believe.（6）He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒裝句使用倒裝句)No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.Pairwork 聯(lián)合國教科文組織某考察團正在我國某鄉(xiāng)村參觀考聯(lián)合國教科文組織某考察團正在我國某鄉(xiāng)村參觀考察。假定你是接待人員察。假定你是接待人員,請根據(jù)下列提

52、示以發(fā)言稿的形請根據(jù)下列提示以發(fā)言稿的形式簡要介紹這個村的情況：式簡要介紹這個村的情況： 1)大?。航笮。航?00戶人家，約戶人家，約500口人?？谌?。 2)變化：過去很窮，變化：過去很窮，2000年后變化很大。人們生活年后變化很大。人們生活比以前好多了。現(xiàn)已舊貌換新顏。比以前好多了。現(xiàn)已舊貌換新顏。 3)教育：原來的學校很小，現(xiàn)已經(jīng)過改建。新建的教育：原來的學校很小，現(xiàn)已經(jīng)過改建。新建的教學樓有教學樓有4層，是村里最美的建筑物。村里所有學齡兒層，是村里最美的建筑物。村里所有學齡兒童在此免費就讀。童在此免費就讀。 注意：注意：1）要點齊全，前后連貫。）要點齊全，前后連貫。 2）詞數(shù)：）詞數(shù)：

53、100- -120之間。之間。Practice 書面表達：書面表達：A Possible Version to be ImprovedLadies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school.This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978. People here are richer than before. Now it is taking o

54、n a new look. The school here was very small. Now it has been rebuilt. The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys . It is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here. They enjoy free education in it. Thank you.Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our schoo

55、l ! Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school! This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 2000 . People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look. This village is a small one with/which has near

56、ly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 2000 and has been developing very fast. People here live a much better life than before . Now it is taking on a new look. In the past, the school here was very small . Now it has been rebuilt. The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys . It is the most beautiful building in the villa