2022高三英語(yǔ)作文精品課 含新冠疫情作文課件

1、板塊三 寫作板塊 應(yīng)用文寫作 讀后續(xù)寫/概要寫作 一、滿分寫作不可不知的閱卷老師的秘密12021/8/23閱卷老師的關(guān)注點(diǎn)1閱卷老師首看卷面你必須明白，你的考卷是給閱卷老師看的，讓老師看得舒服、方便、清楚，這是非常重要的。不可書(shū)寫過(guò)小、過(guò)密或過(guò)稀，更不可字跡潦草，亂涂亂改，標(biāo)點(diǎn)不清。在高強(qiáng)度閱卷中沒(méi)有誰(shuí)會(huì)辨認(rèn)書(shū)寫得亂七八糟的內(nèi)容，所以你應(yīng)該呈現(xiàn)一份美觀清晰的答卷。22021/8/232閱卷老師次抓要點(diǎn)閱卷老師對(duì)語(yǔ)言內(nèi)容描述全面與否要求嚴(yán)格，答題時(shí)應(yīng)找準(zhǔn)找全寫作要點(diǎn)。同時(shí)，要注意文章需條理分明，邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)合理。32021/8/233閱卷老師緊盯錯(cuò)誤主謂不一致、動(dòng)詞形式(時(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)態(tài))不對(duì)、詞組搭配不

2、當(dāng)、句子結(jié)構(gòu)錯(cuò)誤、詞序不當(dāng)、關(guān)鍵詞用錯(cuò)等都屬于大錯(cuò)；小錯(cuò)主要是指常用詞的拼寫錯(cuò)誤，介詞、冠詞、標(biāo)點(diǎn)等的錯(cuò)用；3個(gè)小錯(cuò)等于1個(gè)大錯(cuò)。雖然有些錯(cuò)誤被界定為小錯(cuò)誤，但卻影響得分檔次。時(shí)間再緊也要認(rèn)真復(fù)查，盡量減少詞匯和句式錯(cuò)誤。42021/8/234閱卷老師眼中的滿分卷書(shū)寫整潔漂亮；覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容充實(shí)；詞匯豐富，文筆流暢，銜接連貫。同樣的內(nèi)容，卷面整齊至少多給35分；如果寫得整齊美觀而且條理清晰，再多給幾分；如果開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾句式高級(jí)就可以穩(wěn)拿滿分！52021/8/23閱卷老師的評(píng)分要求1按5個(gè)檔次給分。評(píng)分時(shí)，先根據(jù)文章內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言表達(dá)初步確定所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求衡量文章，確定或調(diào)整檔次。2

3、評(píng)分時(shí)注意的主要內(nèi)容：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、詞匯應(yīng)用、語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否準(zhǔn)確、上下文是否連貫以及語(yǔ)言是否得體。3如書(shū)寫較差，影響識(shí)讀，其得分將降低一個(gè)檔次。62021/8/234拼寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是影響分?jǐn)?shù)的一個(gè)方面。英式英語(yǔ)和美式英語(yǔ)拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。5內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)可用不同方式表達(dá)，對(duì)緊扣主題的適當(dāng)發(fā)揮不予扣分。72021/8/23板塊三 寫作板塊 應(yīng)用文寫作 讀后續(xù)寫/概要寫作二、提升作文檔次的技巧讓作文靚起來(lái)82021/8/23(一)要點(diǎn)呈現(xiàn)多樣化，適當(dāng)擴(kuò)充要點(diǎn)1追加成分 在要點(diǎn)基礎(chǔ)上適當(dāng)增加合乎邏輯的附加成分，如定語(yǔ)(從句)、狀語(yǔ)(從句)、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞、獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)等。不僅增加了詞數(shù)，而且使表達(dá)更清晰、準(zhǔn)確

4、，主題更突出。92021/8/23住在中國(guó)十六年，一直學(xué)英語(yǔ)。(2019高考全國(guó)卷)First of all, having lived in China for sixteen years and having learnt English since I was a child, I have a good command of English and Chinese, which is beneficial to introducing Chinese paintings.102021/8/232補(bǔ)加語(yǔ)句 根據(jù)行文走向，適當(dāng)增加一些與主題相關(guān)的語(yǔ)句，或由要點(diǎn)衍生的句子，既能起到前引后聯(lián)的

5、作用，又能補(bǔ)充一些相關(guān)信息，幫助讀者理解所寫內(nèi)容。112021/8/23每一支參賽隊(duì)伍都非常出色，為比賽做好了準(zhǔn)備。(2019高考全國(guó)卷)Every participating team is great and ready for the game. It can be predicted that this is a close match（勢(shì)均力敵的比賽）.122021/8/233添加過(guò)渡 根據(jù)行文或段落需要，在句與句或段與段之間適當(dāng)增加過(guò)渡詞語(yǔ)，甚至過(guò)渡句，可以使文章渾然一體，同時(shí)能充實(shí)文章。first and most important; whats more; in additi

6、on; last but not least132021/8/23 話題：對(duì)西方繪畫藝術(shù)感興趣的原因(2019高考天津卷) Personally，Id want to learn about western painting.Several reasons may account for my preference.For one thing，Im interested to learn how western painting has developed into what it is today through history，and the most influential artist

7、s in each period of its development.Additionally，Im crazy to learn how to appreciate western paintings，and it cant be better if you can tell us some tricks about how to paint.142021/8/23話題：學(xué)生體育運(yùn)動(dòng)情況 (2018高考全國(guó)卷)I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the phy

8、sical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built, which has become the new landmark in our school. As for me, Im intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in m

9、y life.All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.152021/8/234不忘收尾 書(shū)信中“適當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾”也是必需的，它不僅符合書(shū)信習(xí)慣，而且還可增加詞數(shù)。缺失就會(huì)影響文章結(jié)構(gòu)，從而影響得分。書(shū)信常用的結(jié)束語(yǔ)如下：Im looking forward to ./Looking forward to ./Look forward to .Im waiting for your early reply.Best wishes to you.I would be grateful i

10、f you./Id appreciate it if you.162021/8/23(二)詞句表達(dá)靚一靚何為高級(jí)詞匯？眾所周知，詞匯本來(lái)并沒(méi)有“高低貴賤”之分，但某個(gè)詞一旦得到使用，放在了具體語(yǔ)境中，使用得極為得當(dāng)，體現(xiàn)了該詞的美妙價(jià)值，為句子增色，讓文章添彩，它就是高級(jí)詞匯；相反，使用時(shí)體現(xiàn)的價(jià)值平平，沒(méi)有創(chuàng)意，它就是低級(jí)詞匯。巧用4招，以實(shí)現(xiàn)由低級(jí)向高級(jí)的轉(zhuǎn)化。172021/8/231“語(yǔ)”眾不同，避免人云亦云 寫作時(shí)恰當(dāng)?shù)皿w地使用別人可能想不到的詞匯來(lái)表達(dá)，會(huì)給閱卷老師耳目一新的感覺(jué)。 I learn English and Chinese well, which is good for

11、 introducing Chinese paintings.I have a good command of English and Chinese, which is beneficial to introducing Chinese paintings.(2019高考全國(guó)卷)182021/8/232更新?lián)Q代，避免重復(fù) 寫作時(shí)應(yīng)盡量避免重復(fù)使用相同的詞語(yǔ)，要用貼切多樣的詞語(yǔ)來(lái)展示自己的水平。用詞不同、表達(dá)方式迥異，也是高級(jí)用法。192021/8/23 The team will hold many activities, some of which will appeal to you,

12、including many matches. The team will hold a range of activities, some of which will appeal to you, including many matches. (2017高考全國(guó)卷)202021/8/233單詞與短語(yǔ)巧妙互用 一般情況下短語(yǔ)優(yōu)先，應(yīng)多使用詞組、習(xí)語(yǔ)來(lái)代替一些單詞，以增加文采。但有時(shí)單詞比短語(yǔ)更生動(dòng)，亦可“一詞傳神”。212021/8/23 However, we should still prepare for the match, and try to be the winner.Howe

13、ver, we should still make preparations for the match, and take pains to be the winner.(2019高考全國(guó)卷)短語(yǔ)高于單詞，盡量用短語(yǔ)替代動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)高于單詞，盡量用短語(yǔ)替代動(dòng)詞222021/8/23注意 高級(jí)詞匯的使用一定要遵循“準(zhǔn)確、恰當(dāng)”的原則，一定要注意詞匯使用是否合適，并不一定難詞就是高級(jí)詞匯，例如：一大早我們買了一些圣誕禮物。Early in the morning we purchased some Christmas presents. (purchased太過(guò)于書(shū)面化，改為bought更地道)23

14、2021/8/23 (三)句式要“高”，句子要“鮮”一、利用復(fù)合句式，提升文章檔次(一)增加亮點(diǎn)的定語(yǔ)從句1定語(yǔ)從句的應(yīng)用可以非常有效地提升表達(dá)檔次，在寫作中如果我們可以把兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句合并為一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句，就是從低級(jí)到高級(jí)的表達(dá)。242021/8/23 Firstly, the festival will start at 9：00 am.on August 15th，and it will last 3 hours.Firstly, the festival will start at 9：00 am.on August 15th, which will last 3 hours.(2019高考

15、全國(guó)卷)252021/8/232定語(yǔ)從句有多種形式，引導(dǎo)詞也有若干，但最常用、最能增加亮點(diǎn)的是as和which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句以及“介詞which”引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句。262021/8/23(1)在表達(dá)“正如”這一含義時(shí)，我們常用as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。常見(jiàn)的句式有：As we all know./As is known to all.As he pointed out.As we can see from.As the famous saying goes. As we all know, friendship always comes first.(2019高高考全國(guó)卷考全國(guó)卷)27

16、2021/8/23(2)which引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句時(shí)，可以指代某個(gè)詞，也可以指代整個(gè)主句。 Further, it is necessary for you to take a good rest, which will provide enough energy for you.(2019高考全國(guó)卷)282021/8/23(3)“介詞which” 引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句。 It makes no difference from ordinary voting events, in which candidates go around to seek supports.292021/8/23 (二)吸引眼

17、球的狀語(yǔ)從句 在英語(yǔ)寫作中，狀語(yǔ)從句是經(jīng)常被用到的，它的靈活運(yùn)用能使作文更具吸引力。 When it comes to the season I like best, spring will always occur to me in no time. We can set out early so that we will have more time to read and select books.302021/8/23(三)提升檔次的名詞性從句1名詞性從句包括主語(yǔ)從句、賓語(yǔ)從句、表語(yǔ)從句和同位語(yǔ)從句。尤其what, that所引導(dǎo)的名詞性從句是寫作中常見(jiàn)的高級(jí)表達(dá)方式。312021/8

18、/23 I have good news to tell you that an outstanding movie will be shown in our campus. (同位語(yǔ)從句)(2018高考全國(guó)卷 ) Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do what we want to do.(賓語(yǔ)從句) What we need most are popular science books. (主語(yǔ)從句) Today is what we can hold and make use of.(表語(yǔ)從句)322021/8/232在寫作

19、中我們?nèi)绻軌虬褍蓚€(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句合并為一個(gè)含有名詞性從句的復(fù)合句，或者把一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句擴(kuò)展成為含有名詞性從句的復(fù)合句，對(duì)寫作都是一種質(zhì)的升華。 He said a lot at the meeting. His words were very attractive.What he said at the meeting was very attractive. One mans meat is another mans poison.What is one mans meat is another mans poison.332021/8/23二、常用8大句式，考場(chǎng)駕輕就熟1強(qiáng)調(diào)句型強(qiáng)調(diào)句型的使用是為了

20、強(qiáng)調(diào)句子的某一成分，其構(gòu)成為：強(qiáng)調(diào)句型的使用是為了強(qiáng)調(diào)句子的某一成分，其構(gòu)成為：It is/was被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分that/who其他其他。在寫作中，我們可以通過(guò)強(qiáng)調(diào)句型將句子提高到一個(gè)新在寫作中，我們可以通過(guò)強(qiáng)調(diào)句型將句子提高到一個(gè)新的層次。的層次。342021/8/23 It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.注意被強(qiáng)調(diào)的是時(shí)間或地點(diǎn)狀語(yǔ)時(shí)，不要用when或where，而應(yīng)用that。It was in the park that (不用where) I came ac

21、ross my previous English teacher.352021/8/232倒裝句 在寫作中倒裝句應(yīng)用比較廣泛，涉及的句型也比較多，包括部分倒裝和全部倒裝。常見(jiàn)的有：(1)“only狀語(yǔ)(從句)”置于句首時(shí)，句子用部分倒裝。 Only in this way can we students study happily and effectively.362021/8/23(2)由none, neither, nor, not, never, hardly, little, seldom等否定詞，以及no構(gòu)成的否定短語(yǔ)如at no time, by no means等置于句首時(shí)，句

22、子用部分倒裝。 Not only does it affect our daily life, but it also puts peoples lives at risk.372021/8/23(3)在so/such . that .結(jié)構(gòu)中，當(dāng)so/such .位于句首時(shí)，其后的句子用部分倒裝。 So excited was I that I couldnt wait to try my hand at riding it.382021/8/23(4)由here, there, now, then, out, in, up, down, on the wall, in the room等表示

23、地點(diǎn)、時(shí)間或方位的副詞或介詞短語(yǔ)置于句首，且主語(yǔ)是名詞而不是代詞時(shí)，句子用全部倒裝。 In that picture, around the table with three books on it sit three students.在寫作中，我們可以通過(guò)倒裝讓句子更高級(jí)。392021/8/233省略句 省略句的應(yīng)用可以使句子更簡(jiǎn)潔明快。寫作中主要用到的有狀語(yǔ)從句的省略和不定式to后成分的省略。 If (it is) not, let me know what time suits you best. As (it is) scheduled, it will be held on the

24、 playground from 5 pm.to 8 pm.next Sunday.(2019高考全國(guó)卷)402021/8/234虛擬語(yǔ)氣 寫作中虛擬語(yǔ)氣的使用可以使表達(dá)更委婉，更具可讀性。寫作中常見(jiàn)的有以下幾種：(1)wish型虛擬語(yǔ)氣 Besides, I wish there wouldnt be too many students in a class.(2)if only型虛擬語(yǔ)氣 If only I could go back and reset my goals.412021/8/23 (3)Its (high/about) time (that) .型虛擬語(yǔ)氣 It is hi

25、gh time that both children and parents took/should take action to make small changes.422021/8/235非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞 寫作中非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的應(yīng)用標(biāo)志著寫作水平上升了一個(gè)檔次，寫作中常用到的是非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞作狀語(yǔ)和定語(yǔ)。432021/8/23(1)非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞作狀語(yǔ) To get some working experience, I plan to find a parttime job in a foreign capital company. So Im writing you a letter, hoping t

26、o get your guide and suggestions. Faced with difficulties, we need friends to give us comfort and help.442021/8/23 (2)非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞作定語(yǔ) It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.452021/8/236with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu) with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)可以使文章簡(jiǎn)潔緊湊，一篇文章如果能恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂靡粌蓚€(gè)with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，可以使文章增色不少。 Moreover,

27、 with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held.(2018高考全國(guó)卷) With English words getting popular in both media and daily life, a Chinese dictionary has included 239 of them.462021/8/237并列句型 并列句型是用連詞把兩個(gè)或兩個(gè)以上的簡(jiǎn)單句連接起來(lái)，在這一句型中要注意連接并列主語(yǔ)時(shí)，有些句型采取“就近原則”。寫作中常用到的有以下幾種：472021/8/23(1)wh

28、ile表示對(duì)比關(guān)系，意為“然而，可是” It is beneficial to some people, while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not.(2)not only.but (also).“不僅而且” It is believed that the movie will be not only meaningful but also interesting. (2018高考全國(guó)卷)482021/8/23(3)not.but.“不是，而是” To be honest, voters sometimes f

29、eel annoyed, not because they hate voting, but because they are divided between emotion and fairness.492021/8/238it句型 it的應(yīng)用可以使句子更平衡，更符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣。常見(jiàn)的有以下幾種：(1)it作形式主語(yǔ) Everyone in our society should help those in need, but it is more important to be sincere and earnest（認(rèn)真、熱心）.502021/8/23(2)it作形式賓語(yǔ) And you a

30、lso should keep it in mind that comparing notes with your classmates frequently is a good way to improve your study.(3)it在某些固定句式中的應(yīng)用 I would appreciate it if you could agree to my request.(2019高考全國(guó)卷)512021/8/23(四)銜接要“巧”，過(guò)渡要“妙”創(chuàng)造良好開(kāi)端常用開(kāi)頭詞匯 表示“啟”的詞匯常用在段落或文章的開(kāi)頭，用于開(kāi)篇引出擴(kuò)展句。常見(jiàn)的詞匯有：first/firstly, first of

31、all, at first, in the first place, above all, to begin/start with, today, now, nowadays, at present, currently, recently, generally speaking, according to等。522021/8/23First of all, we must make full use of every 45minute lesson.Nowadays/Recently, people in many big cities are complaining about the h

32、eavy traffic.In the first place, she can read at the rate of 100 words a minute.To begin/start with, smoking should be banned in public areas.532021/8/23As the proverb says/As the saying goes, “Time is money.”With the development of the Internet, computers play an important role in peoples life.It g

33、oes without saying that it pays to keep early hours.There is no denying that successful business lies in a healthy body and mind.It is believed that health is above wealth.常用開(kāi)頭句式常用開(kāi)頭句式542021/8/23滿分作文選粹First and foremost, the competition to be held in our school stadium will begin at 2 pm.and last fo

34、r roughly 3 hours.(2019高考全國(guó)卷高考全國(guó)卷)I d like to ask you to write an article for our school s English newspaper.First of all, I d like to know when the class will start and how many students there will be in a class.As is known to all, shoes play an important role in our life, for it can protect our fe

35、et from being hurt.552021/8/23順勢(shì)承上啟下常用順承詞匯 表示“承”的詞匯常用于承接主題句或第一個(gè)擴(kuò)展句。常見(jiàn)的詞匯有：second/secondly, also, besides, in addition, soon afterwards, after that, whats more, furthermore, moreover, whats worse, still less, to make matters worse, worse still, for example, in other words, especially, particularly, o

36、bviously, meanwhile, at the same time等。562021/8/23Besides, developing a good habit of learning can help you improve your learning effectively.Whats more, good books can help us to develop good characters.In addition, we shouldnt neglect that everyone wants a friendly and peaceful society. Meanwhile/

37、At the same time, I will regard it as my duty to keep our environment clean and healthy.572021/8/23What is more serious is that we dont cherish wildlife.As far as I am concerned, they stand for love, friendship and unity.常用順承句式常用順承句式582021/8/23To begin with, according to our tradition, you are suppo

38、sed to arrive early, so that you can help the family prepare the dinner, which is not only meaningful but also interesting. Besides, youd better bring some gifts, such as a special food or drink from your country. Whats more, when you are enjoying the meal, you need to avoid making noises while chew

39、ing food.(2018高考全國(guó)卷)滿分作文選粹滿分作文選粹592021/8/23 Worse still, I dont even know much about the word and format（格式） of the enclosure（附件）. In addition, sitting on the grass and enjoying the tasty food and drinks provided by sponsors, we will be fully absorbed in the attractive and fascinating performances.(

40、2019高考全國(guó)卷)602021/8/23巧妙轉(zhuǎn)折過(guò)渡常用轉(zhuǎn)折詞匯 表示“轉(zhuǎn)”的詞匯常用來(lái)表示不同或相反的意見(jiàn)或情況。常見(jiàn)的詞匯有：but, yet, however, while, otherwise, or (else), on the contrary, on the other hand, contrary to, in any case, though, although, as, even if/though, despite, in spite of, regardless of等。612021/8/23Finally, the horse calmed down, but we

41、 seemed to get lost, unable to go back to the mountain road. (2018高考浙江卷)On the other hand, online shopping also has many disadvantages.On the contrary, the volunteers always claim that they are tired of the life on earth.Contrary to what I had originally said, the trip turned out to be fun.622021/8/

42、23Whatever/No matter what you say, he wont believe you.Whether you believe it or not, it is true.常用轉(zhuǎn)折句式常用轉(zhuǎn)折句式632021/8/23滿分作文選粹 However, a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out. Otherwise well have to answer for our selfishness sooner or later.642021/8/23完美結(jié)束全文常用結(jié)尾詞匯 表示“合”的詞匯常用于總結(jié)

43、上文的內(nèi)容，引導(dǎo)最后一個(gè)擴(kuò)展句或引導(dǎo)結(jié)尾句表示段落的結(jié)束。常見(jiàn)的詞匯有：finally, last but not least, in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a/one word, to sum up, all in all, on the whole, in general等。652021/8/23All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.(2018高考全國(guó)卷)In conclusion, a good citizen should

44、 observe traffic regulations.On the whole, I find a bike more enjoyable than a motorcycle.662021/8/23In a word, success is important, and so is failure, because its the mother of success.To sum up, environmental protection is of great importance, which can make us live more comfortably and healthily

45、.672021/8/23Id appreciate it if you could deliver them as soon as possible.It is high time that we did something to prevent the environment from being polluted.We can, therefore, come to the conclusion that nothing is so precious as peace in the world.常用結(jié)尾句式常用結(jié)尾句式682021/8/23To sum up, I wish you cou

46、ld live up to the expectations of our school.(2019高考全國(guó)卷)In a word, I like everything in spring, especially the feelings bathed in the rain and sunshine.In short, Internet voting, to some extent, is unfair, if not immoral, and cannot be trusted.Therefore, I hold a positive attitude towards online vot

47、ing.滿分作文選粹滿分作文選粹692021/8/23Finally, I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life, which must be very interesting.Last but not least, health is also very significant for us students.702021/8/23Homework1.預(yù)習(xí)優(yōu)化探究P67頁(yè)72頁(yè)2.整理筆記，認(rèn)真總結(jié)這節(jié)課所學(xué)知識(shí)3.自己選擇性的寫作一篇應(yīng)用文712021/8/23板塊三 寫作板塊 應(yīng)用文寫作 讀后續(xù)寫/概要寫作三、

48、應(yīng)用文高分寫作攻略讓作文得滿分722021/8/23 (一)普通書(shū)信/電子郵件題型技法 英文電子郵件和普通書(shū)信的寫法和格式大體相同，其開(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾常常都會(huì)給出，正文可根據(jù)題目要求分段把內(nèi)容表達(dá)清楚即可。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)為：732021/8/23增分佳句1吸引閱卷人開(kāi)頭句(1)Thanks for your invitation to the Christmas party.謝謝你邀請(qǐng)我參加圣誕晚會(huì)。(2)How are you getting along with your study?你近來(lái)學(xué)習(xí)進(jìn)展怎樣？(3)I am very glad/delighted/happy to have recei

49、ved the letter you sent me two weeks ago.我非常高興收到你兩周前寄給我的信。742021/8/232吸引閱卷人篇中句(1)Im very glad to tell you something about.我很高興告訴你一些關(guān)于的事情。(2)As far as I know/am concerned/can see.據(jù)我所知752021/8/233吸引閱卷人結(jié)尾句(1)Please write to me soon and tell me about your.請(qǐng)馬上寫信給我，告訴我關(guān)于你的(2)Im looking forward to your rep

50、ly.我盼望著你的回復(fù)。762021/8/23(二)建議信題型技法 建議信是生活中常見(jiàn)的一種文體，是寫信人向收信人對(duì)某事提出的建議或忠告。建議信要寫得簡(jiǎn)明扼要、目的明確，具有合理性和說(shuō)服力。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)為：772021/8/23建議信文章結(jié)構(gòu)六件套1.首段：背景介紹，寫信目的2.主體：具體建議，建議理由3.尾段：總結(jié)語(yǔ)句，期待祝福782021/8/23增分佳句1吸引閱卷人開(kāi)頭句(1)You have asked for my advice about . and I will try to make some useful suggestions here.關(guān)于你向我征求意見(jiàn)，在此，我盡量提出

51、一些有用的建議。(2)Im sorry to know/learn that you are having trouble with/in doing . at the moment.得知此刻你遇到麻煩我深感遺憾。792021/8/23(3) I have received your letter in which+完整句I have received your letter in which/where you mentioned you had trouble adjusting to your high school life,(4) I hope the following sugge

52、stions will be helpful/beneficial to you.802021/8/232吸引閱卷人篇中句(1)I think the most suitable.for you is.我認(rèn)為對(duì)你來(lái)說(shuō)最適合的是(2)I would like to suggest that.我想建議(3)Youd better./Its better to.你最好/最好是812021/8/233吸引閱卷人結(jié)尾句(1)I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously.我相信你會(huì)認(rèn)真考慮我的建議的。(2)I

53、hope you will find these suggestions useful/helpful.我希望這些建議/意見(jiàn)對(duì)你來(lái)說(shuō)有用/幫助。822021/8/23試寫滿分作文 假定你是Lynn。你的朋友李華來(lái)信告訴你他即將上大學(xué)，可是他媽媽擔(dān)心他還不會(huì)獨(dú)立生活，他不知該如何消除媽媽的顧慮。請(qǐng)給李華回一封信，內(nèi)容包括：1多與母親溝通；2證明自己已經(jīng)長(zhǎng)大。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右，信的格式已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。832021/8/23滿分作文第一步：“三定”審題，“一列”謀篇定體裁定體裁定人稱定人稱 為主為主定時(shí)態(tài)定時(shí)態(tài) 為主為主列要點(diǎn)謀篇列要點(diǎn)謀篇 開(kāi)頭：寫信的目

54、的并提出建議；開(kāi)頭：寫信的目的并提出建議；主體：具體建議：主體：具體建議：_；結(jié)尾：表達(dá)愿望。結(jié)尾：表達(dá)愿望。 建議信建議信第二人稱第二人稱一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí) 多與母親溝通，證明自己已經(jīng)多與母親溝通，證明自己已經(jīng) 長(zhǎng)大，共擔(dān)家務(wù)長(zhǎng)大，共擔(dān)家務(wù) 842021/8/23滿分作文第二步：斟酌詞句，設(shè)計(jì)亮點(diǎn)1_ to worry about your newlife in college.(it作形式主語(yǔ))你媽媽擔(dān)心你在大學(xué)的新生活是正常的。2Second, you should learn to take care of yourself, _.(現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作伴隨狀語(yǔ))其

55、次，你應(yīng)該學(xué)會(huì)照顧自己，向你媽媽證明你已經(jīng)長(zhǎng)大了。It s normal for your mom proving to your mom that you are already grownup 852021/8/23862021/8/23參考范文Dear Li Hua， Im sorry to learn about your problem. Its normal for your mom to worry about your new life in college. Here are some suggestions.872021/8/23 First, why not talk m

56、ore with your mom? Hearttoheart talks help you understand each other better. Second, you should learn to take care of yourself, proving to your mom that you are already grownup. Its even better if you could share the housework, such as cleaning, washing and cooking. I hope youll find my ideas useful

57、.Yours，LynnFirst and most important/ At first.Last but not leastwhats more/ In addition882021/8/23假如你是李華,給留在衡水過(guò)寒假的留學(xué)生朋友Jack寫一封電子郵件, 告知其目前新型冠狀病毒肺炎的形勢(shì), 請(qǐng)他注意防護(hù)。要點(diǎn)如下:1 告知疫情現(xiàn)狀;2注意防護(hù)，如減少外出，帶口罩外出，勤洗手等。3表達(dá)戰(zhàn)勝疫情的信心。892021/8/23Dear Jack,Knowing that you stay in Hengshui for the winter vocation, I am writing to

58、 inform you of the outbreak of the COVID19. First discovered in Wuhan, the virus, which has been confirmed to be transmitted from people to people, has already infected more than 1.4million people worldwide.902021/8/23So minimize ourdoor activities as the government has required. Avoid crowed places

59、, parties and group activites. Correctly wear a mask if you have to go out. Please increase prevention and selfprotection. Keep good hygiene by washing your hands often. Avoid close contact with anyone with cold or flulike symptoms. 912021/8/23We chinese are fully confident that the COVID19 can be c

60、ontrolled and finally rooted out with the joint efforts of the government and her people together with support from home and abroad. Please stay in a relaxed mood and protect yourself.Wish you a healthy and safe new year. Yours Li Hua 922021/8/23(四)邀請(qǐng)信題型技法 邀請(qǐng)信是寫信人對(duì)收信人的一種盛情邀約，一般分為正式和非正式兩種，格式與其他信函相同。具