2017上海初三二模英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作匯編

1、1,楊浦VII.Writing（作文）（共20分）94.In60to120words,writeaboutthetopicthingswecandomakeourcityabetterplace”.（以“我們可以做些什么讓我們的城市更美好”為題，寫(xiě)一篇60-120個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生真實(shí)的姓名、校名及其他信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）Thefollowingisforreferenceonly（下列單詞僅供參考）communitysocietyvolunteerlawnilesCTivironment2,奉賢VU,Writing（作文）（共20分）94.Writing

2、atleast60wordsonthetopic"makemeabetter_力person（以“成就更好的自己”為題，寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分）3,黃浦W.Writing（作文）（共20分）94.In60to120words,writeaboutthetopic"is勉ood-hObit習(xí)慣”'為題,寫(xiě)一篇60-120個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）一個(gè)好的習(xí)慣會(huì)讓我們終身受益。什么是好習(xí)慣？請(qǐng)分享你的一個(gè)好習(xí)慣，說(shuō)說(shuō)你是怎么養(yǎng)成的？它給你帶來(lái)哪些好處。請(qǐng)結(jié)合生活實(shí)際，談?wù)勀愕捏w驗(yàn)或想

3、法。（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生真實(shí)的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）SavingMoneyIsaGoodHabitSpeakingofgoodhabits,savingmoneyisundoubtedlyoneofthem.Insteadofspendingtomorrow'smoney,Iprefertosavemoney.Inordertolearntocutdownunnecessarycost,Iwillthinktwicebeforespendingmoneyonthoseclothesthatmaynotsuitmyself,whichbenefitsmealot

4、.Firstofall,thesenseofsavingmoneyhelpsmearrangemydailylifeproperly.What'smore,savingmoney,toacertainextent,meansIcanhandleemergencyquickly.Inaddition,savingmoneyisnotonlyatraditionalvirtuebutausefulstrategyinlife.Justastheoldsaying,apennysavedisapennyearned,sosavingmoneymakesmefeelsafeabouttomor

5、row.4.崇明VII.Writing（作文）（共20分）94. Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic1amanindependentboy（girl）（以我是個(gè)獨(dú)立的男（女）生”為題，寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）現(xiàn)實(shí)生活中有些學(xué)生過(guò)分依賴(lài)父母和他人，不會(huì)做任何家務(wù)，不會(huì)照顧自己的生活，學(xué)習(xí)上缺乏自信，不能獨(dú)立做事或作出決定。請(qǐng)舉例證明你在學(xué)習(xí)和生活中是個(gè)獨(dú)立的男（女）生。Giveexamplestoprovethatyouareindependentinseveralways.（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)、.校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不與評(píng)分。）Thefollo

6、wingphrasesareforreferenceonly.（以下短語(yǔ)僅供參考）dohouseworktakecareofoneselfmakeadecisionononesown'5.靜安VII.Writing.（作文）94.Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic,anewwayoflife!"（請(qǐng)以"，種嶄新的生活方式”為題，從以下圖片中選擇其中一張圖片，舉例表述你的思考和理由，寫(xiě)一篇不少于60字的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）WeixinMobikePointsforreference:1 .Whichwaydoyouchoosetowri

7、teabout?2 .Whydoyouthinkitanewwayoflife?3 .Couldyougivesomesuggestionsinordertomakebetteruseofit?6 .品定VII.Writing（作文）（共20分）94.writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“IlikereadingEnglish（以我W歡閱讀”英語(yǔ):'為題，寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）英語(yǔ)課外讀物是我們學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的好幫手（helper）。我們經(jīng)常閱讀各種英語(yǔ)讀物，如英文報(bào)刊，雜志，小說(shuō)和故事等。請(qǐng)介紹你最喜歡的一種英文讀物，并談?wù)勀阍谟⒄Z(yǔ)課外閱讀

8、中的收獲和感受。（注意：1.在答題紙上將題目補(bǔ)充完整。2.短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生真實(shí)的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）Thefollowingisforreferenceonly.（以下內(nèi)容僅供參考）Beinterestedinreadvariousbooksdogoodtolearnfrom7.寶山VII.Writing（作文）ShanghaiStudents'postisaskingforthecommentson“NewCenturyEnglish"textbook.Writepassageofatleast60wordsforShanghaiStudents上海

9、學(xué)Ps城報(bào)社向中學(xué)生征集對(duì)先行中學(xué)英語(yǔ)教材新世紀(jì)英語(yǔ)的評(píng)價(jià)和建議，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給報(bào)紙寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的小短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）評(píng)價(jià)Comments1. Manyinterestingpicturetogowiththetexts2. Thepassagesareuptodate,relatedtooureverydaylife,theycanleadustotakeanactivepartinclass3. Practicesourlistenting,speaking,readingandwritingskillsinanall-roundway（全方位）建議和要求Suggestio

10、nsI.There'bemoreinterestingtopics2.MorepassageaboutEnglishandAmericancultures3.SomeEnglishsongsonthetapegoingwiththetextbook8.閔行VU.Writing（作文）（20分）94.WritealettertoyourAmericanpen-palTonyinatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation（根據(jù)所給情景給你的美國(guó)筆友Tony寫(xiě)一封不少于60詞的回答。要求內(nèi)容適切，意思連貫，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。信的開(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾和署名已給，不

11、計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。）假設(shè)你是小明（XiaoMing）,是美國(guó)中學(xué)生Tony的筆友，你收到了他的來(lái)信。請(qǐng)給Tony寫(xiě)一封回信，回答他的問(wèn)題，介紹上海良好的公共交通服務(wù)。（注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）KimMuighHlgdJII*HlrtkinthItuxc3L'tjb4M.ilJrJIMClH.llikefeo-m«wiihmyownc9ci.t'mreallyIn加xZinWhenI±rnmYttmpuf.howcanItnitelaruutu)?Cmildyouggnwumf亡力dhouif?KnrkkijigrbnvmJ

12、10Itc4rmgRwmyvummilYours,Tony9.青浦VII.Writing（20）Writeatleast60wordsaccordingthegivensituation（根據(jù)所給情景寫(xiě)一篇不少于60字的作文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）Tom最近很苦惱，他感到和父母存在代溝，雙方對(duì)很多問(wèn)題看法不同，自己的想法得不到他們的理解，請(qǐng)你以他的筆友的名義給他寫(xiě)一封信，談?wù)勀愕目捶ê徒ㄗh。Wordsandexpressionsforreferencegenerationgapold-fashionedcomplainaboutmisunderstandingbetween.exchangeidea

13、srespectone'iisioap（注意文中不得出現(xiàn)姓名校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分）DearTomIamverygladtohearfromyou.Butfromtheletter,Iknowyouareverytroubledrecentlybecauseofthegenerationgapbetweenyouandyourparents.Youmaythinkthatyourparentsareold-fashionedandtheyalsocomplainaboutyourbehaviors.However,inmyview,theremustbesomemisunde

14、rstandingbetweenyouandyourparents.Therefore,itisreallyessentialtoexchangetheideaswiththem,whichenablesbothofyoutounderstandeachotherbetter.Inaddition,ifyouwanttogettherespectfromyourparents,youdbetter'showyourstothemfirst.Thesearemysuggestionsforyou.Ihopetheycandoyouafavor.Ilookforwardtoyourgood

15、news.Writetomesoon.YoursPeter【分析】這是筆友之間的一份回信，書(shū)信格式，屬于應(yīng)用文類(lèi)型。就信得內(nèi)容而言，是寫(xiě)和父母之間存在代溝，貼近中學(xué)生生活，學(xué)生們還是有話可寫(xiě)的。文章最終要落實(shí)到自己的看法和建議，這些建議需要有層次的表述出來(lái)。文章結(jié)構(gòu)可以分為第一段闡述Tom的苦惱，并表明自己的觀點(diǎn)：和父母之間的代溝主要由于誤解和缺乏有效溝通造成。第二部分針對(duì)存在的問(wèn)題給出自己的建議，可以包括：交換想法、對(duì)父母表達(dá)尊重、良好有效的溝通。最后部分表達(dá)希望以上三點(diǎn)建議能夠幫助到Tom,使他的生活得到變化10.松江VII.Writing（作文）94.Writeatleast60word

16、sonthetopic“SomethingIwanttodoformyfamily（以我想為家人做件事”為題寫(xiě)一篇不少于60詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。）（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）Thefollowingquestionsareonlyforreference;1. Whatdoyouwanttodoforyourfamily?2. Whydoyouwanttodoit?3. Howdoyouplantodoit?Noonecandenythefactthatflowerscanrelaxpeoplefromhardworkandmakethemdeli

17、ghted.Thus,Iameagertobuildasmallgardenformyfamily.First,thereasonwhyIwanttoplantflowersisthatmyfamilylikeflowers.Weallenjoythebeautyandthenicesmellofflowers.Second,oneoftheadvantagesofowningagardenisthatwecanenjoyourselvesinitinoursparetime.Now,theonlythingIcandoistobuyflowers,planttheminthegardenan

18、dthenwaterthemtwiceaweek.Tosumup,buildingaflowergardenissomethingIreallywanttodoformyfamily.作文三步走：審題，列提綱，語(yǔ)法，句法的檢查。做到緊扣題意，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，邏輯清晰。本篇作文也是圍繞學(xué)生生活，為家人做的一件事為題，學(xué)生可能比較容易想到做家務(wù)，題材上不太好想。但是給到三個(gè)問(wèn)題的提示，分別是是做什么事，為什么做和怎么做，讓學(xué)生在內(nèi)容上有話說(shuō)，結(jié)構(gòu)上不容易亂，邏輯上也更清晰一些。難度基本和中考相當(dāng)。11.徐匯VIIWriting:（20'）94Writeapassageonthetopic“Apa

19、rtyfor/to"請(qǐng)atieastOwords.派對(duì)，并以“派對(duì)”為題介紹派對(duì)主題，對(duì)象及活動(dòng)內(nèi)容等，寫(xiě)一篇至少60個(gè)字的短文，（標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格子）（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名，校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分）Thefollowingisforreferenceonly.1 organize2 itisto3 inviteto.4 beableto12.長(zhǎng)行VII.Writing（共20分）94.Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Astoryabdut個(gè)關(guān)于白故事為題，寫(xiě)一篇不少于60詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。）（注意：1.在答題上將題目補(bǔ)充完整。2.

20、短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）AstoryaboutmyfatherthelpcryinglslovewillleIndailylife,myfatherisnotonlymyfirstteacherbutalsooneofmydearestfriends.Attheageofseven,Istartedprimaryschoolandfatherpickedmeupfromschooleveryday.Onceonthewayhome,Iwasknockeddownbythebike.ItwassopainfulthatIcouldnandblamingonth

21、ebiker.MyfatherrushedtometocheckifIhadbeenhurtimmediately.Luckily,Iwasfine.Then,heaskedmetostopblamingthepersonwhobumpedintomebecauseitwasalsomyfault-Ididn'passthestreetonthepavement.Afterthebikerapologizedtome,myfatherletmeforgivehimandadmittedthatIhadnedtothbeeytrafficrules.Iwillneverforgetthe

22、sayingwhichmyfathertoldme“Thinkaboutyourselfbeforeblamingonothers.Father'swordsenrichedmylifeanddidalotofgoodtomygrowth.I'msuremyfathertomysuccessandIwilllovehimforever!13.虹口VII.Writing（作文）（20分）94.Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopicMyjoyofliving"（以“我的生活樂(lè)趣”為題，寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）生活

23、有艱辛，也有樂(lè)趣，你的生活樂(lè)趣是什么？你為何覺(jué)得這是你的樂(lè)趣所在？你是怎么想的？怎么做的？Key:II.26-30DACBB31-35ABBCB36-40DCABD41-45DBACAIII.46-49:CDEAIV.munitiespletelyV.62.Didprefer67.hadwritten50-53:EDCB55.fiftieth56.lawyer57.powerful58.Italian60.disadvantage61.active63.Howoften68.Idon'64.wereshown65.couldn'ttheretknowhowtodealwiths

24、thrioussituation.VI.A.69-74:BCAABDB.75-80:DCABCAC.81.salarymovies85.developed82.Rvided87.amazingD.88. Thinkintuitionisveryimportantandcanhelpthemlivebetterlives.89. No,theydon't.90. Icanfindstoriesofpeoplewhousedtheirintuitiontofindloveandsuccess.91. Becauseshefeltshewouldenjoytheworkmorebyher“gutfeeling92. Bygivingpeoplepracticeonhowtousetheirintuitiontohavesuccessinalltheseareas.93. Yes,Ido.Becausemanypeoplesucceededwiththehe