高中英語作文的審題與結構

1、 To Perfect the Structure of Our English WritingBy the end of the lesson, the students will be able to have a better command of the whole structure before writing. attach importance to the topic sentence while writing each part. raise the awareness of making the topic sentence and the supporting sen

2、tences cohere.題型題型Part 1Part 1Part 2Part 2Part 3Part 3現(xiàn)象解釋型現(xiàn)象解釋型描述現(xiàn)象描述現(xiàn)象說明現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的說明現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因原因表明個人觀點態(tài)度或表明個人觀點態(tài)度或闡述個人做法闡述個人做法對比選擇型對比選擇型表明一方表明一方或雙方的或雙方的觀點觀點表明另一方的觀表明另一方的觀點及理由，或指點及理由，或指出雙方觀點的不出雙方觀點的不足之處及理由足之處及理由表明個人觀點態(tài)度或表明個人觀點態(tài)度或闡述個人做法闡述個人做法問題解決型問題解決型提出問題提出問題分析問題，給出分析問題，給出解決方案解決方案表明個人觀點態(tài)度或表明個人觀點態(tài)度或闡述個人做法闡述

3、個人做法觀點論證型觀點論證型提出論點提出論點例證論點例證論點得出結論或表明個人得出結論或表明個人看法與做法看法與做法應用文應用文描述事實描述事實闡述原因闡述原因表明觀點或提出建議表明觀點或提出建議常見的作文結構可以參看下表：常見的作文結構可以參看下表： 1. 落實段落結構落實段落結構Part1：30個詞的材料概括個詞的材料概括Part2：各種分析：各種分析(原因；影響；感受等原因；影響；感受等)Part3：結合個人經(jīng)驗，談具體做法：結合個人經(jīng)驗，談具體做法 全文全文Part1材料概括可以用這種結構：材料概括可以用這種結構：Note:The adverbial can refer to time

4、, reason, condition, purpose or concession(讓步讓步), and the attributive clause introduced by which can be used to present a result.狀語狀語(非非謂語謂語/從從句句)+ 主句主句 +非限制性非限制性定從定從范例范例1： Although most people have a dream, only the minority of them can make it a reality like the little boy, who keeps his dream reg

5、ardless of the negative comments. （省聯(lián)盟大聯(lián)考）范例范例2：In a bid/ gesture to encourage people to take action to protect the environment, a man is driving a truck releasing waste gas, from which the trees along the road suffer a lot.（1.8模）范例范例3：Dissatisfied with the current schooling system, a father in Luzh

6、ou had his daughter quit school and taught her personally for 11 years, which has received both support and opposition. （揚泰通淮宿徐2017屆高三3月聯(lián)考）1.越來越多的學生選擇休學一年獲越來越多的學生選擇休學一年獲取技能和生活經(jīng)驗而不是直接上大學，取技能和生活經(jīng)驗而不是直接上大學，這給了他們在找工作方面的優(yōu)勢這給了他們在找工作方面的優(yōu)勢。 _, an increasing number of students are choosing to take a gap year

7、 to gain skills and life experience, _.Instead of going straight to universitywhich gives them an edge over others in job hunting2.自從超女在自從超女在20042004年一炮走紅以來年一炮走紅以來，各種各樣的，各種各樣的才藝表演才藝表演深受大眾歡迎，深受大眾歡迎，可這也引起了社會廣泛爭議。可這也引起了社會廣泛爭議。 _, various talent shows are well received by the public,_.Since Super Girl b

8、ecame an instant hit in 2004 which, at the same time, brings about social extensive controversy 3.擔心孩子的吵鬧聲給他人帶來不便擔心孩子的吵鬧聲給他人帶來不便，一些母親分發(fā)紙袋，附上以孩子的名義，一些母親分發(fā)紙袋，附上以孩子的名義寫的歉意信，對此人們的反應不一。寫的歉意信，對此人們的反應不一。 _, some mothers hand out bags with notes to express apologies in the name of their babies, _. Worried t

9、hat their babies noises may bring inconvenience to other peoples reaction to which was mixed 4.多虧了他媽媽的鼓勵，作者在若多虧了他媽媽的鼓勵，作者在若干次失敗之后成功找到了工作，這表明干次失敗之后成功找到了工作，這表明在陷入困境時我們要采取一種積極的生在陷入困境時我們要采取一種積極的生活態(tài)度。活態(tài)度。 _, the author succeeded in landing a job after several failures,_ _. Thanks to his mothers encourage

10、ment which indicates that we should adopt a positive attitude towards life when in trouble 5.不管負面的言論和他人的失敗，不管負面的言論和他人的失敗，這只小聾青蛙成功地到達了高塔頂部，這只小聾青蛙成功地到達了高塔頂部，這表明堅持是通往成功的唯一道路。這表明堅持是通往成功的唯一道路。 _, the tiny deaf frog succeeded in reaching the top of a tall tower,_ _. Despite the negative comments and other

11、s failure which indicates that perseverance is the only road to success 6.父親曾經(jīng)在工廠工作父親曾經(jīng)在工廠工作8 8年，之后年，之后上了師范，做了十年老師?，F(xiàn)在他在家上了師范，做了十年老師?，F(xiàn)在他在家安度晚年。安度晚年。 Having worked in a factory for 8 yeas, my father was admitted to a teachers college and served as a teacher for a decade, who is now enjoying the rest o

12、f his life at home. 7.為了重視中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，浙江為了重視中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，浙江溫州的學校禁止過圣誕節(jié)。圣誕節(jié)在中溫州的學校禁止過圣誕節(jié)。圣誕節(jié)在中國青少年中已經(jīng)流行了幾十年。國青少年中已經(jīng)流行了幾十年。 _ _, schools of Wenzhou in Zhejiang province are banned from celebrating Christmas, _ _. To attatch importance to Chinese traditional festivals which has already been popular among teenag

13、ers in China for decadesPart2/Part3的段落結構的段落結構:Part2主題句主題句支撐句支撐句1/拓展句拓展句1支撐句支撐句2/拓展句拓展句2Part3主題句主題句支撐句支撐句1/拓展句拓展句1支撐句支撐句2/拓展句拓展句2結論句結論句主題句的好句式：主題句的好句式：1) 材料分析材料分析As can be learnt from the passage,It can be learnt from the passage thatWhat we can learn from the picture / cartoon is that 2）結合自身經(jīng)歷，舉例表達：

14、）結合自身經(jīng)歷，舉例表達：The story sets me thinking of one such occasion, when Id like to take myself as an example to show you . When it comes to the relationship between parents and children, Im reminded of my parents, who once quarreled with each other the moment they met. 3) 表達支持表達支持/反對：反對：The reasons why I

15、 support/oppose the practice can be listed as follows. To begin with, . In addition,Most importantly, Everything considered, such practice does more good than harm to us. In the long run, it will have a negative/positive influence on constructing a harmonious society.4）結論表達）結論表達From my point of view

16、, what we have to do is /something must be done toPersonally/Consequently, its high time that measures should be taken to .Therefore, I am firmly convinced thatSo vital a role does praise play in our lives that never can we stress the significance of it too much. Its high time that we abandoned the

17、idea of schooling at home, no matter how attractive it seems!Practice：按題目要求寫主題句：按題目要求寫主題句Task1：2016江蘇省高三英語聯(lián)考江蘇省高三英語聯(lián)考 b) 以自己或朋友、家人的經(jīng)歷說明以自己或朋友、家人的經(jīng)歷說明“堅持就會成功堅持就會成功”或或者不堅持導致失敗。者不堅持導致失敗。 The story sets me thinking of one such occasion, when I failed in an important English test. I was so discouraged th

18、at I even thought of abandoning English. Fortunately, I realized my mistake and devoted more time and efforts to learning English. Eventually, my efforts paid off and I made great progress in English.Task2：2015廣東高考英語廣東高考英語2. 請以約請以約120個詞談談你對個詞談談你對“夢想成就偉人夢想成就偉人”的看法，包的看法，包括如下要點：括如下要點： (1)談談夢想的重要性；談談夢想的

19、重要性； (2)談談你是如何堅持你的夢想的談談你是如何堅持你的夢想的Dreams play so vital a role in our lives that never can we give up our dreams no matter what difficulty we may come across. Id like to take myself as an example to show you how I stick to my dream. When I was young, I dreamt of becoming a scientist, inventing more devices to make our lives more convenient. Whenever Im discouraged, Im reminded of my dream, telling myself to keep on going. Thanks to my dream, Ive reached where I am today.Task3：前黃高級中學：前黃高級中學2017屆高三一模適應性考試屆高三一模適應性考試以約以約120個詞發(fā)表你個詞發(fā)表你“對吃苦教育對吃苦教育”的看法，內(nèi)容包括：的看法，內(nèi)容包括：（1）你對）你對“吃苦教育吃苦教育”概念的理解；概念的理解； Wh