2015屆高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)高效書(shū)面表達(dá)專題卷18Word版含解析

1、2015屆高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí) 高效書(shū)面表達(dá)專題卷18（含解析）1書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿分30分）老師要求你負(fù)責(zé)班級(jí)墻報(bào)(wall newspaper)工作并征求你的意見(jiàn)。 在日記中表述你的決定并談?wù)勀愕南敕?。短文?nèi)容要點(diǎn)：墻報(bào)可以為同學(xué)提供信息；墻報(bào)可以幫助同學(xué)門學(xué)習(xí)；如何辦好墻報(bào)。注意：詞數(shù)120左右； 2. 開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好， 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。March 11, Friday FineToday I was requested by our teacher _ _2書(shū)面表達(dá)(滿分15分)假如你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Dave來(lái)信想了解有關(guān)廣州亞運(yùn)會(huì)的舉辦情況。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封回信， 1 廣州成功舉辦

2、了本屆亞運(yùn)會(huì)，吸引了成千上萬(wàn)的游客。2 亞洲各國(guó)運(yùn)動(dòng)員積極參與，展現(xiàn)了良好的體育精神。3 中國(guó)運(yùn)動(dòng)員表現(xiàn)完美，獲得了199枚金牌。注意： 1. 短文須包含上述各要點(diǎn)，也可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮、增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；2. 詞數(shù)：100字左右，文中所給出的詞數(shù)不記入總詞數(shù)。Dear Dave, I am glad to tell you what has happened here for the 2010 Asian Games._ _ Yours, Li Hua3進(jìn)入高三后，學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)重、壓力大，因此，有效的學(xué)習(xí)顯得尤為重要。請(qǐng)根據(jù)你的切身體會(huì)，從合理安排、勞逸結(jié)合等方面談?wù)勀銓?duì)有效學(xué)習(xí)的看法。字?jǐn)?shù)120

3、左右，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。4在智能手機(jī)日益普及的當(dāng)下，我們已經(jīng)跨入了移動(dòng)時(shí)代。智能手機(jī)五花八門的功能影響著我們的生活、社交、學(xué)習(xí)、工作、消費(fèi)、休閑等各個(gè)方面。請(qǐng)你就某一個(gè)方面談?wù)勚悄苁謾C(jī)帶給你的影響以及你對(duì)這種影響的看法。要求：根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇120詞左右的短文。提示：智能手機(jī)：smartphone微信：Wechat5閱讀下面短文，然后按要求寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。Many students in the colleges and universities are found taking no notice of the waste of water, electricity or pa

4、per.Very few students use washbasins when washing faces. Some schoolgirls do not turn off the taps when putting the facial cream on their faces, leaving the water flow away. There is a phenomenon which can often be seen in students public washrooms. A basin of clothes is put under a tap which is tur

5、ned on at the maximum, and the water in the basin is spilling over, but there is no one in the washroom. The owner of the clothes comes back and pours out half of the water in the basin.The same thing happens in the use of electricity in the colleges and universities. During supper time, all the lig

6、hts are turned on. However, there are only several or even no students in the classroom, which can hold over a hundred students. At night, some of the dormitories are locked, but the lights are still on inside. Quite a few students explain themselves that they dont have to pay the extra electricity

7、cost even if they overuse it because they have paid the school fee already.【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】1. 以約30個(gè)詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。2. 以約120個(gè)詞就“學(xué)生應(yīng)增強(qiáng)節(jié)約能源意識(shí)”這個(gè)話題發(fā)表你的看法，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：(1) 學(xué)生增強(qiáng)節(jié)約能源意識(shí)的必要性；(2) 你認(rèn)為生活中如何做到節(jié)約能源。【寫(xiě)作要求】作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】概括準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語(yǔ)篇連貫。_參考答案1【解析】這是一篇以提綱提供情景的作文。這種形式本身的要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)很明確，重點(diǎn)也

8、很突出，只要把各個(gè)提綱加以發(fā)揮，注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語(yǔ)法規(guī)則的正確性，就不會(huì)造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個(gè)提綱的要點(diǎn)。適當(dāng)運(yùn)用簡(jiǎn)單句，但是太多寫(xiě)出的文章過(guò)于幼稚、空洞貧泛、言之無(wú)物，要使文章有血有肉就要把平時(shí)學(xué)的知識(shí)用進(jìn)去，多運(yùn)用復(fù)雜句。就能使文章不同凡響，更有文采，特別是對(duì)關(guān)聯(lián)詞的使用，如“firstof all “secondly”等，會(huì)使你的文章邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)緊密、層次鮮明、條理清楚，2Dear Dave, I am glad to tell you what has happened here for the 2010 Asian Games. With the

9、 devotion of all the workers and volunteers, Guangzhou has held the 2010 Asian Games successfully and attracted thousands of visitors Athletes from Asian countries participated the grand event with high enthusiasm, hoping to win gold medals for their homeland, which best explains the essence of the

10、Olympics. The achievement of Chinese athletes was remarkable. Not only did they win a great number of medals, but the respect and the honor as well. Behind the high ranking they approached and the honor they were given, we should think of their determination and hard work toward the long road to suc

11、cess which laid a solid foundation for their achievements. Though the Games have come to an end, our enthusiasm for sports wont reduce. I sincerely hope that you can come to Guangzhou to have an exciting journey! Yours , Li Hua【解析】略3 How to Be an Efficient Learner?Being Senior Three students, we hav

12、e a tight schedule and seem to have endless homework to do every day. Because of limited time, its important to be an efficient learner. But how can we become efficient learners?Firstly, we should make a realistic agenda, which lists all we have to do and the deadline to cover. Secondly, divide our

13、spare time into several parts to make sure we go through all the subjects and try to be well-balanced students. Thirdly, take regular exercise to refresh our mind and energy and make sure we are healthy enough to get round our lessons. Remember: All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Besides, d

14、iscussing with classmates about difficult problems to find best solutions can be of help. Its also important to read extra books to ensure you feed on new ideas from time to time.All in all, efficiency is the key to success.【解析】 試題分析：這是一篇開(kāi)放性作文寫(xiě)作,話題是關(guān)于有效的學(xué)習(xí)，內(nèi)容要考生自己發(fā)揮，給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很

15、強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性?！玖咙c(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章使用了很好的短語(yǔ)和句子：divideinto將分成， go through通過(guò)，be of help有幫助， the key to success成功的關(guān)鍵，. Being Senior Three s

16、tudents, we have a tight schedule and seem to have endless homework to do every day. 這句話使用了現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語(yǔ)，Because of limited time, its important to be an efficient learner.這句話使用了it做形式主語(yǔ)， we should make a realistic agenda, which lists all we have to do and the deadline to cover. 這句話使用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，文章還使用了諺語(yǔ)： All

17、 work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.特別值得一題的是文章通過(guò)Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly, Besides, All in all, efficiency is 這些關(guān)聯(lián)詞的使用更加連貫了?？键c(diǎn): 考查開(kāi)放式作文4Nowadays, it is not rare to see a man walk on the sidewalks, smartphone in hand, completely absorbed in the digital world. Just as what computers once achieved

18、, smartphones are transforming our life in every possible wayhow we socialize, entertain, and study.I used to contact friends by phone or QQ. But now I have switched to Wechat, a popular app that allows people to communicate and to share feelings and daily occurrence with friends. I can also receive

19、 the latest news by subscribing to famous websites. It makes me feel so connected with the rest of the world. I am truly grateful for the convenience, connection and comfort brought by this marvelous technology. But meanwhile I feel deeply anxious. To stay informed, I constantly update my Wechat, fo

20、r which I am often distracted. Therefore, we should be cautious not to fall slaves to the smartphones.【解析】試題分析：考查開(kāi)放性作文。這篇作文給出了一個(gè)關(guān)于智能手機(jī)的話題，并沒(méi)有什么提綱。要求考生我圍繞智能手機(jī)帶給你的影響以及你對(duì)這種影響的看法來(lái)寫(xiě)。這就要考生自由發(fā)揮，充實(shí)內(nèi)容，要言之有物，不能干巴巴的幾句話，對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。同時(shí)在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣

21、你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體。【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文用了一些常見(jiàn)短語(yǔ)：used to 過(guò)去常常，subscribe to 訂閱，句型上更是變化多樣：Nowadays, it is not rare to see a man walk on the sidewalks, smartphone in hand, completely absorbed in the digital world.這句話使用了it做形式主語(yǔ)和過(guò)去分詞做狀語(yǔ)， Just as what computers once achieved, smartphones are transf

22、orming our life in every possible wayhow we socialize, entertain, and study.這句話用了賓語(yǔ)從句， I contact friends by phone or QQ. But now I have switched to Wechat, a popular app that allows people to communicate and to share feelings and daily occurrence with friends.這句話使用了定語(yǔ)從句， To stay informed, I constant

23、ly update my Wechat, for which I am often distracted. 這句話使用了不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)和非限制性定語(yǔ)從句?？键c(diǎn)：考查開(kāi)放類書(shū)面表達(dá)5 Lots of students in the colleges and universities pay no attention to the waste of water, electricity and paper, which causes a large amount of energy to be wasted.The waste and overuse of energy has influenc

24、ed ecological balance, which will have a harmful effect on our environment. It is necessary for us students to enhance the awareness of saving energy.Personally, I think we can save much energy in our daily life. First, we can walk or ride bicycles to school. If schools are too far away from our hom

25、es, we can take buses instead of taking private cars or taxis. Second, we should write on both sides of paper. Besides, we can take reusable bags with us when shopping. Fourth, we can save electricity by turning off the lights or other electrical appliances when we sleep or leave the rooms. In addition, we can reuse the water after washing to clean the toilets.In a word, as long as we make efforts, a lot of energy can be saved and the environment can be protected.【解析】 試