英語(yǔ)：如何寫好建議信課件【】

1、單擊此處編輯母版標(biāo)題樣式單擊此處編輯母版文本樣式第二級(jí)第三級(jí)第四級(jí)第五級(jí)*如何算是一篇好文章？覆蓋了所有的要點(diǎn)應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，行文連貫，條理清楚。要點(diǎn)全詞匯,句型 （高級(jí)）和語(yǔ)法多樣化（較復(fù)雜）語(yǔ)言地道連接詞假如你叫孫軍，是恩施高中的學(xué)生，要給市長(zhǎng)寫一封信，反映學(xué)校門前交通擁擠現(xiàn)象，包括以下要點(diǎn)：參考詞匯: 穿行 thread ones way 天橋 overpass 第一步: What must we pay attention to when writing an article ?題材：人稱 Person (The first/ t

2、hird person)時(shí)態(tài)：Tense (the simple present tense)要點(diǎn)： a letter第一步：審題養(yǎng)成重視審題的習(xí)慣。雖然基礎(chǔ)寫作題是半封閉性的，但審題仍然十分重要?，F(xiàn)以樣題為例，談?wù)勅绾螌忣}：第一人稱一封信建議政府采取措施舒緩交通擁擠的狀況說(shuō)理邏輯性一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)建議信篇章結(jié)構(gòu) 說(shuō)明建議的內(nèi)容； 提出具體建議的原因； 指出采納建議的益處。注意事項(xiàng)：語(yǔ)言要委婉、禮貌，顧及對(duì)方感受。適當(dāng)運(yùn)用模板Dear Bob,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主題). Here are

3、a few suggestions. First, it is important to . Then, it also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to . You can also . (此三句不同的句式提出建議)As to , I suggest (有時(shí)根據(jù)需要具體到某一反面). In addition, (其他建議). Im sure (預(yù)測(cè)可能的結(jié)果，給對(duì)方以行動(dòng)的信心和決心).Im looking forward to (表達(dá)愿望).Sincerely yours,Li HuaDear_, You have asked

4、me for my advice with regard to _, and Ill try to make some conductive suggestions here. In my humble opinion(以我拙見), you would be wise to take the following actions: _. I hope youll find these proposals useful and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good luck with yo

5、u.Yours,XXX 第二步：搜索相關(guān)詞組或句型問(wèn)題建議學(xué)校和一所小學(xué)毗鄰，對(duì)著大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小, 家長(zhǎng)接送。交通更擁擠；學(xué)生過(guò)街在車輛中穿行危險(xiǎn)。政府應(yīng)采取措施,如修天橋等。學(xué)校與一所小學(xué)毗鄰,對(duì)著大街stand next to primary face/be faced with the main streetTheres a primary school near our school, and both schools face the main street.Our school stands next to a primary school, faced with

6、/facing the main street.推薦句型：There be+并列句非謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)Standing next to a primary school, our school is faced with/faces the main street.潤(rùn)色小建議Next to a primary school將介詞短語(yǔ)提前（全倒裝） stands/lies/is our school, faced with / facing a main street.可將stand next to替換為高級(jí)詞匯/短語(yǔ)be located next to (near/beside/by) border/a

7、djoin vt. be adjacent to與毗鄰在對(duì)面 be opposite to The traffic is busy during the rush hours.高峰期交通繁忙.traffic. during the rush hoursDuring the rush hours, there are so many cars and buses going on the road thatDuring the rush hours, there is a lot of traffic.so. thatwith結(jié)構(gòu)With so many cars and buses going

8、 on the road, 潤(rùn)色小建議“高峰期”可意譯:at peak time，a large current of cars and people“交通繁忙”可譯為:traffic jamcongestion 交通堵塞be choke up withbe crammed with 被堵塞/塞滿 加之孩子小,家長(zhǎng)接送,交通更擁擠 sendto, fetch. , 非謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu).Many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, which makes the traffic heavier.Many par

9、ents send their young children to school and fetch them home, making the traffic heavier. , which.加之孩子小，家長(zhǎng)接送，交通更擁擠Whats more, pick up. make.To make things worse/ whats worse, many parents coming to pick up their children make the street more crowded.In addition/ Additionally, many parents send their

10、 young children to school and fetch them home, which makes the traffic heavier.Whats more, parents often attend their kids to school, resulting in more serious traffic jams.What makes things worse is that children have to be picked up by their parents owing to their young age.making the situation mo

11、re serious.making the traffic heavier可意譯為： so. that.=tootoThe children are so young that parents have to send them to school and fetch them home, which makes/making the traffic heavier.making 可替換為：causing, leading to, resulting in“sendfetch” 可替換為短語(yǔ)：pick up潤(rùn)色小建議 學(xué)生過(guò)街在車輛中穿行危險(xiǎn)thread ones way，when doing

12、It is dangerous for the students to thread their way among buses and cars when crossing the road.固定句型It is +adj. for to do.Students are risking their lives to thread their way among cars.潤(rùn)色小建議2. Some are exposed to danger when crossing the ocean/ sea of cars. 靈活運(yùn)用其它的短語(yǔ)進(jìn)行意譯： 適當(dāng)增加形容詞和副詞： it is extreme

13、ly dangerous，it is of great/ tremendous danger政府應(yīng)采取措施,如修天橋等。suggest/suggestion, take steps/ measures/ action to do such asMy suggestion is that the government should表語(yǔ)從句固定句型 It is high time that(虛擬語(yǔ)氣)It is high time that relevant authorities took some measures like buildingI suggest that the governm

14、ent should take steps such as building an overpass.簡(jiǎn)單句1. In order to release the stress of traffic problems, 潤(rùn)色小建議2. Aimed at solving these problems, the government shouldA. 適當(dāng)添加一些意思（過(guò)渡句）The government should pay more attention to it and try to solve it.B. 語(yǔ)義的意譯3. Seeing these matters, never will I

15、stop urging our government to take some measures. For the sake of improving the quality of traffic, it is significant to buildC. 添加形容詞和副詞I strongly suggest, active/effective measures第三步. 連句成文但要注意：篇章的連貫性Next to a primary school stands our school, facing a main street. _, its crammed with cars during

16、the rush hour. _ children have to be picked up by their parents owing to their young age. _, its of great danger for the students to go through the traffic. _, it is high time that relevant authorities took some measures like building an overpass.A. As a consequence B. According to the phenomenon st

17、ated above C. When it comes to traffic jamsD. What makes things worse is that A.C.D.B.反面范例反面范例反面范例反面范例不推薦字體優(yōu)秀作文范例1優(yōu)點(diǎn)：考生能靈活地處理各個(gè)信息點(diǎn)，大量運(yùn)用非謂語(yǔ)，介詞短語(yǔ)，從句，連詞等來(lái)提亮句子，使得文章更彰顯個(gè)性和語(yǔ)言功底。優(yōu)秀作文范例2優(yōu)點(diǎn)：考生的書面整潔，字體美觀，運(yùn)用there be句型，介詞短語(yǔ)，從句，非謂語(yǔ)，套用句式等來(lái)提亮句子，使得文章更彰顯內(nèi)涵和語(yǔ)言功底。優(yōu)秀作文范例3優(yōu)點(diǎn)：考生運(yùn)用倒裝句，so that句式，精彩的表達(dá)以及虛擬語(yǔ)氣等來(lái)提亮句子，使得文章更彰顯內(nèi)涵

18、和語(yǔ)言功底。優(yōu)秀作文范例4優(yōu)點(diǎn)：該考生最大的特色是運(yùn)用了大量的高級(jí)詞匯等來(lái)提亮句子，使得文章更彰顯深厚的語(yǔ)言底蘊(yùn)。優(yōu)秀作文范例5優(yōu)秀作文范例6Congestion n. 阻塞, 擁擠, 充血適當(dāng)運(yùn)用模板Dear_, You have asked me for my advice with regard to _, and Ill try to make some conductive suggestions here. In my humble opinion(依我拙見), you would be wise to take the following actions: _. I hope y

19、oull find these proposals useful and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good luck with you.Yours,XXX Dear Bob,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主題). Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to . Then, it also helps to . Besid

20、es, it should be a good idea to . You can also . (此三句不同的句式提出建議)As to , I suggest (有時(shí)根據(jù)需要具體到某一反面). In addition, (其他建議). Im sure (預(yù)測(cè)可能的結(jié)果，給對(duì)方以行動(dòng)的信心和決心).Im looking forward to (表達(dá)愿望).Sincerely yours,Li Hua 假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Peter來(lái)信向你咨詢?nèi)绾尾拍軐W(xué)好中文。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)寫回信。要點(diǎn)： 參加中文學(xué)習(xí)班； 看中文書刊、電視； 學(xué)唱中文歌曲； 交中國(guó)朋友。注意：可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；開頭語(yǔ)已給出。Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice no how to learn Chinese well._ _Best wishes,Li Hua使用時(shí)，直接刪除本頁(yè)！精品課件，你值得擁有！精品課件，你值得擁有！使用時(shí)，直接刪除本頁(yè)！精品課件，你值得擁有！精品課件，你值得擁有！使用時(shí)，直接刪除本頁(yè)！精品課件