簽證用英文學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書

1、Study PlanDear Visa Officer:Its my great honour that Ive been admitted to the University of Toronto in the program of Social Science as a transfer student. (Although the offer letter didnt mention the specific major, an email that sent from U of T later made sure of the program. The copy version of

2、the email is enclosed with the Study Plan.) The program will begin on September 13th, 2010. And U of T marked me as “year:3” student.A brief introduction of my background and my choice of sociologyMy name is Yingchu Mao, born on June 1st, 1989, in Hangzhou, China. Currently, I am a sophomore of Wuha

3、n University，majoring in Editing and Publishing Science. Last semester, Ive got a chance to attend the AIESEC (one of the largest students organization around the world) Youth Leadership Conference in Wuhan. The conference focused on Non-governmental Organization topic with several excellent speeche

4、s made by Julie, Wei Zhang and Cong Du who worked in Wall Street for more than 10 years before he quitted and devoted himself to NGO-the Chiheng Foundation have left me a deep impression and arouse my intense interest on NGO.Whats more, I happened to have applied for an internship in XiaoshanNanshiC

5、ommunity Center last summer vacation. And I found out that successfully running a NGO is everything but simple. You should be well equipped with a strong knowledge background in social science. I feel Ive got that passion to study this issue. Meanwhile, I was attending a sociology-related course whi

6、ch I found social science a magical field using a variety of unique methods and skills exploring individual and collective ways of thinking, feeling and acting.Since going abroad to study the advanced knowledge is what I always have in mind, I started to browse some famous universities websites and

7、finally made a decision to abandon the major Im not interested and to transfer to Canada given Chinese social science is still in the beginning stage and many theories are introduced from western countries.My Choice of University of Toronto in CanadaFirst, Canada is a peaceful, beautiful and harmoni

8、ous country which means two things to me. First it means that the country can provide the international students the high-quality education at lower expenses relative to UK and US. And second, those features just well show the sociology theories are closely combined with the practice within this cou

9、ntry. Besides, Canadas social science is covering more and more topics and the level of specialization is high, which indicates the highly development of the discipline.Second, University of Toronto is ranked one of the worlds best universities with a long history. UT was established in 1827, one of

10、 the oldest universities around North America. The richness embedded in its history nurtures the ground for studying humanities disciplines. Matter of fact, UT has a strong academic background of those social science subjects. And UTs Sociology classes discussed a wide range of social issues which f

11、it my interest a lot and will be quite useful in NGO operation.Plans to achieve my academic goalFirst, because I applied as a transfer student, I must try my best to catch up with the regular students there. So I keep practicing English every day, trying to read some original novels and monographs.

12、Only in this way can I conquer the language barrier as soon as possible when I start my study in UT.Then although Im a transfer student who can receive transfer credits to reduce the length of completing the program, I know my current major is not similar with sociology, so that means I have to work

13、 harder and take some first and second level courses to make up the missing credits. If possible I will make use of the summer vacation to take some courses.Simultaneously, I know that the practice related with the program will include some field research. I wish that I can catch the chance to visit

14、 some NGOs in Canada, and write some reports about their operation patterns in order to learn the advanced modes.Career opportunity in ChinaUpon my graduation in U of T, I plan to return to China for the following reasons:Firstly, my training in sociology will provide skills for jobs in many fields

15、in China, including government, politics, industry, education, journalism and so on. So there are many job opportunities lying ahead of me. But I am particularly interested in working at NGOs. There are more and more NGOs established in China, such as Chiheng, Narada, Greenpeace(China) and Action Ai

16、d(China). However they just need some more advanced ideas and talents to support the institution. With a degree from world-famous university and my skill in thinking and research that Ive been taught when I study in UT, I am confident that I can find a place in Chinese NGO that fit me the best.Secon

17、dly, sociology is about the way of thinking and acting which is penetrated into the local culture. I was born and living here, so it will be more confident and comfortable for me to apply the theory to Chinese conditions than any other countries.Last but not the least, I wish to go back to my hometo

18、wn Hangzhou, which is a metropolitan city with many great job opportunities and a very beautiful and comfortable city for living. Besides I love my parents very much. For I am the only child of them, I wish to go back and take good care of them.Yours sincerely,DateSignature of Applicant有關(guān)學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃！4 O7 O

19、/ c7 H4 e 感覺(jué)這個(gè)相當(dāng)相當(dāng)?shù)沃匾杏X(jué)VO拒你滴什么學(xué)習(xí)能力移民傾向這些原因，很大程度上需要你SP來(lái)打消人家滴懷疑！即使你找中介也要自己搞定SP呵呵 把偶自己滴SP貼出來(lái)討論一下。專家高手無(wú)視就好Study Plan0 q9 mR2 p2 & i1 b* JDear visa officer：. . P& G$ t3 r; D6 v0 eMy name is *, female, born on 27th of Feb * in Qingdao, Shandong province, China. I received my admission to QingdaoUniversity

20、 in 2007, majoring in English. After muchcalculation, I believe that studying abroad to broaden my horizon is a better choice for me. Therefore, Im applying a further study in Canada. In this case, I can not only improve my English, but also have a more challenging and promising major that Im intere

21、sted in -Accounting and Finance.（第一段主要是把自己滴情況主要表述了一下，以及這個(gè)出國(guó)打算）8 o/ 4 e# o+ K9 PIn my view, Canada has a more peaceful and harmonious environment for studying and it is rich in educational resources comparing to other countries.（加拿大方面滴優(yōu)秀之處一筆帶過(guò)） The reason that I choose Seneca is for its true knowledg

22、e learning and real experience gaining. Unlike Chinese universities or colleges, Seneca offers co-operative education programs that allow students to gain real work experience and apply what they have learned in the workplace. A more attractive factor is Seneca offers many different opportunities fo

23、r students success. Students are able to transfer credits from some of its diploma programs to its degree programs, and Seneca has transfer agreements with educational institutions across Canada and even around the globe. （介紹seneca，說(shuō)實(shí)在，偶真不知道怎么說(shuō)，然后就到它滴網(wǎng)站上看人家怎么說(shuō)滴，然后自己再寫滴。感覺(jué)要寫優(yōu)點(diǎn)。更要寫對(duì)你有用滴優(yōu)點(diǎn)，因?yàn)槲以谙旅嫣岢鰏ene

24、ca只是一個(gè)橋梁，過(guò)渡期后會(huì)再轉(zhuǎn)學(xué)滴。所以說(shuō)了seneca滴轉(zhuǎn)學(xué)校方面。說(shuō)了這個(gè)學(xué)校實(shí)踐性比較強(qiáng)，是國(guó)內(nèi)大學(xué)不可比滴。這樣才體現(xiàn)了放棄原有大學(xué)去學(xué)個(gè)這個(gè)college滴必要性么。）Thus, with those opportunities, I am sure I will at a higher level after I complete my study in Canada.* N* h: E4 # V0 B6 D4 K% I* j$ ?, + wxThe program of Accounting and Finance offered by SenecaCollege attrac

25、ts me just like a bridge to a higher education. In this program, many important subjects are provided, such as Accounting Basics,Business Statistics,Mathematics of Finance,Organizational Behaviour,Co-op Professional Theory, and Quantitative Approaches to Decision Makingetc. As far as Im concerned, t

26、hose subject regarding accounting and finance are quite necessary to me. I can get a better understanding on accounting knowledge and get closer to a true accountant through them. Moreover, Im quite interested in the Organizational Behaviour and Quantitative Approaches to Decision Making which can g

27、ive me a chance to be wiser and of great executive ability. （你必須說(shuō)清楚你將要學(xué)習(xí)的專業(yè)，大家最好說(shuō)一下自己的課程，其中具體課程的名字，例如第一學(xué)期有些什么重要的課程，第二學(xué)期有什么，你感興趣的，等等，必須寫清楚，這樣簽證官就會(huì)覺(jué)得你很認(rèn)真，是過(guò)去學(xué)習(xí)的！課程你自己從學(xué)校網(wǎng)站上找，都找得到。）) 5 o& F9 M, K6 What I have planned is that after a period of adaptive phase, I will go to a university for a degree and t

28、hen one-years master.matter what, I want to pass CA (chartered accountant) exam during my study in Canada, and then back to China to apply myself into accounting and finance.（提到自己滴目標(biāo)和打算，讓人家感覺(jué)你是個(gè)很有計(jì)劃有目標(biāo)滴好孩子！而且說(shuō)了自己會(huì)回國(guó)）My parents have sufficient money to supply me to study abroad and steady income. The

29、y are definitely willing and able to afford my education.（小提一下父母提供了資金） In fact, Im an easily homesick girl. Whats more, I always put my family, my parents first. From the date of my birth, my parents spare most of their love, time and money on me. Im so grateful for having such parents. However, my

30、parents are not young and healthy as before any more. Going back to China and take good care of them after finishing my study is my responsibility.（說(shuō)出父母滴原因偶必須回國(guó)） In additional, Chinas governmental policy is more attractive to me. The government values the returned students more and more highly. With

31、 the development of China, large amounts of qualified people are in great demand. Accordingly, there are sufficient job opportunities for returned students, and suitable conditions supplied for their personal and professional development. I believe that if I go back to China, I will have a brighter

32、employment prospect. （說(shuō)出外部條件，偶回國(guó)會(huì)很好）- k2 R$ e5 m/ J; f1 Q應(yīng)該說(shuō)，偶滴SP也改了很多遍。一開(kāi)始滴時(shí)候有將近兩頁(yè)捏。而且還弄了outline，寫滴相當(dāng)詳細(xì)。后來(lái)經(jīng)過(guò)不少人指點(diǎn)尤其一個(gè)在多college念碩士文憑滴哥哥給了最大滴幫助他就是自己DIY而且只是個(gè)college人家20多天就來(lái)體檢表了。唉其實(shí)偶米寄掉體檢表滴話，也差不多挺快滴。9 y: ?3 2 1 L一些小建議0 u + 8 Z$ A: ! p1，出去念書，以及去這個(gè)學(xué)校念書，要說(shuō)出你自己滴意愿！你自己滴原因。千萬(wàn)別說(shuō)你父母希望你出去。你父母感覺(jué)怎么樣。而且我覺(jué)滴，說(shuō)自己從小夢(mèng)想

33、出國(guó)也挺牽強(qiáng)。6 F8 L4 Z4 F% G0 2，SP一定要拒絕模板每個(gè)人滴情況各有不同！而且你需要SP去體現(xiàn)你自己滴想法堅(jiān)決不要雷同！雷同卷萬(wàn)一碰上了那就是咔嚓了+ u d- H& l9 9 j* h3，SP不是要求你寫作文華麗滴句子，優(yōu)美滴詞藻這些都不是必須滴。花里胡哨滴。大汗捏 你只要說(shuō)得明白，講得清楚，說(shuō)得讓人信服那就是王道！4，SP最好是一頁(yè)紙，不要多了，但也不能少，400詞左右。偶寫滴就有點(diǎn)多，雖然也是一頁(yè)但是500多字了。關(guān)于簽證時(shí)的Study Plan問(wèn)題 (包含4個(gè)Study Plan范例)寄托天下2007年03月26日我要說(shuō)兩句近來(lái)簽證時(shí)不斷有VO問(wèn)及Study Plan

34、,我收集了一些類似的,僅供大家參考.美國(guó)簽證, 這是沈陽(yáng)領(lǐng)事館網(wǎng)頁(yè)上個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷中對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃的要求！學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃 :簡(jiǎn)潔并詳細(xì)地描述有關(guān)計(jì)劃學(xué)習(xí)的領(lǐng)域，包括研究方法，和研究的應(yīng)用范圍。說(shuō)明主管教授的名字和他/她的專業(yè)領(lǐng)域說(shuō)明即將進(jìn)行此項(xiàng)研究的學(xué)院名稱和系部名稱在申請(qǐng)留學(xué)及簽證的過(guò)程中，經(jīng)常會(huì)被要求寫學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書（study plan）,本文作者長(zhǎng)期從事留學(xué)文書寫作，因此結(jié)合自己的工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)，介紹一下學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書的寫作。一般來(lái)說(shuō)學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書可以按照提交目的分成兩類，給大使館申請(qǐng)簽證用的，或是給學(xué)校申請(qǐng)錄取用的。用來(lái)申請(qǐng)學(xué)校的學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃從本質(zhì)上講和個(gè)人陳述是同一類型的文書，關(guān)于學(xué)校申請(qǐng)類的學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書可以參考個(gè)人陳述

35、方面的文章，本文主要介紹提交大使館簽證用的學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書。歐美國(guó)家，特別是移民國(guó)家，如法國(guó)，澳大利亞，新西蘭，加拿大等國(guó)針對(duì)留學(xué)生簽證的時(shí)候往往要求提供學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書，通過(guò)學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書使簽證官了解您的背景，選擇留學(xué)專業(yè)的動(dòng)機(jī)條件，選擇該國(guó)留學(xué)的理由，和清晰的未來(lái)留學(xué)時(shí)間安排，職業(yè)目標(biāo)和回國(guó)理由，配合審核您的其它材料決定是否給您發(fā)放留學(xué)簽證，因此學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書是一份很關(guān)鍵的文件?？偟膩?lái)說(shuō)，學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書需要包括以下幾方面內(nèi)容。1、 簡(jiǎn)單說(shuō)明自己的學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷，專業(yè)背景及工作經(jīng)歷；2、 說(shuō)明自己進(jìn)一步求學(xué)的動(dòng)機(jī)及為什么選擇該國(guó)、該大學(xué)與該專業(yè)；3、 詳細(xì)的留學(xué)時(shí)間安排；4、介紹留學(xué)所需資金及來(lái)源；5、 對(duì)未來(lái)職業(yè)目標(biāo)的

36、闡述，留學(xué)后回國(guó)的理由。學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書的行文風(fēng)格和文章結(jié)構(gòu)與個(gè)人陳述有很大不同，不需要太多個(gè)性化和感性的描述，而應(yīng)該是結(jié)構(gòu)清晰簡(jiǎn)單，邏輯嚴(yán)密，闡述的事實(shí)明確，相關(guān)論據(jù)有力可信，學(xué)成回國(guó)的理由要非常充分，并且絕對(duì)不能和申請(qǐng)人的其他材料發(fā)生矛盾。由于使館的工作人員每天要處理大量的文件，因此學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書切不可寫的太長(zhǎng)，一般不應(yīng)超過(guò)800字，并且說(shuō)明一個(gè)問(wèn)題最好只用一個(gè)段落，段落前加上標(biāo)題，如 My Choice of University of Toronto in Canada ,My career objective 等，以便使館的工作人員對(duì)您一段內(nèi)容的中心思想一目了然。您的闡述應(yīng)該非常清晰易讀，不能

37、希望讓使館的工作人員從您的文字中“挖掘”您“潛在”內(nèi)容。學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書的重點(diǎn)部分是未來(lái)的職業(yè)計(jì)劃和留學(xué)后回國(guó)的理由，通過(guò)這一部分來(lái)告訴大使館您到該國(guó)留學(xué)后，確實(shí)能夠?qū)δ穆殬I(yè)發(fā)展有良好的幫助，并且有可信有力的理由學(xué)成歸國(guó)。雖然要求學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書的國(guó)家往往是移民國(guó)家，但是由于您申請(qǐng)簽證的理由是留學(xué)，因此通過(guò)學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書一定要消除您任何移民傾向?；貒?guó)理由要結(jié)合您個(gè)人的背景經(jīng)歷和家庭情況給出很合理的解釋，如一位擁有多年商業(yè)經(jīng)歷的經(jīng)理獲得去新西蘭讀商業(yè)管理碩士課程的機(jī)會(huì)，那么闡明他的職業(yè)目標(biāo)是回到中國(guó)成為一名跨國(guó)公司的高級(jí)經(jīng)理人，而他在中國(guó)多年積累的客戶資源和社交圈是一筆非常寶貴的財(cái)富，這就是非常強(qiáng)硬并合理的一

38、條回國(guó)理由。特別需要注意的是，學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書中關(guān)于回國(guó)理由等涉及事實(shí)論據(jù)的地方，不能任意編造。最后需要強(qiáng)調(diào)的是，由于學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書在表達(dá)上要求非常有條理，邏輯嚴(yán)密，簡(jiǎn)潔有力，這是大多數(shù)中國(guó)申請(qǐng)人所難以達(dá)到的，由于語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤和邏輯關(guān)系的失誤往往會(huì)導(dǎo)致理解的偏差。因此請(qǐng)專門的機(jī)構(gòu)由外籍專家進(jìn)行語(yǔ)言上的修改是避免上述弊端的好辦法。注：應(yīng)網(wǎng)友要求，特附一篇英文版的學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃書樣文Introduction of my background :My training was in the area of Chinese Education in XXXUniversity for Nationalities

39、. The education I received there trained my basic abilities of learning and made me capable of independent working. Because of my interest,and curiosity in the new field of Marketing,I participated in the business directly related with market after my graduation from university.My first job was Mana

40、ger Assistant in XXX Supermarket. I learned a lot of experience from manager and co-workers, which added to my talent and efforts made me very successful in daily work. For example, I made our supermarket the Supermarket without fake commodities and instituted rigid regulations for supplier selectio

41、n. Moreover, I bought large amount of goods with cash and quickly sold them at low price, which accelerated the turnover of money and increased our bargain power to suppliers. In 1996, I was promoted to be the Operation Executive. I audaciously built up three chain supermarkets in Shenzhen and estab

42、lished strong competitive advantages among our industry.In 1998,I joined the Shenzhen XXX Electronic Co.Ltd.-whose main business is the sales of single chip and relevant software. I suggested the company enter the market of single chips emluator which contained more technology and had more profit va

43、cuum. I also enhanced the technology development and after-sales service; held technology lectures focused on potential clients and published technical introductory articles. Within only 2 years our emluator business became a well-known brand in our industry and became our companys core business and

44、 main resource of profit.Why choose to study inand Throughout my past experience, however, I realized that I need more than my talent and successful records to achieve my higher goals, especially as China joined the WTO and plays an active role in the global economy. An advanced education in marketi

45、ng in a western country is necessary for me to have an international perspective of marketing and gain valuable knowledge of marketing theories and practices. The advanced Education system in can provide high quality graduated program for me , the reasonable tuition and high standard living conditio

46、n also attracted me deeply . The University ofis one of eight University which authorized by the government of China , all these are reasons for me to determine to go to, a country which has the highly developed business system and first-class education quality, for my further education.Study plan :

47、I plan to study for the Mater Degree of Marketing in the University of xxx which last for two years. Because I believe my condition and qualification are suitable for the courses requirements. Matriculated in The University of XXX smoothly has proved the university also believes in my ability of com

48、pleting my study without difficulties. Moreover, all of my accomplishments in the field of marketing within 10 year would be my good preparation for my further study. I am very confident that my experience would help me succeed in my post-graduate study. To study marketing needs solid English founda

49、tion. Although I have been keeping learning English these years and already have a very good English foundation, I still reckon that my English will be improved if I pay much attention to learn it in an English speaking country. Therefore, I prepare to complete half a years English courses before my

50、 study of master courses and take IELTS in New Zealand as well.When I received my master degree, I will get systematic Marketing knowledge and understanding of the running of business in New Zealand, a developed Western country .My 10 years saving which is *RMB in *Bank, my real estate which worth *

51、RMB (estimated my *Bank) and my stock which worth * RMB (calculated in present market price) in stock market would be my firm foundation of studying in New Zealand. The study fee in *university is * and the living cost is *. Therefore, my financial status is sufficient to afford my study and living

52、cost in New Zealand.Career objectiveAs soon as I finish my master degree in Marketing, Id like to return back to China directly. First, it simply because I love my motherland very much and I believe my further education in New Zealand could help me to make greater contributions to the people and eco

53、nomy that I have a passion for.The second reason is I feel lucky that I live in an era when China is undergoing rapid economic and political reforms. I witnessed with my own eyes its transition from a society of monotony and low productivity to one that is much more open, prosperous, and full of mom

54、entum for growth. As a result this transition has created plenty of opportunities in Chinese economy.Since I have always dreamed of being a successful international marketer in China, I would like to utilize the knowledge that I will acquire in New Zealand and abundant experience accumulated in Chin

55、as domestic market to extend my own career as an international marketer who concerns the marketing in global scale.More than ten years domestic experience is extremely valuable for a successful marketer. However, in New Zealand-a country which has a totally different language and culture, there is f

56、ew advantage for me, so coming back to China after learning is my best choice.Finally, nearly all of my public relationship is based in China. During my ten years work, I have already accumulated plenty of clients and relationship; those are very important foundation not only for my career but also

57、for my daily life. I would never give them up. Furthermore my former company-Shenzhen XXX Electronic Co., Ltd. agreed with my decision of studying in New Zealand and they will keep my position and welfare while I am in New Zealand and look forward to my return. I would never like to miss this opport

58、unitystudy plan 1I knew the information about ST.ANDREWS CAMBRIDGE in Beijing International Education Fair. The flexible and variable course arrangement, vivid and vigorous class teaching, the teacher team with excellent performance and the 100% high proportion of students entering universities of a higher grade attracted me, I thought it is a college fit for me. Consulted with my parents, I decided to apply for study to this college. At present, I have received the documents,