浙江卷(6月)應(yīng)用文-高考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)真題深度解析及變式訓(xùn)練

1、2022年高考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)真題深度解析及變式訓(xùn)練07浙江卷（6月）應(yīng)用文（2022.6,浙江卷，來(lái)自網(wǎng)絡(luò)，回憶版）假定你是李華，你校圖書館開設(shè)了一個(gè)小組學(xué)習(xí)室，請(qǐng)給留學(xué)生 Michael寫一封郵件，邀請(qǐng)一同前往體驗(yàn)，內(nèi)容如下：,位置和開放時(shí)間；.室內(nèi)設(shè)施與功能。注意：.詞數(shù)80左右；.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。書面表達(dá)深度解析分析維度內(nèi)容主題語(yǔ)境人與社會(huì)-人際溝通（良好的人際關(guān)系）話題選擇邀請(qǐng)朋友參與活動(dòng)體驗(yàn)對(duì)接課標(biāo)普通高中英語(yǔ)課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（2017年版2020年修訂）“普通高中英語(yǔ)課程語(yǔ) 用知識(shí)內(nèi)容要求”：“必修”-根據(jù)交際具體情境，正確理解他人的態(tài)度、情感 和觀點(diǎn)，運(yùn)用得體的語(yǔ)言形式，如

2、禮貌、直接或委婉等方式，表達(dá)自己的態(tài)度、 情感和觀點(diǎn)。普通高中英語(yǔ)課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（2017年版2020年修訂）“普通高中英語(yǔ)課程語(yǔ) 言技能內(nèi)容要求”：“必修”-一根據(jù)表達(dá)目的選擇適當(dāng)?shù)恼Z(yǔ)篇類型/根據(jù)表達(dá)的需 要選擇詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)/根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要選擇正式語(yǔ)或非正式語(yǔ)。普通高中英語(yǔ)課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（2017年版2020年修訂）“高中英語(yǔ)課學(xué)業(yè)質(zhì)量 水平二（2-13）能在書面表達(dá)中有條理地描述自己或他人的經(jīng)歷，闡述觀點(diǎn)， 表達(dá)情感態(tài)度/ （2-14）能在表達(dá)過程中有目的地選擇詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)，確切表 達(dá)意思，表達(dá)意義的邏輯關(guān)聯(lián)性。普通高中英語(yǔ)課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（2017年版2020年修訂）“高中英語(yǔ)課學(xué)業(yè)質(zhì)量 水平三”：（3

3、T3）能通過書面方式再現(xiàn)想象的經(jīng)歷和事物，對(duì)事實(shí)、觀點(diǎn)、經(jīng)歷 進(jìn)行評(píng)論/ （3-14）能使用銜接手段有效提高書面語(yǔ)篇的連貫性。語(yǔ)篇類型邀請(qǐng)信：邀請(qǐng)信是邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方參與某種活動(dòng)或邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方做某事。邀請(qǐng)信最重要的就Dear John,I am LiHua, a student from class 5. Our class will hold a graduation ceremony online , so I am writing to invite you to attend our graduation ceremony.The graduation ceremony will be held

4、on the afternoon of this Friday on Tencent Live meeting room. To begin with, our principal will make a speech to inspire us to pursue our dreams. Then wonderful performances prapared by our classmates will be on! Finally, you are particularly welcome to express your wishes to everyone of us.I sincer

5、ely hope that you can accept my invitation. I would appreciate it if you could spare the time to attend our graduation ceremony. Look forward to your arrival.Yours,LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一封郵件邀請(qǐng)外教參加你所在的班級(jí)計(jì)劃舉行的線上 畢業(yè)典禮，并告知他相關(guān)細(xì)節(jié)。.詞匯積累出 席：attend present激勵(lì)：inspire一 motivate傳達(dá)：express deliver感激；apprec

6、iate一 be grateful fbr.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句： Then wonderful performances prapared by our classmates will be on!拓展句： Then our classmates will give wonderful performances, which has been well prepared in advance.是自然流暢，對(duì)象不同，信中的表達(dá)方式也不同。比方你邀請(qǐng)某位老師組織活動(dòng)， 如果是不認(rèn)識(shí)的老師，就要說下自己是誰(shuí)，有什么事情，要顯得很尊敬對(duì)方。再 比方你邀請(qǐng)朋友參加某個(gè)活動(dòng)，你已經(jīng)知道對(duì)方是誰(shuí)了，

7、那自然沒必要自我介紹， 語(yǔ)氣可以顯得活潑一些?！緦懽骺记绊氈縜.盛情邀請(qǐng)參加聚會(huì)、共度假期或游覽某地等；b.建立密切 聯(lián)系，加強(qiáng)感情交流；c.拓展相關(guān)內(nèi)容，激發(fā)他人興趣。【寫作方法】首段：開門見山說明寫作目的。主體：a.具體交代邀請(qǐng)?jiān)?；b.邀請(qǐng)內(nèi)容：活動(dòng)性質(zhì)、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、日期； C.有關(guān)要求和希望。尾段：a.再次盛情邀請(qǐng)；b.希望盡快答復(fù)。寫作構(gòu)思(1)明確與作要求：給留學(xué)生Michael與一封郵件，邀請(qǐng)一向前往體驗(yàn)；(2)說明寫信目的：開門見山地指出此次來(lái)信是為了邀請(qǐng)參與活動(dòng)；(3)強(qiáng)調(diào)活動(dòng)細(xì)節(jié)：地點(diǎn)、時(shí)間、活動(dòng)特征等；(4)附帶個(gè)人期望：末尾簡(jiǎn)要表達(dá)希望。策略建議(1)精準(zhǔn)審題，構(gòu)建框

8、架。通過分析文體、主題語(yǔ)境、寫作框架、內(nèi)容要點(diǎn) 和語(yǔ)言風(fēng)格，解讀了寫作任務(wù)，使得學(xué)生對(duì)寫作方向和內(nèi)容有一個(gè)初步的了解。(2)分解要點(diǎn)，組織語(yǔ)料。分析首段、中段、尾段的寫作內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言要素， 梳理所需的資源。例如，首段作為導(dǎo)語(yǔ)進(jìn)一步解析試題的核心問題及主題。中段 作為主體拓展細(xì)節(jié)。尾段以帶有激勵(lì)性、號(hào)召性的話語(yǔ)結(jié)束。(3)調(diào)整修改，注重銜接。整合各局部語(yǔ)料，修改局部細(xì)節(jié)，添加必要的銜 接手段，以使整個(gè)篇章行文流暢。(4)由此及彼，舉一反三。在復(fù)習(xí)備考的過程中，要注重對(duì)同類主題、話題的 寫作的語(yǔ)料積累以及策略的運(yùn)用，做到由此及彼、舉一反三。【參考范文】Dear Michael,Our school

9、just opened a well-equipped group-study room in the library, so I want to invite you to study with me this Saturday morning.The room is designed for six people and open from 8 a.m. to 20 p.m. . The room facing south is so bright that we can not only enjoy ourselves in the sea of knowledge but bath i

10、n sunshine. Meanwhile,it has two well-perfbrmingcomputers and a big screen, with which we can share our thoughts with each other. Whafs more,free printer is always ready whenever you need to print essays.T hope you can join me! Looking forward to your early reply so T can make a reservation.Yours,Li

11、 Hua變式一主題對(duì)應(yīng)【演變規(guī)律】試題所選材料與高考試題的主題一致，即維護(hù)良好的人際關(guān)系，但話題卻不一樣?！驹囶}演練】假定你是李華，你的一位美國(guó)朋友Jane在中國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)中文兩年，即將回國(guó)。現(xiàn)在由你給她發(fā)郵件，邀請(qǐng)她參加為她舉辦的歡送會(huì)(farewell party)。要點(diǎn)如下；.祝賀她順利通過考試，她的學(xué)習(xí)進(jìn)步很大，為她驕傲；.感謝她幫助你們學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)；.時(shí)間：星期六晚六點(diǎn)；.地點(diǎn)：陽(yáng)光俱樂部(The Sun Club) 302房間。【參考范文】Dear Jane,Knowing that you are about to return to US, I would like to invite

12、you to a farewell party prepared for you.Congratulations on your passing all the exams. I am delighted that you have really made great progress andfinished your two-year study in China. All you have gained is the result of your sweat and effort. We are so proud of you and we all appreciate your pati

13、ence and help with our English. We*ll always remember the wonderful time we spent together.Its a pity that you have to go back soon! So a farewell party for you will be held in Room 302 in the Sun Club this Saturday evening. Could you come by 6:00 pm.? Please accept my invitation. Looking forward to

14、 having a fantastic night together!Yours faithfully,Li Hua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本文是一篇應(yīng)用文。假定你是李華，你的一位美國(guó)朋友Jane在中國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)中文兩年，即將回國(guó)。 現(xiàn)在由你給她發(fā)郵件，邀請(qǐng)她參加為她舉辦的歡送會(huì)(farewell party)。要點(diǎn)如下：1.祝賀她順利通過考試, 她的學(xué)習(xí)進(jìn)步很大，為她驕傲；2.感謝她幫助你們學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)；3.時(shí)間：星期六晚六點(diǎn)；4.地點(diǎn)：陽(yáng)光俱樂 部(The Sun Club) 302 房間。.詞匯積累(4個(gè)以上)歸還，返回：return一 give backcome back以而自豪：be proud o J

15、take pride in感激：appreciate一 be grateful to give gratitude to舉行，舉辦：hold一take place.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句： Knowing that you are about to return to US, I would like to invite you to a farewell party prepared for you. 拓展句： When I know that you are about to return to US, I would like to invite you to a farewell

16、party prepared for you.變式二話題相似【演變規(guī)律】試題所選材料與高考試的主題可能一致、也可能不一樣，而且話題也相似，即邀請(qǐng)某人參加 學(xué)習(xí)體驗(yàn)活動(dòng)?！驹囶}演練】假設(shè)你是李華，曾在美國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)半年，現(xiàn)已回國(guó)。你想聯(lián)系你的美國(guó)老師Mr.Smith,但沒有其聯(lián)系方式。請(qǐng) 根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給你的美國(guó)同學(xué)Tom寫一封信：.感謝Tom對(duì)你英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的幫助：2.詢問Mr.Smith的近況并索要其聯(lián)系方式；3.邀請(qǐng)Tom在春節(jié)期間來(lái)中國(guó)感受中國(guó)文化。【參考范文】Dear Tom,I am now back home.In this letter I would like to say thanks

17、to you for your kind help when I was in New York.I have been missing our English professor,Mr.Smith,who is so good a teacher and leaves me a great impression.What about him recently?! want to ask him for some suggestions on how to improve my listening ability.HoweverJ lost his email address.So would

18、 you mind sending it to me via the online mailbox?I am more than delighted to invite you to join us to celebrate the Spring Festival-Chinese Lunar New Year so that I can repay your friendship.We can also have a try in lion dances,which is extremely exciting.And the grand lantern festival parade will

19、 be bound to impress you.I assure you that you would enjoy visiting here as I did at your home.With my best regards!Yours,Li Hua 【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫信給同學(xué)表示感謝，同時(shí)詢問老師的聯(lián)系方式。第一步：審題 體裁：應(yīng)用文 時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí) 要求：1.說明對(duì)Tom的感謝.詢問Mr. Smith的近況并索要其聯(lián)系方式.發(fā)出來(lái)中國(guó)游玩的邀請(qǐng)第二步:列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）leaves sb a great impression; listen

20、ing ability; be delighted to; so that; be bound to;第三步：連詞成句Mr.Smith, who is so good a teacher and leaves me a great impression.want to ask him for some suggestions on how to improve my listening ability.am more than delighted to invite you to join us to celebrate the Spring Festival-Chinese Lunar Ne

21、w Year so that I can repay your friendship.4. And the grand lantern festival parade will be bound to impress you.根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second. And then, Finally, In the end, At last.表并歹ll補(bǔ)充關(guān)系： What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthe

22、rmore, In addition As well as, not only.but （also）, including,.表轉(zhuǎn)折比照關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause（從句）,In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand.,On the other hand. Some.,while others.9as for, so.that.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清

23、晰，第五步：潤(rùn)色修改變式三類型相似【演變規(guī)律】試題所選材料與高考試題在主題、話題上不一定相似或相同，但寫作語(yǔ)篇的類型是相似的， 即寫一封邀請(qǐng)信?！驹囶}演練1】假定你是李華，為弘揚(yáng)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)的書法藝術(shù)，你校書法社將于本周末舉行社團(tuán)活動(dòng)。作為書法社社長(zhǎng), 請(qǐng)你寫信邀請(qǐng)你校交換生Mike來(lái)參加。內(nèi)容包括：L活動(dòng)的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn);2 .活動(dòng)內(nèi)容和意義。注意：1 .詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：書法calligraphy【參考范文】Dear Mike,Knowing that you are interested in Chinese calligraphy, Tm writin

24、g to invite you to attend the activity of our calligraphy club from 2:00 pm to 5:00 pm this Saturday.At the beginning of the activity, you will enjoy a lecture about Chinese calligraphy and appreciate masterpieces of some celebrities. After that, you will be exposed to some hands-on activities. Thro

25、ugh this activity, we hope the attendees will know that being an important part of traditional Chinese culture, calligraphy serves the purpose of conveying thoughts and showing the beauty of lines and that not only is it a practical technique for writing Chinese characters, but its a unique art form

26、 to purify our souls.Looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Hua 【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，假定你是李華，為弘揚(yáng)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)的書法藝術(shù)，你校書法社將于本 周末舉行社團(tuán)活動(dòng)。作為書法社社長(zhǎng)，請(qǐng)你寫信邀請(qǐng)你校交換生Mike來(lái)參加。.詞匯積累知道：know一learn欣 賞：appreciateenj oy獨(dú)特的：unique一characteristic對(duì)感興趣：be interested in一have interest in.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句： At the beginning of the activity, yo

27、u will enjoy a lecture about Chinese calligraphy and appreciate masterpieces of some celebrities. After that, you will be exposed to some hands-on activities.拓展句： At the beginning of the activity, you will enjoy a lecture about Chinese calligraphy and appreciate masterpieces of some celebrities, aft

28、er which, you will be exposed to some hands-on activities.【試題演練2】假定你是李華。你校將舉辦音樂節(jié)，請(qǐng)寫封郵件邀請(qǐng)你的英國(guó)朋友Allen參加，內(nèi)容包括：.活動(dòng)時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；2.活動(dòng)內(nèi)容；3.歡迎他表演節(jié)目。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫?！緟⒖挤段摹緿ear Allen,How is everything going? Im writing to invite you to a music festival to be held at 8 am next Sunday in our school hall.It is known that great importance has been attached to traditional culture in high schools recently. Accordingly, the music festival