備戰(zhàn)2023年新高考英語讀后續(xù)寫高分必備攻略（全國通用）

1、讀后續(xù)寫高分技能（五） 生動的對話描寫（1）對話描寫為推動故事情節(jié)服務(wù)，是情節(jié)發(fā)展的一個環(huán)節(jié)，每段出現(xiàn)一兩句即可，不宜過多；（2）對話描寫要體現(xiàn)真情實(shí)感；（3）對話描寫不宜過長，側(cè)重口語化詞匯，避開生僻詞匯；（4）對話描寫盡可能結(jié)合動作描寫或情感描寫，增強(qiáng)畫面感；（5）對話描寫中可以用感嘆詞表示說話人的喜、怒、哀、樂等情緒。一、對話描寫的基本原則句型1：“.,” he said,（sth) doing. （sth) doing，he said, “.”say后接doing/done/獨(dú)立主格作狀語，結(jié)合動作描寫，增強(qiáng)畫面感。 （1) “Ill get us some coffee,” she

2、said,_(head)for the kitchen.“我去給我們拿點(diǎn)咖啡” 她說著朝廚房走去。（2）Glaringat me with his frightening eyes ,he yelled, “Youre such an idiot.”heading二、對話描寫常用句型(3) “Thats nice,” Alex said quietly,focusing on his plate.(4) “Why did they have to kill the dog?” she said, with her eyes full of tears. 句型2：“.,” he saidas/w

3、hen/before/as if. say后接狀語從句，增加了動作等細(xì)節(jié)描寫。例如：1) “Watch out!” she shouted_the car started to move.“當(dāng)心!” 當(dāng)汽車開始移動時，她喊道。as2) “Dear me! I wish I hadnt cried so much before,” said Alice as she swam about the lake, trying to find her way out.當(dāng)愛麗絲在湖里到處游，設(shè)法找到出路時，她說道, “天哪！但愿我以前沒有哭得那么兇就好了?！本湫?： “.,” he said,and(t

4、hen he) did. say后接并列謂語或接并列句，增加了動作描寫。例如：(1) “Yes, I think so,” he said reluctantly,_left the study.“是的，我想是的,” 他不情愿地說，然后離開了書房。and(2) “Drive safely,” he said, and waved goodbye. “小心開車,” 他說著揮手告別。句型4：.did.,did,andsaid, “.” say前有系列動作，構(gòu)成并列謂語，引號內(nèi)首字母大寫。例如： 1) Hepaused,lookedstraight into her eyes,andsaidin a

5、 quiet voice, “Thats true.”他停下來，直視著她的眼睛，平靜地說: “那是真的?！?) He grinned, waved, and said, “Hi!”他咧嘴笑了笑，揮揮手說: “嗨!”3) A large middle-aged lady patted me on the back and said, “Nice to see you again.”一位身材高大的中年女士拍了拍我的后背說: “很高興再次見到你?！本湫?：“.,” he said +副詞或短語. say后接方式狀語，說明說話的方式，說得更具體。例如： 1)“Of course,” Nancy rep

6、lied with a smile. “當(dāng)然,” 南希笑著回答。2)“Im sorry,” she said with a sigh. “對不起,” 她嘆了口氣說。3) “Thank you, sir,” whispered Paul gratefully. “謝謝，先生,” Paul滿心感激地嘟噥著。句型6： “.” +動作描寫的句子 不出現(xiàn)say對話標(biāo)志。例如： 1) “I dont believe you any more.” He turned around, slammed the door and stormed out.“我再也不相信你了?！?他轉(zhuǎn)過身，砰的一聲關(guān)上門，沖了出去。

7、2) “I was attacked by a wolf and I thought I would never see you again.” Mac hugged them and burst out crying.我被狼襲擊了，我以為再也見不到你了?！?麥克抱著他們，大哭起來。1.對話標(biāo)簽在前She said,“I would like to go with you, but I havent finished my homework.”2.對話標(biāo)簽在后“I would like to go with you, but I havent finished my homework.”She

8、 said.三、對話標(biāo)簽的三個位置3.對話標(biāo)簽在句子中間“I would like to go with you,”she said, “but I havent finished my homework.”注意：對話標(biāo)簽在后或者在句子中間時（第2,3種情況），如果主語是名詞，則可倒裝也可不倒裝。而代詞不可以倒裝，said she是錯誤的。“I would like to go with you, but I havent finished my homework.”said Emily（或者Emily said.）“I would like to go with you,”said Emil

9、y/ Emily said, “but I havent finished my homework.”1.廢話連篇，對情節(jié)發(fā)展和刻畫人物沒有幫助。“Hey, how are you?” “Im fine, how are you?”“How is the weather?” “Terrific! Nice day for a walk, isnt it?”四、對話描寫常見“四大錯誤2.追求花哨，過度使用對話標(biāo)簽“That is fantastic news,” he said happily.此句中完全沒有必要加上一個happily來表達(dá)說的方式，因?yàn)榫渲械膄antastic一詞足以說明說話人

10、了表情，過度強(qiáng)調(diào)會讓讀者的注意力集中在“說話的方式”而不是“說話的內(nèi)容”。建議改為：“That is fantastic news！” he said/screamed/exclaimed. 一個感嘆號和一個fantastic已經(jīng)足以讓讀者想象當(dāng)時的情景。適當(dāng)?shù)摹八囆g(shù)留白”也是需要的，這樣會留給讀者想象的空間。還有一種避免過度的dialogue tags的方法是運(yùn)用“動作描寫”，尤其是表情上動作來取而代之。如：Her eyes reflected the candlelight as she smiled at her son.“Everyone is unique. Just follow

11、your heart and be yourself!”當(dāng)她對兒子微笑時，她的眼睛反射著燭光。 “每個人都是獨(dú)一無二的。 只要跟隨你的心，做你自己！”3用詞不當(dāng)，錯誤使用對話標(biāo)簽I cant believe it, Emma gasped. (gasp意思為“喘氣”)Thats funny, Henry chuckled. (chuckled.意思為“輕笑”)評析：以上兩句話也是在大量的學(xué)生習(xí)作中發(fā)現(xiàn)的。這里把動作描寫和動作標(biāo)簽混淆了，試想誰能gasp（喘息）、chuckle（輕笑）出一句話？除非他或她有特異功能。（Question tag+分詞做伴隨狀況）請?zhí)貏e關(guān)注以上對話的標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號。糾正方

12、法如下：I cant believe it, Emmasaid with a gasp.（對話標(biāo)簽Emma said+ with介詞短語）Emma gasped.I cant believe it.（動作描寫+句號）I cant believe it.Emma gasped.（對話句+動作描寫,注意對話句式句號）Thats funny!Henrychuckled.（感嘆句結(jié)束+動作描寫）Thats funny, Henrysaid, chuckling.4.對話標(biāo)簽多此一舉：對話對象十分明確，仍使用對話標(biāo)簽“I told you already,” I said, glaring.評析：此句貌

13、似豪華，其實(shí)對話中的主語“I”已經(jīng)清晰地說明了說話者，完全沒有必要用對話標(biāo)簽“I said”來說說話對象。糾正方法：加上一點(diǎn)動作描寫就可以避免這種錯誤，并且提升語言的生動性。I glared at him.“I told you already.”第一種：加語氣“I would love to,” said Emilyin a pleasant tone.“我很樂意這樣做，”艾米麗用一種愉快的語氣說。這里用到了“in a pleasant tone.”，即“用一種愉快的語氣”，基本結(jié)構(gòu)為：in a/an+形容詞+tone如：in apleasant愉悅的/firm堅定的/rude粗魯?shù)?sad

14、悲傷的tone也可以用in a tone of +名詞的搭配如：in a tone ofsurprise用一種驚訝的語氣 in a tone of curiosity用一種好奇的語氣in a tone of impatience用一種不耐煩的語氣 in a tone of command用一種命令的語氣五、如何讓對話更生動第二種：加嗓音“I didnt mean to,” she murmuredin a low voice.“我不是故意的，”她低聲說。這里用到了“in a low voice”，即“小聲地說道”或者“用一種.聲音”，基本結(jié)構(gòu)是：in a/an+形容詞+voice如：in ahigh /low / sweet/loud/soft /weakvoice 用一個高/低/甜/響亮/軟/弱的聲音第三種：加情感“I.I. dont think Im right for the part,”I repliedwith embarrassment.“我.我.認(rèn)為我不適合這個角色，”我尷尬地回答。這里用到了“with embarr