非謂語動詞使英語書面表達(dá)多樣化-精講版課件

1、Welcome Enjoy English, Enjoy life!Writing寫作的多樣性第六檔（很好）（第一篇1315分，第二篇2225分）：完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。1.覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。2.應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯。3.具有較強(qiáng)的書面表達(dá)能力，使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級句子，基本無語法或詞匯錯誤。4.有效地使用了語句間的連接成分、全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊、篇章布局合理。高考英語寫作第六檔要求 1 漢語式英語 2 句式單一 平鋪直敘 3 無過渡語Common mistakes in writing1如何在寫作中避免句式單一some skills on writing ? 方

2、法一.使用非謂語動詞,代詞或從句使句子簡潔高檔 方法二. 巧 用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)增強(qiáng)句子的表現(xiàn)力. 方法三. 嘗試多樣化表達(dá)方式，如：復(fù)合句，強(qiáng)調(diào)句或with 的結(jié)構(gòu)等。Rewrite the sentences with non-predicate (非謂語動詞) 1. They arrived at the school. They felt the happy atmosphere. 2. I am given another chance. I will succeed.3. He wants to improve his English. He studies hard. 方法一. 1.使用

3、非謂語動詞使句子簡潔高檔When they arrived at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere. Arriving at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere.If I am given another chance, I will succeed.Given another chance, I will succeed. In order to /To improve his English, he studies hard.方法一. 1.使用非謂語動詞使句子簡潔高檔Complete th

4、e sentences with non-predicate (非謂語動詞)聽到這個消息,他們變的很激動. _the news, they got/became excited.2. 盡管被告知許多遍,他仍然重復(fù)這個錯. _many times, he still repeated the mistake. 3.除非被邀請發(fā)言,你應(yīng)該在會議上保持沉默. Unless _to speak, you should keep silent at the meeting.Hearing Having been toldinvitedTranslate the following sentences b

5、y using non-predicate (非謂語動詞)1.面對困難時，他從不放棄。2.引入市場后，該產(chǎn)品大獲成功。3.做完作業(yè)后，他回家了。Faced with/Facing difficulties, he never gives up.Introduced to the market, the product made a great success. Having finished his homework, he returned/went back home. 方法一. 2.使用代詞或從句使句子簡潔高檔他為他的失敗找了許多借口，但是沒有一個有說服力。1.Wordy: He gav

6、e many excuses for the failure, but the excuses he gave were not convincing. 2.Concise: He gave many excuses for the failure, but none of them was convincing. 3.Or another more advanced sentence: He gave many excuses for the failure, none of which was convincing. 方法二. 巧用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)增強(qiáng)句子的表現(xiàn)力1. He didnt reali

7、ze his foolishness until he returned home. Not until2.We can save the earth by changing the way we live. Only 3. The clock tower stands on the other side of the street. On the other side of the streetComplete the sentences he returned home did he realize his foolishness.by changing the way we live c

8、an we save the earth.stands the clock tower.方法二. 巧用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)增強(qiáng)句子的表現(xiàn)力Translate the sentences by using Inverted Sentences(倒裝句)1. 他從不說關(guān)于他家庭的事. 2. 只有我們每個人都意識到水的重要性, 我們才能生活得更好. 3.只有用這種方式, 我們才能有足夠的精力好好學(xué)習(xí).Never did he speak about his own family.Only when each of us realizes the importance of water can we live a

9、 better life.Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.方法二. 巧用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)增強(qiáng)句子的表現(xiàn)力4. 他是個孩子，卻知道很多。5. 墻上有個通知，上面寫著“請節(jié)約用水”.Child as he is, he knows a lot.On the wall is a notice saying “Please Save Water”. 方法二. 巧用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)增強(qiáng)句子的表現(xiàn)力Describe the character by using Inverted Sentence(倒裝句)Poor as he was,

10、he was happy.方法二. 巧用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)增強(qiáng)句子的表現(xiàn)力1.Poor as the environment is , they all study hard.方法二. 巧用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)增強(qiáng)句子的表現(xiàn)力方法三. 嘗試多樣化表達(dá)方式我哥哥騎車載著我。1.My elder brother was riding and I sat on the seat behind .(并列簡單句)2. My elder brother was riding with_. 從句和with 結(jié)構(gòu)的互換1.As spring comes on ,trees turn green .2.With _, trees t

11、urn green. me sitting in the seat behind spring coming on 方法三. 嘗試多樣化表達(dá)方式 他于昨天下午五點(diǎn)到達(dá)這里。1.He came here at 5:00 p.m. yesterday. (一般句式)2.He did not come here until 5:00p.m. yesterday. (否定句) 3.Not until/till 5:00 p.m. did he come here yesterday.(倒裝句) 4.It was at/ not until 5:00 p.m. that he came here yes

12、terday.(強(qiáng)調(diào)句) 5.It was 5:00 p.m. when he came here yesterday. (定語從句)方法三. 嘗試多樣化表達(dá)方式 他成功地通過了，這使我們感到很驚訝。1.He succeeded /was successful (in) passing the exam , which surprised us greatly. (非限定性定語從句)2. The fact that he succeeded /was successful (in) passing the exam surprised us greatly. (同位語從句)3. We felt

13、 greatly surprised (that )he succeeded /was successful (in) passing the exam. (賓語從句)方法三. 嘗試多樣化表達(dá)方式 他成功地通過了，這使我們感到很驚訝。4.What surprised us greatly was that he succeeded/was successful (in) passing the exam. (主語從句&表語從句)5.It was surprising that he succeeded /was successful (in) passing the exam. (主語從句)U

14、se different ways to describe the picture 方法三. 嘗試多樣化表達(dá)方式一就受到歡迎1.Lian Zhan and his wife/The Lians were warmly welcomed directly/ the moment/as soon as /when they arrived at the airport. 2.On arriving/On their arrival at the airport , Lian Zhan and his wife were warmly welcomed.3.No sooner had Lian Zh

15、an and his wife arrived at the airport than they received a warm welcome.4.Hardly had Lian Zhan and his wife arrived at the airport when they received a warm welcome.方法三. 嘗試多樣化表達(dá)方式 In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast.All these make peoples lives convenient, pleasant and colorful._

16、which_ With the rapid development of _ _ _ _ so _ that_1.In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast, makes peoples lives convenient, pleasant . Beijing, peoples lives are becoming more and more convenient, pleasant and colorful in recent years. 4.Nowadays, Beijing is developing fast peopl

17、es lives are getting more convenient, pleasant and colorful.3.AsBeijing develops rapidly, peoples lives Translate the sentences:我校是一所廣東省重點(diǎn)中學(xué)， 位于揭陽市東面,占地約200多畝。校園很美,綠樹成蔭。Our school ,(which is )a key school in Guangdong Province, lies in the east of Jieyang , covering an area of over 200 mu. It is ver

18、y beautiful ,with many trees and flowers.Maybe we can use another way to express!East of Jieyang lies our school, (which is )a key school of Guangdong Province, with an area of more than 200 mu. It is beautiful, surrounded with many trees.Have a try!表達(dá)多樣文章增“靚”一. 使用非謂語動詞,代詞或從句使句子簡潔高檔。二. 巧用倒裝增強(qiáng)句子表現(xiàn)力。三

19、. 嘗試多樣化表達(dá)方式,如：復(fù)合句，強(qiáng)調(diào)句或with 結(jié)構(gòu)等。Practice makes perfectSummaryHave another try: 今天,我校舉行建校十周年慶典活動.假如你是我校廣播站的記者,請你根據(jù)下面要點(diǎn)提示寫一篇新聞報(bào)道. 要點(diǎn)提示:校園慶典情況1. 進(jìn)校園，氛圍濃2. 到處是鮮花，校友交談的情景學(xué)?，F(xiàn)況1.現(xiàn)有200多名老師,近4000學(xué)生.2. 教師工作苦,樂于奉獻(xiàn)。3. 每年有許多學(xué)生被重點(diǎn)大學(xué)錄取。你的感想 努力學(xué)習(xí), 明天母校以我為榮。要求:1. 五個句子（不包括所給的第一句）。 2. 內(nèi)容適當(dāng)發(fā)揮, 注意 行文連貫。 3. 適當(dāng)使用所講方法。 4.開頭語已給好。 Today, our school celebrated its tenth birthday AssignmentPlease finish the composition after class.One possible vers