初中英語-情感表達(dá)課件

1、PART THREE第三篇寫作妙解篇話題(三)情感表達(dá)PART THREE第三篇寫作妙解篇話題(三)情感表達(dá)典例分析初中生活即將結(jié)束。假如你是李平,請以“Thanks to”為題,用英語寫一篇短文給某英語網(wǎng)站投稿,談?wù)劤踔腥昴阕钕敫兄x誰,敘述一件他/她曾經(jīng)幫助過你的事,以及你的感受。 提示詞語 teacher, problem, help, encourage, moved 提示問題Who do you want to say thanks to?What did he/she do to help you?How did you feel? 典例分析初中生活即將結(jié)束。假如你是李平,請以“T

2、hanks _【寫作架構(gòu)】【思路點撥】1.要點提煉:本文是一篇記敘文,主題是情感表達(dá)。根據(jù)題目要求,可以提煉出3個要點:(1)介紹你想要感謝的人(2)描述他/她曾經(jīng)幫助你的事情(3)描寫你的感受2.時態(tài):一般過去時3.人稱:第三人稱和第一人稱【寫作架構(gòu)】【思路點撥】【基礎(chǔ)寫作】.根據(jù)所給提示詞補全下列各句1.我想對我的英語老師表示感謝。(say thanks to)I want to my English teacher.2.我的英語老師既善良又熱心。(not onlybut also)My English teacher is .3.在過去的三年里,我的英語老師對我的幫助很大。(in the

3、 past three years)My English teacher .say thanks tonot only kind but also warm-heartedhas helped me so much in the past three years【基礎(chǔ)寫作】say thanks tonot only ki4.她鼓勵我堅持努力學(xué)習(xí)。(encourageto)She .5.她幫我制定學(xué)習(xí)計劃并且時不時幫助我學(xué)英語。(from time to time)She and .encouraged me to keep studying hardhelped me make a study

4、 plan helped me with my English from time to time4.她鼓勵我堅持努力學(xué)習(xí)。(encourageto)en.句子升格按括號中的要求改寫句子。6.While I was in Grade 7, my English was poor.(用At the beginning of middle school改寫句子, 意思不變)_7.My English teacher shows us her kindness and love.(改為被動語態(tài))_8.I want to say thanks to my teacher because she has

5、 helped me a lot in the past three years.(用thanks for改寫句子,意思不變)_At the beginning of middle school, my English was poor.Kindness and love are shown to us by my English teacher.Thanks for having helped me a lot in the past three years.句子升格At the beginning of midd9.I felt lucky.I had her as my teacher.

6、(用to do連接兩個句子)_10.I just want to say thanks to her because she has helped me a lot.(用the reason whyis that改寫句子)_I felt lucky to have her as my teacher.The reason why I want to say thanks to her is that she has helped me a lot.9.I felt lucky.I had her as my【連句成文】Thanks to my English teacher I want to

7、 say thanks to my English teacher.My English teacher is very kind and warm-hearted.She has helped me so much in the past three years with my English study. When I first came to middle school, my English was very poor.I had lots of problems and wasnt interested in English at all.One day, my English t

8、eacher asked me to go to her office after school.She asked me about my problems and why I didnt like English.She was very friendly and patient.She encouraged me to keep studying hard.We made a plan for my English studying.After that, she started to help me from time to time. I was so moved by her ki

9、ndness.I felt that I was so lucky that I had her as my English teacher.I am going to leave school soon.I just want to say thanks to her for all her help.【連句成文】拓展積累【表達(dá)感想的句子】1.I want to say sorry to my English teacher.2.I am regretful to make my English teacher angry.3.My English teacher is the person

10、 that I want to remember forever.【描寫她/他對我做的事的句子】1.She encouraged me to keep trying hard and not to give up.2.He helped me make a plan and helped me to improve my math from time to time.3.With her help, my math has improved much.4.She enlightened me and made me full of creative ideas.5.She helped me

11、find my confidence and dare to overcome the difficulties.拓展積累【表達(dá)感想的句子】【描寫她/他對我做的事的句子】【描述我的感受的句子】1.Words cant express how happy I am.2.I will remember Mr.Zhang forever who has helped me develop good learning habits and encouraged me to achieve my dream.3.I was so moved by her kindness and patience th

12、at I am so thankful to her for her help.【描述我的感受的句子】實戰(zhàn)演練假如你是李華,即將結(jié)束在美國的交換學(xué)習(xí),回國前你想給住家媽媽 Sarah寫一封感謝信,告訴她你什么時候回國,為什么感謝她,以及你的感受。提示詞語 help, care, communicate, drive to hospital, own family 提示問題When are you going to leave? Why do you want to say “thank you” to her? How do you feel?實戰(zhàn)演練假如你是李華,即將結(jié)束在美國的交換學(xué)習(xí),回

13、國前你想給Dear Sarah, Im writing to deliver my thanks to you._ Thanks again for taking care of me so well.Yours, Li Hua Dear Sarah, One possible version:Dear Sarah, Im writing to deliver my thanks to you.I am going to leave the US next Tuesday morning. I really want to say thanks to you because of your help and care during my stay here.I will never forget that you offered to help when I had difficulty in communicating with others in English.Whats more, I will never forget that you drove me to the hospital in the late night wh