概要寫作15-Shyness-Lyx(課件)-高考英語作文新題型

1、 概要寫作文本內容與結構解讀寫作思路解讀寫作思路微技能之策略表達微技能之同義/近義詞（組）替換篇牛刀小試參考范文欣賞 概要寫作體裁：主題：結構：1.文本內容與結構解讀體裁：主題：結構：1.文本內容與結構解讀體裁：說明文主題： shyness結構：Para 1Para 3Para 2Para 41.文本內容與結構解讀Para 5體裁：說明文主題： shyness結構：Para 1Par閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內容寫一篇60詞左右的內容概要。 Are you shy? If you are, you are not alone. In fact, close to 50 percent of peop

2、le are shy. Almost 80 percent of people feel shy at some point in their lives. These days, shyness is becoming more and more common. Now, scientists are trying to understand shyness. They have some interesting ideas about why people are shy. Is it possible to be born shy? Many scientists say yes. Th

3、ey say 15 to 20 percent of babies behave shyly. These babies are a little quieter and more watchful than other babies. Interestingly, these shy babies usually have shy parents. As a result, scientists think that some shyness is genetic.Family size might cause people to be shy as well. Scientists at

4、Harvard University studied shy children. They found 66 percent of them had older brothers and sisters. As a result, they became shy. At the same time, children with no brothers and sisters may be shy as well. Growing up alone, they often play by themselves. They are not able to learn the same social

5、 skills as children from big families. You may also be shy because of where you were born. When scientists studied shyness in different countries, they found surprising differences. In Japan, most people said they were shy. But in Israel, only one of three people said so. What explains the differenc

6、e? One scientist says the Japanese and Israelis have different opinions of failure. In Japan, when people do not succeed, they feel bad about themselves. They blame themselves for their failure. In Israel, the opposite is true. Israelis often blame failure on outside reasons, such as family, teacher

7、s, friends, or bad luck. In Israel, freedom of opinion and risk taking are strongly supported. This may be why Israelis worry less about failure and are less shy.For shy people, it can be difficult to make friends, speak in class, and even get a good job. But scientists say you can get over your shy

8、ness. They suggest trying new things and practicing conversation. And dont forget-if you are shy, you are not the only one. cause 1phenomenon evaluation/suggestioncause 2cause 3閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內容寫一篇60詞左右的內容概要。 A寫作思路解讀 Para. 1 Are you shy? If you are, you are not alone. In fact, close to 50 percent of peop

9、le are shy. Almost 80 percent of people feel shy at some point in their lives. These days, shyness is becoming more and more common. Now, scientists are trying to understand shyness. They have some interesting ideas about why people are shy. 要點1: Shyness is becoming more and more common, and scienti

10、sts have some interesting ideas about why people are shy寫作思路解讀 Para. 1 Are you shy?寫作思路解讀 Para. 2: Is it possible to be born shy? Many scientists say yes. They say 15 to 20 percent of babies behave shyly. These babies are a little quieter and more watchful than other babies. Interestingly, these shy

11、 babies usually have shy parents. As a result, scientists think that some shyness is genetic.要點2:Some shyness is genetic.總分總結構寫作思路解讀 Para. 2: Is it possibl寫作思路解讀 Para. 3: Family size might cause people to be shy as well. Scientists at Harvard University studied shy children. They found 66 percent of

12、 them had older brothers and sisters. As a result, they became shy. At the same time, children with no brothers and sisters may be shy as well. Growing up alone, they often play by themselves. They are not able to learn the same social skills as children from big families. 要點3: Family size might cau

13、se people to be shy as well.主 題 句寫作思路解讀 Para. 3: Family size m寫作思路解讀Para. 4: You may also be shy because of where you were born. When scientists studied shyness in different countries, they found surprising differences. In Japan, most people said they were shy. But in Israel, only one of three peopl

14、e said so. What explains the difference? One scientist says the Japanese and Israelis have different opinions of failure. In Japan, when people do not succeed, they feel bad about themselves. They blame themselves for their failure. In Israel, the opposite is true. Israelis often blame failure on ou

15、tside reasons, such as family, teachers, friends, or bad luck. In Israel, freedom of opinion and risk taking are strongly supported. This may be why Israelis worry less about failure and are less shy.要點4: You may also be shy because of where you were born, as different countries/cultures shape peopl

16、es attitudes towards failure, which affects shyness.主 題 句寫作思路解讀Para. 4: You may also be寫作思路解讀Para. 5: For shy people, it can be difficult to make friends, speak in class, and even get a good job. But scientists say you can get over your shyness. They suggest trying new things and practicing conversa

17、tion. And dont forgetif you are shy, you are not the only one.要點5: Shyness can cause people some trouble, but scientists say you can get over your shyness by trying new things and practicing conversation.寫作思路解讀Para. 5: For shy people,寫作思路解讀Shyness is becoming more and more common, and scientists hav

18、e some interesting ideas about why people are shy. Some shyness is genetic. Family size might cause people to be shy as well. You may also be shy because of where you were born, as different countries/cultures shape peoples attitudes towards failure, which affects shyness. Shyness can cause people s

19、ome trouble, but scientists say you can get over your shyness by trying new things and practicing conversation.若將上述的所有要點連句成文，便得到了這樣一段概要：點評：該概要完全覆蓋了文章全部要點，但是有多處表達抄襲原文。仔細觀察，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)本概要多處涉及表達原因的內容， 因此，在表達微技能中，我們將聚焦如何表達因果關系。寫作思路解讀Shyness is becoming more3.表達微技能之因果關系12 因果關系詞原因account for; be a result/cause o

20、f; be a (leading/major) cause of; be responsible for; be a contributing factor; be to blame（for); lie in ; play a (major) role/part in; result from; as a result/consequence of; because ofdue to; owing to; on account of; thanks to結果bring about; cause sb to do; contribute to lead to; give rise to; as

21、a result; accordingly; consequently; therefore; thus; so; so that3.表達微技能之因果關系12 一、根據(jù)要求完成下列句子改寫和翻譯1.不同的文化造就了人們對于失敗的不同態(tài)度，因此，也造成了人們不同程度的害羞。_ the fact that different cultures shape peoples different attitudes to failure, people growing up in some cultures tend to be more shy than others. Different cultu

22、res shape peoples different attitudes to failure. _, people growing up in some cultures tend to be more shy than others.5.牛刀小試Due to; Owing toAs a result; As a consequence;Consequently;Therefore一、根據(jù)要求完成下列句子改寫和翻譯5.牛刀小試Due to;2. 因特網(wǎng)的廣泛使用引起了社會的巨大變化。 The popularity of the Internet _ enormous changes in

23、society. The Internet is being widely used, which _. (用非限制性定語從句) The Internet is being widely used,_. (用現(xiàn)在分詞作結果狀語) 5.牛刀小試has brought abouthas brought about enormous changes in societybringing about enormous changes in society2. 因特網(wǎng)的廣泛使用引起了社會的巨大變化。5.牛刀小試ha3. 以下是幾個可能導致害羞的原因。（一句多譯） _. (account for) _.(

24、contribute to) _.(responsible for) 5.牛刀小試Here are some possible reasons accounting for shynessThe following are the possible reasons contributing to shynessThe following may be the factors responsible for shyness3. 以下是幾個可能導致害羞的原因。（一句多譯）5.牛刀小試4. 家庭規(guī)模的大小也可能會導致害羞。（一句多譯）_. (lead to) _. (cause sb. to do)

25、 _. (play a part in) 5.牛刀小試Family size can also lead to some shynessFamily size may also cause people to be shyFamily size may also play a part in peoples shyness.概要寫作1.5 Shyness -Lyx（課件）-高考英語作文新題型概要寫作1.5 Shyness -Lyx（課件）-高考英語作文新題型4. 家庭規(guī)模的大小也可能會導致害羞。（一句多譯）5.牛刀小5. 大量攝入鹽被認為會引起高血壓。(一句多譯)_. (give rise to) _. (be to blame) _. (a contributing factor) 5.牛刀小試High intake of sa