高考英語短文改錯專項訓(xùn)練含答案解析,版

.PAGE.高考英語短文改錯專項訓(xùn)練〔含答案1.[2016·全國新課標I]短文改錯〔10分Myuncleistheownerofarestaurantclosetothat1live.Thoughnotverybig,buttherestaurantispopularinourarea.Itisalwayscrowdedwithcustomersatmealtimes.SomepeopleevenhadtowaitoutsideMyuncletellsmethatthekeytohissuccessishonest.Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetablesorhighqualityoilareusingforcooking.Myunclesaysthatheneverdreamsbecomingrichintheshortperiodoftime.Instead,hehopesthatourbusinesswillgrowsteady.2.[2016·全國新課標II]短文改錯〔共10小題,每小題1分,滿分10分Thesummerholidayiscoming.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabouthowtododuringtheholiday.Wecanchosebetweenstayingathomeandtakeatrip.Ifwestayathome,itiscomfortablebutthereisnoneedtospendmoney.Butinthatcase,wewilllearnlittleaboutworld.Ifwegoonatripabroad,wecanbroadenyouviewandgainknowledgeswecannotgetfrombooks.Someclassmatessuggestwecangotoplacesofinterestnearby.Ithoughtthatitisagoodidea.Itdoesnotcostmany,yetwecanstilllearnalot.3.[2016·全國新課標III]短文改錯〔共10小題；每小題1分,滿分10分Theteenageyearfrom13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Theywerealsothebestandworseyearsinmylife.Atthefirst,IthoughtIkneweverythingandcouldmakedecisionsbyyourself.However,myparentsdidn’tseemtothinksuch.Theyalwaystellmewhattodoandhowtodoit.Atonetime,Ievenfeltmyparentscouldn’tunderstandmesoIhopedIcouldbefreelyfromthem.IshowedthemIwasindependentbywearstrangeclothes.NowIamleavinghometocollege.Atlast,Iwillbeonmyown,butIstillwanttohavemyparentstoturntowheneverneedhelp.4.[2016·XX]短文改錯〔共10小題；每小題1分,滿分10分ItisMother’sDaytoday.Thoughit’sawesternfestival,it’spopularinChinanow.Momhasafull-timejob,soshehastodomostofthehouseworks.Sheisagreatmother.BothDadorIplannedtodosomethingonMother’sDay.Wegetupearlyinthemorning.Dadcleanedthehouse,andthenwentonshopping.Whenhecameback,Ifoundabunchofflowersinherhand.IaskedMomtostayinthesittingroomandIcookedinkitchen.ThedisheswhatIcookedwereMom’sfavoritiest.Atdinner,wesaidtoher,"HappyMother’sDay！"Momwasgratefulandmoving.5.[2016·XX]短文改錯〔共10小題；每小題1分,滿分10分WhenIwasaveryyoungchildren,myfathercreatedaregularpracticeIrememberwellyearslate.Everytimehearrivedhomeatendoftheday,we’dgreethetatthedoor.Hewouldaskwhowewasandpretendnottoknowingus,Thenheandmymotherwouldhavehadadrinkwhilesheprepareddinnerandtheywouldtalkabouthisdayandhers.Whiletheychat,myfatherwouldliftmysisterandmeuptositinthetopofthefridge.Itwasbothexcitedandfrighteningtobeupthere！MysisterandIthoughthewassocoolforputtingusthere.2015年高考試題分項解析之專題短文改錯1.[2015·XX]短文改錯〔共10小題；每小題1.5分,滿分15分Mysoccercoachretiredinlastweek.Iwantedtodoanythingspecialforhimathisretirementparty.Mymummakesthebetterbiscuitsintheworld,soIdecidetoaskherforhelp.Mumtaughtmesomebasicstepofbaking.Iinsistedondoingmostofthebakingmyself.Ithoughtthebiscuitswerereallywell.MyonlymistakewasthatIdroppedsomeonthefloorafterIwaspackingthemup.Ataparty,mycoach,withabiscuitinhismouth,askedsurprisinglywhomadethemandjoked,"Imighthavetoretireagainnextyearjustgetsomemoreofthesebiscuits."Myfavoritepictureatthepartyisofmycoachandmeenjoythebiscuitswithhappylaughter!2.[2015·XX]短文改錯〔共10小題；每小題1.5分,共15分Hi,Janice,It'sbeenamonthsinceIcametothisnewschoolandIreallywantsharewithyousomeoftheproblemsIhavebeenexperiencing.AsItellyoulasttime,Imadethreenewfriendhere.Wehangouttogetherduringlunchandafterschool.We'vebeenspendingalotoftimesinginkaraokebars.It'sbeenthreeSaturdaysnowanditreallycostsmemany.AndIstartedtoseethisasatime—wastingactivity!Infact,Idon’tliketogoanymore,soI’mafraidI’lllosetheirfriendship.HowdoyouthinkIshoulddo?Ifyouareme,wouldyoutalktohim?Pleasehelpwithmeandgivemesomeadvice.Grace3.[2015·XX]短文改錯〔共10小題；每小題1分,滿分10分Myoldclassroomwasinterestingbecausethreesideoftheclassroomweremadefromglass.Ienjoyedsitclosetothewindowsandlookingattheview.Ontheleft-handsideoftheclass,Icouldeasyseethefootballfield.Inthemornings,itwasfullofstudentsexercising.Theviewfromthebackoftheclassroomisalsosplendid.Closetotheschooltherewasabeautifulparkwithmanytreesaroundthem.Fartherinthedistance,Icouldnotenjoytheviewofsnowymountains.Ontherightsideoftheclasswastheroad.Iwasalwaysinterestedtoseethedriversinhurryinthemorning.ThepositionoftheclassroomwithitsviewmademefeltlikeIwasdreaming.IfIwasonlyachildwhenIstudiedinthatclassroom,Iwillneverforgetit.4.[2015·新課標全國II]Oneday,littleTonywenttoashoppingcenterwithhisparent.Itwasverycrowded.Tonysawatoyonashopwindow.Helikeditsoverymuchthathequicklywalkedintotheshop.Afterlooksatthetoyforsometime,heturnedaroundandfoundwherehisparentsweremissing.Tonywasscaredandbeguntocry.Awomansawhimdryingandtellinghimtowaitoutsideashop.Fiveminuteslater,Tonysawparents.Momsaid,"Hownicetoseeyouagain!DadandIwereterribleworried."Tonypromisedherthatthiswouldneverhappenagain.5.[2015·新課標全國I]WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity,butImissmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanorthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunately,onthedevelopmentofindustrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriouslyproblem.Theairswebreatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier.Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustfoundwaystoprotecty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其解題方法如下：

1.動詞錯誤的發(fā)現(xiàn)與解決

英語中有許多的短語動詞,是很難從字面上判斷其意義的。其中與介詞構(gòu)成短語的動詞是最常見的。我們在分析題目的時候,發(fā)現(xiàn)有動賓搭配的時候,應(yīng)該考慮該動詞是否是一個短語動詞,并進而分析構(gòu)成該短語動詞的介詞有無遺漏。對于短語動詞的熟悉是一個長期積累的過程,需要隨時總結(jié)與記憶。以下是考試中常見到的短語動詞：

accountfor；addupto；backup；breakdown；breakawayfrom；bleakout；breakup；breakin；breakoff；bringabout；bringup；bringout；bringdown；buildup；calloff；callfor；callon；carryout；checkin；clearup；comeoff；comearound；counton；cutdown；cutoff；doawaywith；dwellon；fallbackon；fallout；getover；getoutof；getat；giveout；giveup；giveoff；hangon；holdback；keepbackfrom；keepupwith；layoff；laydown；liveupto；lookinto；lookforwardto；lookover；makeup；makeout；passaway；putupwith；roleout；runoutof；setabout；takeover；takeup；takein；takeoff；turnup；turnout；workout等。

還有一種?？嫉膭釉~的用法就是語態(tài)。在所分析的文字中包含謂語動詞,那么應(yīng)該分析是否是這方面的問題。其中應(yīng)該重點分析主語與謂語動詞的關(guān)系是主動還是被動。

2．連接詞錯誤的發(fā)現(xiàn)與解決

例：However,asecondpersonthoughtthatthiswasmoreaquestionofcivilizedbehaviorasgoodmanners．

本題所考查的就是比較連接詞的用法。從前文的more我們就可以看出,下文的as是不恰當(dāng)?shù)?正確的答案應(yīng)是比較連接詞than。一般來說,比較連接詞所考查的重點集中在as與than的用法上。句意中是否還有比較意義是很容易辨別的,我們一旦覺察到句子有比較的意思,就應(yīng)考慮是否是as與than的用法混淆。

此外定語從句的連接詞也是要特別注意的。我們看20XX6月的第74題：Instead,thisotherpersontoldusastory,ithesaidwasquitewellknown．在這里,句子的后半段很明顯是一個非限制性的定語從句,所以應(yīng)將it改為which.非限制性的定語從句的連接詞在近幾年的考試中反復(fù)出現(xiàn),應(yīng)該引起我們的重視。解決此類問題的方法是,凡是發(fā)現(xiàn)有復(fù)合句的分析對象,首先就要考慮從句的連接詞。首先看是否有連接詞,其次看連接詞是否正確,尤其是which與that的不同應(yīng)用。

3．語言環(huán)境類錯誤的發(fā)現(xiàn)與解決

從歷年的考題來看,語言環(huán)境類的錯誤是最有章可循的。這類錯誤一般是一行中的關(guān)鍵詞與上下文所體現(xiàn)出來的意思完全相反。此類題的解決也較簡單,那就是將不符合文意的詞改為它的反義詞即可。如第54題就是屬于語境錯誤。句意：我認為我什么都知道,可以自己拿主意了。這里指作者自己做決定,根據(jù)主語I可知,應(yīng)該用myself,故把yourself改為myself。4.[2016·XX]短文改錯〔共10小題；每小題1分,滿分10分[答案]1.sobut2.houseworkshousework3.orand4.getgot5.去掉on6.herhis7.在in和kitchen之間加the8.whatthat/which<或去掉what>9.favoritestfavorite10.movingmoved[名師點睛]表示情感的現(xiàn)在分詞和過去分詞surprising令人驚訝的,surprised感到驚訝；frightening令人害怕的,frightened感到害怕；moving令人感動的,moved感動；exciting令人興奮的,excited感到興奮；boring令人厭煩的,bored感到厭煩；annoying令人煩惱的,annoyed感到煩惱的?，F(xiàn)在分詞的主語通常指事物；過去分詞的主語通常指人。比如第10小題movingmoved句意：媽媽即感激有感動。故把movingmoved。考點：考查短文改錯5.[2016·XX]短文改錯〔共10小題；每小題1分,滿分10分66.[答案]children改成child考點：考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)67.[答案]late改成later[解析]試題分析：late是形容詞"遲的",或副詞"遲地",但是"一段時間后面應(yīng)該接later",表示"……時間以后"。故late改成later。考點：考查副詞68.[答案]at后面加the考點：考查冠詞69.[答案]her改成him[解析]試題分析：根據(jù)上文可知我們每天在門口迎接爸爸。用him指代myfather,作greet的賓語。故her改成him?？键c：考查代詞70.[答案]was改成were[解析]試題分析：這句話的主語是we,謂語用復(fù)數(shù),而且這篇文章是作者回憶小時候的事情,用一般過去時。故was改成were。考點：考查主謂一致71.[答案]knowing改成know[解析]試題分析：pretend后面接不定式作賓語,這里是否定式pretendnottodo。故knowing改成know?？键c：考查動詞不定式72.[答案]去掉had[解析]試題分析：句意：他和我媽媽會喝些東西。這里不是虛擬語氣,不能用wouldhavedone,用woulddo表示"過去常常做"。故去掉had?？键c：考查動詞形式73.[答案]chat改成chatted[解析]試題分析：根據(jù)主句內(nèi)容myfatherwouldliftmysister可知while引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句用一般過去時。故chat改成chatted?？键c：考查動詞時態(tài)74.[答案]in改成on考點：考查介詞75.[答案]excited改成exciting[解析]試題分析：這句話的主語是形式主語it,真正的主語是tobeupthere,主語是物的時候,表語應(yīng)該用現(xiàn)在分詞形式的形容詞。故excited改成exciting?？键c：考查形容詞[名師點睛]高考短文改錯考點層次一般而言可依次分為詞法的測試、句法的測試和語篇的測試三個層面?？键c層次越高,就越能測試出考生運用語言的能力。低層次的考點往往側(cè)重于語法方面的考查,而高層次的考點往往側(cè)重于考生對文章意義方面的理解。這篇短文主要是一些詞法錯誤,詞法的測試包括：定冠詞和不定冠詞的用法；名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)和名詞的所有格；動詞的時態(tài)、語態(tài)、語氣,情態(tài)動詞和非謂語動詞等；人稱代詞、人稱代詞的格、物主代詞、指示代詞、連接代詞、不定代詞等的用法；介詞的搭配；并列連詞、從屬連詞的用法；形容詞、副詞的區(qū)別以及比較級和最高級的用法；固定搭配和習(xí)慣用法。例如：本題中的66.children改成child〔名詞單復(fù)數(shù)錯誤67.late改成later〔副詞錯誤68.at后面加the〔冠詞錯誤69.her改成him〔代詞錯誤71.knowing改成know〔非謂語動詞錯誤72.去掉had〔虛擬語氣錯誤73.chat改成chatted〔動詞時態(tài)錯誤74.in改成on〔介詞錯誤75.excited改成exciting〔形容詞錯誤2015年高考試題分項解析之專題短文改錯〔答案解析1.[2015·XX]短文改錯〔共10小題；每小題1.5分,滿分15分[答案]76.去掉in77.anything改為something78.better改成best79.decide改成decided80.step改為steps81.well改成good82.after改成when/while83.a改為the84.just后加to85.enjoy改為enjoying[考點定位]考查短文改錯[名師點睛]這篇短文改錯是記敘文,短文的內(nèi)容和學(xué)生的日常生活有關(guān)。錯誤之處的設(shè)置都是平常學(xué)生容易錯的地方?？疾辄c比較全面,各種詞性都考查到了,也涉及到一些語法知識的考查,如：非謂語動詞,時態(tài)等。2.[2015·XX]短文改錯〔共10小題；每小題1.5分,共15分[答案]61.加上to62.tell—told63.friend—friends64.sing—singing65.many—much66.so—but67.How—What68.are—were69.him—them70.去掉with[解析]試題分析：文章主要通過一封求助信,寫出了寫信人的困擾。作者交了三個新朋友,經(jīng)常一起去卡拉OK唱歌,但其實作者并不喜歡這樣,他想知道自己該怎么做才不會失去這段友誼。61.加上to考查動詞want的用法,want用不定式擔(dān)當(dāng)狀語,故加上to。句意為：我真地很想和你分享一下我經(jīng)歷的問題。62.tell—told考查時態(tài)。根據(jù)時間狀語lasttime可知,此句需要用一般過去時,故把tell改成told。句意為正如我上次告訴你的那樣。63.friend—friends考查名詞的復(fù)數(shù)。名詞friend為可數(shù)名詞,其前有three修飾,需要用復(fù)數(shù)形式,故把friend改成friends。句意為：我在這兒交了三個新朋友。64.sing—singing考查動名詞擔(dān)當(dāng)賓語。本句考查句型spend…〔indoingsth結(jié)構(gòu),故把sing改成singing。65.many—much考查代詞。根據(jù)句意,指的是花費很多錢,故用much而非many。句意為：那真的花費很多。66.so--but考查連詞。上一分句意為：我不想再去；下一分句意為：我怕失去他們的友誼,兩個分句之間有轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系,故把so改成but。67.How—What考查疑問詞的選擇。本句中do之后缺少賓語,表示事情,故用what而非how。注意首字母要大寫。68.are—were考查虛擬語氣。根據(jù)句子可知,此處為虛擬語氣,與現(xiàn)在事實不相符,故把are改成were。句意為：如果你是我,…。69.him—them考查代詞。根據(jù)上文可知,作者交了三個朋友,故用them而非him。句意為：你會和他們說嗎？70.去掉with考查動詞。動詞help為及物動詞,其后接賓語時無需加介詞,故去掉with。句意為：請幫幫我,給我一些建議。[考點定位]考查短文糾錯[名師點睛]本篇文章考查學(xué)生的短文糾錯能力。短文糾錯能力考查的范圍較廣,如各類詞類用法和各種語法知識。本篇文章中既考查了詞類用法如：61、63、65、66、69、70題,也考查了學(xué)生的語法知識如：62、64、67、68,涉及多種語法知識。要求考生要通讀全文,把握大意,還要逐讀各句才能找出錯誤所在。3.[2015·XX]短文改錯〔共10小題；每小題1分,滿分10分[答案] 61.side-sides62.from-to63.sit-sitting64.easy-easily65.is-was66.them-it67.not刪除68.inhurry-inahurry69.felt-feel70.If-Although/Though[解析]試題分析：這是一篇介紹教室的文章。 61.side-sides考查名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)。根據(jù)前面的three,此處應(yīng)該使用復(fù)數(shù)形式 62.from-to考查介詞搭配makeof與makefrom兩者都常用在被動語態(tài)中,表示"某物由.構(gòu)成的".makeof的原材料是看的到的,即平常我們說的物理現(xiàn)象,比如Thechairismadeofwood.椅子是有木頭做成的。而makefrom的原材料是看不到的,比如Paperismadefromthetrees.紙張是由木材做成的.是一種化學(xué)變化,從紙上是看不出一棵樹滴. 63.sit-sitting考查動名詞動詞enjoy后接ing形式。 64.easy-easily考查副詞此處的副詞修飾動詞see 65.is-was考查動詞的謂語時態(tài)根據(jù)前后句的謂語時態(tài)都是使用過去的,所以這里面也需要用過去時態(tài)。 66.them-it考查代詞此處的it指代的是學(xué)校。 67.刪除not考查意思是否表否定該句的意思應(yīng)該是表達肯定而不是否定所以要刪除not 68.inhurry-inahurry考查冠詞inahurry意為"立刻",也是一個固定搭配 69.felt-feel考查使役動詞的法。Makesbdosth,是使役動詞的用法。 70.If-Although/Though考查連詞的用法,根據(jù)句意"盡管在我讀書的時候我是一個小孩,但我不會忘記它"表達讓步,而不是條件。而且翻譯為如果意思上也不通。[考點定位]短文改錯[名師點睛]這種題目對語法的要求很高,要求注意上下文的,以及單詞的用法,以及特殊用法、固定搭配等。其實這一些錯誤很有可能是在寫作中會出現(xiàn),所以,加強寫作的練習(xí)對于這一種題目,也是有幫助的。另外,這種題目也可以改編一下,成為語法填空的題目。4.[2015·新課標全國II][答案]71.parent改為parents72.on改為in73.very去掉74.looks改為looking75.where改為that或者去掉where76.begun改為began77.telling改為told78.a改為the79.saw后加his80.terrible改為terribly[考點定位]語法填空。[名師點睛]通過短短的100多個詞,使考生能正確運用各類詞和固定搭配,如動詞、名詞、副詞、代詞和連詞,辨別并改正錯誤?？偟恼f來,本題都是學(xué)生平時書面表達中常見的錯誤。多讀多練習(xí)就能找出問題所在,也能對寫作有幫助。5.[2015·新課標全國I][答案]76.think–thought77.countryside前加the78.or—and79.on—with80.been去掉81.seriously—serious82.airs—air83.much—many84.found—find85.your—our[解析]試題分析：作者是孩子的時候,夢想生活在城市。二作者現(xiàn)在生活在城市,卻向往著家鄉(xiāng),因為那里更少的污染。76.think–thought句意：我認為生活在那兒很快樂。時態(tài)用法錯誤。這里用一般過去時,表示"過去認為"77.countryside前加the句意：但是我想念農(nóng)村的家鄉(xiāng)。這里countryside是特指,故用定冠詞the。78.or—and句意：那里山綠并且空氣新鮮。連詞用法錯誤。前后句為并列關(guān)系,故用連詞and。79.on—with句意：隨著工業(yè)化的發(fā)展。短語搭配錯誤。短語withthedevelopmentof隨著……的發(fā)展。80.been去掉句意：許多研究表明。語態(tài)用法錯誤。主語與動詞為主動關(guān)系,這里不需要用被動語態(tài)。81.seriously—serious句意：全球變暖已經(jīng)成為嚴重的問題。詞性用法錯誤。修飾名詞,前面用形容詞修飾。82.airs—air句意：我們呼吸的空氣變得越來越臟。名詞用法錯誤。名詞air為不可數(shù)名詞。83.much—many句意：許多罕見的動物已經(jīng)消失。名詞animal為可數(shù)名詞,故用many修飾。84.found—find句意：我們必須找到方法來保護我們的地球。動詞用法錯誤。情態(tài)動詞must后接動詞原形。85.your—our句意：我們必須找到方法來保護我們的地球。代詞用法錯誤。這里應(yīng)當(dāng)是保護我們的環(huán)境。[考點定位]短文改錯。[名師點睛]改錯題整體難度適中,文章簡單易懂。考點分布均勻,添、刪、改比例為1:1:8。重點考查時態(tài)、名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)、冠詞、連詞、副詞以及介詞的搭配等?？忌獯祟愵}型時一般應(yīng)遵循保持句子原意的原則,即不能改變文章或作者所表達的意思,包括其語氣和上下文的邏輯關(guān)系。只對短文中的用詞錯誤、語法錯誤、行文關(guān)系錯誤進行改正,且要小改而不大改。20XX高考試題分項解析之專題短文改錯〔答案解析一、答案第一句:before→ago此處講述的是過去發(fā)生的事情,和一般過去時連用的應(yīng)是ago,before常和完成時連用。第一句:by→ofwiththehelpof...在……的幫助下,為固定短語。第二句:year→years句中year是可數(shù)名詞,前面的these應(yīng)修飾復(fù)數(shù)形式的名詞。第二句:had→have時間狀語sincethen通常和現(xiàn)在完成時連用,而不是過去完成時。第三句:在result前加aasaresult結(jié)果,為固定短語。第三句:somewhere→everywhere根據(jù)句意可知是"到處都有",所以用everywhere。第四句:taste→tasty本句