單元寫作Unit I used to be afraid of the dark課件

Unit4Iusedtobeafraidofthedark.SectionB3a-3bUnit4SectionBObjectivesTotalkabouthowapersonhaschanged.Towriteacompositionabouthowapersonhaschanged.ObjectivesTotalkabouthowaBefore-writingBefore-writingMariousedtobe_____.Heusedtowear______.2.Amyusedtobe____.Sheusedtohave

__________.3.Tinausedtohave____and______hair.glassestallshorthairredcurlyshortWhatdidtheyusetolooklike?Looking-backMariousedtobe_____.HeusInthepastNow1.Paulausedtobereally______.Shewasalwayssilentinclass.Shewasn’tvery________.Shewasneverbraveenoughtoaskquestions.1.Nowshe’smoreinterestedin_________.Sheplays______almosteveryday.She’salsoona________team.quietoutgoingsportssoccerswimHowPaulahaschangedInthepastNow1.PaulausedInthepastNow2.Shegotgoodgradesin________.Shewasalsogoodin______________.Sheusedtoplaythe______.2.Shestillplaysthe________fromtimetotime.sciencemusicclasspianopianoInthepastNow2.ShegotgooWhatwasBillylikeinthepast?WhatisBillylikenow?shyandquietturnedredtalkedtogirls3.thinwearglasses4.readinthelibraryeveryday5.studiedhardandgotgoodscores1.popular2.bigandstrong3.girlsaroundhimBillyhaschangedsomuchWhatwasBillylikeinthepasAfterCandybecomessuccessful,shehasalotofdifferencesinherlife.Sheusedtobe_______________________,butnow_______________________.1.Candyusedtobe_________,butnowshe’snotshy____________.2.Shedidn’tusetobe___________inschool,butnowshegets___________________.3.Sheusedto_____________withfriends,butitisalmost____________now.4.Shedidn’tuseto____________howsheappearstoothers,butnowshedoes.5.Sheusedtosingto___________hershyness,butnowshelovessinging___________________.6.Shedidn’tuseto_______________aboutwhatshesaysordoes,butsheisnow.shyanymorepopulartonsofattentionhangoutimpossibleworryaboutdealwithinfrontofcrowdsbecarefulAfterCandybecomessuccessfulPastNowHefelt________and________.Hewas____________now,becauseheknewhisparents__________________.He__________________classesand_______hisexaminations.Heworked___________thanheusedto.Hewas_____andwasnotbeableto____________quicklyinschool.Hebecame___________and________________________inschool.lonelyunhappymuchhappierwereproudofhimwasabsentfromfailedevenhardershymakefriendsmoreoutgoingmadesomegoodfriendsLiWen’sChangesPastNowHefelt________and__ChangesDailylifeStudyHobbiesAppearancepersonalityBehaviors(行為習(xí)慣)…Mind-mapChangesDailylifeStudyHobbiesAAppearance:beam-wasis-wasare-weretall/shortofmediumheightofmediumbuildstrong/fat/good-lookinghandsomeheavy/thinyoung/oldKeywords﹠phrasesAppearance:betall/shortKeywostraight/curlyhairlong/shorthairblack/brown/blond/redhairtwobigeyesabignosealongneckasmallmouthglassesjeansahataT-shirtaschooluniformhave/has/hadwear/wears/worestraight/curlyhairglasseshavePersonality:outgoingfunnylovelycutekindfriendlyshyquietseriousactivesmartsilent(沉默的)confident(自信的)brave(勇敢的)humorous(幽默的)beam-wasis-wasare-werePersonality:outgoingfunnyHobbies:readbooks/sing/dance/run/playbasketball/playcomputergames/watchTV/listentomusic/…Dailylife:getup/gotobed/dohomework/gotoafter-schoolclasses/chatwithfriends/hangoutwithfriends/…Hobbies:readbooks/sing/dance/Study:begoodat/dowellin/beinterestedin/getgoodgrades/getgoodscores/getintohighschool/…failtheexaminationsBehaviors:beabsentfrom/havemuchprivatetime/fightwithothers/saysomethingbadtoothers/…Study:begoodat/dowellin/1.Iusedtobe…,butnowIam….Ididn’tusetobe…,2.Iusedtohave…,butnowIhave…Ididn’tusetohave…,3.Iusedtowear…,butnowI…Ididn’tusetowear…,4.Iusedtolike…,butnow…Ididn’tusetolike…,5.Iusedtoplay…,butnow…Ididn’tusetoplay…,Keysentencepatterns1.Iusedtobe…,butnowIaWhile-writingWhile-writing寫作六大步驟：1.審：人稱時(shí)態(tài)文體2.列：列要點(diǎn)3.擴(kuò):4.連：5.改:6.謄:Who?what?when?where?why?how?Goodpoints,badpoints…過渡詞拼寫，大小寫，標(biāo)點(diǎn)，格式排版寫作六大步驟：1.審：人稱2.列：列要點(diǎn)3.擴(kuò):4.連：5.Writeabouthowyouhavechanged.Whatdidyouusetobelike?Whichchangeisthemostimportantone,andwhy?3bHowI’vechanged!

Mylifehaschangedalotinthelastfewyears.Iusedto____________________________________.NowI'm____________________________________.Thebiggestchangeinmylifewas____________.Thisisthemostimportantchangebecause_____________________________________________________________________________________________.Para.1Generalintroductionaboutthechangesinyourlife.Para.2ThemostimportantchangeandhowithappenedWriteabouthowyouhavechangWritenotesabouthowyouhavechangedinyourappearance,personality,hobbiesandotheraspects(方面).Thentalkwithapartneraboutyourchanges.TakingnotesWritenotesabouthowyouhaveInthepastNow

appearance

personalityhobbiesshortandthintalllongcurlyhairshortstraighthairshyoutgoingquietactivemusicdanceInthepastNowappearanceInthepastNowdailylifestudybehaviorsgetupat6:30getupat6:00gotobedat10:00gotobedat12:00lazystudyhardgetbadgradesgetgoodgradestalkloudly/sleepinclasskeepquiet/listentotheteachercarefullyInthepastNowdailylifePost-writingPost-writing

評分檔次和標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：第一檔：17—20分。要求：內(nèi)容涵蓋所有的要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯，只有個(gè)別語言錯(cuò)誤。第二檔：13—16分。要求：內(nèi)容涵蓋所有的要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)清楚，意思連貫，符合邏輯，但有少數(shù)語言錯(cuò)誤。第三檔：9—12分。要求：內(nèi)容涵蓋大部分要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)較為清楚、連貫，基本符合邏輯，但有一些語言錯(cuò)誤。第四檔：5—8分。要求：內(nèi)容涵蓋部分要點(diǎn)，能寫出少量正確句子，但整體表達(dá)不太連貫，且語言錯(cuò)誤較多。第五檔：0—4分。只能寫出一些單詞，不成句子，缺乏邏輯性，錯(cuò)誤很多．內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)遺漏、句子語法結(jié)構(gòu)錯(cuò)誤、時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)誤用，均為大錯(cuò)。其它錯(cuò)誤（如冠詞、介詞、拼寫等方面的錯(cuò)誤）均為小錯(cuò)。3個(gè)小錯(cuò)相當(dāng)于1處大錯(cuò)。相同的錯(cuò)誤，只扣1次評分檔次和標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：HowI’veChangedMylifehaschangedalotinthelastfewyears.WhenIwasalittlechild,Iusedtoplaywithmyfriendsalldaylong.Wefoundthatalmostanythingcouldbringfuntous.Butnow,Iamgrowingup,thingsseemto

changegraduallythatIdon'trealize.OnepossibleversionHowI’veChangedOnepossibleIhadalotoftimetoplaybefore,butnownearlyallmytimeisspentonstudyandhomework.

Iusedtowatchcartoons,

butnowIprefer

newsandEnglishprograms.Generallyspeaking,thingsturnbetter.Now,Iaminterestedinreadingandwriting.IthinkthatthemoregoodbooksIread,themoreknowledgeIget.

Ihadalotoftimetoplaybe

ThebiggestchangeinmylifewasthatIbegantolovesportsattheageoften.Thisisthemostimportantchange.BecauseIdidn’tusetoplaysportsafterschool.WhenIwastenyearsold,Ioftenfellill.Somyparentsencouragedmetoplaysportsafterschool.NowI’mreallyinterestedinsportsandI’mmuchhealthier.

ThebiggestchangeinmyUnit4Iusedtobeafraidofthedark.SectionB3a-3bUnit4SectionBObjectivesTotalkabouthowapersonhaschanged.Towriteacompositionabouthowapersonhaschanged.ObjectivesTotalkabouthowaBefore-writingBefore-writingMariousedtobe_____.Heusedtowear______.2.Amyusedtobe____.Sheusedtohave

__________.3.Tinausedtohave____and______hair.glassestallshorthairredcurlyshortWhatdidtheyusetolooklike?Looking-backMariousedtobe_____.HeusInthepastNow1.Paulausedtobereally______.Shewasalwayssilentinclass.Shewasn’tvery________.Shewasneverbraveenoughtoaskquestions.1.Nowshe’smoreinterestedin_________.Sheplays______almosteveryday.She’salsoona________team.quietoutgoingsportssoccerswimHowPaulahaschangedInthepastNow1.PaulausedInthepastNow2.Shegotgoodgradesin________.Shewasalsogoodin______________.Sheusedtoplaythe______.2.Shestillplaysthe________fromtimetotime.sciencemusicclasspianopianoInthepastNow2.ShegotgooWhatwasBillylikeinthepast?WhatisBillylikenow?shyandquietturnedredtalkedtogirls3.thinwearglasses4.readinthelibraryeveryday5.studiedhardandgotgoodscores1.popular2.bigandstrong3.girlsaroundhimBillyhaschangedsomuchWhatwasBillylikeinthepasAfterCandybecomessuccessful,shehasalotofdifferencesinherlife.Sheusedtobe_______________________,butnow_______________________.1.Candyusedtobe_________,butnowshe’snotshy____________.2.Shedidn’tusetobe___________inschool,butnowshegets___________________.3.Sheusedto_____________withfriends,butitisalmost____________now.4.Shedidn’tuseto____________howsheappearstoothers,butnowshedoes.5.Sheusedtosingto___________hershyness,butnowshelovessinging___________________.6.Shedidn’tuseto_______________aboutwhatshesaysordoes,butsheisnow.shyanymorepopulartonsofattentionhangoutimpossibleworryaboutdealwithinfrontofcrowdsbecarefulAfterCandybecomessuccessfulPastNowHefelt________and________.Hewas____________now,becauseheknewhisparents__________________.He__________________classesand_______hisexaminations.Heworked___________thanheusedto.Hewas_____andwasnotbeableto____________quicklyinschool.Hebecame___________and________________________inschool.lonelyunhappymuchhappierwereproudofhimwasabsentfromfailedevenhardershymakefriendsmoreoutgoingmadesomegoodfriendsLiWen’sChangesPastNowHefelt________and__ChangesDailylifeStudyHobbiesAppearancepersonalityBehaviors(行為習(xí)慣)…Mind-mapChangesDailylifeStudyHobbiesAAppearance:beam-wasis-wasare-weretall/shortofmediumheightofmediumbuildstrong/fat/good-lookinghandsomeheavy/thinyoung/oldKeywords﹠phrasesAppearance:betall/shortKeywostraight/curlyhairlong/shorthairblack/brown/blond/redhairtwobigeyesabignosealongneckasmallmouthglassesjeansahataT-shirtaschooluniformhave/has/hadwear/wears/worestraight/curlyhairglasseshavePersonality:outgoingfunnylovelycutekindfriendlyshyquietseriousactivesmartsilent(沉默的)confident(自信的)brave(勇敢的)humorous(幽默的)beam-wasis-wasare-werePersonality:outgoingfunnyHobbies:readbooks/sing/dance/run/playbasketball/playcomputergames/watchTV/listentomusic/…Dailylife:getup/gotobed/dohomework/gotoafter-schoolclasses/chatwithfriends/hangoutwithfriends/…Hobbies:readbooks/sing/dance/Study:begoodat/dowellin/beinterestedin/getgoodgrades/getgoodscores/getintohighschool/…failtheexaminationsBehaviors:beabsentfrom/havemuchprivatetime/fightwithothers/saysomethingbadtoothers/…Study:begoodat/dowellin/1.Iusedtobe…,butnowIam….Ididn’tusetobe…,2.Iusedtohave…,butnowIhave…Ididn’tusetohave…,3.Iusedtowear…,butnowI…Ididn’tusetowear…,4.Iusedtolike…,butnow…Ididn’tusetolike…,5.Iusedtoplay…,butnow…Ididn’tusetoplay…,Keysentencepatterns1.Iusedtobe…,butnowIaWhile-writingWhile-writing寫作六大步驟：1.審：人稱時(shí)態(tài)文體2.列：列要點(diǎn)3.擴(kuò):4.連：5.改:6.謄:Who?what?when?where?why?how?Goodpoints,badpoints…過渡詞拼寫，大小寫，標(biāo)點(diǎn)，格式排版寫作六大步驟：1.審：人稱2.列：列要點(diǎn)3.擴(kuò):4.連：5.Writeabouthowyouhavechanged.Whatdidyouusetobelike?Whichchangeisthemostimportantone,andwhy?3bHowI’vechanged!

Mylifehaschangedalotinthelastfewyears.Iusedto____________________________________.NowI'm____________________________________.Thebiggestchangeinmylifewas____________.Thisisthemostimportantchangebecause_____________________________________________________________________________________________.Para.1Generalintroductionaboutthechangesinyourlife.Para.2ThemostimportantchangeandhowithappenedWriteabouthowyouhavechangWritenotesabouthowyouhavechangedinyourappearance,personality,hobbiesandotheraspects(方面).Thentalkwithapartneraboutyourchanges.TakingnotesWritenotesabouthowyouhaveInthepastNow

appearance

personalityhobbiesshortandthintalllongcurlyhairshortstraighthairshyoutgoingquietactivemusicdanceInthepastNowappearanceInthepastNowdailylifestudybehaviorsgetupat6:30getupat6:00gotobedat10:00gotobedat12:00lazystudyhardgetbadgradesgetgoodgradestalkloudly/sleepinclasskeepquiet/listentotheteachercarefullyInthepastNowdailylifePost-writingPost-writing