四級作文類型總結公開課一等獎省優(yōu)質課大賽獲獎課件

CET-B4Writing1.論說型2.綜合型3.圖表型4.書信型Type1:論說型

A.現(xiàn)象/問題處理型論說文B.對立觀點型論說文C.利弊型論說文A.現(xiàn)象/問題處理型論說文1.當前越來越多人使用電子郵件2.電子郵件給人們生活帶來哪些便利3.我對電子郵件看法Moreandmorepeoplearecommunicatingviaemail.Communicatingviaemailisconvenient.Iliketocommunicateviaemail.moreandmorepeoplearecommunicatingviaemailsendemailstofriends;universitystudentshandintheirhomeworkviaemailCommunicatingviaemailisconvenientfast:reachesthereaderinaminutecheaperthansendingaletterormakingaphonecalleasier:don’thavetosolongasIliketocommunicateviaemail.agoodwayFirstly,Secondly,Lastly引出話題慣用句式1.Itisuniversallyafactthat(社會現(xiàn)象).2.Nowadays,moreandmorepeopleareconcernedabouttheproblemof…3.Recently,theissue／problem／questionof…h(huán)asbeenbroughttopublicattention.分析原因慣用句式1．Hereareseveralreasonsforit.First…Second…Finally…2．Thereasonscanbelistedasfollows.Foronething,…Foranother…3.Whathaspossiblycontributedtothisproblem?Inthefirstplace…Inthesecondplace…4．Perhapsthemain／primary／mostimportantreasonis…5.…isalso／partly／chieflyresponsiblefortheproblem.6．Anumberoffactorscouldaccountfor／leadto／contributeto／resultin…提出處理方案慣用句式1．Thefirstkeyfactortosolvethisproblemis…Anotherkeyfactoris…2．Peoplehavefoundmanysolutionstodealingwiththisproblem.3．Wecanfigureoutmanywaystorelievethepresentcrisis.4．Then,howshouldwesolvethisproblem?Herearesomesuggestions,whichmaybeofsomehelp.5．Facedwith…,weshouldtakesomeeffectivemeasurestocopewiththesituation.B.對立觀點型論說文Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicSpringFestivalGalaonCCTV.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinegivenbelow.許多人喜歡在除夕觀看春節(jié)聯(lián)歡晚會有些人卻提出取消春節(jié)聯(lián)歡晚會在我看來……TheCCTVSpringFestivalGalaisoneofChina’smostpopularannualtelevisionevents,watchedbymillonsofpeopleontheeveofthelunarNewYear.However,inrecentyears,the4-hourshowislosingitsappeal,especiallytoyoungsters.Peopleinincreasingnumberschoosenottowatchtheshow.TheyclaimthatthestereotypedGalashouldgive

way

to

diversemoderncelebrations.However,someotherpeoplearefaithfulaudienceofit.TheyarguethattheEveningGalahassomewhatbecomeatraditionsinceitwasinitiatedinthe1980s.what’smore,watchingtheshowisanindispensablepartofthefestivalforthem.ThoughtheGalaisnolongerpopularwithyoungpeople,Ienjoywatchingtheshowwithmyfamily.Yettomaintaintheinterestoftheyounggeneration,theorganizingcommitteeshoulddevelopaprogrammoreexciting,morecolorfulandmoreentertainingthanthepreviousones.Forexample,it’sagoodideatoinvitesomebignamesinChina’sfilmsandmusicindustriestoperformontheGalastage.Therehasbeenadebateover(中心問題).Somepeoplebelievethat(觀點1).Theyinsistthat(觀點1之理由).Otherpeoplehowever,insistthat(觀點2).Theybelieve(觀點2之理由).Inmyopinion,(我觀點).Therearethreereasonsformyopinion.Firstofall,(理由1).(展開).Furthermore,(理由2).(展開).Finally,(理由3).(展開).Conclusively,(重復我觀點).(展開).點明文章主題慣用句式1....hasbecomeahottopicamongpeoplerecently.Opinionstowardsitvaryfrompersontoperson.2.Thereisanargument／muchdisagreement／amongpeopleconcerning／over／asto／on...3.Differentpeoplehave/hold/takedifferentviews／perspectiveson...4.Whenitcomesto/askedabout...differentpeoplewillofferdifferentanswers.詳細介紹兩種對立觀點慣用句式1.Somepeoplesuggest／maintain／holdtheopinionthat...But／However／While／Nevertheless／Yet,otherpeopleholdadifferentpointofview...2.Somepeoplethinkthat...Onthecontrary／Incontrast,therearestillmanypeoplewhowon’tagree,andtheyclaim...3.Whenitcomesto...somepeoplethink／believethat...whileothersargue／claimthattheoppositeistrue.4.Nowitiscommonly／generally／widely／universallythought／accepted／believed／heldthat...ButIwonder／doubtwhether...陳說自己觀點慣用句式1.Formypart／Astome／AsfarasIamconcerned,I’dliketoagreetotheformer／myfavorgoestothefirstview.2.Inmyopinion,bothsidesarepartlyright.Whenwe...weshouldtakeintoconsiderationallaspectsoftheproblemsandthenmaketherightdecision.3.Thereisprobablysometruthinbotharguments／statements,but...

C.利弊型論說文Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicOwingaCar.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinegivenbelow.擁有汽車好處；擁有汽車壞處；你看法，觀點。開篇句：伴隨…發(fā)展，汽車日益進入普通家庭。1)好處：2）壞處：

3)利大于弊。Withthedevelopmentofmodernsociety,carsareenteringordinaryfamilies.therearesomeadvantagesof…disadvantages

…aregreaterthan…

提供最方便交通方式b.旅行，舒適,尤其是…氣侯里。c.表明事業(yè)上繁榮a.所占空間大b.小心，不然輕易發(fā)生交通事故c.污染環(huán)境providesb.withsth.Itisadj.forsb.todosth.occupy/takeup…islikelyto…Withthedevelopmentofmodernsociety,carsareenteringordinaryfamilies.T.S.---therearesomeadvantagesof…providesb.withsth.formoftransportationitis+adj.forsb.todosth.especially…showprosperity/successT.S.---disadvantagesoccupy/takeupbecareful/cautious,or/otherwiseitisveryeasyto…Xpossible,probable,likelyItisprobable/likelythattrafficaccidentswouldhappen.Trafficaccidentsarelikelytohappen.Trafficaccidentswouldprobablyhappen.giveoffpoisonousgaseswhichpollute…T.S.---Despiteallthedisadvantagesmentionedabove,arebiggerthanX…aregreaterthan…/outweighfirst,second,thirdtobeginwith,furthermore,moreover;

However…/Fromacertainpointofview,theseremarksmaysoundreasonable.But…

Foronething,besides,inaddition,

Inmyopinion/AsfarasI’mconcerned/PersonallyInfact/Asamatteroffact/Actually說明事物優(yōu)點慣用句式1．Thereareseveraladvantagesin／2．Forall／Inspiteof／Despitethedisadvantages／sideeffects,ithasitscadvantages／beneficialeffects.3．…h(huán)asapositiveimpact／influence／effectonpeople’slives.4．…isplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleinpeople’slives.說明事物缺點慣用句式1．However,justlikeanythingelse,…h(huán)asitsnegativesideaswell.2．Ofcourse,thedisadvantagescannotbeignored.3．However,itstillhassomedrawbacks.4．However,justaseverythinghastwosides,…alsohasmanydisadvantages.5．However,…mayalsocause／bringabout／leadto／resultin／contributetosomeproblems.6．Astheproverbgoes,everythinghastwosides…isnoexception.7．However,thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent／obvious／evident.表明事物利大于弊慣用句式1．Astome,Ithinktheadvantagesoutweigh／carrymoreweight／aremuchgreaterthanthedisadvantages.就我而言，我認為利大于弊。2．Anyway,Istillbelieve…h(huán)asmoreadvantagesthandisadvantages.3．Butforme,Ithinkwhatismoreimportantisitspositiveside.Type3:圖表型

Directions:

Examinethechartcarefully.Writeacompositionbasedontheoutlinegivebelow:

1.Detailedsituationoftheproduction.

2.Analysisandconclusion.YEAROUTPUTTOTALCOLORTVSETBLACKANDWHITETVSET198345,0005,00040,000198445,00010,00035,000198550,00020,00030,000198665,00040,00025,0001987100,00080,00020,0001988105,00085,00020,0001989110,00090,00020,0001990120,000100,00020,000Thischartshowsustheincrease

intheproductionofTVsetsinthefactoryfrom1983to1990.一個事物在不一樣時期所表達出來發(fā)展或改變趨勢提干說明部分或者圖表說明部分Wecanseethatthetotaloutputincreasedfrom45,000setsin1983to120,000in1990.thisincreasewasduetothesubstantialriseintheproductionofcolorTVsets.In1983,theoutputofcolorTVwasonly5,000sets.Thefigure,however,doubledannuallyforfouryearsinsuccessionandcontinuedtoincreasesteadilyeversince.In1990itreached100,000,a20-foldincreaseinsevenyears.Ontheotherhand,theoutputofblackandwhiteTVsetsdeclinedgraduallyfrom40,000in1983to20,000in1987andthenremainedstable.對圖表改變部分作出詳細描述，分析其特點。TherapidincreaseintheproductionofTVsetsmirroredthegrowthofpeople’spurchasingpower,andthegrowingdemandforcolorTVsetsfurtherindicatedtheimprovementofpeople’slivingstandard.對圖表改變部分分析成因。

有時候：

1.談論個人看法或者觀點

2.陳說圖表所表達出來主要意義

3.談論圖表所表現(xiàn)問題Directions:Examinethegraphcarefully.Writeacompositionaccordingtotheinformationgiven.

思緒該圖表特點：描述多項事物多項事物描述次序：高-低；低-高；高和低掐兩頭，然后描述中間其余項事物，其余項事物也要有次序描述方法：一個事物一句話描述；也能夠選取兩到三個事物放在一句話里描述詳細詞句：占…百分比怎么說？第一，第二…怎么說?ThesportsprogramsenjoyaboomamongTVviewers.Accordingtotheabovegraph,78%ofTVviewersfrequentlywatchsports,whichisobviouslyfaraheadofothertelevisedevents.Newsfollowssecondwith68%ofviewers,comparedwith54%moviewatchers.DocumentaryseemstobemorepreferableamongpeoplethanSpecialsdo,with42%and20%respectively.怎樣補上缺失第一句話？Type4:書信型

書信型

ALetterofApplication(自薦信)ALetterofRecommendation(推薦信)ALetterofComplaintALetterofApologyALetterofCongratulationReadthefollowingadvertisementpublishedinthenewspaper,thenwritealetterofnofewerthan120wordsapplyingforthejob.Besuretostateyourqualificationsandanyothernecessaryinformation.AttentionAppliedTechnology,Inc.islookingforanexperiencedcomputerclerkforapositionstartingSept..Ifinterested,pleasewriteto:PersonalmanagerAppliedTechnology,Inc.289ChangjianRoadHefei,AnhuiALetterofApplicationDearSirorMadam,Inthenewspaper,Inoticedyouradvertisementfortheservicesofaclerk.Iherebywishtoapplyfortheposition,feelingconfidentthatI’mqualifiedtofillittoyoursatisfaction.1.用一句話做個大約自我介紹。(可省略)

2.給出求職信息起源。

3.表示自己求職意愿。

I’m22yearsold,andshallgraduatethissummerformthecomputerDepartmentofHefeiUniversityofTechnology.Ihaveagoodknowledgeofcomputers.Besides,IamskilledinEnglish.IhavepassedCollegeEnglishBand6Exam.LastsummervacationIworkedinacompanyasaclerk.Asaresult,IfeelsurethatIwouldbeacompetentclerkinyourcompany.1.Educationrelated.

2.Workexperiencerelated.

3.小結句：表示自己情況符合要求

注意：陳說多項內容時，要使用連接詞。

Shouldmyapplicationberegardfavorably,Iwouldappreciateyourkindnessandconfidenceinme.Ihopetohaveanopportunityforaninterviewatatimeconvenientforyou.Thankyouforyourconsiderationofmyapplication.

YoursFaithfully，LiuYan

1.假如對方能夠考慮，自己感激不盡。

2.期盼回復。Youareallowed30minutestowriteacomplaintlettertothemanagerofashopwhereyoureceivedabadservice.Besuretoexpressyourangerinasuitableway.ALetterofComplaintDearManager,Muchtomyregret,Iwritethistoplaceacomplaintagainstoneofyourshopassistantsabouthisbadserviceinthecourseofourshoppinginyourshopyesterday.用一句話概述寫信原因。(指出投訴對象、投訴主要理由、時間和地點)

Yesterdayaboutteno’clockinthemorning,myhusband,Iandaladyfriendofourscametoyourshopwiththeintentiontobuysomesouvenirs.Oneofyourshopassistants,whosebadgenumberwas15ifIrememberright,wasaskedtoremovethedustfromsomeofthebronzestatusinorderthatourfriendmighthaveagoodlookattheseobjectsbeforemakinguphermindtobuy.Underthecircumstances,itwastheassistant’sdutyeithertodowhatwasaskedorexplainwhyhewasunabletocomplywithsucharequest.Insteadofmindinghisdutyandactinginapolitemanner,theassistantturnedadeafeartoourrequestandwalkedawaymurmuringinasarcasticmannerthatourfriendwasfoolishinaskingforremovalofthedust.Greatourembarrassmenttomeetwithsuchanawkwardoccasion.用記敘方式，詳細陳說事情發(fā)生整個過程。Wewishyouwouldlookintothisunsatisfactorystateofaffairsandtakestepstopreventarecurrenceofoffensiveconductofthiskind.TheladyinquestionhasarrivedfromJapananditisapitythatsheshouldbeledtoformanunfavorableimpressionoftheassistantsinthiscity.表示出自己希望對方做事情。

2.表示自己對于此件事情心情。

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicALettertotheEditor.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinegivenbelow.假設你是李明，有一天，你在乘坐公交車時，發(fā)覺一個小伙子給一位老人讓座，因為老人沒有致謝，小伙子所以和老人吵了起來。請你就此事發(fā)表評論，能夠批評小伙子，也能夠批評老人，或者兼而有之。June24,DearSir,IamwritingaboutwhatIsawonBusNo.878ataround16:00onmywaytoWal-Mart.Assoonasanoldmangotonatonestop,ayoungmangavehimaseat.Theoldman,however,tooktheseatwithoutaword.Seeingthis,theyoungmanmusthavegotupset,forhewanteditback.Asaresult,aquarrelstartedrightaway.Iwasreallypuzzled.Wastheyoungmanmakingafussovertrifles?Whatwouldhavehappenediftheoldmanhadsaidthanks?Aftercarefulconsiderations,I’dliketoproposethatyoungpeopleberespectfultotheoldevenifsomeofthemarenot“good-mannered.”Atthesametime,theoldshouldmindtheirmannersandsetgoodexamplesfortheyouth.Onlyinthiswaycanoursocietybeharmonious. Sincerely, LiMing點題記敘重點段落結論描述經(jīng)過發(fā)表看法說明目June24,DearSir/Madam,IamwritingaboutwhatIsawonBusNo.878ataround16:00onmywaytoWal-Mart.Assoonasanoldmangotonatonestop,ayoungmangavehimaseat.Theoldman,however,tooktheseatwithoutaword.Seeingthis,theyoungmanmusthavegotupset,forhewanteditback.Asaresult,aquarrelstartedrightaway.Iwasreallypuzzled.Wastheyoungmanmakingafussovertrifles?Whatwouldhavehappenediftheoldmanhadsaidthanks?Aftercarefulconsiderations,I’dliketoproposethatyoungpeopleberespectfultotheoldevenifsomeofthemarenot“good-mannered.”Atthesametime,theoldshouldmindtheirmannersandsetgoodexamplesfortheyouth.Onlyinthiswaycanoursocietybeharmonious.

Sincerely, LiMing

June24,DearSir/Madam,IamwritingaboutwhatIsawonBusNo.878ataround16:00onmywaytoWal-Mart.Assoonasanoldmangotonatonestop,ayoungmangavehimaseat.Theoldman,however,tooktheseatwithoutaword.Seeingthis,theyoungmanmusthavegotupset,forhewanteditback.Asaresult,aquarrelstartedrightaway.Iwasreallypuzzled.Wastheyoungmanmakingafussovertrifles?Whatwouldhavehappenediftheoldmanhadsaidthanks?Aftercarefulconsiderations,I’dliketoproposethatyoungpeopleberespectfultotheoldevenifsomeofthemarenot“good-mannered.”Atthesametime,theoldshouldmindtheirmannersandsetgoodexamplesfortheyouth.Onlyinthiswaycanoursocietybeharmonious.

Sincerely, LiMing

向右縮進5個字符Sample1

June24,DearSir/Madam,IamwritingaboutwhatIsawonBusNo.878ataround16:00onmywaytoWal-Mart.

Sample1Assoonasanoldmangotonatonestop,ayoungmangavehimaseat.Theoldman,however,tooktheseat

withoutaword.Seeingthis,theyoungmanmusthavegotupset,forhewanteditback.Asaresult,aquarrelstartedrightaway.

Sample1 Iwasreallypuzzled.Wastheyoungmanmakinga

fussovertrifles?Whatwouldhavehappenediftheoldmanhadsaidthanks?Aftercarefulconsiderations,I’dliketoproposethatyoungpeopleberespectfulto

theoldevenifsomeofthemarenot“good-mannered.”Sample1Atthesametime,theoldshouldmindtheirmannersandsetgoodexamplesfortheyouth.Onlyinthiswaycanoursocietybeharmonious.

Sincerely/Respectfully, LiMingFormalitySample2June8,DearSirorMadam,IamwritingtoyouaboutaquarrelIwitnessedinabusthisafternoononmywayhome,whichmightbeasuitabletopicforReaders’Discussioninyourmagazine.Sample2Atastop,anoldmangotonthe