(新高考)高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)課時(shí)精煉考向50 應(yīng)用文寫作之咨詢信和推薦信(解析版)

考向50應(yīng)用文寫作之咨詢信和推薦信咨詢信【寫作示例】假定你是李華,打算今年暑假去美國旅游。請(qǐng)你給TravelAmerica國際旅行社寫一封電子郵件進(jìn)行咨詢,內(nèi)容如下:1.請(qǐng)其推薦合適的旅游路線;2.請(qǐng)其告知相關(guān)的旅游費(fèi)用。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。DearSir/Madam,

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________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【考場(chǎng)審題】Step1:精準(zhǔn)審題謀篇布局人稱第一人稱(I),第二人稱(you)時(shí)態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)段落布局開頭點(diǎn)題:說明寫信目的主體段落:說明需要咨詢的內(nèi)容結(jié)尾:期待對(duì)方的回信Step2:頭腦風(fēng)暴字字珠玉(1)美詞:inquire,recommend,inaddition,intend,appreciate(2)佳句:①IintendtostayinAmericaforabout10days,duringwhichIhopetohavealookatsomeuniquenaturalsceneryandhaveatasteoflocalcustoms.②Inaddition,I’dliketoknowthepricesoftheroutes,coveringallthetravelingexpenses.Step3:斟酌詞句妙筆生花要點(diǎn)1:我打算在美國住10天左右,希望能看一看那些獨(dú)特的自然風(fēng)景,品味一下當(dāng)?shù)氐娘L(fēng)俗。一般表達(dá):IintendtostayinAmericaforabout10days,andIhopetohavealookatsomeuniquenaturalsceneryandhaveatasteoflocalcustoms.

句式升級(jí)(定語從句)IintendtostayinAmericaforabout10days,duringwhichIhopetohavealookatsomeuniquenaturalsceneryandhaveatasteoflocalcustoms.

要點(diǎn)2:除此之外,我想了解包括所有旅行費(fèi)用的路線的價(jià)格。一般表達(dá):Inaddition,I’dliketoknowthepricesoftheroutes,andallthetravelingexpenses.句式升級(jí)(分詞短語作定語)Inaddition,I’dliketoknowthepricesoftheroutes,coveringallthetravelingexpenses.

Step4:銜接過渡斐然成篇【參考范文】DearSir/Madam,I’mplanningtotraveltotheUSAinthecomingJuly.Therefore,I’mwritingtoinquireabouttravelroutesofyouragency.IintendtostayinAmericaforabout10days,duringwhichIhopetohavealookatsomeuniquenaturalsceneryandhaveatasteoflocalcustoms.So,couldyoupleaserecommendsomesuitabletravelroutes?Inaddition,I’dliketoknowthepricesoftheroutes,coveringallthetravelingexpenses.Areplyatyourearliestconvenienceishighlyappreciated.Yours,LiHua推薦信【寫作示例】假定你是李華。你的美國網(wǎng)友David看完電影《哪吒之魔童降世》海外版后非常喜歡,寫信想請(qǐng)你再推薦一部中國電影。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他回信:1.表示高興;2.推薦一部電影;3.推薦的理由(至少兩條)。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。【考場(chǎng)審題】Step1:精準(zhǔn)審題謀篇布局人稱第一人稱(I),第二人稱(you)時(shí)態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí);一般將來時(shí)段落布局開頭點(diǎn)題:說明寫信目的主體段落:推薦的電影和推薦的理由結(jié)尾:表達(dá)希望Step2:頭腦風(fēng)暴字字珠玉(1)美詞:delighted,fascinated,havemuchincommonwith,appealtosb.,additionally,perfectly(2)佳句:①I’mdelightedtoknowyou’refascinatedbytheChinesefilm,NeZha.②Thisanimatedfilm,whichisalsobasedonclassicChinesefairytales,hasmuchincommonwithNeZha.Step3:斟酌詞句妙筆生花要點(diǎn)1:我很高興知道你對(duì)中國電影《哪吒之魔童降世》感興趣。一般表達(dá):Iamgladtoknowyou’reinterestedintheChinesefilm,NeZha.句式升級(jí)(高級(jí)詞匯,被動(dòng)語態(tài))I’mdelightedtoknowyou’refascinatedbytheChinesefilm,NeZha.要點(diǎn)2:這部電影也是以神話故事為基礎(chǔ),和哪吒有許多相似之處。一般表達(dá):ThisanimatedfilmisalsobasedonclassicChinesefairytales,andhasmuchincommonwithNeZha.

句式升級(jí)(定語從句)Thisanimatedfilm,whichisalsobasedonclassicChinesefairytales,hasmuchincommonwithNeZha.

Step4:銜接過渡斐然成篇【參考范文】DearDavid,I’mdelightedtoknowyou’refascinatedbytheChinesefilm,NeZha.AndI’mperfectlywillingtorecommendanotherimpressiveChinesemovieatyourrequest.SinceIknowanimatedfilmsareyourfavorites,youcan’tmissMonkeyKing:HeroIsBack.Thisanimatedfilm,whichisalsobasedonclassicChinesefairytales,hasmuchincommonwithNeZha,soIthinkit’llappealtoyou.Additionally,MonkeyKingandNezhaarebothregardedasheroesbyChinesepeople.Throughmovies,youwillgetabetterunderstandingofChineseculture.Ihopeyou’llfindthemoviewellworthseeing.Yours,LiHua【檢測(cè)訓(xùn)練】1．假設(shè)你是美國紐約市的一名高中生Chris,打算暑假來天津?qū)W習(xí)漢語，來信向你在天津一中的筆友李津咨詢他們學(xué)校的國際班漢語課程。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示給李津?qū)懸环庾稍冃?。?nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1.想學(xué)漢語的原因（中國文化；個(gè)人發(fā)展……）2.咨詢國際班漢語課程的情況（班級(jí)大?。皇欠駛?cè)重聽說；能不中國學(xué)生交流）3.詢問是否提供食宿。注意：（1）詞數(shù)不少于100；（2）可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫；（3）開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearliJin,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursChris【參考范文】DearliJin,It'smypleasuretotellyouaboutmyplanforstudyingChineseinTianjinthissummervacation.CouldyoupossiblyprovidemewithsomeinformationabouttheChinesecoursesforinternationalclassesinyourschool?YouknowIamalwaysinterestedinChinesecultureandaveryimportantreasonformetolearnChineseisthatlearningChinesecouldbringbettercareerprospectsforyoungpeople.Iwanttoknowhowmanystudentstherewillbeineachclassandifthecoursesfocusonlisteningorspeakingpractice.Besides,canIhavetheopportunitytotakepartinsomeactivitiesandtocommunicatewithChinesestudents?ThatwillsurelybeagoodchanceformetolearnmoreaboutChina.Also,Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldtellmewhetheraccommodationisincluded.Iamlookingforwardtoyourresponseatyourearliestconvenience.YoursChris【寫作步驟】第一步：審題：確定時(shí)態(tài)和人稱。這封信主要是Chris向你（李津）咨詢學(xué)校的國際班漢語課程，所以時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱以第一人稱為主。第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）providemewithsomeinformationabout…（給我提供一些關(guān)于……的信息）；theChinesecoursesforinternationalclasses（國際班的漢語課程）；learningChinesecouldbringbettercareerprospects（學(xué)漢語能帶來更好的職業(yè)前景）；focusonlisteningandspeakingpractice（注重聽說練習(xí)）；havetheopportunityto…（有機(jī)會(huì)做某事）；agoodchanceformeto…（對(duì)我做什么是一個(gè)很好的機(jī)會(huì)）等。第三步：遣詞造句：同學(xué)們?cè)趯懽鲿r(shí)不能逐句翻譯，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫，同時(shí)要點(diǎn)表述要完整，文章要通順，準(zhǔn)確使用時(shí)態(tài)和語態(tài)。第四步：連句成文：寫作時(shí)要適當(dāng)使用連詞、過渡詞和插入語，使文章渾然一體。同時(shí)恰當(dāng)而合理地使用一些高級(jí)詞匯和句型，如定語從句等，以提高文章檔次。【寫作亮點(diǎn)】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了較多句式，如：第一段第一句使用了It’smypleasuretodosth.的句型，使用It作形式主語，不定式作真正的主語。第二段第一句使用了省略了that的賓語從句及that引導(dǎo)的表語從句。第二段第二句也使用了賓語從句。第二段第五句使用了if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句。此外本文還使用了一些高級(jí)詞匯，如providemewithsomeinformationabout…；learningChinesecouldbringbettercareerprospects；focusonlisteningandspeakingpractice；havetheopportunityto…；agoodchanceformeto…等。全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。2．假設(shè)你是李華，你想?yún)⒓觿虼髮W(xué)（UniversityofCambridge）的夏令營活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)寫封信向夏令營負(fù)責(zé)人Smith教授咨詢相關(guān)事宜，要點(diǎn)如下：1、表達(dá)你的意愿；2、咨詢相關(guān)事宜。注意：1、詞數(shù)100左右；2、可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearMr.Smith,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【參考范文】DearMr.Smith,I’malwaysdreamingofbeingadmittedtotheUniversityofCambridge.Andyouradvertisementaboutthesummercampcaughtmyattention.IamastudentinChina.Wouldyoubesokindastotellmemoreinformationaboutthecamp.Firstofall,I’dliketoknowwhenthecoursewillstartandhowmanyclasshoursthereareperweek?Second,howmuchdoIhavetopayforthecourseanddoesthecostcovertheaccommodation?Besides,isthereanythingthatIshouldpayspecialattentionto?Iwouldbemostgratefulifyoucouldsendmetheinformation.Lookingforwardtoyourimmediateresponse.Yourssincerely,LiHu【寫作步驟】第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，假設(shè)你是李華，你想?yún)⒓觿虼髮W(xué)（UniversityofCambridge）的夏令營活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)寫封信向夏令營負(fù)責(zé)人Smith教授咨詢相關(guān)事宜，要點(diǎn)如下：1、表達(dá)你的意愿；2、咨詢相關(guān)事宜。第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組）：dreamof(夢(mèng)想)；beadmittedto(錄取)；UniversityofCambridge(劍橋大學(xué))；catchmyattention(引起我的注意)；accommodation(住宿)等。第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。此處文章主要應(yīng)用一般過去時(shí)、現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。【寫作亮點(diǎn)】范文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中使用了較多高級(jí)表達(dá)方式，如I’malwaysdreamingofbeingadmittedtotheUniversityofCambridge.非謂語動(dòng)詞的運(yùn)用；Iwouldbemostgratefulifyoucouldsendmetheinformation.運(yùn)用條件狀語從句。全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。3．假定你是高三學(xué)生李華。隨著高考的臨近，你感到學(xué)習(xí)壓力越來越大。晚上經(jīng)常失眠，上課精力不集中，學(xué)習(xí)效率低下,現(xiàn)在對(duì)備考復(fù)習(xí)很茫然。你寫信給心理學(xué)家Dr.Bloom,咨詢解決問題的方法。內(nèi)容包括：1.寫信目的；2.咨詢內(nèi)容；3.期待回復(fù)。DearDr.Bloom,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursSincerely,LiHua【參考范文】DearDr.Bloom,I'mLiHua,aseniorthreestudent.I'mwritingtoaskyouforsomeadvice.

WiththeapproachoftheCollegeEntranceExamination,I'mundergreatpressure,whichgreatlyaffectsmylifeandstudy.Ican'tfallasleepatnightandIoftenwakeupsuddenlyatmidnight.Asaresult,Ican'tfocusonwhattheteachersaysinclassanditdisturbsmealot.Ataloss,Idon'tknowhowtopreparefortheCollegeEntranceExamination.WhatshouldIdo?Knowingyouareanexpertinit,Isincerelyhopeyoucangivemesomevaluableadviceonhowtosolvetheproblmes.

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.YoursSincerely,LiHua【寫作步驟】第一步：審題體裁：應(yīng)用文時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。要求：1.介紹寫信的目的；2.介紹咨詢的內(nèi)容；3.期待對(duì)方的回復(fù)。第二步:列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）asksb.foradvice;withtheapproachof;underpressure;fallasleep;wakeup;asaresult;focuson;ataloss;preparefor;solvetheproblem;lookforwardto;anexpertin第三步：連詞成句1.I’mwritingtoaskyouforadvice.2.Knowingyouareanexpertinit,Isincerelyhopeyoucangivemevaluableadviceonhowtosolvetheproblems.3.Asaresult,Ican’tfocusonwhattheteachersaysinclass.4.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：firstofall,firstly/first,secondly/secondandthen,finally,intheend,atlast(供參考)2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：whatismore,besides,moreover,furthermore,inaddition,aswellas,notonly…but(also),including(供參考)3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：however,onthecontrary,but,inspiteof+n/doing,ontheonehand…ontheotherhand,some,whileothers,asfor,so...that…(供參考)4.表因果關(guān)系：asaresult連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，【寫作亮點(diǎn)】[高分句型1]Asaresult,Ican'tfocusonwhattheteachersaysatclass.(what引導(dǎo)賓語從句)[高分句型2]Knowingyouareanexpertinit,Isincerelyhopeyoucangivemevaluableadviceonhowtosolvetheproblems.(knowingyouareanexpertinit現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語，特殊疑問詞how+動(dòng)詞不定式作賓語)[高分句型3]I'mundergreatpressure,whichgreatlyaffectsmylifeandstudy.(which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句)4．假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter打算這個(gè)寒假來中國旅游，讓你推薦個(gè)城市，你想推薦杭州作為他旅游行程的首選。請(qǐng)用英語給他寫封推薦信，內(nèi)容包括：1.推薦城市；2.推薦理由；3.你的祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】DearPeter,I’mdelightedtoknowyou’recomingtoChinaforyourwinterholiday.Personally,I’dliketorecommendthecityofHangzhoutoyou.WhenitcomestoHangzhou,thefirstthingthatcomestomindisWestLake,whichhasbeenascenicspotforhundredsofyears.Besides,therearemanytouristattractionsinandaroundthecity,suchasTiger-runningSpring,TheLingyinMonasteryandSpringDawnatSuCauseway.Mostimportantly,Hangzhouishometodeliciousfood,suchasDongpoPorkandLongjingShrimp.Ihopetheniceweatherandconvenienttransportationherecanmakeyourtripmoreenjoyable.Yours,LiHua【寫作步驟】第一步：審題體裁：應(yīng)用文時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，少量現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。要求：1.介紹推薦城市；2.介紹推薦理由;3.表達(dá)你的祝愿。第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）bedelightedtodosth.;recommendsth.tosb.;cometomind;inandaroundthecity;suchas;behometo第三步：連詞成句1.I’mdelightedtoknowyou’recomingtoChinaforyourwinterholiday.2.Personally,I’dliketorecommendthecityofHangzhoutoyou.3.WhenitcomestoHangzhou,thefirstthingthatcomestomindisWestLake,whichhasbeenascenicspotforhundredsofyears.4.Therearemanytouristattractionsinandaroundthecity,suchasTiger-runningSpring,TheLingyinMonasteryandSpringDawnatSuCauseway.5.Ihopetheniceweatherandconvenienttransportationherecanmakeyourtripmoreenjoyable.根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast(供參考)

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：besides,mostimportantly,and3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause(從句),Inspiteof+n/doing,asfor,(供參考)4.表因果關(guān)系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult(供參考)連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰?！緦懽髁咙c(diǎn)】[高分句型1]WhenitcomestoHangzhou,thefirstthingthatcomestomindisWestLake,whichhasbeenascenicspotforhundredsofyears.（由關(guān)系代詞which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句）[高分句型2]Ihopetheniceweatherandconvenienttransportationherecanmakeyourtripmoreenjoyable.（由that引導(dǎo)賓語從句作hope的賓語，省略that）[高分句型3]IinviteyoutovisitHangzhou,whereyoucanenjoytheniceweatheranddeliciousfood.（由關(guān)系副詞where引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句）5．假如你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，學(xué)校安排你給即將到你校任教的外教Martin推薦一名學(xué)生助手，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他寫封推薦信。1.歡迎Martin的到來，推薦WangPeng同學(xué)當(dāng)助手(assistant)2.推薦的理由（溝通能力；熱心助人；英語水平等）3.美好祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】DearMartin,I’mLiHua,ChairmanoftheStudents'Union.It'sgreattolearnthatyouarecomingtoteachinourschoolasanoralEnglishteachernextterm.Iwasaskedtowritetoyou,recommendingWangPeng,aSenior2student,aged17,tobeyourassistant.Heisadiligentstudent,whocanusethecomputerskillfullyandhasagiftforcommunicatingwithothers.What'smore,hehasagoodcommandofEnglish,whichmakeshimspeakEnglishfluently.Last,heisalwaysreadytohelpothersinneed.IamconfidentthathecanbehelpfulinyourworkandlifeinChina.Ifyouhaveanyquestions,pleasedonothesitatetocontactme.I’mlookingforwardtoyourcoming.Yourssincerely,LiHua【寫作步驟】1.詞匯積累學(xué)期：term→semester助手：assistant→helper勤勉的：diligent→sedulous精通：begoodat=beanexpertat2.句式拓展合并簡(jiǎn)單句原句：Last,heisalwaysreadytohelpothersinneed.拓展句：Last,heisalwaysreadytohelpotherswhoareinneed.【寫作亮點(diǎn)】[高分句型1]Iwasaskedtowritetoyou,recommendingWangPeng,aSenior2student,aged17,tobeyourassistant.(運(yùn)用現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語)[高分句型2]Heisadiligentstudent,whocanusethecomputerskillfullyandhasagiftforcommunicatingwithothers.(運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)6．假設(shè)你是李華，你的外國朋友Tom的中文取得很大的進(jìn)步，且對(duì)中國文學(xué)有著深厚的興趣，他想買一本書，請(qǐng)你寫一封e-mail，向他推薦一本書，并寫出推薦的理由。內(nèi)容包括：1.推薦的書名；2.推薦這本書的三個(gè)主要原因；3.重申這本書的優(yōu)點(diǎn)。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________