定語(yǔ)從句在寫(xiě)作中的應(yīng)用課件

AttributiveClauseinwriting

ByDingSongjieNo.3HighSchoolAttributiveClauseByDingSong1AbeautifulAnappleOneonthemountainwithacatsleepingunderitstandingbesideariverplantedbymymomwhichIplantedlastyearakindofplantAbeautifulAnappleOneonthe2定語(yǔ)從句

在寫(xiě)作中的簡(jiǎn)單應(yīng)用定語(yǔ)從句

在寫(xiě)作中的簡(jiǎn)單應(yīng)用3ateacheradayNo.3highschoolwhenthat/whichwherethat/whichWho/whoseateacheradayNo.3highsc4Thosepeoplearethehappiest.Thosepeoplemakeothershappy.Thosepeoplewhomakeothershappyarethehappiest.

─KarlMarxThosepeoplearethehappiest.5Heisthebestgeneral.Hemakesthefewestmistakes.Hewhomakesthefewestmistakesisthebestgeneral.-----HamiltonHeisthebestgeneral.Hewho6Godhelpthosepeople.Thosepeoplehelpthemselves.GodhelpthosewhohelpthemselvesGodhelpthosepeople.Godhelp7①

Johnismybestfriend.②Johngavemeagift.③HeboughtthisgiftfromtheUSA.Johnismybestfriendwhogavemeagift(that)heboughtfromtheUSAJohnwhoismybestfriendgavemeagiftthatheboughtfromtheUSAJohn,mybestfriend,gavemeagiftthatheboughtfromtheUSA①Johnismybestfriend.John8

①Kateisanewstudent.②Shecomesfromasmallcity.③Shespeaksadialect口音.④Herdialectishardtounderstand.Kateisanewstudentwhocomesfromasmallcity.Shespeaksadialectwhichishardtounderstand.

Kate,anewstudentfromasmallcity,speaksadialectwhichishardtounderstand.,①Kateisanewstudent.Ka9成龍，來(lái)自香港的著名影星，生于1954年,為中國(guó)電影做出了巨大貢獻(xiàn)JackieChan,afamousmoviestarfromHongKong,whowasbornin1954,makesgreatcontributionstoChinesemovie.成龍，來(lái)自香港的著名影星，生于1954年,為中國(guó)電影做出了巨10

特朗普Trump，美國(guó)最有名的地產(chǎn)商（landagent），生于1946年紐約.現(xiàn)在成功當(dāng)選為美國(guó)總統(tǒng)。他的最大特點(diǎn)feature是有錢。

Trump,themostfamouslandagent,whowasbornin1946inNewYork,becomespresidentoftheUSAsuccessfully,whosebiggestfeatureisrich.特朗普Trump，美國(guó)最有名的地產(chǎn)商（landagent11Jobs生于1955年,發(fā)明家，蘋(píng)果公司Apple的CEO他發(fā)明了許多風(fēng)靡全球的電子產(chǎn)品electricproducts，如：iMax,iPod,iPhone等。深刻改變了人們交流，娛樂(lè)及生活方式。Jobs,aninventorandCEOofApple,

whowasbornin1955,inventedmanyworldfamouselectricproducts,suchasiMax,iPodandiPhone,whichchangedpeople’swayofcommunication,entertainmentandlifeJobs生于1955年,發(fā)明家，蘋(píng)果公司Apple的12類型：娛樂(lè)節(jié)目entertainmentprogram來(lái)自：湖南衛(wèi)視TVstation播出（broadcast）內(nèi)容：在節(jié)目中，星爸和萌娃一起旅行影響：深受全國(guó)人民歡迎類型：娛樂(lè)節(jié)目entertainmentprogram13“Wherearewegoing,Dad?”isanentertainmentprogram.TheprogramisbroadcastinHunanTVstation.Intheprogram,starfathersandchildrentravelaroundthecountry.Theprogramispopularwithallpeople.“Wherearewegoing,Dad?”is14“Dad,wherearewegoing?”whichisanentertainmentprogramisbroadcastinHunanTVstation.Intheprogram,whichispopularwithpeople，starfathersandtheirchildrentravelaroundthecountry?！癉ad,wherearewegoing?”whi15“Wherearewegoing,Dad?”isanentertainmentprogram.TheprogramisbroadcastinHunanTVstation.Intheprogram,starfathersandchildrentravelaroundthecountry.Theprogramispopularwithallpeople.“Dad,wherearewegoing”anentertainmentprogram

broadcastinHunanTVstationispopularwithpeople,inwhichstarfathersandtheirchildrentravelaroundtheworld.“Wherearewegoing,Dad?”is16Name:ZootopiaCameout:2016Madeby:DreamWorksContents:Judy是一只聰明勇敢并從小立志當(dāng)警察的兔子,她在克服了重重困難之后終于實(shí)現(xiàn)了夢(mèng)想。在影片中Judy和好友Nickfox一起破獲了重大案件（crackacriminalcase）并且揭露（uncover）了壞人的真面目，最終保衛(wèi)了動(dòng)物城的和平安寧。朱迪總是說(shuō)“Anyonecanbeanything”，意思就是一切皆有可能。Animatedmovie喜歡的原因AnintroductiontoamovieName:ZootopiaAnimate17Zootopiaisthehottestanimatedmoviein2016.ItismadebyDreamWorks.Now,Iwillmakeabriefintroductiontothismovie.Inthismovieyouwillenjoyalotoffun.Judywasacleverandbraverabbitandhadadreamtobeapoliceofficerataveryyoungage.Sheovercomemanydifficultiesandfinallyrealizedherdream.Inthestory,JudyandherfriendNickfoxcrackedacriminalcaseanduncoveredthetruecolorofthebadperson.TheiractionintheendsavedthepeaceofZootopia.Judyalwayssaid“Anyonecanbeanything.”Itmeans“Everythingispossible”.Zootopiaisthehottestanimat18

Zootopiaisthehottestanimatedmoviein2016.ItismadebyDreamWorks.Now,Iwillmakeabriefintroductiontothismovie.Inthismovieyouwillenjoyalotoffun.Judywasacleverandbraverabbit

andhadadreamtobeapoliceofficerataveryyoungage.Sheovercomemanydifficultiesandfinallyrealizedherdream.Inthestory,JudyandherfriendNickfoxcrackedacriminalcaseanduncoveredthetruecolorofthebadperson.TheiractionintheendsavedthepeaceofZootopia.Judyalwayssaid“Anyonecanbeanything.”It

means“Everythingispossible”.Ilikeit,because...,inwhich,who

which,,

whichZootopiaisthehottesta19

Zootopiaisthehottestanimatedmoviein2016madebyDreamWorks.Now,Iwillmakeabriefintroductiontothismovie,inwhichyouwillenjoyalotoffun.Judy,acleverandbraverabit,whohadadreamtobeapoliceofficerataveryyoungage,sufferedmanydifficultiesandfinallyrealizedherdream.Inthemovie,JudyandherfriendNickfoxcrackedacriminalcaseanduncoveredthetruecolorofthebadperson,whichintheendsavedthepeaceofZootopia.Judyalwayssaid“Anyonecanbeanything”,whichmeans“everythingispossible”.Ilikeit,becauseitinspiresmetofollowmydreamforever,nomatterwhathappens.Zootopiaisthehottest20AnintroductiontoafamousmovieName:TitanicCameout:1997Director:JamesContents:

這是一個(gè)感人的(moving)愛(ài)情故事，在故事中，一個(gè)名叫Jack的男人愛(ài)上了富家女Rose,并且為了救她而死。Classicscene:Jack從后面(frombehind)擁抱(hug)Rose,像鳥(niǎo)兒在海面上飛

簡(jiǎn)單說(shuō)明你喜歡這部電影的原因Anintroductiontoafamousm21Homework模仿電影介紹寫(xiě)一篇作文不少于100字向大家介紹一本你最喜歡的書(shū)Homework模仿電影介紹寫(xiě)一篇作文不少于100字22ThanksThanks23Iamgladtointroducetoyouafamousmovie.Themovie’snameisTitanic.Itcameoutin1997.ItsdirectorisJames.It’samovinglovestory.InthestoryamancalledJackfellinlovewitharichgirlRose,andinordertosaveher,hediedinthesea.Iwillneverforgettheclassicscene.Inthescene,JackhuggedRosefrombehind,likebirdsflyingonthesea.Thereasonwhy…..isthat….Iamgladtointroducetoyou24

Iam______________to_______________toyouamovie___________nameisTitanic.Themoviecameoutin1997______wasdirectedbyJames.It’samovinglovestory,_________amancalledJackfellinlovewitharichgirlRose,andinordertosaveher,hediedinthesea.Iwillneverforgettheclassicscene_________JackhuggedRosefrombehind,likebirdsflyingonthesea.Thereason___________I________________thismovieisthatit______________usof__________.glad

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whichwhereIam______________to_25TeachingPlanPart1Whatisthislessonabout?Part2WhyIdesignthislesson?Part3Howtopresentthislesson?TeachingPlanPart1Whatisth26Aims:BrieflyreviewthebasicskillsofattributiveclauseGuidethestudentstouseattributiveclauseinwritingImportance:studentsformthesenseofusingclausesandothercomplexsentencepatternsDifficulty:HowtoorganizethecomplicatedinformationinanorderlymannerandformahigherlevelcompositionbyusingAttributiveclause.Part1Whatisthislessonabout?Aims:Brieflyreviewthebasi27StudentsalwaysneglecttheimportanceofwritingStudentslackofwritingskills.Theycanonlyuseready-madesentencespatterns.Theyarenotcreative.Studentshaveastrongwishtoreachahigherlevel,buttheydon’tknowhow.Part2whyIdesignthislesson?Studentsalwaysneglecttheim28LeadinginstartingGoingdeepConsolidationhomeworkPart3howtopresentthislessonLeadinginstartingGoingdeepCo29AttributiveClauseinwriting

ByDingSongjieNo.3HighSchoolAttributiveClauseByDingSong30AbeautifulAnappleOneonthemountainwithacatsleepingunderitstandingbesideariverplantedbymymomwhichIplantedlastyearakindofplantAbeautifulAnappleOneonthe31定語(yǔ)從句

在寫(xiě)作中的簡(jiǎn)單應(yīng)用定語(yǔ)從句

在寫(xiě)作中的簡(jiǎn)單應(yīng)用32ateacheradayNo.3highschoolwhenthat/whichwherethat/whichWho/whoseateacheradayNo.3highsc33Thosepeoplearethehappiest.Thosepeoplemakeothershappy.Thosepeoplewhomakeothershappyarethehappiest.

─KarlMarxThosepeoplearethehappiest.34Heisthebestgeneral.Hemakesthefewestmistakes.Hewhomakesthefewestmistakesisthebestgeneral.-----HamiltonHeisthebestgeneral.Hewho35Godhelpthosepeople.Thosepeoplehelpthemselves.GodhelpthosewhohelpthemselvesGodhelpthosepeople.Godhelp36①

Johnismybestfriend.②Johngavemeagift.③HeboughtthisgiftfromtheUSA.Johnismybestfriendwhogavemeagift(that)heboughtfromtheUSAJohnwhoismybestfriendgavemeagiftthatheboughtfromtheUSAJohn,mybestfriend,gavemeagiftthatheboughtfromtheUSA①Johnismybestfriend.John37

①Kateisanewstudent.②Shecomesfromasmallcity.③Shespeaksadialect口音.④Herdialectishardtounderstand.Kateisanewstudentwhocomesfromasmallcity.Shespeaksadialectwhichishardtounderstand.

Kate,anewstudentfromasmallcity,speaksadialectwhichishardtounderstand.,①Kateisanewstudent.Ka38成龍，來(lái)自香港的著名影星，生于1954年,為中國(guó)電影做出了巨大貢獻(xiàn)JackieChan,afamousmoviestarfromHongKong,whowasbornin1954,makesgreatcontributionstoChinesemovie.成龍，來(lái)自香港的著名影星，生于1954年,為中國(guó)電影做出了巨39

特朗普Trump，美國(guó)最有名的地產(chǎn)商（landagent），生于1946年紐約.現(xiàn)在成功當(dāng)選為美國(guó)總統(tǒng)。他的最大特點(diǎn)feature是有錢。

Trump,themostfamouslandagent,whowasbornin1946inNewYork,becomespresidentoftheUSAsuccessfully,whosebiggestfeatureisrich.特朗普Trump，美國(guó)最有名的地產(chǎn)商（landagent40Jobs生于1955年,發(fā)明家，蘋(píng)果公司Apple的CEO他發(fā)明了許多風(fēng)靡全球的電子產(chǎn)品electricproducts，如：iMax,iPod,iPhone等。深刻改變了人們交流，娛樂(lè)及生活方式。Jobs,aninventorandCEOofApple,

whowasbornin1955,inventedmanyworldfamouselectricproducts,suchasiMax,iPodandiPhone,whichchangedpeople’swayofcommunication,entertainmentandlifeJobs生于1955年,發(fā)明家，蘋(píng)果公司Apple的41類型：娛樂(lè)節(jié)目entertainmentprogram來(lái)自：湖南衛(wèi)視TVstation播出（broadcast）內(nèi)容：在節(jié)目中，星爸和萌娃一起旅行影響：深受全國(guó)人民歡迎類型：娛樂(lè)節(jié)目entertainmentprogram42“Wherearewegoing,Dad?”isanentertainmentprogram.TheprogramisbroadcastinHunanTVstation.Intheprogram,starfathersandchildrentravelaroundthecountry.Theprogramispopularwithallpeople.“Wherearewegoing,Dad?”is43“Dad,wherearewegoing?”whichisanentertainmentprogramisbroadcastinHunanTVstation.Intheprogram,whichispopularwithpeople，starfathersandtheirchildrentravelaroundthecountry?！癉ad,wherearewegoing?”whi44“Wherearewegoing,Dad?”isanentertainmentprogram.TheprogramisbroadcastinHunanTVstation.Intheprogram,starfathersandchildrentravelaroundthecountry.Theprogramispopularwithallpeople.“Dad,wherearewegoing”anentertainmentprogram

broadcastinHunanTVstationispopularwithpeople,inwhichstarfathersandtheirchildrentravelaroundtheworld.“Wherearewegoing,Dad?”is45Name:ZootopiaCameout:2016Madeby:DreamWorksContents:Judy是一只聰明勇敢并從小立志當(dāng)警察的兔子,她在克服了重重困難之后終于實(shí)現(xiàn)了夢(mèng)想。在影片中Judy和好友Nickfox一起破獲了重大案件（crackacriminalcase）并且揭露（uncover）了壞人的真面目，最終保衛(wèi)了動(dòng)物城的和平安寧。朱迪總是說(shuō)“Anyonecanbeanything”，意思就是一切皆有可能。Animatedmovie喜歡的原因AnintroductiontoamovieName:ZootopiaAnimate46Zootopiaisthehottestanimatedmoviein2016.ItismadebyDreamWorks.Now,Iwillmakeabriefintroductiontothismovie.Inthismovieyouwillenjoyalotoffun.Judywasacleverandbraverabbitandhadadreamtobeapoliceofficerataveryyoungage.Sheovercomemanydifficultiesandfinallyrealizedherdream.Inthestory,JudyandherfriendNickfoxcrackedacriminalcaseanduncoveredthetruecolorofthebadperson.TheiractionintheendsavedthepeaceofZootopia.Judyalwayssaid“Anyonecanbeanything.”Itmeans“Everythingispossible”.Zootopiaisthehottestanimat47

Zootopiaisthehottestanimatedmoviein2016.ItismadebyDreamWorks.Now,Iwillmakeabriefintroductiontothismovie.Inthismovieyouwillenjoyalotoffun.Judywasacleverandbraverabbit

andhadadreamtobeapoliceofficerataveryyoungage.Sheovercomemanydifficultiesandfinallyrealizedherdream.Inthestory,JudyandherfriendNickfoxcrackedacriminalcaseanduncoveredthetruecolorofthebadperson.TheiractionintheendsavedthepeaceofZootopia.Judyalwayssaid“Anyonecanbeanything.”It

means“Everythingispossible”.Ilikeit,because...,inwhich,who

which,,

whichZootopiaisthehottesta48

Zootopiaisthehottestanimatedmoviein2016madebyDreamWorks.Now,Iwillmakeabriefintroductiontothismovie,inwhichyouwillenjoyalotoffun.Judy,acleverandbraverabit,whohadadreamtobeapoliceofficerataveryyoungage,sufferedmanydifficultiesandfinallyrealizedherdream.Inthemovie,JudyandherfriendNickfoxcrackedacriminalcaseanduncoveredthetruecolorofthebadperson,whichintheendsavedthepeaceofZootopia.Judyalwayssaid“Anyonecanbeanything”,whichmeans“everythingispossible”.Ilikeit,becauseitinspiresmetofollowmydreamforever,nomatterwhathappens.Zootopiaisthehottest49AnintroductiontoafamousmovieName:TitanicCameout:1997Director:JamesContents:

這是一個(gè)感人的(moving)愛(ài)情故事，在故事中，一個(gè)名叫Jack的男人愛(ài)上了富家女Rose,并且為了救她而死。Classicscene:Jack從后面(frombehind)擁抱(hug)Rose,像鳥(niǎo)兒在海面上飛

簡(jiǎn)單說(shuō)明你喜歡這部電影的原因Anintroductiontoafamousm50Homework模仿電影介紹寫(xiě)一篇作文不少于100字向大家介紹一本你最喜歡的書(shū)Homework模仿電影介紹寫(xiě)一篇作文不少于100字51ThanksThanks52Iamgladtointroducetoyouafamousmovie.Themovie’snameisTitanic.Itcameoutin1997.ItsdirectorisJames.It’samovinglovestory.InthestoryamancalledJackfellinlovewitharichgirlRose,andinordertosaveher,hediedinthesea.Iwillneverforgettheclassicscene.Inthescene,JackhuggedRosefrombehind,likebirdsflyingonthesea.Thereasonwhy…..isthat….Iamgladtointroducetoyou5