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2021年3月廣州一模讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)
巧克力的故事第二節(jié)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)(滿(mǎn)分25分)355words閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě),使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。
Ittookplaceinateachersfamily.Oneday,Benwasplayingbasketballinthelivingroomafterschool,whenheaccidentallythrewtheballatavasesittingontheshelf.Thevasedroppedtothefloorandalargepiecebrokeoff.WhatmadeBenmoreupsetwasthatthevasewasnotacommondecorationbutanantique,whichwashandeddownthroughgenerationsfromthe18thcentury.Itwasalsohismother'sfavouritepossession.Tocoverhisterribleaction,theterrifiedboygluedthepiecestogetherhastilyandputthevasebacktoitsplace.
Asthemotherherselfdustedthevaseeveryday,shenaturallynoticedthecracks(裂紋)thatevening.Tohersurprise,therepairworkwasactuallyverygood.Atdinnertime,sheaskedherboyifhebrokethevase.Fearingpunishment,thesuddenlyinspiredboysaidthataneighbor'scatjumpedinfromthewindowandhecouldn’tdriveitawaynomatterhowhardhetried.Itracedaroundthelivingroomandfinallyknockedthevaseoffitsshelf.Hismotherwasquiteclearthathersonwaslying,forallthewindowswereclosedbeforesheleftforworkeachmorningandopenedaftershereturned.However,inthefaceofherson’snervouseyesandthesuspiciouslooksoftheotherfamilymembers.Ben’smotherremainedcalm.Sherealizedsheshouldn’tjustsimplyblameandpunishhersonforlying.Shecameupwithanotheridea.
Beforegoingtobed,theboyfoundanotefromhismotherinhisroom,askinghimtogotothestudyatonce.Theboythoughthewouldnowbepunishedbut,ashehadalreadylied,hewasdeterminedtodenyeverythingtotheend,nomatterhowangryhismumbecame.
Inthestudy,calmlybathedinthelight,hismother'sfaceshowednosignofanger.Onseeinghersonpushopenthedoorandcautiouslyenter,shetookachocolateboxoutofadrawerandgavehimone.ReadforcharactersReadforconflictsReadforplotReadforemotionalchangesReadfortheme123455RsforContinuationWritingReadforCharactersRead1BenMothercalmlybathedinthelight,hismother'sfaceshowednosignofanger.naughtyBenwasplayingbasketballinthelivingroomafterschool,whenheaccidentallythrewtheballatavasesittingontheshelf.ashehadalreadylied,hewasdeterminedtodenyeverythingtotheend,nomatterhowangryhismumbecame.thesuddenlyinspiredboysaidthataneighbor'scatjumpedinfromthewindowandhecouldn’tdriveitawaynomatterhowhardhetried.quick-mindedrebelliousBen’smotherremainedcalm.Sherealizedsheshouldn’tjustsimplyblameandpunishhersonforlying.Shecameupwithanotheridea.calm;intelligent;patientAteacherIttookplaceinateacher’sfamily.Benwouldn’tadmithisfaulteasily.Ben’smotherwouldleadhimtoadmithisfaultinsteadofforcinghim.ReadReadforConflict...However,inthefaceofherson’snervouseyesandthesuspiciouslooksoftheotherfamilymembers.Ben’smotherremainedcalm.Sherealizedsheshouldn’tjustsimplyblameandpunishhersonforlying.Shecameupwithanotheridea.Beforegoingtobed,theboyfoundanotefromhismotherinhisroom,askinghimtogotothestudyatonce.Theboythoughthewouldnowbepunishedbut,ashehadalreadylied,hewasdeterminedtodenyeverythingtotheend,nomatterhowangryhismumbecame.Inthestudy,calmlybathedinthelight,hismothersfaceshowednosignofanger.Onseeinghersonpushopenthedoorandcautiouslyenter,shetookachocolateboxoutofadrawerandgavehimone.Benwasdeterminednottotellthetruthwhilehismotherwantedtomakehimadmit.Theconflictwassolvedbyaboxofchocolate.2ReadforPlotReadkeysentence:Sherealizedsheshouldn’tjustsimplyblameandpunishhersonforlying....shetookachocolateboxoutofadrawerandgavehimone
(p1)Benbrokethevaluablevasebyaccidentandgluedit.thebeginningMaindevelopmentResolutiontheending(p2)Benliedbuthismomcouldtellhislie.Climax(p3-p4)MomaskedBentogotothestudyandBenwasdeterminedtodenyeverythingtotheend.(p5)Ben'smomhadatalkwithhimwithaboxofchocolates.(p6)Ben'sbadattitudedisappeared.3Thischocolateisarewardfor...Withsomechocolatesinhand...Anotherchocolateisfor...Onemorechocolatefor...Paragraph1:Themothersaid,"Thischocolateisarewardforyourimagination:awindow-openingcat!”
Paragraph2:Nowwithsomechocolatesinhand,theboy’sbadattitudedisappeared.ReadReadforEmotionalChangesBen'sEmotionalChangesscarednervousBADattitudesembarrassedashamed4ReadReadforThemeorhonestyorfamilyeducation?5whatisthemomtryingtoteachhisson?
Whatistheauthortryingtotellthereader?Identifythethemeofthestory
Ittookplaceinateacher'sfamily.Oneday,Benwasplayingbasketball.......Itwasalsohismother'sfavouritepossession.Tocoverhisterribleaction,theterrifiedboy......Asthemotherherself.....Fearingpunishment,thesuddenlyinspiredboysaid...Hismotherwasquiteclear.....Ben’smotherremainedcalm.Sherealizedsheshouldn’tjustsimplyblameandpunishhersonforlying.Shecameupwithanotheridea.……Theboythoughthewouldnowbepunishedbut,ashehadalreadylied,hewasdeterminedtodenyeverythingtotheend,nomatterhowangryhismumbecame.......Nowwithsomechocolatesinhand,theboy’sbadattitudedisappeared.Theme--Whatistheauthortryingtosaytothereader?Paragraph1:
Themothersaid,"Thischocolateisarewardforyourimagination:awindow-openingcat!”
Q1:Anotherchocolateisfor...Q2:Onemorechocolatefor?Q3:WhatwereBen’sfeelingsandreactionstothemother’swords?Paragraph2:Nowwithsomechocolatesinhand,theboy’sbadattitudedisappeared.Q1:WhatdidBendoorsay?Q2:Whatdidmotherdoorsay?Q3:Howtoechothetheme?PredictionClue1:Tohersurprise,therepairworkwasactuallyverygood.Clue2:Theboy’sbadattitudedisappeared.
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Themothersaid,"Thischocolateisarewardforyourimagination:awindow-openingcat!”Astonishedashewasatherrewardinsteadofharshscold,Benreluctantlyreceivedit,notdaringtofixhiseyesonhismother’s.Then,themothersqueezedanotherchocolateinhishandasapraiseforhistoppingabilitytoskillfullyrestorethebrokenvase.Glancingatthechocolateswithhesitation,theboytimidlyraisedhisheadbeforehismother.Obviously,thetensiononhisfacefadedalittlebit.“Now,”themotherpickedoutathirdchocolateandsoftlycontinued,“thelastchocolate.Iamsosorry,mylittlesweetheart.Ishouldn’thavelaidafragilevaseataninappropriateplace,especiallywhenthereisaboysoabsorbedinsports.”Nowwithsomechocolatesinhand,theboy'sbadattitudedisappeared.“But,Mum,I…”,attemptingtomakesomethingclear,Benawkwardlyutterednothingbutsomewords.Hismothersilencedhimbygentlyputtingherfingeronhislips,gaveasoftkissonhisforeheadandwalkedoutofthestudy.Backi
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