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如何捕捉和照應(yīng)原文續(xù)寫(xiě)點(diǎn)一、捕捉和照應(yīng)續(xù)寫(xiě)點(diǎn)1.品讀原文首段2.提煉原文主題記敘文六要素：時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、起因、經(jīng)過(guò)、結(jié)果何人何時(shí)何地做了何事，結(jié)果如何，為什么寫(xiě)人：本文敘述了…（人），贊揚(yáng)了…人的…品質(zhì)；寫(xiě)事：本文敘述了…（事），說(shuō)明了…道理3.關(guān)注特定情節(jié)4.留意細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)：語(yǔ)言、動(dòng)作、神態(tài)、外貌、心理、環(huán)境、情感變化5.關(guān)注高頻詞反復(fù)出現(xiàn)、重點(diǎn)描寫(xiě)的特定物品6.留意原文結(jié)尾：1）起因經(jīng)過(guò)--結(jié)果；2）矛盾點(diǎn)/困難點(diǎn)—合理策略解決；3）沖突點(diǎn)—高潮點(diǎn)+結(jié)局4）高潮點(diǎn)—結(jié)局；5）人物內(nèi)心沖突的矛盾點(diǎn)/情感點(diǎn)—反轉(zhuǎn)對(duì)比7.解讀續(xù)寫(xiě)所給首句：第二段開(kāi)頭隱含第一段結(jié)尾信息二、真題案例【2016.10真題】閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě),使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,"I'mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp."andwalkedaway.Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.“Tom!”shecried.“Help!”Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落)somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,JanebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelakeAsshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.Paragraph1:Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Paragraph2:ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.1.品讀原文首段背景續(xù)寫(xiě)點(diǎn)：________________________________________________________________________________________

照應(yīng)方式：__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.提煉原文主題原文主題：__________________________________________________________________________________________照應(yīng)方式：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.關(guān)注特定情節(jié)特定情節(jié)續(xù)寫(xiě)點(diǎn)：____________________________________________________________________________________照應(yīng)方式：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.留意細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)續(xù)寫(xiě)點(diǎn)：語(yǔ)言：______________________________________________________________________________________________照應(yīng)：__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________動(dòng)作：______________________________________________________________________________________________照應(yīng)：__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________心理：______________________________________________________________________________________________照應(yīng)：__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.關(guān)注高頻詞高頻詞續(xù)寫(xiě)點(diǎn)：______________________________________________________________________________________照應(yīng)方式：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6.品讀原文結(jié)尾原文結(jié)尾續(xù)寫(xiě)點(diǎn)：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________照應(yīng)方式：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7.解讀所給首句所給首句續(xù)寫(xiě)點(diǎn)：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________照應(yīng)方式：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________習(xí)作1Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Janestoppedwalkingandleanedagainstatreebythestream.AlthoughitwasalreadyJuly,Janestillfeltverycoldintheforest,andthegurgleofthestreamatnightaddedhercoldandloneliness.IfshehadneverquarreledwithTom,theywouldbeenjoyingtheperfectquietnighttogetherinthewarmtent.Restingherheadonthelapandhuggingherselftightly,Janefellasleep,withtearsstillonhercheeks.ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Thenightmareexhaustedher.Kneelingbesidethestream,sherefreshedherselfwiththewater.Aftereatingsomeberries,shemadeherwaytofindthelake.Afteramileorso,fortunately,thesoundofthehelicopterwasheardagain.Janegatheredherstrengthtoclimbarock,wavingheryellowblouse.Tohergreatjoy,thehelicopterdidn'tflyawaythistime.Tomhuggedherasifshewouldgetlostagain.Janesighedinrelief,shewassafewithTom.Sheneedn'tstayintheforestforanothernight.習(xí)作2Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.ItwasevenharderforJanetofindthelake.Shestoppedandrestedagainstatreebythestream.“Ishouldn'thavequarreledwithTomaboutthetinythings,”sheregretted.“IfIhadn'twalkedawayangrily,Iwouldn'thavegotlost.”AgainJanelayawakeinthedark,missingTomandherfamily.HerangerwasovertakenbytheloveshefeltforTom.Sheknewhewasconcernedabouthersafetyandwassearchingforher.Gradually,shecalmeddownandfellasleep.ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Shebecameenergeticafteranight'ssleep.Aftereatingsomeberries,shemovedontofindthelake.Walkingalongthestream,JanewaswavingheryellowblouseandprayingthatTomwouldfindhersoon.Herprayerwasreallyheard!Tomespottedheryellowblousefromthehelicopter.Tomdashedtohugherassoonasthehelicopterlanded.Theyapologizedtoeachother,forgaveeachotherwithtearsintheireyesandwenthomehappily,planningthenextcampintheforestagain.練習(xí)ThreeyearsagoIwasarrangedtoworkforafewweeksasadentistinanewdentalclinicatVictorHarbor,tothesouthofAdelaideandanhourfurtherawaythanmyusualworkplace.Myfirstdaytherewasarush-drivingtoanewandunfamiliarclinicadgettingaccustomedtothedifferentrulesandclinicalenvironment.Inmyworryadanxiety,andfeelingalittleunfamiliarinthenewsetting,Iremovemythreerings:myweddingwring,aringthatbelongedtomymotherandonethatwasananniversarygiftfrommyhusband.Iwrappedtheminatissueandplacedthembesidemycomputer.DuringmylunchbreakInoticedthewrinkledtissueandthoughtthatitdidnotlookveryneataddroppeditintotherubbishbin.Iwentaboutmydutiesandmydaywentonwell;ImetnewpatientsandfeltthatIhadbeenproductiveandefficient.Drivinghomeattheendoftheday,justmomentsbeforeIreachedmyhouse,InoticedthatIwasmissingmyrings.Ifelttheheatinmybodyrise,mychecksburningred.Iwentinsideandtriedtocalmdown.IfeltsicktomystomachandIhadthatsinkingfeelinginmyheart.Ispentanhourorsomakingcalls,tryingtofollowthetrackofmyrings.ThefistpeopleIcalledweremymanagerandclinicalleaderandtheygavemeafewcontactnumbersforcleaners.Igotintouchwithaladywhomanagedthecleaningservicesfortheclinic,andsheinformedmethatthebinshadalreadybeencollected.Heartbroken,Iknewnothingcouldbedonenow.Ihadlostmyweddingringandoneofmymosttreasuredrings--mymother’sweddingring.Haditnotbeenformycarelessness,allthiswouldnothavehappened.Withgreatsorrowandregret,Ijustsatthererootedinmychair,prayingtoGodformyunforgivableguilt.Aftertwoorsohours,Ireceivedamostamazingphonecall.______________________________________________Idecidedtothankthewonderfulpersonfacetoface.____________________________________________________1.原文首段續(xù)寫(xiě)點(diǎn)：__________________________________________________________________________________

照應(yīng)方式：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2原文主題：_________________________________________________________________________________________照應(yīng)方式：__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.特定情節(jié)續(xù)寫(xiě)點(diǎn)：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________照應(yīng)方式：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.留意細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)續(xù)寫(xiě)點(diǎn)：失去戒指后的悲傷：_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________照應(yīng)：__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________對(duì)工作環(huán)境的情感：_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________照應(yīng)：__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.高頻詞續(xù)寫(xiě)點(diǎn)：____________________________________________________________________________________照應(yīng)方式：__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________原文結(jié)尾續(xù)寫(xiě)點(diǎn)：__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________照應(yīng)方式：__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7.所給首句續(xù)寫(xiě)點(diǎn)所給首句1續(xù)寫(xiě)點(diǎn)：___________________________________________________________________________________照應(yīng)方式：__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________所給首句2續(xù)寫(xiě)點(diǎn)：___________________________________________________________________________________照應(yīng)方式：__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Aftertwoorsohours,Ireceivedamostamazingphonecall.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________