測(cè)評(píng)卷作文一+廣東一模+-約稿信課件

缺點(diǎn)：1.審題不清楚（直接寫(xiě)成了建議信模板）2.過(guò)渡不自然（中間段落）3.自我介紹那句話(huà)仍然不熟，導(dǎo)致出錯(cuò)Iamastudent，whostudyinginguangmingnationalschool.4.有一個(gè)同學(xué)分段，一點(diǎn)一段5.背的句子還是出現(xiàn)單詞錯(cuò)誤如Herearemysuggestionsasfollow.I’mwrittingthisletter....writting寫(xiě)錯(cuò)suggestions沒(méi)加s6.缺開(kāi)頭稱(chēng)呼結(jié)尾7.內(nèi)容不夠建議：背好模板靈活運(yùn)用仔細(xì)審題寫(xiě)對(duì)單詞句子寫(xiě)滿(mǎn)寫(xiě)漂亮缺點(diǎn)：(周測(cè)一）范文：Deareditor，（自我介紹）IamLiHua,astudentstudyinginGuangmingInternationalSchool.（寫(xiě)信背景/原因）Inordertorespondtoprotectingteenagers‘eyesight，ourschoolEnglishnewspaperplanstocallforpapersonthistopic，whichIamextremelyinterestedin.（寫(xiě)信目的）soI’mwrtingtoparticipateinthiswritingcontest.

（與第三點(diǎn)保護(hù)視力的建議的過(guò)渡）Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology，nearsightednessisbecomingmoreandmorecommonandhavingabadeffectonpeople‘slife，especiallystudentsatyoungage.

Therefore，thewholesocietyaresupposedtotakeactiontoprotectteenagers’eyesight.（引出建議123）

Tobeginwith，bothlocalgovernmentandschoolsshouldpaymoreattentiontoourstudyburden.(周測(cè)一）范文：Besides，asstudents，it‘sagoodideathatweshouldtakepartinmoreoutdooractivities，suchasplayingbasketball，runningandsoon.Lastbutnotleast，themostimportantthingisthatwemustcutdownonscreentimeandgetridofaddictiontocomputersorsmartphones.Inaword，onlyinthiswaycanweprotectoureyesightandhaveabrighterfuture.（總結(jié)）IsincerelyhopemyessaycanmeetyourqualificationsexactlyandIwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucanadoptmyarticle.（結(jié)合實(shí)際的結(jié)尾）Besides，asstudents，it‘sagoo廣東一模擬作文Deareditor，（自我介紹）IamLiHua,ahighschoolstudentwhoisenthusiasticaboutreadingthenewspaper/journalcalledEnglishMonthlysetupbyourSchool.（寫(xiě)信背景/原因）KnowingourschoolEnglishnewspaperplanstocallforopinions,Iamextremelyinterestedinit.（寫(xiě)信目的）SoI’mwritingtogivemypersonalopinionsonmyfavoritenewspaper.廣東一模擬作文Deareditor，

該報(bào)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)：

Inmyopinion,EnglishMonthlyhasmanyadvantages.Foronething,

it’srichincontent,rangingfromeconomytocivilization.Foranother,it’saguidetoEnglishlearning.Throughit,Icanhaveagoodknowledgeofwhat’sgoingonathomeandabroadandI’veimprovedmyEnglishreadingskills.建議：IfonlyyoucouldintroducesomemoreaboutChinesetraditionalcultureandinspirationalstoriesintheculturecolumn/section.Forexample,youcouldintroducemoreChinesefestivals’originsandstoriesaboutthefestivals.Ihopemyopinionscanbeofhelptoyou.HereIreallyhopeEnglishMonthlywillattractmorereaders.該報(bào)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)：Inmyopinion,Engli約稿信是指報(bào)紙，雜志，文化欄目等媒體邀請(qǐng)別人寫(xiě)稿的信件。在信中需要介紹該媒體的欄目特點(diǎn)和媒體的受眾范圍。在約稿時(shí)要指定稿件的內(nèi)容（約稿發(fā)起人既可以規(guī)定要寫(xiě)作的內(nèi)容，也可以讓被約稿人根據(jù)媒體和欄目的性質(zhì)自己擬定寫(xiě)作題目和內(nèi)容），并且要約定稿件大致的篇幅和交稿日期。8.約稿信8.約稿信step1寫(xiě)作思路第一段：邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方寫(xiě)稿件(或目的)；第二段：介紹欄目或媒體的特點(diǎn)和受眾范圍。稿件內(nèi)容，標(biāo)題。長(zhǎng)度和交稿日期。第三段：表達(dá)希望得到對(duì)方的回復(fù)。約稿函約稿函1.我想請(qǐng)你為…寫(xiě)一篇文章______________________2.你可以寫(xiě)一些關(guān)于…______________________3.…是很受歡迎的______________________4.它刊登由…寫(xiě)的文章______________________5.你能寫(xiě)點(diǎn)關(guān)于…嗎？______________________Iwouldliketoaskyoutowriteanarticlefor.Youcanwritesomethingabout…isverypopularamongusstudentsItcarriesarticleswrittenby…常用語(yǔ)塊6.我們會(huì)特別歡迎有關(guān)…的文章。_______________________7.你可以寫(xiě)與…相關(guān)的任何東西。_______________________8.約120個(gè)詞就好。_______________________9.我們?cè)凇澳苁盏侥愕奈恼聠?？_______________________10.體育專(zhuān)欄/娛樂(lè)專(zhuān)欄_______________________Wouldyoupleasewritesomethingabout…Wewouldespeciallywelcomearticlesabout…Youcanwritesomethingrelevantto…About120wordswouldbefine.11.使某人了解_______________________13.請(qǐng)將文章發(fā)送至..._______________________Anarticlewithin400wordswouldbefine.Couldwehaveyourarticlebefore…?sportscolumn/entertainmentcolumnmake/helpsb.knowsth.aboutpleasesendyourcompositionto1.我想請(qǐng)你為…寫(xiě)一篇文章______________Practice注意寫(xiě)作的思路框架Practice假定你是李華，你校英文報(bào)“外國(guó)文化”欄目擬刊登美國(guó)節(jié)日風(fēng)俗和中學(xué)生生活的短文。請(qǐng)給美國(guó)朋友Peter寫(xiě)信約稿，要點(diǎn)如下：1.欄目介紹。2.稿件內(nèi)容；3.稿件長(zhǎng)度：約400詞匯4.交稿日期：4月2日前天注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫的；3.開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好。約稿信：寫(xiě)作練習(xí)1假定你是李華，你校英文報(bào)“外國(guó)文化”欄目擬寫(xiě)作練習(xí)1要點(diǎn)整合：第一步：邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方寫(xiě)稿件(目的)；*我想請(qǐng)你為我校英文報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇文章。第二步：介紹欄目或媒體的特點(diǎn)和受眾范圍。*“外國(guó)文化”欄目很受師生歡迎。*它刊登很多外國(guó)友人寫(xiě)的關(guān)于國(guó)外文化的文章。第三步：稿件內(nèi)容,長(zhǎng)度和交稿日期。你能寫(xiě)點(diǎn)美國(guó)節(jié)日風(fēng)俗方面的東西嗎？我們特別歡迎有關(guān)中學(xué)生生活的文章。順便，約400個(gè)詞就好。我們能在4月2日前收到你的文章嗎？第四步：期待回復(fù)。spendtheirholidaysandfestivals，thelifeofAmericanhighschoolstudents寫(xiě)作練習(xí)1要點(diǎn)整合：第一步：邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方寫(xiě)稿件(目的)；DearPeter,

Iwouldliketoaskyoutowriteanarticleforourschool’sEnglishnewspaper.The“ForeignCultures”sectioninournewspaperisverypopularamongusstudents.Itcarriesarticleswrittenbyforeignfriendsabouttheculturesoftheirhomecountries.WouldyoupleasewritesomethingaboutthecultureinyourpartofUnitedStates?AndwewouldespeciallywelcomearticlesabouthowAmericansspendtheirholidaysandfestivalsandtheeverydaylifeofAmericanseniorhighstudents?Youcanwriteanythingrelevantsolongasitisinterestingandinformative.400wordswouldbefine.CouldIhaveyourarticlebeforeApril2nd?

Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua參考范文1DearPeter,參考范文1廣東一模的詞匯1.staff2.crew3.emergencypowersupply4.instead5.makeabigdifference6.immigrant7.landmark8.mainstream9.search10.research11.explore/exploration12.explode/explosion13.beequippedwith14.remotelyoperatedvehicle15.weighsbdown16.liftup17.lightup廣東一模的詞匯1.staff2.crew3.作者的態(tài)度贊成：supportive,approveof/support/infavorof/favorable/agreewith反對(duì)：disapprove,disagree,objectto中立：neutral,indifferent懷疑:doubtful,

criticize樂(lè)觀(guān)：positive,optimistic,active消極：negative,pessimistic,passive幽默：humorous羨慕：environs關(guān)切：caring不關(guān)心的、冷漠的：uncaring,indefferent厭惡：disgusting/hate擔(dān)憂(yōu)：concerned/worried失望：disappointed沮喪：upset容忍：tolerant作者的態(tài)度贊成：supportive,approveof作文1.一位在、、學(xué)習(xí)的學(xué)生2.為了響應(yīng)、、

3.征集、、的文章/意見(jiàn)4.減少屏幕時(shí)間5.內(nèi)容豐富，覆蓋經(jīng)濟(jì)到文化6.掌握國(guó)內(nèi)外發(fā)生的事情7.要是你可以在文化專(zhuān)欄中多介紹有關(guān)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化和勵(lì)志的故事該多好??！8.我真心地希望我的文章可以很好地達(dá)到你的要求！9.它刊登很多外國(guó)友人寫(xiě)的關(guān)于國(guó)外文化的文章10.我們特別歡迎….的文章作文1.一位在、、學(xué)習(xí)的學(xué)生作文1.一位在、、學(xué)習(xí)的學(xué)生astudentstudyingin

2.為了響應(yīng)、、Inordertorespondtodoing/n

3.征集、、的文章/意見(jiàn)callforpaperson/callforopinions4.減少屏幕時(shí)間cutdownonscreentime

5.內(nèi)容豐富，覆蓋經(jīng)濟(jì)到文化it’srichincontent,rangingfromeconomytocivilization6.掌握國(guó)內(nèi)外發(fā)生的事情haveagoodknowledgeofwhat’sgoingonathomeandabroad

7.要是你可以在文化專(zhuān)欄中多介紹有關(guān)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化和勵(lì)志的故事該多好?。fonlyyoucouldintroducesomemoreaboutChinesetraditionalcultureandinspirational

storiesintheculturecolumn/section

8.我真心地希望我的文章可以很好地達(dá)到你的要求！Isincerelyhopemyessaycanmeetyourqualificationsexactly.9.它刊登很多外國(guó)友人寫(xiě)的關(guān)于國(guó)外文化的文章Itcarries/publishedarticleswrittenbyforeignfriendsabouttheculturesoftheirhomecountries.

10.我們特別歡迎….的文章wewouldespeciallywelcomearticlesabout….作文1.一位在、、學(xué)習(xí)的學(xué)生astudentstudyi缺點(diǎn)：1.審題不清楚（直接寫(xiě)成了建議信模板）2.過(guò)渡不自然（中間段落）3.自我介紹那句話(huà)仍然不熟，導(dǎo)致出錯(cuò)Iamastudent，whostudyinginguangmingnationalschool.4.有一個(gè)同學(xué)分段，一點(diǎn)一段5.背的句子還是出現(xiàn)單詞錯(cuò)誤如Herearemysuggestionsasfollow.I’mwrittingthisletter....writting寫(xiě)錯(cuò)suggestions沒(méi)加s6.缺開(kāi)頭稱(chēng)呼結(jié)尾7.內(nèi)容不夠建議：背好模板靈活運(yùn)用仔細(xì)審題寫(xiě)對(duì)單詞句子寫(xiě)滿(mǎn)寫(xiě)漂亮缺點(diǎn)：(周測(cè)一）范文：Deareditor，（自我介紹）IamLiHua,astudentstudyinginGuangmingInternationalSchool.（寫(xiě)信背景/原因）Inordertorespondtoprotectingteenagers‘eyesight，ourschoolEnglishnewspaperplanstocallforpapersonthistopic，whichIamextremelyinterestedin.（寫(xiě)信目的）soI’mwrtingtoparticipateinthiswritingcontest.

（與第三點(diǎn)保護(hù)視力的建議的過(guò)渡）Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology，nearsightednessisbecomingmoreandmorecommonandhavingabadeffectonpeople‘slife，especiallystudentsatyoungage.

Therefore，thewholesocietyaresupposedtotakeactiontoprotectteenagers’eyesight.（引出建議123）

Tobeginwith，bothlocalgovernmentandschoolsshouldpaymoreattentiontoourstudyburden.(周測(cè)一）范文：Besides，asstudents，it‘sagoodideathatweshouldtakepartinmoreoutdooractivities，suchasplayingbasketball，runningandsoon.Lastbutnotleast，themostimportantthingisthatwemustcutdownonscreentimeandgetridofaddictiontocomputersorsmartphones.Inaword，onlyinthiswaycanweprotectoureyesightandhaveabrighterfuture.（總結(jié)）IsincerelyhopemyessaycanmeetyourqualificationsexactlyandIwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucanadoptmyarticle.（結(jié)合實(shí)際的結(jié)尾）Besides，asstudents，it‘sagoo廣東一模擬作文Deareditor，（自我介紹）IamLiHua,ahighschoolstudentwhoisenthusiasticaboutreadingthenewspaper/journalcalledEnglishMonthlysetupbyourSchool.（寫(xiě)信背景/原因）KnowingourschoolEnglishnewspaperplanstocallforopinions,Iamextremelyinterestedinit.（寫(xiě)信目的）SoI’mwritingtogivemypersonalopinionsonmyfavoritenewspaper.廣東一模擬作文Deareditor，

該報(bào)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)：

Inmyopinion,EnglishMonthlyhasmanyadvantages.Foronething,

it’srichincontent,rangingfromeconomytocivilization.Foranother,it’saguidetoEnglishlearning.Throughit,Icanhaveagoodknowledgeofwhat’sgoingonathomeandabroadandI’veimprovedmyEnglishreadingskills.建議：IfonlyyoucouldintroducesomemoreaboutChinesetraditionalcultureandinspirationalstoriesintheculturecolumn/section.Forexample,youcouldintroducemoreChinesefestivals’originsandstoriesaboutthefestivals.Ihopemyopinionscanbeofhelptoyou.HereIreallyhopeEnglishMonthlywillattractmorereaders.該報(bào)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)：Inmyopinion,Engli約稿信是指報(bào)紙，雜志，文化欄目等媒體邀請(qǐng)別人寫(xiě)稿的信件。在信中需要介紹該媒體的欄目特點(diǎn)和媒體的受眾范圍。在約稿時(shí)要指定稿件的內(nèi)容（約稿發(fā)起人既可以規(guī)定要寫(xiě)作的內(nèi)容，也可以讓被約稿人根據(jù)媒體和欄目的性質(zhì)自己擬定寫(xiě)作題目和內(nèi)容），并且要約定稿件大致的篇幅和交稿日期。8.約稿信8.約稿信step1寫(xiě)作思路第一段：邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方寫(xiě)稿件(或目的)；第二段：介紹欄目或媒體的特點(diǎn)和受眾范圍。稿件內(nèi)容，標(biāo)題。長(zhǎng)度和交稿日期。第三段：表達(dá)希望得到對(duì)方的回復(fù)。約稿函約稿函1.我想請(qǐng)你為…寫(xiě)一篇文章______________________2.你可以寫(xiě)一些關(guān)于…______________________3.…是很受歡迎的______________________4.它刊登由…寫(xiě)的文章______________________5.你能寫(xiě)點(diǎn)關(guān)于…嗎？______________________Iwouldliketoaskyoutowriteanarticlefor.Youcanwritesomethingabout…isverypopularamongusstudentsItcarriesarticleswrittenby…常用語(yǔ)塊6.我們會(huì)特別歡迎有關(guān)…的文章。_______________________7.你可以寫(xiě)與…相關(guān)的任何東西。_______________________8.約120個(gè)詞就好。_______________________9.我們?cè)凇澳苁盏侥愕奈恼聠幔縚______________________10.體育專(zhuān)欄/娛樂(lè)專(zhuān)欄_______________________Wouldyoupleasewritesomethingabout…Wewouldespeciallywelcomearticlesabout…Youcanwritesomethingrelevantto…About120wordswouldbefine.11.使某人了解_______________________13.請(qǐng)將文章發(fā)送至..._______________________Anarticlewithin400wordswouldbefine.Couldwehaveyourarticlebefore…?sportscolumn/entertainmentcolumnmake/helpsb.knowsth.aboutpleasesendyourcompositionto1.我想請(qǐng)你為…寫(xiě)一篇文章______________Practice注意寫(xiě)作的思路框架Practice假定你是李華，你校英文報(bào)“外國(guó)文化”欄目擬刊登美國(guó)節(jié)日風(fēng)俗和中學(xué)生生活的短文。請(qǐng)給美國(guó)朋友Peter寫(xiě)信約稿，要點(diǎn)如下：1.欄目介紹。2.稿件內(nèi)容；3.稿件長(zhǎng)度：約400詞匯4.交稿日期：4月2日前天注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫的；3.開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好。約稿信：寫(xiě)作練習(xí)1假定你是李華，你校英文報(bào)“外國(guó)文化”欄目擬寫(xiě)作練習(xí)1要點(diǎn)整合：第一步：邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方寫(xiě)稿件(目的)；*我想請(qǐng)你為我校英文報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇文章。第二步：介紹欄目或媒體的特點(diǎn)和受眾范圍。*“外國(guó)文化”欄目很受師生歡迎。*它刊登很多外國(guó)友人寫(xiě)的關(guān)于國(guó)外文化的文章。第三步：稿件內(nèi)容,長(zhǎng)度和交稿日期。你能寫(xiě)點(diǎn)美國(guó)節(jié)日風(fēng)俗方面的東西嗎？我們特別歡迎有關(guān)中學(xué)生生活的文章。順便，約400個(gè)詞就好。我們能在4月2日前收到你的文章嗎？第四步：期待回復(fù)。spendtheirholidaysandfestivals，thelifeofAmericanhighschoolstudents寫(xiě)作練習(xí)1要點(diǎn)整合：第一步：邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方寫(xiě)稿件(目的)；DearPeter,

Iwouldliketoaskyoutowriteanarticleforourschool’sEnglishnewspaper.The“ForeignCultures”sectioninournewspaperisverypopularamongusstudents.Itcarriesarticleswrittenbyforeignfriendsabouttheculturesoftheirhomecountries.WouldyoupleasewritesomethingaboutthecultureinyourpartofUnitedStates?AndwewouldespeciallywelcomearticlesabouthowAmericansspendtheirholidaysandfestivalsandtheeverydaylifeofAmericanseniorhighstudents?Youcanwriteanythingrelevantsolongasitisinterestingandinformative.400wordswouldbefine.CouldIhaveyourarticlebeforeApril2nd?

Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua參考范文1DearPeter,參考范文1廣東一模的詞匯1.staff2.crew3.emergencypowersupply4.instead5.makeabigdifference6.immigrant7.landmark8.mainstream9.search10.research11.explore/exploration12.explode/explosion13.beequippedwith14.remotelyoperatedvehicle15.weighsbdown16.liftup17.lightup廣東一模的詞匯1.staff2.crew3.作者的態(tài)度贊成：supportive,app