2020年中考英語(yǔ)作文專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練

中考英語(yǔ)作文專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練一、考點(diǎn)分析：在中考中，寫作占20分，分值所占比例大，而寫作考察學(xué)生的英文綜合運(yùn)用能力，因此非常關(guān)鍵?！局锌加⒄Z(yǔ)作文的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】比較為學(xué)生所熟悉的就是“8+8+4”結(jié)構(gòu)，即：（一）內(nèi)容：7-8分：內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達(dá)清楚、完整。5-6分：內(nèi)容基本切題，意思大致連貫，表達(dá)基本清楚、但不夠完整。2-4分：內(nèi)容不夠切題，意思不夠連貫，表達(dá)不夠清楚、有些離題。0-1分：文不對(duì)題，表達(dá)不清。（二）語(yǔ)言：詞數(shù)：每少5個(gè)字扣0.5分，以此類推。只寫出個(gè)別單詞、詞不成句不給分。拼寫：每錯(cuò)扣0.5分，同一錯(cuò)誤不重復(fù)計(jì)數(shù)。語(yǔ)法：同②標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、大小寫：每?jī)商庡e(cuò)誤扣0.5分，但扣分總和不超過(guò)1分。（三）組織結(jié)構(gòu)：內(nèi)容充實(shí)、上下文連貫、用語(yǔ)規(guī)范、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、無(wú)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤；詞匯和句型句式運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)，多見(jiàn)好句型和習(xí)慣表達(dá)用語(yǔ)者，可給3-4分。內(nèi)容充實(shí)、不寫廢話；上下文連貫、用語(yǔ)規(guī)范、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、無(wú)或少見(jiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤；詞匯和句型句式運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)，多見(jiàn)好句型和習(xí)慣表達(dá)用語(yǔ)者，可給2分。一般情況下，內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言累計(jì)得分在15分以上者（含），方可得到1-2分組織結(jié)構(gòu)分。內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言在15分以下者，如文中有值得肯定的好句型和表達(dá)，可酌情考慮給1分組織結(jié)構(gòu)分。通篇句型、句式單一、詞匯貧乏者，即使無(wú)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，一般也不予給組織結(jié)構(gòu)分。二、寫作中常見(jiàn)問(wèn)題：內(nèi)容空洞，沒(méi)有清晰的思路，表達(dá)能力不強(qiáng)，表達(dá)生硬呆板，甚至中式英語(yǔ)翻譯思維。議論過(guò)多，描寫不足。大多數(shù)情況下，把議論當(dāng)成的作文的重點(diǎn)，常常跑題。句式單一，都是簡(jiǎn)單句，缺少?gòu)?fù)合句。結(jié)構(gòu)散漫，思維跳躍，文章缺乏條理性。連詞的使用較少，并且使用單一，句子之間的連接很生硬。文章平淡，無(wú)亮點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)和句型，連接詞等。三、寫作技巧分析：【高分作文的必備元素】書寫工整，書面整潔，很少有涂改痕跡。2.不出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法，拼寫，標(biāo)點(diǎn)，大小寫等錯(cuò)誤。3.文章字?jǐn)?shù)最好控制在80-100字之間，切記過(guò)長(zhǎng)或者過(guò)短，8-10句即可。4.要點(diǎn)齊全。為了避免遺漏要點(diǎn)，可以將題目中給出的要點(diǎn)標(biāo)注出來(lái)。5.開(kāi)頭言簡(jiǎn)意賅，不啰嗦，不偏題，迅速引入主題。6.連接詞使用恰當(dāng)，不重復(fù)，上下文有連貫性，使之自然成一體。應(yīng)用詞匯:高級(jí)詞匯的合理使用、同義詞的變化使用、短語(yǔ)的恰當(dāng)使用。多用亮點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)，并且使短語(yǔ)多樣性，盡可能使用多種表達(dá)方式。比如：同一個(gè)意思“幫助”，假如你就用一個(gè)動(dòng)詞“help”，顯得詞匯貧乏。如果能在作文中不斷地變換方式，用help、givesb.ahand、dosb.afavor、beinneedof等以表達(dá)“幫助”，表達(dá)更靈活生動(dòng)。句式多樣性，可適當(dāng)使用陳述句，疑問(wèn)句，祈使句及感嘆句，強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句，定語(yǔ)從句，狀語(yǔ)從句，賓語(yǔ)從句等。能夠恰當(dāng)使用諺語(yǔ)、格言、名言等給文章添彩。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)多樣性,主動(dòng)被動(dòng)交叉用，原級(jí)比較級(jí)靈活用，非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞恰當(dāng)用。靈活使用萬(wàn)能句型，增添文章亮點(diǎn)。四、中考經(jīng)典范文解讀：VII.Writing（作文）（共20分）94.Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Iwanttoinvent”（以“我想要發(fā)明”為題，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）（注意：1、在答題紙上將題目補(bǔ)充完整。2、短．文．中．不．得．出．現(xiàn)．任．何．人．名．、．校．名．及．其．他．相．關(guān)．信．息．，．否．則．不．予．評(píng)．分．。）Thefollowingisforreferenceonly.（以下表達(dá)僅供參考）Itcanbeusedto...Itwillbeexciting/necessary/helpfhlto.范文精選一及點(diǎn)評(píng)：IwanttoinventaflyingcarItisnotuncommontomeettrafficproblemsandseriousairpollutioninbigcity.Itisamusttohaveaplantoimprovetheseriouscondition.Igetanideatodesignmyownflyingmachinelikeacarwhichcandrivewellinthestreetaswellasflybetweenthehighrisestoavoidthetrafficjam.What'smore,whenitismoving,itcantransformthemotionenergyintoelectricitytodrivetheengine.Thus,itispossibletosavealotoffuelandreducetheairpollution.Itisofgreatusetosolvetheproblemsoftrafficjamandairpollution,andevensavethenaturalresource.Brightideacanonlybeachievedwiththedeterminationandcourage.Ibelievemyideawillturnanewleafoffuturelife.精彩亮點(diǎn)分析：亮點(diǎn)一：高分短語(yǔ)亮點(diǎn)二：itisamust活用高頻詞亮點(diǎn)三：定語(yǔ)從句描述自己設(shè)計(jì)的汽車亮點(diǎn)四：高分短語(yǔ)亮點(diǎn)五：beofgreatuse名詞結(jié)構(gòu)更高端亮點(diǎn)六：被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，豐富句式亮點(diǎn)七：turnanewleafoffuturelife翻開(kāi)未來(lái)生活的新篇章范文精選二及點(diǎn)評(píng)：IwanttoinventatimemachineAsastudentwhoisexperiencingunprecedentedmodernlifenowadays,Iwouldratherlearnaboutthehistoryandthefuturelifeofhumanbeingfromarealexperiencethanlearnfromatextbook.That'swhyifIcanworkasagreatinventor,inventingatimemachinewillbemyfirstchoice.ThemostimportantusageofmytimemachinewillbevisitingoneofbestschoolsinTangDynasty.Asweallknow,TangDynastyisfamousforitsopen-mindededucation.Therefore,whenIvisittheschooloftheancientcity,Icannotonlytrydifferentwaysofstudyingbutcommunicatewithpeoplefromdifferentcountriesaswell.Usingatimemachineisthemostvividwaytolearnhistoryasitisbotharecordofmankindandamirrorofpast,Iamlookingforwardtothedaywhenmytimemachinecomesout.精彩亮點(diǎn)分析：亮點(diǎn)一：定語(yǔ)從句修飾對(duì)學(xué)生現(xiàn)在的生活亮點(diǎn)二：用wouldrather…than…表達(dá)學(xué)生的意愿亮點(diǎn)三：用if條件狀語(yǔ)從句表達(dá)主題亮點(diǎn)四：befamousfor因…而著名亮點(diǎn)五：notonly...but...aswell不但…而且…亮點(diǎn)六：用動(dòng)名詞詞組做主語(yǔ)亮點(diǎn)七：用idiom突出歷史的重要性亮點(diǎn)八：定語(yǔ)從句表達(dá)學(xué)生的期待范文精選三及點(diǎn)評(píng)：IWantToInventAFamilyDoctorRobotIwanttoinventafamilydoctorrobot,whichcanbeusedtocuretheillnesswithoutgoingoutoftheirhome.AsfarasI'mconcerned,itwillbeextremelyhelpfulandusefulbecauseofthefollowingreasons:First,youcanseethedoctorimmediatelyathomewhenyoufeelsickorgethurt.Itcansaveusalotoftime,especiallyinemergencysituations.Furthermore,hospitalstodayarealwaysfilledwithpatients,noteveryonecanbetakengoodcareof.However,withthehelpofourrobotdoctors,youcantalktoyourpersonaldoctoronetoonewheneveryouwant.Inshort,familydoctorrobotscanmakegreatcontributiontooursociety.精彩亮點(diǎn)分析：亮點(diǎn)一：全文巧用“first,furthermore,inshort”等連接詞，把家庭機(jī)器人醫(yī)生的好處寫的非常清晰，讓閱卷老師一目了然。亮點(diǎn)二：全文采用了定語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句、并列句等多種長(zhǎng)難句，為文采分增色不少。亮點(diǎn)三：文中出現(xiàn)了“extremely,makecontributionto”這些超綱單詞及詞組，恰到好處地強(qiáng)調(diào)了家庭機(jī)器人醫(yī)生的重要性，且為文采再次進(jìn)行潤(rùn)色。VII.Writing（作文）（共20分）94.Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“I'mready”（以“我準(zhǔn)備好了”為題，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)題符號(hào)不占格）你對(duì)明天一定有著美好的憧憬，為此，你已經(jīng)做好了哪方面的準(zhǔn)？請(qǐng)結(jié)合你的經(jīng)歷或特長(zhǎng)等，選取一個(gè)角度具體談?wù)勀闶侨绾巫鰷?zhǔn)備的。（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名以及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）Thefollowingisforreferenceonly.（以下內(nèi)容及供參考）Independentbegoodat...Responsibletakepartin...Hardworkingithelpsmeto...范文精選一及點(diǎn)評(píng)：I'MREADYSummerholidayiscoming,allmyclassmatesarepreparingtohaveawonderfulholiday,includingme.IamreadytogotoBeiDaihe,theseasideholidayresort,forswimmingandhavingagoodtimeontheseaside.Icannotonlyappreciatethebeautifulscenerybutalsobreathethefreshair.Itlooksgood,isn'tit?BeforeIgototheseaside,Ithinkit'simportanttotakesomethingusefulwithmesuchassunglasses,bathingsuit,suntanoilandmyhomeworkandsoon.Well,thelastIwanttocarryissomemedicine,whichcankeepmesafe.AfterthatIshouldplanwhereIstay,playandhowtogetthere.Inconclusion,IdobelieveIcandoitperfectlyandenjoymyself.精彩亮點(diǎn)八、、分析：亮點(diǎn)一：八、、?非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞including的巧妙使用。亮點(diǎn)二：同謂語(yǔ)的恰當(dāng)使用，說(shuō)明目的地是一個(gè)海濱度假圣地。亮點(diǎn)三：notonly…butalso…表達(dá)度假不僅可以欣賞美景還可以呼吸新鮮空氣。亮點(diǎn)四：運(yùn)用反義疑問(wèn)句，加強(qiáng)語(yǔ)氣。亮點(diǎn)五：運(yùn)用定語(yǔ)從句，修飾medicine。亮點(diǎn)六：巧妙使用“do“這個(gè)詞，加強(qiáng)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)力度。范文精選二及點(diǎn)評(píng)：I'MREADYI'MAreyouapersonwhoalwayslikestogetreadyforeverything?Doyouoftenmakeafullpreparationfor

somethingbeforedoing?Iamsuchaguyduetoanunforgettableexperience.Istillrememberitwasafinalexam,Ihadbeenplayingalldaybeforeit,believingthatIamcleverenoughtogetahighscore,however,theresultwasveryawful.Fromthenon,Iknowifyouwanttosucceed,themostimportantthingistogetreadyforit.Therefore,duringthelastwholeyear,Idevoteallmytimetoreviewingmylessons.TheonlyreasonisthatIknowthereisn'taluckydogintheworld,andonthewaytosuccess,hardworkingisthekey.精彩亮占八、、分析:亮占一-?八、、?疑問(wèn)句開(kāi)頭,引發(fā)閱讀興趣亮點(diǎn)味二：過(guò)去完成進(jìn)行時(shí)的使用使文章意思表達(dá)的更清晰亮占三：八、、?分詞做伴隨狀語(yǔ),使文章檔次提升亮點(diǎn)四：be+adj.+enoughtodosth.足夠…做某事亮點(diǎn)五:條件狀語(yǔ)從句的使用亮占八、、六:不定式做表語(yǔ)亮點(diǎn)七：devoteone'stime(in)to...把…奉獻(xiàn)給亮點(diǎn)八：表語(yǔ)從句的使用五、連接詞匯總：表起始:firstofall,tobeginwith,inmyopinion,accordingto,sofar,asfaras等表時(shí)間:first,atfirst,then,later,intheend,finally,afterwards,afterthat,sincethen,forthefirsttime,atlast,assoonas,thenextmoment,meanwhile,lateron,soon,finally等表空間:ontheright/left,totheright/leftof,ononesideof...ontheothersideof..atthefbot/top/endof,inthemiddle/centreof,nextto,farfrom,infrontof等表因果:for,becauseof,onereasonisthat.anotherreasonisthat...,since,as,asaresult(of),so,thus,therefore,asaresult等表轉(zhuǎn)折:but,yet,however,afterall,infact,while,insteadof,unlike,although,afterall等表列舉:forexample,suchas,like,inotherwords,andsoon等表推進(jìn):what'smore,furthermore,ononehand.ontheotherhand.,inadditionto,aswell,still,also,inotherwords,notonly.butalso.,besides,moreover.等表總結(jié):generalllyspeaking,inshort,inaword,ingeneral,inbrief,inall等表示目的：forthispurpose,forthisreason,sothat,inorderthat,soasto,inorderto.表示讓步：although,though,eventhough/if,nomatterwh—六、從句在寫作中的使用：1.不用說(shuō)..Itgoeswithoutsayingthat.=(Itis)needlesstosay(that)=Itisobviousthat.例：不用說(shuō)早睡早起是值得的。Itgoeswithoutsayingthatitpaystokeepearlyhours.在各種……之中，……Amongvariouskindsof…，…/=Ofallthe…，…例：在各種運(yùn)動(dòng)中我尤其喜歡慢跑。Amongvariouskindsofsports,Ilikejogginginparticular.就我的看法……；我認(rèn)為……Inmyopinion,…=Tomymind,…=AsfarasIamconcerned,…=Iamoftheopinionthat…例：Inmyopinion,playingvideogamesnotonlytakesmuchtimebutisalsoharmfultohealth.就我的看法打電動(dòng)玩具既花費(fèi)時(shí)間也有害健康。隨著人口的增加……Withtheincrease/growthofthepopulation,…隨著科技的進(jìn)步……Withtheadvanceofscienceandtechnology,…例：WiththerapiddevelopmentofTaiwan'seconomy,alotofsocialproblemshavecometopass.隨著臺(tái)灣經(jīng)濟(jì)的快速發(fā)展許多社會(huì)問(wèn)題產(chǎn)生了?！潜匾腎tisnecessary（forsb.）todo/that………是重要的Itisimportant/essential（forsb.）todo/that………是適當(dāng)?shù)腎tisproper（forsb.）todo/that………是緊急的Itisurgent（forsb.）todo/that…例：Itisproperforustokeepthepublicplacesclean.Itisproperthatwe（should）keepthepublicplacesclean.我們應(yīng)當(dāng)保持公共場(chǎng)所清潔?；ㄙM(fèi)spend…onsth./doingsth.…例：我們不應(yīng)該在我們不感興趣的事情上花太多的時(shí)間。Weshouldn'tspendtoomuchtimeonsomethingwearen'tinterestedin.how引導(dǎo)的感嘆句例：那至少可以證明你很誠(chéng)實(shí)。Atleastitwillprovehowhonestyouare.狀語(yǔ)從句A）如果你不，你就會(huì)Ifyoudon't...，you'll...例：Ifyoudon'tkeepworkinghard,you'lllosethechance.如果你不堅(jiān)持努力工作，你就會(huì)失去這次機(jī)會(huì)。B）如此..，以至于..so.that.例:Atthatmoment,IwassoupsetthatIwantedtogiveup.當(dāng)時(shí)，我非常傷心，最后都想放棄了。C）每當(dāng)我聽(tīng)到..我就忍不住感到興奮。WheneverIhear.，Icannotbutfeelexcited.每當(dāng)我做..我就忍不住感到悲傷。WheneverIdo.，Icannotbutfeelsad.每當(dāng)我想到我就忍不住感到緊張。WheneverIthinkof...,Icannotbutfeelnervous.每當(dāng)我遭遇……我就忍不住感到害怕。WheneverImeetwith…，Icannotbutfeelfrightened.每當(dāng)我看到..我就忍不住感到驚訝。WheneverIsee.，Icannotbutfeelsurprised.例:WheneverIthinkofthecleanbrooknearmyhome,Icannotbutfeelsad.=EverytimeIthinkofthecleanbrooknearmyhome,Icannothelpfeelingsad.每當(dāng)我想到我家附近那一條清澈的小溪我就忍不住感到悲傷。9.賓語(yǔ)從句我認(rèn)為，../我認(rèn)為..不Ithink/Idon'tthinkthat.我想知道是否..Iwonderwhether.例：Hedoesn'tthinkIshouldstophimjoiningtheclub.他認(rèn)為我不應(yīng)該阻止他參加這個(gè)俱樂(lè)部。10.Since+S+過(guò)去式，S+現(xiàn)在完成式。例：Sincehewenttoseniorhighschool,hehasworkedveryhard.自從他上高中，他就一直很用功。專項(xiàng)練習(xí)（p