00012英語-視頻自考今天我們來做一個關(guān)于短文寫作專題講座為即將參加高等教育

短文寫作指導(dǎo)寫作內(nèi)容廣泛，涉及生活、一般和私人信件，體裁包括記敘文、說明文、描寫文、議、應(yīng)用文等。現(xiàn)考試題中最后部分為短文寫作任務(wù)，一個小題，總計30分，要求考生寫一篇100詞左右的短文。試卷給 1：主謂一致問題：“人一旦有了錢，他就能想干什么就干什么”。病句：Whenonehavemoney，hecandowhathewantto.[答疑編號Onceonehasmoney，hecandowhathewants（to（名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)例句：1945年建立。TheUnitedNationswasformedin病句：Attheageoften，mygrandfatherdied.[答疑編號506486130102]改錯：WhenIwasten，mygrandfather3：詞義和詞性問題：“沒有人能夠否認金錢的重要性”。病句：Nonecannegativetheimportanceofmoney.[答疑編號改錯：Nonecandenytheimportanceoftendera.，v.&ntaxiway出租車道，飛機跑道；terminala.晚期的，n.計算機終端，公共汽車\輪船等總站，航站樓；sharpa，ad.）4：動詞時態(tài)、語態(tài)和虛擬語氣等問題：病句：Ourschooltookplacegreatchanges.[答疑編號改錯：Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinour例如：except,exceptfor,besides,except,exceptfor“除去”排除在外（不包括）exceptexceptfor例如：IattendedclasseseverydayexceptSunday.“除了星期天，天都去上課”Thecompositioniswellwrittenexceptforafewspellingerrors.“這篇文章還不錯，除了拼寫錯誤Ourteacherinvitedfiveofusbesides 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rereadytospendtheirsparetimeandmoneystudyingforeignlanguages,especiallyEnglish.Asanimportanttoolforcommunication,Englishlanguageplaysasignificantroleinourlifesincetheworldis ingsmaller;culturalandeconomicexchangesmoreandmoreactive.AllthestudentsandteachersoftheEnglishDepartmentareaskedtoattendlectureandhaveadiscussionafterthelecturethesameStudent[答疑編號[答疑編號WearegoingtohaveanexcursiononSaturday,the12thofAllclassmatesshouldmeetinfrontoftheeastgateofourschoolwherethebuswillpickusup.Thedeparturetimeis7:00amsharp.We'llgototheFragrantHillsfirst.Afterclimbingthehill,wearegoingtotheSummerPalace.I'msurewe'llhavealotoffunthere.Pleaseremembertobringthefollowingthings:bottledwater,anumbrella,ahat,aflashlight,andfoodforlunchanddinner.Weplantoreturnaround10pm.WelookforwardtoseeingyouonSaturday.LiYuanSample1P.152PracticalLetterofInvitationlettersarewrittentoinvitefriends,relativesandassociatestoparties,seminars,etc.Therearetwokindsofsuchletters: alonesandformalones.Weddinginvitationsandbirthdaypartyinvitationsare al;seminarinvitationsandbusinessinvitationsareformal.Bothkindsservethesamepurposeasaninvitationcard,butinvitationlettersaremorealizedanddetailed.[答[答疑編號DearMr.IhavegreatpleasureininvitingyoutotheIdealHomeExhibition,whichwillbeheldatExpo.HousefromOctober2ndtoOctober5th.TheExhibitionwillbeopenfrom8:00eachmorning.Thiseventhasbeenorganizedforthebenefitofindividualsorfamilieswhowishtomakehomeimprovementsandupgradetheirproperties.Themostrecentproductsonthemarketwillbedisplayedonmorethanahundredstands.Weareexpectingover25,000 thatyouwillbeabletojoinus.Respectfullyyours,DonaldSample2P.175PracticalThank-YouAthank-youletterornoteisanexpressionofappreciationforathoughtfulact,expressionor→Athank-youlettershouldbe→Specificreferenceshouldbemadetowhatyouaregratefulfor,whichisthesubjectof→Theformalityofyoursalutationshouldbebaseduponyourrelationshipwith youare[答[答疑編號DearJeanandIjustwanttowritetothankyouagainforthewonderfulvisitwehadwithyou.Wetrulyappreciatethetimeyouspentwithusandthekids.Nowonderthey’realwaysexcitedtoseeyou!Thankyousomuchforthelovelymealsyoumadeforus.DavidlovedtheChickenPaprikashand,ofcourse,I’malwaysafanofyourzucchiniquiche.I’malwaysinspiredwheneverI’mwithyoubecauseyouhaveanamazingabilitytocreatesuchlovelymealswithsuchease.AndtheThanksgivingdinnerwasreallyoutstanding,Jean.Andthankyou,Rick,forallyourhelpwithmylaptop.WelookforwardtoseeingyounextyearatourSample3P.209PracticalLettersof無論我們的愿望和企圖如何,在某些場合也會遇到抱怨,或者甚至我們也可能會寫信。寫信有很多原Nomatterhowgoodourintentionsandefforts,thereareboundtobeoccasionswhenitisnecessarytodealwithacomplaint,orevenmakeone.Complaintsmaybenecessaryformanyreasons,suchaspoorservice,latedelivery,damagedgoodsandsoon.[答[答疑編號IfeelthatMsJohnsonwasrudeandunnecessarilycurtwithme.Iwaspreparedtowait.Shecouldhavepoli ytoldmethatshewouldbeabletohelpmeinamoment.Insteadshewasabruptanddismissive.IshopfrequentlyatyourstoreandIconsidermyselfentitledtobettertreatment.Itrustyouwilllookintothismatter.YourssincerelyJuliaThursdayafternoonIvisitedyourstoretolookforasuit.WhenIaskedMsJohnsonhelpinfindingmysize,shetoldmeshewasbusyandthatIwouldhavetofindonemyself.IexplainedthatthereasonIhadcometoherwasbecauseIcouldn’tfindone.Sherepliedinarudetonethat,ifIcouldn’tfindone,itmeantthestoredidnothaveoneandthatIshouldthereforelooksomewhereinyourstore.DearSalesIamwritingtocomplainabout,MsMariaJohnson,aSample4P.231PracticalMakinga要求升職。寫這樣的語氣十分重要。你需要提供一份證明，說明你的要求是正當合理的。記住你是申請者并Therearemanyoccasionsonwhichyoumayneedtowriteaformallettermakingarequest.Forexample,youmaywishtoapplyforagrantorasktobeconsideredforpromotionatwork.Thetoneofsuchaletterisimportant.Youneedtoprovideevidencethatyourrequestisjustified.Rememberyouarethepetitionerandthatyouaresubmittingyourselftothejudgmentofthe orbodyyouarewritingto.Sodon'tlthemwhattothink.Courteouslyaskthemtoconsideryourrequest.DearMr.FrasierIamwritingtoseekfurtherassistancefromthe eInstituteScholarshipFoundation.Iamalreadydeeplyindebtedtothetrusteesforfundingmyuniversityeducationforthepasttwoyears.Withouttheirgeneroussupport,Iwouldhavebeenunabletopursuemyambitiontoenterthemedicalprofession.IhavetriedmyutmosttomakegooduseoftheopportunitiesthatithasbeenmyprivilegeandgoodfortunetoInowneedtofundmyclinicaltraining.Myparentshaveverylimitedmeansandmostoftheiravailableresourcesarecurrentlydevotedtocaringformysister,whosuffersfromararekidneydisease.Ihavealreadyobtained umloanfromthesupportscheme.Ihavealsoappliedtoanumberofsponsors,butsofarwithoutIthereforeturnagaintothetrusteesofthe eInstituteScholarshipFoundation.Irealizethatasecondapplicationof