大學(xué)英語(yǔ)六級(jí)寫(xiě)作

TipsforCET-6大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)和六級(jí)的試卷結(jié)構(gòu)、測(cè)試內(nèi)容、測(cè)試題型、分值比例和考試時(shí)間如下表所示：Differences:

1.詞匯量:CET4大綱詞匯4200核心詞700CET6大綱詞匯5500核心詞13002.作文:150詞句子//邏輯關(guān)系（四級(jí)120-150詞）3.聽(tīng)力:難度加大,速度加快,小詞多,場(chǎng)景詞4.閱讀:文章加長(zhǎng),難度加大,邏輯關(guān)系PPPrinciplePassion：InspirationMotivation1，全球化的影響2，職業(yè)趨向3，個(gè)人價(jià)值的實(shí)現(xiàn)Practice好好背單詞多做真題六級(jí)詞匯的重要性利用“人體規(guī)律法”背單詞

1，每天背50個(gè)單詞左右最佳：a)如果是短期記憶：每個(gè)單詞背4遍b)如果要長(zhǎng)期記憶：每個(gè)單詞背7遍最好2，背單詞的最佳時(shí)間：晚上睡前的半小時(shí)，和早上醒來(lái)后的1小時(shí)3，背單詞最適宜的溫度：10攝氏度左右（個(gè)人體驗(yàn)）4，背單詞最佳姿勢(shì)：“倒背如流”(可操作性不強(qiáng))最佳的姿勢(shì)：來(lái)回走著背。優(yōu)點(diǎn)：a)輔助記憶，便于思考，利于大腦的快速運(yùn)轉(zhuǎn)b)預(yù)防疾病，Cervicalspondylosis頸椎軟骨疾病背單詞眼耳口手齊到，才能真正記住單詞復(fù)習(xí)計(jì)劃:

1.真題卷和預(yù)測(cè)卷及單項(xiàng)2.六級(jí)詞匯書(shū)每天60詞3.每周背一篇范文,寫(xiě)一篇標(biāo)準(zhǔn)作文4.每周至少一套真題,精確掌握時(shí)間5.反復(fù)分析錯(cuò)誤和弱項(xiàng)6.反復(fù)練習(xí),提高正確率Writing1234Contents評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)詞匯句型篇章結(jié)構(gòu)了解你的對(duì)手1.從題目的角度Time：30minutesWords：150Proportion：15%==106.5Averagescore：below50%1.各檔作文分相當(dāng)于百分制的得分，列表于下，稱為得分率。其中9分的得分率為60（相當(dāng)于百分制的60分）。

2.字?jǐn)?shù)不足應(yīng)酌情扣分：(一)作文評(píng)分原則

1. CET是檢查考生是否達(dá)到大學(xué)英語(yǔ)教學(xué)大綱規(guī)定的六級(jí)教學(xué)要求，對(duì)作文的評(píng)判應(yīng)以此要求為準(zhǔn)則。

2. CET作文題采用總體評(píng)分（GlobalScoring）方法。閱卷人員就總的印象給出獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)分（RewardScores）,而不是按語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)的錯(cuò)誤數(shù)目扣分。3.從內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言兩個(gè)方面對(duì)作文進(jìn)行綜合評(píng)判。內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言是一個(gè)統(tǒng)一體，作文應(yīng)表達(dá)題目所規(guī)定的內(nèi)容，而內(nèi)容要通過(guò)語(yǔ)言來(lái)表達(dá)。要考慮作文是否切題，是否充分表達(dá)思想，也要考慮是否用英語(yǔ)清楚而確切地表達(dá)思想，也就是要考慮語(yǔ)言上的錯(cuò)誤是否造成理解上的障礙。4.避免趨中傾向。該給高分的給高分，包括滿分；該給低分的給低分，包括0分，一名閱卷人員在所閱的全部作文卷中不應(yīng)只給中間的幾種分?jǐn)?shù)。(二)作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)1.本題滿分為15分。2.閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)共分五等:2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有標(biāo)準(zhǔn)樣卷一至二份。3.閱卷人員根據(jù)閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，對(duì)照樣卷評(píng)分，若認(rèn)為與某一分?jǐn)?shù)（如8分）相似，即定為該分?jǐn)?shù)（即8分），若認(rèn)為稍優(yōu)或稍劣于該分?jǐn)?shù)，即可加一分（即9分）或減一分（即7分).4.評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：

5分:基本切題.表達(dá)思想不清楚,連貫性差,有較多的嚴(yán)重語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。

8分:基本切題.有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚,文字勉強(qiáng)連貫;語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多,其中有一些是嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。

11分:切題.表達(dá)思想清楚,文字連貫,但有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤14分:切題.表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性好?；旧蠠o(wú)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)。了解你的對(duì)手2.從改卷員的角度誤解：高分=讀起來(lái)是好文章正解：高分=看起來(lái)像好文章如何改卷：抓壯丁心態(tài)每天500篇以上5篇范文對(duì)照（2、5、8、11、14分）掃兩點(diǎn)（錯(cuò)點(diǎn)&亮點(diǎn)）

四級(jí)和六級(jí)兩點(diǎn)非常重要的區(qū)別：四級(jí)寫(xiě)出正確的句子就可以了，四級(jí)詞匯用得不用很多就可以得到13到14分，六級(jí)完全不一樣，我們只看第一就是要多變，多變體現(xiàn)在多用復(fù)合句也要用簡(jiǎn)單句，第二點(diǎn)是詞匯，如果這個(gè)詞匯是比較平常的，我拿過(guò)來(lái)絕對(duì)不給你13或者14分最多給12分，在閱卷的過(guò)程中會(huì)看到好多老師會(huì)看到他們說(shuō)這樣的學(xué)生這樣難的詞匯都可以用了應(yīng)當(dāng)?shù)?2分，盡管錯(cuò)了一個(gè)句型，你把四級(jí)、六級(jí)非常難的詞匯都用上了，非常難的短語(yǔ)都用上這篇文章肯定可以得到高分避免四級(jí)垃圾詞匯：

相信大家都有這樣的感受，明明是背了很多的單詞，可寫(xiě)作文時(shí)，總是用一些高中或小學(xué)的詞匯（又稱垃圾詞匯）。為了更好的克服這樣的情況，我總結(jié)了一些常用的替代語(yǔ)，希望對(duì)大家有所幫助：關(guān)鍵三步1.減少失誤（拼寫(xiě)、語(yǔ)法、字跡）2.模板句3.語(yǔ)言升級(jí)Words,myswords!改，桑田變滄海詞句升級(jí)的可操作性開(kāi)頭句大眾臉：Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,ourlifeismoreandmoreconvenient.開(kāi)頭句明星臉：WiththeexpansionofITimplication,ourlifeisofincreasingconvenience.開(kāi)頭句巨星臉：ThankstotherapidexpansionofIT-basedimplication,theconvenienceofourdailylifeisontherise.詞句升級(jí)的可操作性詞匯句型升級(jí)關(guān)鍵：少而精詞匯升級(jí)：15組一個(gè)都不能多！一個(gè)都不能弱！Words,myswords!詞匯升級(jí)15組1.輸出類項(xiàng)目（寫(xiě)作、口語(yǔ)）要偷師輸入類項(xiàng)目（閱讀、聽(tīng)力）考察以下的閱讀文段：Indeed,untiltwocenturiesago,theWestwassobackwardinagriculturecomparedwithChina,thattheWestwastheunderdevelopedworldincomparisonwiththeChinesedevelopedworld.1.名詞化1.1形容詞名詞翻譯：知識(shí)非常重要。Knowledgeisveryimportant.Knowledgeisofgreatimportance.*Theimportanceofknowledgeisobvious.1.名詞化1.2副詞名詞翻譯：我們需要客觀地看待這個(gè)問(wèn)題Weshouldlookonthisproblemobjectively.Weshouldlookonthisprobleminanobjectiveway.1.名詞化1.3動(dòng)詞名詞Weshouldtakemeasurestosavewildanimals.Weshouldtakemeasuresforthesafetyofwildanimals.1.名詞化Summary1.1beadjbeof+nnis…1.2advinaadjway/manner1.3todosthforsth2.雙重否定閱讀文段的例子：Itisgenerallybelievedthatfashioniscommoninanycountrythathasastrongconsumereconomy.Inotherwords,fashionisnotuniquetotheUnitedStates.2.雙重否定題目：WillE-booksReplaceTraditionalBooks?傳統(tǒng)書(shū)會(huì)一直存在就像電視機(jī)一直存在一樣Traditionalbookswillstillexistjustlikethattelevisionshaveneverdisappeared.3.閱讀文段的例子：Headache

hasarrivedwiththecoldandwetconditions.Theillnessisstrikingalmosteverybodyfrominfantstotheelderly.3.上層詞好處：避免表達(dá)的重復(fù)；比較容易想到再看一個(gè)閱讀例子：Higherwaterlevelsinthelakeareamayalsodamagebamboowoods.Thatmeansgiantpandas,whichfeedontheseplantswillsuffer,too.3.上層詞翻譯：藝術(shù)班如雨后春筍般涌現(xiàn)，不少家長(zhǎng)把孩子送到這些藝術(shù)班。Variousartclasseskeeprollinginandagreatnumberofparentssendtheirkidsto_________theseartschoolssuchkindofsupportingeducation.3.上層詞翻譯：海外旅游價(jià)格越來(lái)越便宜，因此很多人選擇海外旅行。Thepriceofoverseatravellingiscontinuouslydropping.Accordingly,alargenumberofpeopleprefer___________________.thesetravelling/tourlinesthiskindofrecreation.4.表達(dá)“人們”萬(wàn)惡的“people”Somepeoplebelievethateducationisimportant.Otherpeopledonotagree.However,allpeopleneedtostudy,becausenopeoplecangrowwithoutit.4.1直接去掉peopleSome

believethateducationisimportant.Others

donotagree.However,all

needtostudy,becausenone

cangrowwithoutit.4.表達(dá)“人們”4.2“人們”作主語(yǔ)的時(shí)候翻譯：一些人認(rèn)為電子書(shū)對(duì)孩子是有好處的。SomepeoplebelievethatE-bookisbeneficialforkids.individuals4.表達(dá)“人們”4.3表達(dá)“在人們中”這個(gè)問(wèn)題引起了人們熱烈的討論。Thishasarousedhotdiscussionamongpeople.thesocietythegeneralpublic.4.表達(dá)“人們”4.4當(dāng)“人們”與“自然”相對(duì)的時(shí)侯翻譯：人與自然的和諧共處_________coexistencebetweenpeopleandnatureharmonioushumanbeingsmankind4.表達(dá)“人們”Summarypeople4.1直接去掉4.2thesociety/thegeneralpublic4.3individuals4.4humanbeing5.表達(dá)“重要”5.1表達(dá)“重大，顯著”翻譯：iPad是蘋(píng)果公司最重大的發(fā)明之一Oneofthemost_______inventionsofApplecompanyisiPod.significantremarkable5.表達(dá)“重要”5.2表達(dá)“關(guān)鍵的”翻譯：勤奮是成功的關(guān)鍵Hardworkis______tosuccess.essential5.表達(dá)“重要”5.3表達(dá)“不可或缺”翻譯：數(shù)碼產(chǎn)品已經(jīng)成為日常生活不可或缺的一部分。Digitalproductshavebecome_______indailylife.Indispensible[dis'pens?bl]

5.表達(dá)“重要”5.4一個(gè)黃金詞組翻譯：互聯(lián)網(wǎng)對(duì)開(kāi)闊我們的眼界至關(guān)重要。TheInternetplaysa_________roleinwideningoureyes.vitalwidenone’seyes?broadenone’shorizons[h?'raiz?n]

widenknowledge;enrichexperience;5.表達(dá)“重要”5.5一個(gè)鉆石句型AistoBwhatperfumeistoaflower.眾所周知，興趣對(duì)于學(xué)習(xí)至關(guān)重要。Asisknowntous,interestsaretostudywhatperfumeistoaflower.5.表達(dá)“重要”Summaryimportant5.1significant/remarkable5.2essential5.3indispensable5.4playcritical/crucial/vitalrole5.5AistoBwhatperfumeistoaflower.6.表達(dá)“將會(huì)…”will/would?翻譯：石油資源會(huì)在未來(lái)幾十年被耗盡。Petrolresource

willbeusedupinafewdecades.6.1

islikelyto6.2

tendstoExercise1翻譯：大多數(shù)人認(rèn)為，英語(yǔ)會(huì)變得更重要。MostpeoplethinkthatEnglishwillbecomemoreimportant.Accordingtomostindividuals,thesignificanceofEnglishtendstoincrease.7.比較級(jí)翻譯：她比他更聰明。Sheissmarterthanhim.Sheisrelativelysmartcomparedwithhim.8.表達(dá)“許多”翻譯：很多人在金融危機(jī)中損失了很多錢。可數(shù)：numerous;alargenumberof不可數(shù)：mass;avastamountofAlargenumberofinvestorshadlostavastamountofmoneyinthefinancialcrisis.Numerous

investorshadgain

amassprofit.9.此句土，土在何處？Nowadays,environmentallyfriendlyproductsarebecomingmoreandmorepopular.9.表達(dá)“現(xiàn)在”Nowadays,environmentallyfriendlyproductsarebecomingmoreandmorepopular.currentlyincontemporarysocietyinthisdayandageExercise2翻譯：現(xiàn)在，很多人過(guò)上了比以前更好的生活。Nowadays,manypeopleliveabetterlifethanbefore.Currently,avastnumberofindividualslivearelativelydecentlifecomparedwiththepast.10.表達(dá)“越來(lái)越…”越來(lái)越多的剛剛畢業(yè)的大學(xué)生發(fā)現(xiàn)越來(lái)越難找到好工作。菜鳥(niǎo)級(jí)Moreandmorecollegegraduateswhohavejustgraduatedfromuniversityfindthatfindingagoodjobismoreandmoredifficult.10.表達(dá)“越來(lái)越…”越來(lái)越多的剛剛畢業(yè)的大學(xué)生發(fā)現(xiàn)越來(lái)越難找到好工作。大鳥(niǎo)級(jí)Agrowingnumberof

freshgraduatesfindthatobtainingadecentjobisincreasinglydifficult.10.表達(dá)“越來(lái)越…”越來(lái)越多的剛剛畢業(yè)的大學(xué)生發(fā)現(xiàn)越來(lái)越難找到好工作。神鳥(niǎo)級(jí)Thedifficultyofbeingemployedbyadecentemployerisontherise,asthenumberoffreshgraduatesgrows.10.表達(dá)“越來(lái)越…”moreandmoreadj=increasinglyadj=nisontherisemoreandmoren=agrowingnumberofnthenumberofnisgrowing在?？嫉膶?duì)立論證題目里面，以下四個(gè)單詞被頻繁使用，江湖稱之為“四大土鱉”好，壞，優(yōu)點(diǎn)，缺點(diǎn)good,bad,advantage,disadvantage11.表達(dá)“好”11.1表達(dá)“對(duì)…有好處”翻譯：上藝術(shù)班對(duì)孩子們是有好處的Attendingartclassesis_good_forkids.beneficialprofitable11.表達(dá)“好”11.2表達(dá)“好生活、好工作”decent抓住這個(gè)好機(jī)會(huì)catchthisdecentopportunity工資待遇好decentsalary11.表達(dá)“好”11.3表達(dá)“好主意”agoodideawisesensible11.表達(dá)“好”11.4表達(dá)“優(yōu)秀”（好學(xué)生、好產(chǎn)品）agoodstudentoutstandingextraordinary11.表達(dá)“好”11.5表達(dá)“A比B更好”AisbetterthanB.AissuperiortoB.翻譯：少數(shù)服從多數(shù)MajorityissuperiortoMinority.12.表達(dá)“壞”12.1表達(dá)“壞的，有不好后果的”harmfulDetrimental[,detri'ment?l]adj.不利的；有害的Hazardous['h?z?d?s]

adj.有危險(xiǎn)的；冒險(xiǎn)的；碰運(yùn)氣的;壞的12.表達(dá)“壞”12.3表達(dá)“A比B壞”AisworsethanBAissubordinatetoB.13.表達(dá)“優(yōu)點(diǎn)”advantagemeritn.優(yōu)點(diǎn)，價(jià)值；功績(jī)；功過(guò)

/virtue['v?:tju:]

n.美德；優(yōu)點(diǎn)；takeadvantageofsth?makefulluseofsth’smerit/virtue13.表達(dá)“優(yōu)點(diǎn)”merit/virtue翻譯：我認(rèn)為兩種意見(jiàn)都有好處而且可以共存。Ibelievethatbothviewshavetheirown____andcancoexist.merits/virtues14.表達(dá)“缺點(diǎn)”disadvantagedemerit/drawback/flaw/shortcoming/cost拖后腿？壞處？代價(jià)？短板？瑕疵？14.表達(dá)“缺點(diǎn)”demerit/drawback/flaw/shortcoming/cost翻譯：我認(rèn)為我們應(yīng)該利用互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的好處而避免它的壞處。Frommypointofview,itiswisetotakeadvantageofinternetwhileminimizingitsdrawbacks.15.表達(dá)“例如”forexampleTakeatypical/vivid/concreteexample,…Atypical/vividcaseinpointis…15.表達(dá)“例如”forexample升級(jí)版*舉數(shù)據(jù)例子：Takeatypical/vivid/concreteexample,itwasrevealedbythedatainarecentreportthat…舉生活例子：Atypical/vividcaseinpointismyoldfriendBen.He…Moreexamples垃圾詞匯1：help

典型例句：I’ll

help

you.

替代語(yǔ)：accomodate

e.g.:

I’ll

endeavour

to

accomodate

you.

垃圾詞匯2：helpful

典型例句：sth

is

helpful

(to

sb)

替代語(yǔ)：conducive

e.g.:

sth

is

conducive

to

sb.

鑒于有些作文多關(guān)于道德和品格塑造，再給出兩個(gè)有用的短語(yǔ)：

time-honored

時(shí)代賦予的

do

credit

to

our

forbears

繼承先輩的優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)

垃圾詞匯3：show

典型例句：as

it

shows

in

the

picture

替代語(yǔ)：betray

垃圾詞匯4：think

典型例句：I

think

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替代語(yǔ)：deem

垃圾詞匯5：ugly

典型例句：xxx

is

ugly替代語(yǔ)：hideous

垃圾詞匯6：by

the

way

典型例句：by

the

way,....

替代語(yǔ)：incidentally,....垃圾詞匯7：because

典型例句：xxx

because

xxx

替代語(yǔ)：in

that/in

as

much

as

垃圾詞匯8：consider

典型例句：We

must

consider

xxx

替代語(yǔ)：allow

for

e.g:

We

must

allow

for

xxx

垃圾詞匯9：much

典型例句：There

has

been

a

much

increase

in

the

world

population

替代語(yǔ)：There

has

been

a

drastic

increase

in

the

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垃圾詞匯10：about

典型例句：It

is

about

250

times

of

that

替代語(yǔ)：It

is

approximately

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垃圾詞匯11：buy

替代語(yǔ)：purchase寫(xiě)作句型歷年題目的第一段2010.061.近年來(lái)在學(xué)生中出現(xiàn)了忽視中文的現(xiàn)象2009.121.現(xiàn)在有不少家長(zhǎng)送孩子參加各種藝術(shù)班，對(duì)此有人表示支持2009.061.有人認(rèn)為名字很重要2008.121.大學(xué)生的心理健康十分重要2008.061.隨著信息技術(shù)的發(fā)展，電子圖書(shū)越來(lái)越多2007.121.如今數(shù)字化產(chǎn)品得到越來(lái)越多廣泛的使用，例如…2007.061.有人做好事期望得到回報(bào)；2006.121.閱讀經(jīng)典書(shū)籍對(duì)人的成長(zhǎng)至關(guān)重要。寫(xiě)作核心：句型總起：閱讀經(jīng)典書(shū)籍非常重要。初中Readingclassicsisveryimportant.高中beimportant=beof…importancegreatvitalcrucial寫(xiě)作核心：句型Itisofvitalimportancetoreadclassics.大學(xué)預(yù)科Nothingismoreimportantthan…Nothingismoreimportantthantoreadclassics.大學(xué)四級(jí)playa/an…role/part寫(xiě)作核心：句型Readingclassicsplaysaveryimportantrolenowadays.六級(jí)高分important=significant=essentialpivotal['piv?tl]

=indispensibleNothingplaysamoreindispensiblerolethantoreadclassics.天龍八部–第一部2006.12TheImportanceofReadingClassicsItisgenerallyacceptedthatnothingcanplayamoreindispensablerolethanreadingbooks.描述類經(jīng)典句真理類經(jīng)典句Itisgenerallyacceptedthatoneshouldneverexpectarewardwhendoingagooddeed.Seeminglyjustifiable,however,itisnotalwaysthecase.第一部發(fā)散真題類經(jīng)典句升級(jí)：Thereislittledoubtthat…Thereisgeneralacceptancethat…Itcannotbedeniedthat…Thereisagrowingrecognitionthat…Ithasbeenwidelynotedthat…Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat…Aprevailingnotion/trendisthat…天龍八部–第二部2009.06Shouldparentssendtheirkidstoartclasses越來(lái)越多的父母開(kāi)始考慮把孩子送到藝術(shù)學(xué)校去。Anincreasingnumberofparentsbegintoconsidersendingtheirkidstoartclassessuchasdrawinganddancingonweekendsorduringtheholidays.Anincreasing/growingnumberofpeoplebeginto…可以取代moreandmore…peopleingrowingnumber天龍八部–第三部隨著信息技術(shù)的發(fā)展，電子圖書(shū)越來(lái)越多Owningto/WiththedevelopmentofITindustry,e-booksingrowingnumberbegintoemergeintopeople’svision.出現(xiàn)類---出現(xiàn)，產(chǎn)生Probablywithoutourconsciousness/realization,theITtechnologyseemstogivebirthtoadigitalageintoday’sworld.A--⊙emergeintopeople’ssight/visionA--BAgivebirthtoB英漢差異1英語(yǔ)多被動(dòng)，漢語(yǔ)多主動(dòng)。我們應(yīng)該重視閱讀電子書(shū)Weshouldpayattentiontoe-books.Youshouldpayattentiontoe-books.文章中不得出現(xiàn)you?。。ttentionshouldbepaidtoreadinge-books.加比較級(jí)：laidconcentration/focuson/upon…Muchmoreconcentrationsthaneverbeforehavebeenlaidon/uponreadingclassics.天龍八部–第五部2009.06OntheImportanceofaName長(zhǎng)期以來(lái)，人們一直都對(duì)名字的重要性很感興趣。Overthepastcenturies,peoplehavelongbeeninterestedinidentifyingthesignificanceofaname.Peoplehavelongbeeninterestedinidentifying…天龍八部–第六部2009.12Shouldparentssendtheirkidstoartclasses孩子的教育已經(jīng)成為最重要的社會(huì)問(wèn)題之一。Children’seducationhasrecentlyarisenasoneoftheessentialproblemsWhicharousespublicconcerninoursociety.之一…h(huán)asarisenasoneof…可以取代become…新生事物天龍八部–第七部2008.12TheImportanceofStudent’smentalhealth對(duì)于如何提高大學(xué)生心理健康問(wèn)題，大家議論紛紛。A：theissueofhowtoimprovethestudents’mentalhealthB：aheateddiscussion/adebate1.AhasbeenamatterofB2.AhasbeenopentoB天龍八部–第七部3.Ahascaused/ledto/resultedin/triggered/givenrisetoB.4.AsregardsA,therehasbeenBamongthegeneralpublicinoursociety.5.Anagreement/AconsensushasnotbeenreachedamongthepublicuponB.句型多樣性英漢差異2漢語(yǔ)多短句，英語(yǔ)多長(zhǎng)句windflowersnowmoon小橋流水人家Murmuringstreamflowsunderneaththetinybridge,leadingtoelegantdwellings.某人做好事要求回報(bào)發(fā)散英漢差異2Oneshouldexpectarewardafterdoingagooddeed.Thoughthequestionisseeminglysimple,itposesaconsiderablechallengetothesociety.Andittendstoshowcasepeople’smoralbelief.10---710---9甚至10？天龍八部–第八部2007.06ShouldOneExpectaRewardWhenDoingaGoodDeed?Seeminglysimple,thequestionofwhetheroneshouldexpectarewardafterdoingagooddeedposesaconsiderablechallengewhichtendstoshowcasepeople’smoralbelief.…poseaconsiderablechallengeto……tendto…當(dāng)中文出現(xiàn)容易時(shí)Itendtobelieve/claimthat…第八部發(fā)散使動(dòng)類經(jīng)典句升級(jí)(對(duì)…造成了…)pose…to…或者place/put…on…1.Pollutionposesagreatthreattoourexistence.2.Rapidpopulationgrowthwillput/placeastrainoneconomiesaroundtheworld.3.Smokingplaceagreatinfluenceonourhealth.第八部發(fā)散趨勢(shì)類經(jīng)典句升級(jí)：tendto…belikelyto…beinclinedto…beliableto…beaptto…beproneto…第八部發(fā)散1.Onetendstoshoutwhenhegetsexcited.2.Inwinter,peopleareapttocatchcold.3.Heislikelytomakemistakeswhentired.4.Sheispronetolosetemperindifficultsituation.5.Leoisliabletoactaggressively.6.Thiskindofshoesisinclinedtosliponwetground.天龍八部步法舉例類1.forinstance2.take____forexampleTime/Placehaswitnessedasharp/dramatic/steady/slightincrease/decreaseinthenumberof…who______.為什么要用天龍八部天龍八部核心→句型如2007年12月DigitalAge數(shù)字時(shí)代可以使人們受益，也可能帶來(lái)危害。Digitalagebothhasadvantagesanddisadvantages.ItgoeswithoutsayingthatDigitalagebothhaveadvantagesanddisadvantages.

六級(jí)考試作文閃光點(diǎn)作文是各類英語(yǔ)考試中得分率最低的題型之一。同學(xué)們?cè)谡莆樟艘欢ǖ淖魑哪０?，和基本的語(yǔ)法、詞匯、句型用法之后，如果能在作文中創(chuàng)造一些詞匯和句型的閃光點(diǎn)，必定會(huì)使你的作文如虎添翼!高分作文標(biāo)志:

1：是否長(zhǎng)短句交叉;2、是否會(huì)使用插入語(yǔ);3、用詞是否多樣，準(zhǔn)確，形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞;4、關(guān)鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復(fù)詞;5、句型使用是否準(zhǔn)確、地道。下面給出寫(xiě)好一篇作文的注意事項(xiàng)：

1.適當(dāng)用被動(dòng)替換主動(dòng)，這樣能更客觀的反映事實(shí),句子開(kāi)頭不要總是用we/I(比如寫(xiě)結(jié)尾時(shí)不用weshouldpayattentionto而用Attentionshouldbepaidto.)舉個(gè)經(jīng)典結(jié)尾2004年六月六級(jí)作文的最后一段：Itis,therefore,hightimethatsomeapplicableapproacheswereimplementedbytheserviceindustrylikethat.Bydoingso，itscompetitiveedgewillbesharpenedeffectively.['?plik?bl]2.

善于使用插入語(yǔ)，比如說(shuō)把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語(yǔ)放在中間，一般放在主語(yǔ)、動(dòng)詞或者助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。如however/therefore/forexample/Ibelieve做插入語(yǔ)放在中間，一般放在動(dòng)詞，助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。比如說(shuō)：Otherindividuals,however,taketheattitudethat…

3.一定要學(xué)會(huì)換詞，換形象，具體的替換太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現(xiàn)good,bad,many,thing,think,

people,opinion等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替換proper,approaches替換ways,implement替換carryout,sharpenone’scompetitiveedge替換enhanceone’scompetitiveness(提高某物競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力)下面舉一篇南京工程學(xué)院某位同學(xué)寫(xiě)的優(yōu)秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何運(yùn)用各類寫(xiě)作技巧的。

ComputerandI

Ineverforgettheexceedinglythrillingdaywhenmymotherboughtmeacomputerasbirthdaypresent,whichexertedatremendousfascinationonmesothatiindulgedmyselfingooglinganarmyofusefulinformationihadexpected,andenjoyaseaofmelodiousclassicmusic.ThatnightIwassleepless,feelingthatthewholeworldbelongedtome.[mi'l?udi?s]

exceedingly替換very

thrilling替換exciting

sth.exertatremendousfascinationonsb替換sb.beinterestedinsth.

google替換search

anarmyof替換alotof

Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessedtheincreasingpopularityofcomputers.Coincidentwiththeadvancementofscienceandtechnology,computerspouringintothecurrentsocietyasafashionareappealingto

growingindividuals.

Itisnoexaggerationtosaywehavebeensubmergedbythem,inlargemeasure!Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessed是一個(gè)精彩句型，用來(lái)描述在某個(gè)時(shí)期發(fā)生了什么事情;Increasingpopularity替換moreandmorepopular

Coincidentwith…非常地道的句型，表達(dá)“與…一致”的意思，替換With…

Advancement替換development

Pourinto(floodinto/swarminto)替換enterinto

Current(currently)替換now

Appealtosb.替換sb.beinterestedinsth.

Growingindividuals替換moreandmorepeople

Itisnoexaggerationtosay經(jīng)典句型，說(shuō)某事是毫不夸張的

Forastart,wecan,freely,searchdesiredinformationatanymoment.Littlebylittle,ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.Additionally,wecangethugerecreationsonlinebychatting,playinggames,ordeliveringemail.

Forastart替換Tobeginwith

Wecan,freely,search用了插入語(yǔ)的寫(xiě)作手法

ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.用了非常精彩的被動(dòng)

Additionally替換Inaddition/Besides

Deliver替換send

Thereisnodenyingthat,however,computerscanfunctioninthedisserviceofhumanbeings,inaway,especiallythegrowingviolence,pornpictures,AV-filmsemergingonthescreen,whichleadsquietafewnetcitizenstocopying.

Thereisnodenyingthat,however,computerscanfunctioninthedisserviceofhumanbeings,這個(gè)句子有三個(gè)精彩之處，首先Thereisnodenyingthat這個(gè)句型，還有however作為插入語(yǔ)，functioninthedisserviceof替換doharmto

Emerging替換appearing(fading替換disappearing)

Netcitizen網(wǎng)民，屬于精彩用詞pornography

Asaclassicproverbgoesthatnogardenhasnoweeds.Computersdoplayapositiveroleinthedevelopmentofpeople'lives,despiteasliceof

unfavorable

impacts.Weshould,therefore,takeadvantageofthefruitsandavoidtheoppositefacet.['f?sit]Nogardenhasnoweeds/nogardeniswithoutweeds替換Everycoinhastwosides

Computersdoplay，do強(qiáng)調(diào)

Positive替換important/good等

Asliceof替換apartof

Unfavorable替換bad

Impacts替換effects/influences

Weshould,therefore,takeadvantageof…使用插入語(yǔ)

Fruits(而且fruits用的非常形象，merits/virtues)替換advantage(defects替換disadvantage)Facet替換aspect六級(jí)寫(xiě)作30個(gè)最經(jīng)典的替換詞

1.individuals,characters,folks替換(people,persons)

2:positive,favorable,rosy(美好的)，promising

(有希望的)，perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding,superior替換good

3:dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse,ill(有害的)替換bad如果bad做表語(yǔ)，可以有belessimpressive替換

eg.Anarmyofcollegestudentsindulgethemselvesinplayinggames,enjoyingromancewithgirls/boysorkillingtimepassivelyintheirdorms.Whenitapproachestograduation,asaresult,theyrecordsarelessimpressive.

4.(anarmyof,anoceanof,aseaof,amultitudeof,ahostof,ifnotmost)替換many.

5:asliceof,quietafew,several替換some

6:harbortheideathat,taketheattitudethat,

holdtheviewthat,itiswidelysharedthat,

itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat)替think

(因?yàn)槭菚?shū)面語(yǔ)，所以要加that)

7:affair,business,matter替換thing

8:shared代common

9.reaphugefruits替換getmanybenefits)

10:formypart,frommyownperspective替換inmyopinion

11:Increasing(ly),growing替換moreandmore(注意沒(méi)有g(shù)rowingly這種形式。所以當(dāng)修飾名詞時(shí)用increasing/growing.修飾形容詞，副詞用increasingly.

Eg.sthhasgainedgrowingpopularity.

popularwiththeadvancementofsth.

12.littleifanything,或littleornothing替換hardly

13..beneficial,rewarding替換helpful,

14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,替換customer

15.exceedingly,extremely,intensely替換very16.hardlynecessary,hardlyinevitable...替換unnecessary,avoidable

17.sthappealstosb,sthexertsatremendousfascinationonsb替換sbtakeinterestin/sb.beinterestedin

18.captureone'sattention替換attractone'sattention.

19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect

20.beindicativeof,besuggestiveof,befearfulof代indicate,suggest,fear

21.giveriseto,leadto,resultin,trigger替換cause.22.Thereareseveralreasonsbehindsth替換..reasonsforsth

23.desire替換want.

24.pourattentioninto替換payattentionto

25.bearinmindthat替換remember

26.enjoy,possess替換have(注意process是過(guò)程的意思)

27.interaction替換communication

28.frownonsth替換beagainst,disagreewithsth

29.tonameonlyafew,asanexample替換forexample,forinstance

30.nextto/virtuallyimpossible,替換nearly/almostimpossible作文

得分關(guān)鍵之一就是書(shū)寫(xiě)要工整保證自己寫(xiě)出來(lái)的東西少有甚至沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤不一定要用偏難高深詞匯，普通詞匯只要不用錯(cuò)就OK了?？荚囍胁季謺r(shí)，最好在作文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾部分，著重突出文采，抓住老師的眼球，增加印象分。如果你對(duì)自己的語(yǔ)法掌握并非絕對(duì)自信，那么建議盡可能地運(yùn)用短語(yǔ)構(gòu)成詞組取代長(zhǎng)句，這樣可以避免因語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤而失分。寫(xiě)完后仔細(xì)檢查作文中用詞、句法方面有無(wú)不準(zhǔn)確的地方；句式有無(wú)變化；句與句之間，段與段之間有無(wú)合適的連接及過(guò)渡等。有能力的情況下，爭(zhēng)取高分作文。標(biāo)志如下:

1：是否長(zhǎng)短句交叉;2、是否會(huì)使用插入語(yǔ);3、用詞是否多樣，準(zhǔn)確，形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞;4、關(guān)鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復(fù)詞;5、句型使用是否準(zhǔn)確、地道。Translation翻譯新題型翻譯考試對(duì)譯文的要求是忠實(shí)于原文和語(yǔ)言通順。將漢語(yǔ)譯為英語(yǔ)時(shí)，切忌以下六點(diǎn)：1.忌對(duì)原文結(jié)構(gòu)認(rèn)識(shí)不清；2.忌對(duì)原文詞義理解失誤；3.忌背景知識(shí)缺乏；4.忌逐字死譯；5.忌譯文邏輯連貫失誤；6.忌只顧炫耀譯文文筆。3步翻譯法第一步，通讀文章，劃分意群第二步，斷句翻譯第三步，合并、調(diào)整語(yǔ)序在翻譯過(guò)程中，扎實(shí)的詞匯基礎(chǔ)是理解能力的重要保證?？忌鷤儽仨毰U(kuò)大詞匯量，掌握常用短語(yǔ)、習(xí)語(yǔ)及固定搭配。除此之外，考生也要了解英語(yǔ)與漢語(yǔ)在用詞、句法結(jié)構(gòu)和文化方面的差異，真正掌握英語(yǔ)背景知識(shí)，掌握一定的漢譯英技巧，譯出流暢的英文。端午節(jié)根據(jù)傳說(shuō)，楚國(guó)政治家兼詩(shī)人屈原憂國(guó)憂民，在五月五日投江自盡。人們敬愛(ài)這位愛(ài)國(guó)詩(shī)人，駕船尋找他的遺體，卻沒(méi)有找到。后來(lái)人們把糯米包在竹葉里面，做成粽子，駕著小船到達(dá)出事地點(diǎn)，把粽子丟到水里，當(dāng)做祭品，這就是粽子和龍舟比賽的起源。在南方水鄉(xiāng)，每年端午節(jié)都有龍舟比賽。DragonBoatFestival根據(jù)傳說(shuō)，楚國(guó)政治家兼詩(shī)人屈原憂國(guó)憂民，在五月五日投江自盡。Accordingtolegend,QuYuan,apoliticianandpoetintheChuKingdomofancientChina,jumpedintotheriveronthefifthdayofthefifthlunarmonth,committingsuicide

inhisconcernaboutthecurrentcircumstancesandfuturefateofthecountry.人們敬愛(ài)這位愛(ài)國(guó)詩(shī)人，駕船尋找他的遺體，卻沒(méi)有找到。Intheirreverenceforthepatrioticpoet,peoplerowedoutinboatstosearchforhisremains,butinvain.后來(lái)人們把糯米包在竹葉里面，做成粽子，駕著小船到達(dá)出事地點(diǎn)，把粽子丟到水里，當(dāng)做祭品，這就是粽子和龍舟比賽的起源。Later,theyputstickyriceintobambooleavestomakeglutinousricedumplings,rowedtothesiteofthesuicide,andthrewthemintothewaterasasacrifice.Thisistheoriginofbothglutinousricedumplingsandthedragonboatrace.在南方水鄉(xiāng)，每年端午節(jié)都有龍舟比賽。IntheriversidetownsofsouthChina,therearedragonboatraceseveryDragonBoatFestival.剪紙剪紙（Papercutting)是中國(guó)最為流行的傳統(tǒng)民間藝術(shù)形式之一。中國(guó)剪紙有一千五百多年的歷史，在明朝和清朝時(shí)期（theMingandQingDynasties)特別流行。人們常用剪紙美化居家環(huán)境。特別是在春節(jié)和婚慶期間，剪紙被用來(lái)裝飾門窗和房間，以增加喜慶的氣氛。剪紙最常用的顏色是紅色，象征健康和興旺。中國(guó)剪紙?jiān)谑澜绺鞯睾苁軞g迎，經(jīng)常被用作饋贈(zèng)外國(guó)友人的禮物。PaperCutting剪紙（Papercutting)是中國(guó)最為流行的傳統(tǒng)民間藝術(shù)形式之一。PapercuttingisoneofChina’smostpopulartraditionalfolkarts.中國(guó)剪紙有一千五百多年的歷史，在明朝和清朝時(shí)期（theMingandQingDynasties)特別流行。Chinesepapercuttinghasahistoryofmorethan1,500years.ItwaswidespreadparticularlyduringtheMingandQingDynasties.人們常用剪紙美化居家環(huán)境。Peopleoftenbeautifytheirhomeswithpapercutting.特別是在春節(jié)和婚慶期間，剪紙被用來(lái)裝飾門窗和房間，以增加喜慶的氣氛。DuringtheSpringFestivalandweddingcelebrations,inparticular,papercuttingsareusedtodecoratedoors,windowsandroomsinordertoenhancethejoyousatmosphere.剪紙最常用的顏色是紅色，象征健康和興旺。Thecolormostfrequentlyusedinpapercuttingisred,whichsymbolizeshealthandprosperity.中國(guó)剪紙?jiān)谑澜绺鞯睾苁軞g迎，經(jīng)常被用作饋贈(zèng)外國(guó)友人的禮物。Chinesepapercuttingisverypopulararoundtheworldanditisoftengivenasapresenttoforeignfriends.春節(jié)中國(guó)新年是中國(guó)最重要的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，在中國(guó)也被成為春節(jié)。新年的慶?；顒?dòng)從除夕開(kāi)始一直延續(xù)到元宵節(jié)（theLanternFestival),即從農(nóng)歷（lunarcalendar)最后一個(gè)月的最后一天至新年第一個(gè)月的第十五天。各地歡度春節(jié)的習(xí)俗和傳統(tǒng)有很大差異，但通常每個(gè)家庭都會(huì)在除夕夜團(tuán)聚，一起吃年夜飯。為驅(qū)厄運(yùn)、迎好運(yùn)，家家戶戶都會(huì)進(jìn)行大掃除。人們還會(huì)在門上粘貼紅色的對(duì)聯(lián)（couplets),對(duì)聯(lián)的主題為健康、發(fā)財(cái)和好運(yùn)。其他的活動(dòng)還有放鞭炮、發(fā)紅包和探親訪友等。SpringFestival中國(guó)新年是中國(guó)最重要的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，在中國(guó)也被成為春節(jié)。ChineseNewYearisthemostimportanttraditionalChineseholiday.InChina,itisalsoknownastheSpringFestival.新年的慶?；顒?dòng)從除夕開(kāi)始一直延續(xù)到元宵節(jié)（theLanternFestival),即從農(nóng)歷（lunarcalendar)最后一個(gè)月的最后一天至新年第一個(gè)月的第十五天。NewYearcelebrationsrunfromChineseNewYear’sEve,thelastdayofthelastmonthofthelunarcalendartotheLanternFestivalonthe15thdayofthefirstmonth.各地歡度春節(jié)的習(xí)俗和傳統(tǒng)有很大差異，但通常每個(gè)家庭都會(huì)在除夕夜團(tuán)聚，一起吃年夜飯。CustomsandtraditionsconcerningthecelebrationoftheChineseNewYearvarywidelyfromplacetoplace.However,NewYear’sEveisusuallyanoccasionforChinesefamiliestogatherfortheannualreuniondinner.為驅(qū)厄運(yùn)、迎好運(yùn)，家家戶戶都會(huì)進(jìn)行大掃除。Itisalsotraditionalforeveryfamilytothoroughlycleanthehouseinordertosweepawayillfortuneandtobringingoodluck.人們還會(huì)在門上粘貼紅色的對(duì)聯(lián)（couplets),對(duì)聯(lián)的主題為健康、發(fā)財(cái)和好運(yùn)。Anddoorswillbedecoratedwithredcoupletswiththemesofhealth,wealthandgoodluck.其他的活動(dòng)還有放鞭炮、發(fā)紅包和探親訪友等。Otheractivitiesincludinglightingfirecrackers,givingmoneyinredenvelopesandvisitingrelativesandfriends.春晚央視（CCTV）“春晚”（SpringFestivalGala）一直被視為農(nóng)歷新年慶?；顒?dòng)中一個(gè)重要的組成部分。它是一個(gè)集歌舞、喜劇小品（sketchcomedy)、戲曲、民間藝術(shù)表演為一體的大型綜藝節(jié)目（largevarietyprogram)。和諧、團(tuán)聚時(shí)晚會(huì)的兩大主題。在過(guò)去的30年中，“春晚”一直位居全國(guó)直播類綜藝節(jié)目收視率（audiencerating)之首。然而，眾口難調(diào)。每年觀眾們都希望“春晚”能夠有所創(chuàng)新，導(dǎo)演和演員們絞盡腦汁地進(jìn)行節(jié)目的編排。“春晚