讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)浙江省歷年高考教案學(xué)習(xí)試題及欣賞

浙江高考：

OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocamp

overnightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubject

cameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,Janewas

soangrythatshesaidtoTom.“I'mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp"

andwalkedaway.

Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehad

climbedtoahighplace.sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,

shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenly

realizedthatshewaslost.

“Tom!"shecried."Help!"

Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落）somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow.Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.注意:1.所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文文中標(biāo)有下劃線的重點(diǎn)詞語(yǔ)：

續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好；

續(xù)寫(xiě)達(dá)成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的重點(diǎn)詞語(yǔ)。

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Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.

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ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.

Onabright,warmJulyafternoon,MacHollan,aprimaryschoolteacher,wascyclingfromhishometoAlaskawithhisfriends.Oneofhisfriendshadstoppedtomakeabicyclerepair,buttheyhadencouragedMactocarryon,andtheywouldcatchupwithhimsoon.AsMacpedaled(騎行)alongalone,hethoughtfondlyofhiswifeandtwoyoungdaughtersathome.Hehopedtoshowthemthisbeautifulplacesomeday.ThenMacheardquickandloudbreathingbehindhim.“Man,that'sabigdog!”hethought.Butwhenhelookedtotheside,hesawinstantlythatitwasn’tadogatall,butawolf,quicklycatchingupwithhim.Mac’sheartjumped.Hefoundouthiscanofhearspray.Withonehandonthebars,hefiredthesprayatthewolf.Abrightredcloudenvelopedtheanimal,andtoMac'srelief,itfellback,shakingitshead.Butaminutelater,itwasbyhissideagain.ThenitattackedthebackofMac'sbike,tearingopenhistentbag.Hefiredatthewolfasecondtime,andagain,itfellbackonlytoquicklyrestartthechase（追趕）。Macwaspedalinghardnow.Hewavedandyelledatpassingcarsbutwascarefulnottoshowdown.Hesawasteepuphillclimbbeforehim.Heknewthatoncehehitthehill,he’dbeeasycaughtupandthewolf’steethwouldbetearingintohisflesh.Atthismoment,PaulandBeekyweredrivingtheircarontheirwaytoAlaska.Theydidn’tthinkmuchofitwhentheysawtwocyclistsrepairingtheirbikeonthesideoftheroad.Abitlater,theyspottedwhatthey,too,assumedwasadogrunningalongsideamanonabike.Astheygotcloser,theyrealizedthatthedogwasawolf.Macheardalargevehiclebehindhim.Hepulledinfrontofitasthewolfwascatchingupfast,justadozenyardsawaynow.注意:1.所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文文中標(biāo)有下劃線的重點(diǎn)詞語(yǔ)：

續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好；

續(xù)寫(xiě)達(dá)成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的重點(diǎn)詞語(yǔ)。

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Thecarabrubtlystoppedinfrontofhim.

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Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.

201711.浙江高考Avacationwithmymother

Ihadaninterestingchildhood:Itwasfilledwithsurpriseandamusements,

allbecauseofmymother-loving,sweet,andyetabsent-mindedandforgetful.One

strangefamilytripwetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.

MytwosetsofgrandparentslivedinColoradoandNorthDakota,andmyparents

decidedtospendafewweeksdrivingtothosestatesandseeingallthesightsalong

theway.Asthefirstdayofourtripapproached,David,myeight-year-oldbrother,andIunwillinglysaidgood-byetoallofourfriends.Whoknewifwe’deverseethemagain?Finally,themomentofourdeparturearrived,andweloadedsuitcases,books,games,campingequipment,andatentintothecarandbravelydroveoff.Webravelydroveoffagaintwohourslaterafterwe’dreturnedhometogetthepurseandtraveler’schecksMomhadforgotten.DavidandIwerealwaysalittlenervouswhenusinggasstationbathroomsifMomwasdrivingwhileDadslept:”YoustandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileIgo,andI’llstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileyougo.”Ihadterriblepicturesinmymind:“Honey,wherearethekids?”“What?!Oh,Gosh?Ithoughttheywerebeingawfullyquiet.”Wewereneveractuallyleftbehindinastrangecity,butweweren’tabouttotakeanychances.Onthefourthorfifthnight,wehadtroublefindingahotelwithavacancy.Afterdrivinginvainforsometime,Momsuddenlygotagreatidea:Whydidn’twefindahousewithalikely-lookingbackyardandaskifwecouldsetuptentthere?DavidandIbecamenervous.Toourgreatrelief,Dadturneddowntheidea.Momnevercouldunderstandourastrangefamilyshoweduponherfrontdoorsteps,Momwouldhavebeendelighted.Shethinkseveryoneintheworldasasniceassheis.Wefinallyfoundavacancyinthenexttown.

注意：

所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的重點(diǎn)詞語(yǔ)；

續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，每段開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好；

續(xù)寫(xiě)達(dá)成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的重點(diǎn)詞語(yǔ)。Para1:Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtent

wehadbrought

with

us.

Para2:Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.

20186Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydad’sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning,UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast."Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,"hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens.whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze(吃草).IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahoseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn’tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains."Don’tbelateforsupper,"UnclePaulcried,"andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon’tgetlost!""OK!"mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfamhousewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoon

sunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(編織的）blanket

spreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.

注意：

所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為l50左右；

起碼使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的重點(diǎn)詞語(yǔ)：

續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好；

續(xù)寫(xiě)達(dá)成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的重點(diǎn)詞語(yǔ)。

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.

Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.

參照范文一：Paragraph1Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Janehadtostayaloneintheforestforanothercoldnight.Atthatmoment(時(shí)間),shefeltalittlesad,butshewasn’tsofrightened(感情).Sheremindedherselfconstantly,(心理)“Tommusthavecalledforthosehelicopters.Maybe(感情)hewasinoneofthemandwillreturnsoon(動(dòng)作)!Ihavetoguidehimtomorrow.”Shefeltasleep(動(dòng)作)anddreamedofseeingTom(動(dòng)作).Paragraph2ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Sheatesomeberriesandthen(時(shí)間)walkedalongthestream,hoping(心理)tofindasuitableplacetoguidethehelicopter.Shewalkedandwalked,exhaustedbutfullofhope.Suddenly(時(shí)間),shespotted(動(dòng)作)ahugeflatrock.Shemanaged(動(dòng)作)toclimbontoitandwaitedwithpatience.Themoment(時(shí)間)thehelicopterappeared(動(dòng)作)again.Theneareritgot(動(dòng)作),themoreshewaved(動(dòng)作)theyellowblouse.Tohergreatjoy,(感情)thehelicopterdidn’tmissJanethistimeanditlandednearthebigrockslowly.Tomjumpedoffthehelicopterandrushed(動(dòng)作)towardsJane.Theyhuggedeachothertightly(情感)andburstintotears(感情).參照范文二：Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Macjumpedoffhisbicycleanddashedforthebackdoorofthecar.Itwaslocked.Hethenranaroundtothepassengerdoor,butitwaslocked,aswell,sohebegantoclimbthroughtheopenwindow.Whenspottingthis,Paulquicklyunlockedthedoor,andthefrightenedmandivedin,slammingthedoorbehindhim.Paullookedoutthebackwindowandsawthewolf

standingoverMac’sbikeasifitwereakill.Shortlyafter,theanimalranoff.Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.Macemergedfromthecarandhuggedhisfriends.“IthoughtIwasgoingtodie,”Maccriedtothem.Macretrieved（取回）hisbicycle,andthethreemenresumed(持續(xù)）theirroadtrip,agreeingtokeepinoneanother’ssightline.Afewmilesdowntheroad,Macpulledoverandburstintotears.“Therestofthetripwasamazing,butIhadtolettheformeremotionout.”參照范文三：Para1:Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.Mominsistedthatwemustmakefulluseofitsincewehadbroughtit.DavidandIlookedatDad,hopinghecouldstophercrazyidea.Toourgreatdisappointment,heagreed.Wespentawholeafternoonseekinganicecampingplaceandsetupourtentbeforethenightfell.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhadthoughtmomcouldbewiseasIadmiringourstunningtent.“Oh,Iforgotthepillows!”whatamisconception.Despitetheacheofmyneck,wehadsomegreatnights.

Para1:Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.Thebrightbluesky,thelimitlessgreengrass,thegroupofsheep,thesettingsunandthecountlessstarsinthecurtainofnightskeptmespellbound.Notonlydidweseethepicturesquescenery,wealsomanagedtoconsidermom’sscandalsasakindoffun.IreallylovemyMum.Toourrelief,wearrivedatgrandparents’placeandwentbacktoourhomewithalloffourpeople.Itwassofortunatetoseemyfriendsagain.范文四：Paragraph1Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Instinctively,Iyelledoutloud,pullingbackthereinshardinordertostopthehorsefromhurtingthelittlecreature.Badlystartledbythesuddenincident,thehorsespedoffthetrackintoanotherdirection.Dadfollowedcloselybehind,callingouttotellmehowtosoothetheterrifiedhorseandIdidastold.Finally,thehorsecalmeddown,butweseemedtogetlost,unabletogobacktothemountainroad.Paragraph2Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.Wanderingaround,wewerestillstuckinthedilemma.Muchtoourdelight,thesoundofwaterinthedistancecaughtourattentionanddroveustotheriverbank.Dadproposedthatweshouldwalkalongtheriverwhichmayleadustothefarmhouseandnothingseemedbetterthanthat.Timeappearedto

bemerrierandshorterwhenIstay