第三組：說(shuō)明文

第三組：說(shuō)明文(一)Hi,Janice,It’sbeenamonthsinceIcametothisnewschool.IreallywantsharewithyousomeproblemsI’vebeenexperiencing.AsItellyoulasttime,Imadethreenewfriendhere.

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Infact,Idon’tliketogoanymore,soI’mafraidI’lllosetheirfriendship.HowdoyouthinkIshoulddo?Ifyouareme,wouldyoutalktohim?Pleasehelpwithmeandgivemesomeadvice.Grace

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(一)這是一封求助信，表達(dá)了作者的困擾。作者交了三位新朋友，經(jīng)常一起閑逛和K歌，實(shí)際上作者并不想出去但又擔(dān)憂失去這份友誼，她想尋求一些建議。1.在want后加to因want后用不定式作賓語(yǔ)。2.tell→told由后面的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)lasttime可知應(yīng)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。3.friend→friends由前面的three可知要用復(fù)數(shù)。4.sing→singing由固定結(jié)構(gòu)spend…(in)doingsth.意為“花費(fèi)……做某事”可知。5.many→much根據(jù)句意“它真的花費(fèi)了我很多錢”，故用much指代錢(不可數(shù))。6.so→but此處顯然存在轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故用并列連詞but。7.How→What因作do的賓語(yǔ)，故要用what。8.are→were此處是虛擬語(yǔ)氣。虛擬條件句中的系動(dòng)詞是be(對(duì)現(xiàn)在事實(shí)的虛擬)時(shí)，要用were。9.him→them根據(jù)上文可知作者交了三位朋友，故要用復(fù)數(shù)them。10.去掉help后的with因動(dòng)詞help是及物動(dòng)詞，可直接帶賓語(yǔ)，不需加介詞with。注意：helpsb.withsth.意為“幫助某人做某事”。wastingadj.浪費(fèi)的hangout閑逛karaokebar酒吧sharewithsb.sth.與某人分享某物seethisas…把這看作……(二)Deareditor,I’msorrytooccupyyourprecioustime,andIreallywanttotellyouanythingabouttheproblemofsomepeoplekeepingpetsnowadays.Itaketheproblemseriouslyforthefollowingreason.First,asitisknowntoall,petsmakemuchnoisethattroublepeoplegreatly.

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Additionally,it’swidelyacceptedthatanimalwastepollutestheenvironment,wheremakespeopleuncomfortable.Manyownersliketakingpetstopublicplaceswheretheymayfrightenchildrenorevenbitepeople.their

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(二)作者(LiHua)向媒體寫信就人們養(yǎng)寵物這個(gè)問(wèn)題尋求幫助。1.and→but表轉(zhuǎn)折用并列連詞but。2.anything→something肯定句用something。3.reason→reasons下文列舉的原因不止一個(gè)，故用復(fù)數(shù)。4.去掉isknown前的it由常用結(jié)構(gòu)asisknowntoall意為“眾所周知”可知。5.trouble→troubles先行詞noise是不可數(shù)名詞，故此處要用第三人稱單數(shù)。6.where→which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，并在從句中作主語(yǔ)。7.在taking后加their表“他們的寵物”，故要加their，此乃英語(yǔ)的習(xí)慣表達(dá)，交代清楚是“誰(shuí)的……”。8.important→importantly修飾整個(gè)句子要用副詞。9.Take→Taking此處Take作非謂語(yǔ)，與邏輯主語(yǔ)I存在主動(dòng)關(guān)系，故用現(xiàn)在分詞。10.help后的to→from此處理應(yīng)表“從你那里”，故用from。occupyvt.占據(jù)preciousadj.寶貴的followingadj.下面的additionallyadv.此外frightenvt.嚇唬spreadvt.傳播sincerelyadv.真誠(chéng)地factorn.因素take…seriously認(rèn)真對(duì)待；重視It’swidelyacceptedthat…人們普遍認(rèn)為take…intoconsideration把……考慮在內(nèi)attractmuchattention引起很多注意(三)DearFengYing,I’vereceivedyourletter,inthatyousaidyouwantedtoloseweightbydieting.It’snaturalthatgirlsofyouragehopetolookbeautiful,andinmyopinion,healthoverweighsbeautiful.Forastudent,studyisthefirstthingtoconsiderbutappearanceisthesecond.

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Sodon’tletothers’ideasaffectyournormallife.However,ifyoudidwanttoloseweight,it’sgoodideatodoitbytakingexerciseandchangeunhealthyeatinghabits.

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Furthermore,youshouldkeepforahealthystateofmind,whichishelpfulinmanyaspects.Ihopemyadviceswillbehelpfultoyou.I’mlookingforwardtohearfromyou.Yours,LiHua

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(三)作者(LiHua)給FengYing回信就如何合理減肥提供建議。1.that→which非限制性定語(yǔ)從句不能用that引導(dǎo)。2.and→but表轉(zhuǎn)折用并列連詞but。3.beautiful→beauty作賓語(yǔ)要用名詞形式。4.but→while表對(duì)比用并列連詞while。5.did→do此處是強(qiáng)調(diào)謂語(yǔ)，而全文的主體時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，故要用do。6.在good前加a由常用句型it’sagoodideatodosth.意為“做某事是個(gè)好主意”可知。idea是可數(shù)名詞。7.change→changing作介詞by的賓語(yǔ)要用動(dòng)詞-ing形式，與前面的taking并列。8.去掉keep后的for因keep是及物動(dòng)詞。9.advices→advice因advice是不可數(shù)名詞。10.hear→hearing由固定短語(yǔ)lookforwardtodoingsth.意為“期待做某事”可知。overweighvt.比……重要appearancen.外貌affectvt.影響furthermoreadv.此外loseweight減肥ofyourage你這個(gè)年齡的normallife正常生活stateofmind心態(tài)inmanyaspects在很多方面It’snaturalthat………是自然的(四)IoftenquarrelaboutmymotheroverwhetherIcanwatchTVafterschool.SheholdsviewthatSenior3studentsmustmakefullyuseofeveryminutetoworkhardattheirlessons.

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Inmyview,watchTVcansetmymindatrestafteraday’shardworks.Besides,it’simportantforustoknowwhathadhappenedathomeandatabroad.Thus,weshouldn’tbeforbiddentowatchTV.

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(四)本文作者和母親關(guān)于自己能不能看電視展開了爭(zhēng)論。1.about→with由固定短語(yǔ)quarrelwithsb.意為“和某人爭(zhēng)論”可知。2.在view前加the由固定短語(yǔ)holdtheview意為“認(rèn)為”可知。也可以說(shuō)，view后有定語(yǔ)從句，表特指。3.fully→full修飾名詞use要用形容詞full。4.me→her根據(jù)上下文意思可推知，此處是指“對(duì)她來(lái)說(shuō)好像”。5.forgetting→forget情態(tài)動(dòng)詞后用動(dòng)詞原形，與be并列。6.eye→eyes因eye是可數(shù)名詞，此處理應(yīng)是指“雙眼”，故用復(fù)數(shù)。7.watch→watching作主語(yǔ)要用動(dòng)詞-ing形式。8.works→work因work是不可數(shù)名詞。9.had→has全文的主體時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，故此處要用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。10.去掉abroad前的at由固定短語(yǔ)athomeandabroad“在國(guó)內(nèi)外”可知。abroad本身可作副詞，前面無(wú)需加介詞。quarrelvi.爭(zhēng)吵；吵架thusadv.因此onceconj.一旦Senior3students高三學(xué)生workhardat…努力學(xué)習(xí)beforbiddentodo被禁止做inmyview在我看來(lái)setmymindatrest讓我的頭腦休息一下(五)Timeisvaluablebutlimit.Thereisafamoussaying,“Timeislife”,thisshowstheimportanceoftime.Whentimehadgone,it’llneverreturn.It’sapitywhenmanypeoplemakepooruseoftime.

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Theyspendtheirprecioustimeoversleeping,drinkingandhangingaround.Theydon’trealizewastingtimeisequalwithwastingtheirlife.Theyalwaysregrethavingmadelittleachievementsofar.

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(五)本文告訴我們，時(shí)間是有限的，我們要珍惜時(shí)間。1.limit→limited作表語(yǔ)要用形容詞。2.this→which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。3.had→has全文的主體時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，故此處用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。4.when→that由固定句型it’sapitythat意為“……很可惜”可知，that引導(dǎo)主語(yǔ)從句。5.with→to由固定短語(yǔ)beequalto意為“與……相等”可知。6.However→Therefore根據(jù)上下文，此處理應(yīng)表“因果”關(guān)系，故要用Therefore。7.value→valuing作介詞of的賓語(yǔ)，要用動(dòng)詞-ing形式valuing，意為“珍惜”。8.在tomorrow前加till/until由固定短語(yǔ)putoff…till/until…意為“把……推遲到……”可知。till/until在此作介詞，并非連接詞。9.去掉failure前的the抽象名詞前不加冠詞。此處是第一次提到，而且并無(wú)特指，故不用定冠詞。10.deaths→death因和poverty是并列關(guān)系，故用單數(shù)death。deaths意為“死亡人數(shù)”。valuableadj.有價(jià)值的preciousadj.珍貴的oversleepvi.睡過(guò)頭povertyn.貧窮sofar迄今為止putoff推遲hangaround閑蕩formthehabitof…養(yǎng)成……的習(xí)慣(六)Doyoureadreviewsafteryouseeamovie?Iusetodothat,butIusuallyregretted.IreadsomuchaboutamovieonadvancethatIoftenendedupnotgotoseeitatall.

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(六)本文作者就“看電影評(píng)論的方式”談了自己的觀點(diǎn)。1.after→before根據(jù)下文可知，應(yīng)該是在看電影之前看的評(píng)論，故用before。2.use→used由固定短語(yǔ)usedtodo意為“過(guò)去常?！笨芍?。3.on→in由固定短語(yǔ)inadvance意為“提前”可知。4.go→going由固定短語(yǔ)endupdoing意為“以……結(jié)束”可知。5.mentions→mention主語(yǔ)是復(fù)數(shù)名詞writers，故不用第三人稱單數(shù)。6.them→it指代前面的thefilm，故用單數(shù)it。7.在way前加the此處表特指，故要用定冠詞。8.importance→important作表語(yǔ)要用形容詞。9.people前的that→which在帶有介詞的定語(yǔ)從句中不能用that。10.去掉like后的of因like是及物動(dòng)詞。reviewn.評(píng)論regretvi.后悔afterwardsadv.事后pointout指出talkshow訪談節(jié)目evenmore更多地(七)Lastweek,studentsinourclasshelddebateonwhetherweshouldshoponline.Moststudentsareinfavorforit,thinkthatshoppingonlinecanhelppeoplesavetime.

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Moreimportant,theInternetisopenalldaylong,soitisofgreatconvenientforthosewhoarebusyinthedaytime.However,specialattentionmustbepaytothesafetyofonlineshopping.Peopleneedtomakesureofthattheygetthattheyhaveorderedbeforepayingforthebill.

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(七)本文論述了網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)。1.在debate前加a因debate是可數(shù)名詞，故要加不定冠詞。2.for→of由固定短語(yǔ)infavorof意為“贊同”可知。3.think→thinking分析句子成分可知此處think作非謂語(yǔ)，且與邏輯主語(yǔ)students存在主動(dòng)關(guān)系，故用現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語(yǔ)。4.allow→allows本句主語(yǔ)是shoppingonline，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞要用第三人稱單數(shù)。5.our→their由前面的people可知要用their。6.important→importantly作狀語(yǔ)要用副詞形式。7.convenient→convenience因beofgreat+抽象名詞=bevery+形容詞。8.pay→paid此處是被動(dòng)，故要用過(guò)去分詞。9.去掉makesure后的of因makesurethat+從句是固定句型，此處of顯然是多余的。10.get后的that→what引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句。根據(jù)語(yǔ)境可知應(yīng)該用what才符合邏輯。debaten.辯論browsevt.瀏覽itemn.物品comparevt.對(duì)比goodsn.商品ordervt.定購(gòu)；定(貨)savetime節(jié)省時(shí)間inashorttime在很短時(shí)間內(nèi)inthedaytime在白天payforthebill買單(八)Withthedevelopmentofourcountry’seconomy,moreandmorepeoplebuycars,thatcausesserioustrafficproblemsandenvironmentalpollution.AsfarasIamconcernedabout,thesolutionsofthisproblemarepresentedasfollows.to

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