2022年英語四級寫作技巧簡潔才是美 英語四級寫作技巧

本文格式為Word版，下載可任意編輯——2022年英語四級寫作技巧簡潔才是美英語四級寫作技巧Wordy:ItwillbeouraimtoensureproperhealthcareforeachandeveryoneoftheChinesepeople.Better:OuraimistoensureproperhealthcareforallChinese.Wordy:Thisbookwillhelpyoumasterthebasicelementsofgoodwriting.Better:Thisbookwillhelpyoumasterthebasicsofgoodwriting.Wordy:Thesearchoftheforestthattheyconductedwasentirelycomplete.Better:Thesearchoftheforestwascomplete.或Theyconductedacompletesearchoftheforest.其次個句子符合漢語表達(dá)習(xí)慣，即他們對森林舉行了徹底的搜查。Wordy:Hehasnosenseofprinciples,whetherheisinpublicorinprivate.Better:Hehasnoprinciples,publicorprivate.Wordy:Wheneveranyonetelephonedhertoaskherforhelpwiththeirhomeworkshealwaysobligedrightaway.Better:Sheimmediatelyobligedanyonewhotelephonedforhelpwithhomework.Wordy:Inacautiousmannerthecarwentaroundthecorner.Better:Thecarnegotiatedthecorner.Wordy:Ifthegovernmentagencyfindsthatanindividualhasreceivedapaymenttowhichtheindividualwasnotentitled,whetherornotthepaymentwasduetotheindividual’sfaultormisrepresentation,theindividualshallbeliabletorepaytothegovernmentthetotalsumofthepaymenttowhichtheindividualwasnotentitled.Better:Ifthegovernmentagencyfindsthatyoureceivedapaymentthatyouweren’tentitledto,youmustpaytheentiresumback.Wordy:Anotherimportantaspectisgoodhealth.Itisoneofourgreatblessings.Itmaybeachievedthroughproperdietandexercise.Restisalsodesirable.Better:Thegreatblessingofgoodhealthmaybehadthroughproperdiet,exercise,andrest.詞語簡化的一些技巧2策略之一：用介詞短語替代從句。例:Wordy:Whiletheywereplayingtennis,shestartedanargumentthatlastedallmorning.Better:Duringtennisshestartedanargumentthatlastedallmorning.Wordy:Whenyoucometothesecondtrafficlight,turnright.Better:Atthesecondtrafficlightturnleft.2策略之二：刪除諸如"whois”或"thatis"之類的關(guān)系代詞，變從句為短語。例:Wordy:Thenovel,whichiswritteninthreeparts,toldastorythattookplaceintheMiddleAges.Better:Thethree-partnoveltoldastorysetintheMiddleAges.注：把句中的”threeparts”改用形容詞來表達(dá)，節(jié)省了四個不必要的單詞”whichiswrittenin”。我們經(jīng)?？梢詫㈥P(guān)系代詞如”that”去掉，這只會引起最少的變動。2策略之三：剔除你不需要的單詞"Twojointpartnerswillpresenttheirviewsoveralong-distancetelephonecall."寫完這樣的句子后，你自己再讀一遍，挑出單詞”joint”和”telephone”，留神刪去不必要的詞。2策略之四：表達(dá)否決意義時，盡量制止使用否決詞。英語中好多詞不用"no’s"或者"not’s"也能表達(dá)否決含義的詞匯，你盡可以采取更為委婉的表達(dá)方式。例：Thuscollegestudentswho