外研版高中英語Book 5 Module 6 Writing 教學(xué)課件 (共26張 )

Module6AnimalsinDangerReadingandWritingWarming-upThe

endangeredanimalspandatigerelephantpolarbearTibetanantelopesWhenthebuyingstops,thekillingcantoo!ThenaturereservePolicearegettingtoughwiththedealers.Internationalco-operationReadthetableonP58andsaywhichanimalthesentencesreferto.1.Itistheworld’sbiggestanimal;afullygrownadultcanweighfivetons.AfricanElephant2.ItcanbefoundinpartsofSiberiaandNortheastChina.3.Theyfeedmostlyoninsectsandsmallreptiles,butalsoeatfishandfrogs.4.Thepopulationissupposedtobelessthan5,000;someexpertsbelievethefigurecouldbenearest2,000.SiberianTigerNorthernBaldIbisBlueWhalePairworkTalkabouttheseanimalsandfindmoreinformation.A:WhatkindofanimalistheSiberiantiger?B:Itisthelargestmemberofcatfamily.A:WherecanSiberiantigersbefound?B:ItcanbefoundinSiberiaofRussiaandpartsofNortheastChina.ReadthedescriptionoftheSiberiantigeronP58.Writeasimilardescriptionofanotheranimalinthetable.Whataanimal?---giveadescriptionoftheappearanceWheretolive？---thehabitatWhattoeat?---thefoodWhyindanger?---thereasonsHowmanyleft?---thefactsorresults【寫作任務(wù)】

假定某英語雜志最近正在征集關(guān)于保護瀕危動物的文章。請你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇關(guān)于保護藏羚羊(Tibetanantelope)的英語短文投稿。如何用英語寫關(guān)于保護瀕危動物的文章HabitatQinghai-TibetanPlateauDescriptionfast-running(eightykilometresperhour)Numbersleftabout50,000inthe1990s;growinginrecentyearsWhyindangerhuntedforfurWaystoprotectthem...注意:1.

詞數(shù)120左右；

2.

可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫?！緦懽髦笇?dǎo)】一、審題定調(diào)

本寫作要求寫一篇關(guān)于保護藏羚羊的短文。同學(xué)們可以從介紹藏羚羊展開，分析其瀕臨滅絕的原因后，進一步提出保護藏羚羊的建議并呼吁大家保護藏羚羊。由于該文章是為某英語雜志投稿，所以在寫作時應(yīng)該使用正式規(guī)范的語言。人稱以第三人稱為主，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。二、謀篇布局文章可以分為以下三部分。第一部分：簡要介紹藏羚羊(如棲息地、特點等)；第二部分：描述藏羚羊的現(xiàn)狀并分析其瀕臨滅絕的原因；第三部分：提出保護措施。三、組織語言1.

第一部分:從棲息地、特點等方面介紹藏羚羊。普通表達☆Mostof...liveon/in...☆...arefast-runninganimals.☆...canrunataspeedofabout...高級表達☆...isanimportanthabitatfor...☆Thehighestspeedissaidtobe...☆...canrunasfastas...2.

第二部分:描述藏羚羊的現(xiàn)狀并分析其瀕臨滅絕的原因。普通表達☆...arefacingaserioussituation.☆Becausetheirfurisveryvaluable,peoplekillthemtomakemoney.☆...arekilledbecausetheir...areveryvaluableatmarket.☆...arerarelyseenbecause...☆Theirlivingareashavebeenseriouslydamagedbyhumanbeings.高級表達☆...arehighlyendangeredin...☆Becausetheirfurisofgreatvalue,thedesireformoneydrivespeopletohuntthemillegally.☆...areendangeredduetolossofhabitat.☆...havesufferedfromhabitatlossduetoahumanimpact(影響)ontheirhabitat.3.

第三部分：提出保護措施。普通表達☆Thegovernmentshouldmakestricterlawstopunishpeoplewhokill...☆A(yù)llofusshouldrealisethat...areimportanttothenatureandourhumanbeingsanditisourdutytoprotect...☆Thewholeworldshouldbeawareoftheimportanceofprotectinganimals.高級表達☆Stricterlawsshouldbepassedtoforbidkilling/stopanyhuntingofrareanimals.☆Weshouldtrytoraisepublicawarenessaboutprotectinganimals,whichplayanimportantroleinecological(生態(tài)的)balance.【范文展示】普通范文

TheTibetanantelopeisarareanimalandhighlyprotectedin

China.

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MostofthemliveontheQinghai-TibetanPlateau.Theyarefast-runninganimals,

②whichcanrunataspeedofabouteightykilometresperhour.Inthe1990s,thenumberoftheantelopesfelltoabout50,000,and

③

theyarestillfacingaserioussituation.

④Becausetheirfurisveryvaluable,peoplekillthemtomakemoney.Althoughthepopulationhasbeguntogrowinrecentyears,westillhavemuchtodo.

⑤

ThegovernmentshouldmakestricterlawstopunishpeoplewhokillTibetanantelopes.

⑥Allofusshouldrealisethattheantelopesareimportanttothenatureandourhumanbeingsanditisourdutytoprotectthem.高級范文

TheTibetanantelopeisarareanimalandhighlyprotectedin

China.

①TheQinghai-TibetanPlateauisanimportanthabitatforthem.

Theyarefast-runninganimalsand

②thehighestspeedissaidtobeeightykilometresperhour.③Theywerehighlyendangeredinthe1990s,andonlyabout50,000individualswereleft.

④Becausetheirfurisofgreatvalue,thedesireformoneydrivespeopletohuntthemillegally.Althoughthepopulationhasbeguntogrowinrecentyears,westillhavemuchtodo.

⑤

Stricterlawsshouldbepassedtostopanyhuntingofrareanimals.

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Andweshouldtrytoraisepublicawarenessaboutprotectinganimals,whichplayanimportantroleinecologicalbalance.

假定你校英語報新開設(shè)了“WorldEndangeredAnimals”欄目。請你根據(jù)以下