2018高考英語寫作過渡課

2018高考英語寫作過渡課第一頁，共27頁。BeautifyyourComposition遇難心不慌，遇易心更細。第二頁，共27頁。discussingroupYesterdayIwenttothefriendshipstore.I

sawaforeignerbuyingclothes.HespokeEnglish.Theshopassistantcouldn'tunderstandhim.Itranslatedforthem.Theysaidthankstome.Ithinktheshopassistantshouldknowforeignlanguage.

第三頁，共27頁。YesterdayIwenttothefriendshipstore.

Isawa

foreignerbuyingclothes.HespokeEnglish.Theshopassistantcouldn'tunderstandhim.Itranslatedforthem.Theysaidthankstome.Ithinktheshopassistantshouldknowforeignlanguage.IwasdoingsomeshoppingwhenIhappenedtoseethataforeignerwastryingtobuysomeclothes.Hetriedwhathecouldtomakehimselfunderstood.ButSeeingthis,IwentuptothemandwhattheforeignguestsaidintoChinese.orhowtheycouldinsuchabigstorewithoutknowinganyforeignlanguage.第四頁，共27頁。

YesterdayIwenttothefriendshipstore.IwasdoingsomeshoppingwhenIhappenedtoseethataforeignerwhospokeEnglishwastryingtobuysomeclothes.Hetriedwhathecouldtomakehimselfunderstood.Buttheshopassistantcouldn'tcatchhim.Seeingthis,IwentuptothemandtranslatedwhattheforeignguestsaidintoChineseforthem.Theysaidthankstome.Ithinktheshopassistantshouldknowforeignlanguageorhowtheycouldinsuchabigstorewithoutknowinganyforeignlanguage.

第五頁，共27頁。書面表達在評閱時遵循三原則語言第一位（語言高級）內容第二位（要點齊全）結構第三位（文章分段）一、高級詞匯和句式二、修辭手法三、有效的連詞四、名人名言或諺語語言第一位（語言高級）漂亮、地道第六頁，共27頁。詞匯使用的原則人靠衣裝，文靠詞裝

1、詞組優(yōu)先原則2、地道原則。3、避免重復原則

4、后、高、長原則—

后學到、較高級、較長詞匯。四項原則第七頁，共27頁。

1、詞組優(yōu)先原則［原文］Anewrailwayisbeingbuiltinmyhometown.［修正］Anewrailwayisunderconstructioninmyhometown.

2、地道原則［原文］Throughtraveling,Ilearnedalotofknowledge.［修正］Throughtraveling,Igained／obtainedalotofknowledge.第八頁，共27頁。

4、后高長原則—后學到、較高級、較長詞匯hardvery

payattentionto

happy

moreandmore3、避免重復原則［原文］Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingtelevision.［修正］Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingtelevision.替換詞

diligently

ratherextremelyattachimportanceto;focusondelightedenjoyabletheincreasingnumberof第九頁，共27頁。Adj.聰明的、腦筋好的clever→smart→wise→bright→intelligent第十頁，共27頁。電腦在我們生活中的作用是十分重要的。1.Computersareveryimportantinourlife.2.Cputersareofgreatimportanceinourlife.第十一頁，共27頁。 EX、運用高級詞匯：1.Asaresult,theplanfailed.(一般)2.ShewenttoAustriainordertostudymusic.(一般)3.SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.(一般)Theplanturnedouttobeafailure.(高級)ShewenttoAustriawiththepurposeofstudyingmusic.(高級)Agoodideaoccurredtome./Agoodideasuddenlystruck/hitme(高級)第十二頁，共27頁。Atthenewsofherdeath,hewent

palewithsorrow(高級)Shehastroubleinpronouncingtheword.(高級)1.Whenheheardshehaddied,hewentpalewithsorrow.(一般)2.Shecan’tcorrectlypronouncetheword.(一般)運用高級詞匯：第十三頁，共27頁。思考：什么樣的作文會成為一篇好作文

地道的高級詞匯和恰當?shù)脑~組無遺漏信息點（審題）篇章條理清晰：分段和過渡詞句式多樣思考：你能想到的好句式有哪些？

第十四頁，共27頁。強調句倒裝句

with復合結構advancedsentences定語從句名詞性從句非謂語動詞常用諺語被動句…第十五頁，共27頁。一、肯定不如雙否好二、陳述不如倒裝妙三、主動不如被動巧四、從句不如分詞傲高級句式使用的原則：抓住高考閱卷老師的心理的秘訣四“不如”謄寫規(guī)范不要少第十六頁，共27頁。

修辭的使用在書面表達中算作很大的亮點，在高中階段很少有學生會注重修辭的應用。雙重否定也是種修辭，而且對于考生來說，只要稍加注意，可以在文章中設計雙重否定的句子。就變成了亮點句，起到強調作用。一、肯定不如雙否好Icouldn’thavemadesomuchprogressinEnglishwithouthishelp.IhavemadegreatprogressinEnglishwithhishelp.Thepostmancomesontimeeveryday.

.Thepostmanneverfailstocomeontime第十七頁，共27頁。

倒裝是一種最簡單易行的使句子呈現(xiàn)亮點的方法。在高中階段只需掌握倒裝的四種形式，足以應對書面表達，如何應用倒裝，有很多方法和技巧。二、陳述不如倒裝妙1.Wecansolvetheproblemofpollutionwhenwerealizetheimportanceofenvironmentalprotection2.Timeissopreciousthatwecan’taffordtowasteit.3.Ashewasdiligent,hefailedinpassingtheexam.4.Bynomeansshouldteenagersgetintothehabitofsmoking.第十八頁，共27頁。每次可以借五本書最多借十天Wecanborrowfivebooksatmost,andwecankeepthemfortendays.Atmostfivebookscanbeborrowedatatimeandtheycanbekeptfortendays.哪種表達法分數(shù)會更高？三、主動不如被動巧第十九頁，共27頁。[原文]Theyoungmancouldn’thelpcryingwhenheheardthebadnews.[修正]Hearingthebadnews,theyoungmancouldn’thelpcrying.[原文]

Ifeverythingistakenintoconsideration,weoughttohaveanotherchance.[修正]Everythingtakenintoconsideration,weoughttohaveanotherchance.四、從句不如分詞傲第二十頁，共27頁。1.我們學校周圍種了很多花和樹，吸引了大量的學生來參觀。（with的復合結構）______________________________________,itattractsalargenumberofpeople.2.Yesterday,wewenttotheEastGate,andweboughtalotofclothes.（定語從句）Yesterday,wewenttotheEastGate,

___________________________3.Hiswonderfulperformanceonthestageimpressedme.（主語從句）______________mostwashiswonderfulperformanceonthestage.Whereweboughtalotofclothes.WhatimpressedmeEX、改寫句子

Withsomanytreesandflowerssurroundingourschool

.

第二十一頁，共27頁。4.Becausemyfriendwasfrightenedoflosinghisjob,hesaidnothingtothepolice.（使用分詞結構）__________________,myfriendsaidnothingtothepolice.5.Whenhearrives,pleasegivemeane-mail.（使用V-ing形式）Onhisarriving,pleasegivemeane-mail.6.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用強調句型)Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.

Frightenedoflosinghisjob

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