書面表達專項突破8祝賀信

文體概述祝賀信是指在日常生活中，得知同學或朋友競賽獲獎、考上大學、結婚、過新年或重大節(jié)日等，給對方祝賀的信件。書寫時應做到真誠、自然、親切動人。祝賀信通常包括以下內容：祝賀事由→所取得的成績→被祝賀人過去的努力→被祝賀人的優(yōu)點→表達自己的愿望。第一頁，共16頁。常用語塊恭喜/祝賀……_________________________2.實現/成真_________________________3.很高興聽到……_________________________4.很高興知道你……_________________________5.我想表達我對……的祝賀_________________________Iwouldliketoexpressmycongratulationson…Congratulationson…cometrueHowhappyIamtohear…Ihavelearnedwithdelightthatyou…第二頁，共16頁。6.我為你……感到非常高興________________________7.……是相當令人振奮的消息！________________________8.我知道這肯定是因為……________________________是你非常值得的獎賞________________________10.我希望……_______________________Itisarewardthatyourichlydeserveforyour…Ifeelveryhappyforyou(r)……isquiteexcitingnews!Iknowthisissurelyowingto…Ihope…第三頁，共16頁。11.請接受……________________________12.祝你一切順利!________________________13.你們是天生的一對!________________________14.祝你心想事成!________________________15.祝你年年有今日，歲歲有今朝。________________________Iwishyoumanyhappyreturnsoftheday.Pleaseaccept…Wishyouallthebest!Youtwoareaperfectmatch!Mayallyourwishescometrue!第四頁，共16頁。套用句式我很高興你夢想成真。2.我寫這封信是為了表達我對你英語演講比賽獲得第一名的祝賀。Ifeelveryhappyforyourdreamhascometrue.2.IamwritingtoexpressmycongratulationsonyourwinningthefirstplaceintheEnglishspeechcontest.第五頁，共16頁。3.祝賀你高考成功。4.請接受我最誠摯的問候。5.我希望你的未來是燦爛的。3.CongratulationsonyoursuccessintheNationalCollegeEntranceExamination.4.Pleaseacceptmywarmestregards.5.Ihopeyourfuturewillbeglorious.第六頁，共16頁。習作修改(做短文改錯，背經典范文)DearHenry,IamwritingtooffermysincerestcongratulationsyouradmissionintotheBiologyDepartmentofPekingUniversityasagraduation.Asyourclosefriend,IjustwantyoutoknowwhatluckyIamtobeabletoshareyourprideandhowpleasedIwasatyouradmission.∧

ongraduatehowam第七頁，共16頁。Inmyviews,youworkhardandbesidesthat,youareaveryintelligenceperson.Thisadmissionisarewardwhereyourichlydeserve.Iamsureyouwillmakeagreaterprogressinyourstudyandobtainabrightlyfutureinyourlife.IwishyougreatersuccessinyourschoolcareerandIamlookforwardtogoodnewsfromyousoon.

Bestwishes.Yours,LiHuaviewintelligentthat/whichbrightlooking第八頁，共16頁。1.在congratulations后加oncongratulationson是固定搭配，意為“祝賀……”。2.graduation→graduate根據上下文意，此處應該是指“畢業(yè)生”，故用graduate。3.what→how感嘆句句型，后面是形容詞，故此處要用how。4.was→am從上下文時態(tài)可知，此處用一般現在時即可。5.views→view固定結構inmyview意為“在我看來(view不能用復數)”，等于inmyopinion。第九頁，共16頁。6.intelligence→intelligent修飾名詞要用形容詞。7.where→that/which這是定語從句，先行詞reward是物，故用that/which(在從句中作賓語可省略)。8.去掉greaterprogress前的aprogress為不可數名詞，前面不能加a。9.brightly→bright修飾名詞要用形容詞。10.look→looking因為此處表“正在期待”，故要用現在進行時。第十頁，共16頁。課堂練習假定你是李華，得知你的好友王強今年考上了北京大學(PekingUniversity)，他來自貧困地區(qū)，是村里的第一位大學生。請你給他寫一封祝賀信，要點如下：1.考上理想大學，父母驕傲。2.努力學習將來為家鄉(xiāng)服務。3.對未來祝福。注意：1.詞數100左右。2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3.開頭語和結束語已為你寫好。第十一頁，共16頁。DearWangQiang,Congratulations!IhavelearnedwithdelightthatyouareadmittedtoPekingUniversity,youridealone!Iknowyouhaveworkedveryhardinthepastyears,soI’mtrulyhappytoknowthatyoubecomethefirstcollegestudentofyourvillagefromthepoorareas.Iamsureyourparentsaregreatlyproudofyou.第十二頁，共16頁。IjustwantyoutoknowhowpleasedIamtowitnessyoursuccess.Thisisanewstartforyouandit’sgoodforyoutostudywithsomanyexcellentstudentsandlearnfromtopprofessors.Iwishyougreatersuccessinuniversityandserveforthehometowninthefuture.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua第十三頁，共16頁。課外作業(yè)假定你是李華，得知你的外國筆友Peter獲得了“漢語橋”世界大學生中文演講比賽一等獎。你為他感到驕傲，并給他寫一封祝賀信，要點如下：1.天天練習講漢語，從不會到流利，終于成功。2.繼續(xù)努力，有機會來中國留學。3.希望見面和交流。注意：1.詞數100左右。2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3.開頭語和結束語已為你寫好。參考詞匯：“漢語橋”世界大學生中文演講比賽“ChineseBridge”Chinesespeechcontest第十四頁，共16頁。DearPeter,Iwouldliketoexpressmycongratulationstoyouonyourreceivingthefirstprizeof“ChineseBridge”Chinesespeechcontest.IknowthatyouwerenotgoodatChineseatfirst.However,youpracticedspeakingChineseeveryday.Asthesayinggoes,“Everythingcomestohimwhowaits”.Finally,yousucceeded!Inmymind,thismatchisverydifficultforaforeignstudent.第十五頁，共16頁。SoI’msosurprisedthatyou