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AcademicWritingTask12IELTSWritingSaturday/ThursdayMorning3rdpaperTest3QuestionBookletTask1Report(Academic)/

Letter(General)150w,20mTask2Essay250w,40m4WritingBookletWritingBookletPassword:ieltswritingPencilandEraser5ScoringExaminerTask1and2:0-9WritingBandT1*1/3+T2*2/36→6.5OverallBand6RequirementAcademic–OverallScoreLanguageSchool 5.5Undergraduate 6Graduate 6.5

FamousUniversities +0.5PopularMajors +0.578

9RegistrationObjectiveAnacceptablescorewithintheshortesttimeTheearlier,themorechoices!Nodeadline,nocompletion!10RegistrationSelf-AnalysisNCEE 100 4.5NCEE 130 or CET-4 425 5.0CET-4 600 or CET-6 425 5.5CET-6 600 or NETEM 70 6.0>4hrs/day,1point/per2months11ConsiderateIELTSTestasoftenaspossibleReschedule(+500RMB)Refund(-750RMB)TeachingMaterial<CambridgeIELTS4><CambridgeIELTS5>《雅思寫作勝經(jīng)》、群言出版社1213Task1-QuestionGroupingFigure(75%2023Q1)Multiple/SingleNon-Figure(25%2023Q1)Flowchart/Map14WritingProcedureRead+Plan(3mins)Write(16mins)Check(1mins)15ReadWords:paragraph2Pictures:Words(title,legend,axis)Number(unit,digit)Makenotesonthequestionbooklet!Numbers10million/millionsthousandsofmillionsofbillionsof17ScoringCriterionTA:ContentCC:StructureLR:WordsGRA:Sentences18MarkingCriterionUNDERLENGTHNOOFWORDSPENALTYOFF-TOPICMEMORISEDILLEGIBLE19Plan-ContentSummarize

Features,notlistdataa1,a2,a3,…,anTrendMax/MinSlopeA,B,C,…Max/Min20Paragraph3Comparisons

withinthechartorbetweenthechartsSelectMainFeatures

(recreatesthepictureintheexaminer’smind)SupportingDataReport

facts,notopinions21Plan-StructureParagraphornot?reader–friendlyHowtoParagraph?Anewidea,anewparagraphIntroduction/Conclusion(ifneeded)22ThinkingStyle23ParagraphsMultipleChartsIntroductionChart1Chart2…ComparisonSingleChartIntroductionFeature1Feature2…Conclusion(ifneeded)24Plan-StructureLinkingDevices(LD)BetweenparagraphsBetweenfeaturesWithinsentences25LanguageRequirementWordCorrectspellingenviroment/environmentWordLevelget/achieveaband8WordVariety(Avoidrepetition)agood/well-paid/satisfactory/decentjob26SentenceGrammaticalAccuracyThereisaboyasksyouout.SentenceLengthBand9:20+Band7:15StructureVarietyAnewchallengercomeshere.Herecomesanewchallenger.27Word&TimeMultiple /SingleChartsIntro. /Intro. (30w,1s)Chart1 /Feature1 (50w,4s)Chart2 /Feature2 (50w,4s)…Comparison/Conclusion (30w,1s)Paragraph2CopiedphraseswillnotbecountedParaphrasetherubricIntroductionchart=graph=diagramline,curvebar,columnpietable=figures=statisticsSave‘below’Word(B-78)giveinformationaboutrevealindicatedemonstrateSimplePresentTenseWordtheUKBritainmostpopularfavorite/fashionable/stylishcountrynationWordUKresidentstovisitUKtravelers/visitors/touristsSpecificin1999PassiveVoiceThechartshowsA. (do)Aisshownbythechart. (bedone)ThelinechartrevealsvisitstoandfromtheUK.VisitstoandfromtheUKarerevealedinthelinechart.StructureVarietyThelinechartreveals…,andthebargraphindicates…Thelinechartreveals…,and…areindicatedinthebargraph.CompoundSentenceIntroductionThelinechartrevealsvisitstoandfromBritainandUKtravelers’top5favoritenationsin1999areindicatedinthebargraph.LinkingDevicesBetweenparagraphs(B-78)Accordingtothechart,linechartupper/lowerchartchart1chartofvisitstoandfromtheUKBetweenFeatures(B-51)also/besides/ontheotherhandbut/however/converselywhile/inparticularBasicStructure1

Thevisits

increased

greatly (1) (2) (3)

fromabout12to57million

(4)

from1979to1999. (5)(1)SubjectsLegendvisitsabroadbyUKresidentsParagraph2travelfromtheUKSynonymsUKvisitors/travelers/tourists(1)Subjectsit/theyThevisitsincreasedfrom1979to1999.Inparticular,theyincreasedmostquicklyfrom1985to1988.(2)Verbsincrease:decrease/rise:fallgoup:comedownclimb:slideascend:declinerocket:collapse(2)VerbsTenseincreasedincreaseisexpected/predictedtoincrease(3)Adverbssharply/rapidly/swiftlyslowly/gradually/tardilygreatly/vastly/considerablyslightly/marginally/minutely(3)Adverbs&(4)Numbersabout/around/roughly/moreorlessfromabout12to53million(5)Timefrom1979to1999between1979and1999duringthe20years/twodecadesstartingfrom1979Chart1(Band6.5)Accordingtothelinechart,visitsabroadbyUKresidentsincreasedfromabout12to57millionfrom1979to1999.While,overseastravelerstoBritainwentupfromabout10to27million.ItisobviousthatUKtouristsweremoreandclimbedfasterthanoverseasonesduringtheperiod.BasicStructure2Therewasasharp

increase

inthevisits(3)(2)(1)fromabout12to53million

(4)from1979to1999.(5)BasicStructure3Asharp

increasewasseenin(3)(2)(6)thevisits

fromabout12to53million(1)(4)from1979to1999. (5)48Asharpincrease(2)&(1),(6)asharp/slow/great/slightincreaseanupward/rising/increasingtendencyadownward/falling/decreasingtrendshow/prove/witness(2)Verbkeep/remainunchanged/constant/stablefluctuateupward/downwarddouble/triple/quadrupleChart1Accordingtothelinechart,bothUKtouristsabroadandoverseasonestotheUKwentupfrom1979to1999andtheformerclimbedmoremarkedlythanthelatter.In1979,UKvisitorswereonlyaround2millionmorethantheiroverseascounterparts,beingapproximately12and10millionrespectively.However,twodecadeslater,theyalmostdoubledtheforeigntravelerstoBritain(roughly53and27millionseparately).Chart2(Band6.5)ThebargraphdemonstratesthatthemostUKvisitorswenttoFranceandSpain,whichwere11.0and9.5million.Also,manyBritishtravelerswereattractedbytheUSA(4.0million),Greece(3.5million)andTurkey(2.0million).Chart2ThebargraphdemonstratesthatFranceandSpainwerethefavoritecountriesforUKtouristsin1999,whichattractedaround11.0and9.5

millionUKvisitorsrespectively.RemotelyfollowingweretheUSA,GreeceandTurkeywith4.0,3.5and2.0milliontravelersseparately.Comparison(band6.5)Whatisalsoworthmentioningisthatalmost40%UKtouristsselectedFranceandSpainin1999,ifthetwodiagramsareconsideredasawhole.ComparisonWhatisalsoworthmentioningisthatFranceandSpainaloneaccountedforalmost40percentofUKtouristsabroadin1999,ifthetwodiagramsareconsideredasawhole.ProfessionalEnglishthestreetTVCheckSampleAnswer(I4-168)ScriptComment–ScriptCorrespondingCommentTAUnderlength&dollarNocomparisonCCNoreferenceLR&GRANarrowsentencetypeBasicerrorsI4-54demandused/need/requirement/consumptiontypicalaverage/representativeuseconsumehomehousehold/familypassivevoice&compoundsentenceIntroductionThecurvechartrevealselectricityusedinEnglandduringaveragedaysinwinterandsummerandhowelectricityisconsumedinatypicalEnglishhouseholdisindicatedinthepiegraph.ReadChart1Unithrs/yrso’clock:

am,a.m.AM,A.MNumber38,000unitsReadChart2EverydaywordskettlemicrowaveovenrangehoodPlanWinter>summerNumbers:Max&Min/AverageWinter,Summer:Numbers:Max&MinWordspeak/summit/highestpointnadir/touchthebottom/lowestpointunchanged/constant/stable/stationaryphaseChart1(Band6.5)

Accordingtothecurvechart,dailyelectricityneedishigherinwinter(38,000unitsonaverage)thaninsummer(18,000unitsonaverage).Inwinter,electricityconsumptionpeaksat2:00amand10:00pmwhileittouchesthebottomat0:00amand8:00am.Ontheotherhand,insummer,itsummitsat2:00pmand11:00pm,buthasanadirat9:00amandalowerstationaryphasefrom4:00pmto9:00pm.Chart1Accordingtothecurvechart,dailyelectricityneedishigherinwinter(38,000unitsonaverage)thaninsummer(18,000unitsonaverage),althoughbothofthemareunevenduringtheday.Inwinter,electricityconsumptionpeaksat2:00amand10:00pmwhileittouchesthebottomat0:00amand8:00am.Incontrast,thesummersummitscomelaterthanwinteronesat2:00pmand11:00pm.Anadirisseennearly9:00amandalowerstationaryphaseiswitnessedfrom4:00pmto9:00pm.occupybesharedbyaccountforberesponsibleforbeinchargeofbeinthechargeofPercentageasmallpercentageof…(20%)aquarterof…theminorityof…(40%)halfof…themajorityof…(60%)threequartersof…mostof…(80%)one-fifth/one-thirdStructures1occupies/accountsfor

themajorityofA(x%).y%ofAissharedby/isinthechargeof

2.3and4areresponsiblefor/inchargeoftherest,withz%andw%respectively.Chart2(Band6.5)Thepiegraphdemonstratesthatheatingroomsandwateroccupiesthemajorityofelectricityconsumption(52.5%).Then,17.5%oftheelectricitydemandissharedbyovens,kettlesandwashingmachines.Lighting,TV,radioandvacuumcleaners,foodmixers,electrictoolsareresponsiblefortherest,with15%each.Chart2Thepiegraphdemonstratesthatthemajorityofelectricityconsumption(52.5%)issharedbyheatingroomsandwater.Then,ovens,kettlesandwashingmachinesoccupy17.5%oftheelectricitydemand.Therestisinthechargeoflighting,TV,radioandvacuumcleaners,foodmixers,electrictools,with15%each.Comparison(Band6.5)Whatisalsoworthmentioningisthat

heatingroomsandwateristhereasonforthehigherelectricitydemandinwinterthaninsummer,ifthetwodiagramsareconsideredasawhole.ComparisonWhatisalsoworthmentioningisthat

electricityforheatingroomsandwaterisprobablythemajorcauseforthehigherelectricitydemandinwinterthaninsummer,ifthetwodiagramsareconsideredasawhole.I4–164TAComparisonwithin/betweenthechartsConfusingtimeexpressionsCCPoorparagraphingLR&GRASpellingerrors(5)I4-31proportionpercentage/share/figurescategorytype/kind/groupfamilyhouseholdPlanagedvsnotagedsinglevsdoublewithvswithoutchildrenI4–162giveabreakdownofHowtoincludenumbers?A(11%)A,whichis…A,with/at…A,comprising/consistingof…ModelAnswerItisnoticeablethat…(wordfiller)Itisobviousthat…Itiseasytoseethat…Overall,thetablesuggeststhat…2023年9月20日

Thediagrambelowshowsthemethodofobtainingwateroutdoors.ObjectContentUnderstandtheimportantstagesFindaplacetostartStructureIntroductionPreparationProcedure(Time/Sequence)Conclusion(ifneeded)LinkingDevice-TimeTobeginwithNextThenLaterFinallyAtthesametime/MeanwhileSequencethefirststageinvolvesinthenextstageinthefollowingstageinthelaststagePurposeinorderthatsothatinorderto/inordernottosoasto/soasnottoLanguageOpeningSentencesVaryingvocabularyPresentsimple/PassiveVoiceOpeningSentencesThepictureillustrates…Thewholeprocedurecanbedividedinto…stages.VaryingVocabularyobtain,accumulate,collect,gathervaporThewaterturnsintogas,risesandturnsbackintoliquidwhenitaccumulatesonthesheetofplastic.2023年1月14日

Thediagrambelowshowstheprocessofglassrecycling.

FlowChartWhenthecleaningisdone,thebottlesaretransportedtoaglassfactorywheretheyarebrokeintoglasspieceswhicharethenpouredintoafurnace.2023年9月20日

ThemapbelowisofthetownofGarlsdon.Anewsupermarket(S)isplannedforthetown.Themapshowstwopossiblesitesforthesupermarket.

ContentTransportationParking90SiteSelectionIntroductionS1(VaryingVocabulary)S2Conclusion91Development(080329Bridgetown)IntroductionMap1Map2Relationshipbetweendevelopment9293WritingRulesNoTitleBigger,biggerandbigger10-12w/line94

Fourscoreandsevenyearsago,ourfathersbroughtforthuponthiscontinentanewnation:conceivedinliberty,anddedicatedtothepropositionthatallmenarecreatedequal.Nowweareengagedinagreatcivilwar...testingwhetherthatnation,oranynationsoconceivedandsodedicated...canlongendure.Wearemetonagreatbattlefieldofthatwar.Wehavecometodedicateaportionofthatfieldasafinalrestingplaceforthosewhoheregavetheirlivesthatthatnationmightlive.Itisaltogetherfittingandproperthatweshoulddothis.But,inalargersense,wecannotdedicate...wecannotconsecrate...wecannothallowthisground.Thebravemen,livinganddead,whostruggledherehaveconsecratedit,faraboveourpoorpowertoaddordetract.Theworldwilllittlenote,norlongremember,whatwesayhere,butitcanneverforgetwhattheydidhere.Itisforustheliving,rather,tobededicatedheretotheunfinishedworkwhichtheywhofoughtherehavethusfarsonoblyadvanced.Itisratherforustobeherededicatedtothegreattaskremainingbeforeus...thatfromthesehonoreddeadwetakeincreaseddevotiontothatcauseforwhichtheygavethelastfullmeasureofdevotion...thatweherehighlyresolvethatthesedeadshallnothavediedinvain...thatthisnation,underGod,shallhaveanewbirthoffreedom...andthatgovernmentofthepeople...bythepeople...forthepeople...shallnotperishfromtheearth.95

Fourscoreandsevenyearsago,ourfathersbroughtforthuponthiscontinentanewnation:conceivedinliberty,anddedicatedtothepropositionthatallmenarecreatedequal.

Nowweareengagedinagreatcivilwar...testingwhetherthatnation,oranynationsoconceivedandsodedicated...canlongendure.Wearemetonagreatbattlefieldofthatwar.

Wehavecometodedicateaportionofthatfieldasafinalrestingplaceforthosewhoheregavetheirlivesthatthatnationmightlive.Itisaltogeth