2023學(xué)年完整公開課版Revision 全市獲獎

外研版高中英語選修9

Module7

RevisionHowtoDevelopaParagraphGoodsentenceswrittenbyyouoryourclassmates:Topic1:KeytoSuccess

Maybeeveryonewantstobeaheroorasuperman,theonewhohasunusualability,butyouhavetofacethereality,whichisthegreaterabilityyouhave,thegreaterresponsibilityyouwilltake.Topic2:CanMoneyBuyHappiness?

Moneycanbuybeautifulrose,butnotpurelove;moneycanbuybighouse,butnotwarmfamily;moneycanbuyhighposition,butnottruerespect;moneycanbuyjoyforthemoment,butnothappinessforever.Topic3:WorkingIndividuallyorWorkinginaTeam

Workingindividuallyisn’tabadthing,but,atthesametime,weshouldadoptothers’helpfuladvices,soworkinginateamisthebetterchoice.Topic4:PetsMakeGoodCompany

Benicetoyourpet,otherwise,whatyouwillloseisnotonlytheconnectionwithyourpet,butalsothekindheartyouhavehad.Topic6:HowtoDealwiththeBadBehaviorinPublic

Alwaysremember:helpingothersishelpingyourself,becausethepersonyouhelpedyesterdaywillhelpyoutomorrowinreturn.Topic5:HelpOthers

Ifyouhavesomebadbehavior,whichyoucan’tovercomebyyourself,youcanaskothersforhelp,butneverstoptryingtogiveitup.Iwakedupat6:30.IthoughtIwaslate.Iwashedquickly.ThenIwentintothekitchen.Ifoundsomethingtoeat.Ifinishedeatinginafewminutes.Itookmybikeandhurriedout.Irodeveryfastalongthestreets.SoonIwasattheschoolgate.Butitwasclosed.ThenIrealizedthatitwasSunday.Iwakedupat6:30.ThinkingthatIwouldbelateforschool,Iwashedquickly,wentintothekitchen,andfoundsomethingtoeat.ThenIhurriedoutwithmybike.IrodeasfastasIcouldalongthestreets,andsoongottotheschoolgate,butitwasclosed.OnlythendidIrealizethatitwasSunday.Comparethesetwoparagraphs:ExerciseI:Ilikereadingnovels.Theyoftentellmeinterestingandmovingstories.Somestoriesarealsoeducating.Theydescribegoodandbadpeople.Theydescribethebrightsideandthedarksideoflife.Theyhelpmedistinguishbetweenrightandwrong.Inthiswaytheyhavehelpedmetounderstandpeopleandlife.Asaresult,Iseemtohavebecomewiser.Rewritethisparagraphbycombiningsomeofthesentences.Onepossibleanswer:Ilikereadingnovelsbecausetheytellinterestingandmovingstories.Moreover,somestoriesareeducating.Bydescribinggoodandbadpeople,andthebrightsideandthedarksideoflife,suchstorieshelpmetodistinguishbetweenrightandwrong,andunderstandpeopleandlife.Readingthemhasperhapsmademewise.GoodParagraphtopicsentencedetailsconclusionWaysofDevelopingaParagraph:1.DevelopmentbyTime2.DevelopmentbyProcess3.DevelopmentbySpace4.DevelopmentbyComparisonandContrast5.DevelopmentbyClassificationAgreatbreakthroughinhisresearchcamewhenhedreamedofanexperimentthreenightsinarow.Thefirsttwonightshewokeupandwrotedowntheexperimentquicklyonthepaper.Butthenextmorning,hecouldn’ttellwhatthenotesmeant.Onthethirdnight,hegotupafterhavingthedream.Thistime,insteadofmakingnoteshewentstraighttohislaboratoryandperformedtheimportantexperiment.Asthedayoftheexamapproaches,thereareseveralthingsyoucandotomakelifeeasier.Firstly,youshouldmakesurethatyougetregularexercise.Afterbeingsureaboutthat,ithelpstowriteshortnotesofthemostimportantstudypointsonpiecesofpaperandlookatthemjustbeforeyougotobed.Then,onthedayoftheexam,don’tdoanystudy.Eataproperbreakfast,wearcomfortableclothesandtakeyourfavoritepenandpencilwithyou.Atlast,don’tforgetwatch.Themomentyouentermyroom,youwillseeabigmirrorinfrontofyou.Onyourlefthand,thereisthelivingroom.ThesofaliesontheeastwallfacingtheTVset,infrontofwhichstandsacoffeetable.Thereisadeskinthemiddleofthenorthwallfacingthewindow,fromwhereyoucangetthebestviewofthecity.Nexttothewindow,thereisabookcase,whereyoucanfindalotofgoodstories.Loveisjustlikearope,tyingyourhandsandfeet,whichmakesyounarrow-minded,for,wheninlove,youalwaysfellleftalonewithyourloverbythewholeworld.Soseeminglysweet,loveneverstopstogivebitterness.Ontheotherhand,friendshipneverlessensyourfreedom.Yourmindisbroadenedthankstothebenefitoffriendship.Youfeelhappyandrelaxedspendingyourtimewithyourfriends,becausefriendshipisnotsosweetthatwillturnintobitterness.Differentpeopleenjoydoingdifferentthings.Thisiscertainlyreflectedinthisbeachscene.Someliketositintheshade,watchingthewavesandenjoyingthesound.Otherspreferbaskinginthesun,satisfiedwiththedarkskintheywillhave.Butthebeachisforchildren.Somelittleonessitonthesandybeachandbuilttheirowncastle.However,someolderonesenjoysurfinginand