2023學(xué)年完整公開課版Howtowritealetterofapplicationby邱淑文

主講人：茂名市第一中學(xué)邱淑文HowtowritealetterofapplicationIntheexams,whichwordsindicateusthatweshouldwritealetterofapplication?求職信自薦信應(yīng)聘信一、應(yīng)用范圍【2019年高考全國I卷改編】假定你是李華，暑期在倫敦學(xué)習(xí)，得知當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館要舉辦中國畫展覽。請寫一封信申請做志愿者，內(nèi)容包括：1.寫信目的；2.個人優(yōu)勢；3.能做的事情。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Dearsirormadam,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua.二、范例分析二、范例分析（a.審題指導(dǎo)）1.審題立意（______、______、______）要求考生寫______________

(文體)，人稱多用__________，時態(tài)多用____________。2.謀篇布局（__________）書信格式，稱呼和落款文中已經(jīng)給出。第一段__________，第二段________________________,第三段____________。體裁人稱時態(tài)書信（申請信）第一人稱一般現(xiàn)在時三段論1.寫作目的2.個人優(yōu)勢+3.能做的事情寫信期待二、范例分析（a.審題指導(dǎo)）3.準(zhǔn)備關(guān)鍵詞（_________+__________）（1）根據(jù)寫作要點初步確定文章可能使用到的詞匯有:summervacation,localmuseum,aChinesePaintingExhibition，applyfor,volunteer，advantage,beabletodo（2）使全文銜接自然，語義流暢的連接詞，如:Firstofall,Besides,tobeginwith，moreover，asforme，Lastbutnotleast，內(nèi)容詞匯銜接詞匯DearSirorMadam,Howareyoudoing?IamLiHua,a17-year-oldteenager,whoiscrazyaboutdifferentculturesaroundtheworld.Recently,IlearnedinyourofficialwebsitethatavolunteerisneededforanexhibitionofChinesetraditionalpaintinginLondon.SoIamwritingtoapplyforthisposition.HerearethreemainreasonswhyIamthebestchoiceforyou.Firstandforemost,havinglivedinLondonforhalfayearbeforeasanexchangestudent,IamundoubtedlygoodatEnglish;asaresult,itisapieceofcakeformetointroduceeverythingtointernationalfriends.Besides,IlearnedChinesepaintingformorethantenyearsinmychildhood;therefore,Idoknowalotaboutthisgreatartform.Lastbutcertainlynotleast,asvicemonitorofourclass,Iamkind,patientandalwaysreadytohelpothers.Hopefully,thiswonderfulchancewouldbeofferedtome.IhavetheconfidnecethatIwillhaveagreattime.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua2019全國1卷參考范文DearSirorMadam,Howareyoudoing?IamLiHua,a17-year-oldteenager,whoiscrazyaboutdifferentculturesaroundtheworld.Recently,IlearnedinyourofficialwebsitethatavolunteerisneededforanexhibitionofChinesetraditionalpaintinginLondon.SoIamwritingtoapplyforthisposition.第一段：自我介紹+寫作目的1.___________部分可用同位語或定語從句I'mLiHua,a……/whois…2.___________部分可使用模板句I'mwritingtoapplyfor…/applytobe…/applytojoin…二、范例分析（b.結(jié)構(gòu)分析）自我介紹寫作目的HerearethreemainreasonswhyIamthebestchoiceforyou.Firstandforemost,havinglivedinLondonforhalfayearbeforeasanexchangestudent,IamundoubtedlygoodatEnglish;asaresult,itisapieceofcakeformetointroduceeverythingtointernationalfriends.Besides,IlearnedChinesepaintingformorethantenyearsinmychildhood;therefore,Idoknowalotaboutthisgreatartform.Lastbutcertainlynotleast,asvicemonitorofourclass,Iamkind,patientandalwaysreadytohelpothers.第二段：總括句/主題句+自身優(yōu)勢（口語+經(jīng)驗）+應(yīng)聘目的（注意使用連接詞）1._____________句：首句HerearethreemainreasonswhyIamthebestchoiceforyou.2.__________:【P.S.除了相關(guān)的能力、經(jīng)驗，還可以描述學(xué)歷、性格、文化背景等方面】口語：itisapieceofcakeformetointroduceeverythingtointernationalfriends經(jīng)驗：實例+拓展(IlearnedChinesepaintingformorethantenyearsinmychildhood;therefore,Idoknowalotaboutthisgreatartform.Lastbutcertainlynotleast,asvicemonitorofourclass,Iamkind,patientandalwaysreadytohelpothers.）3.可增添：(___________)：從自身的收獲和能帶來什么入手（通過這次活動，我不但可以開拓視野，還可以能推廣中華文化。二、范例分析（b.結(jié)構(gòu)分析）總括/主題自身優(yōu)勢應(yīng)聘目的可增添：What'smore,throughthisactivity,Icannot

onlybroadenmyhorizon,butalsocanpromoteChineseculture.Hopefully,thiswonderfulchancewouldbeofferedtome.IhavetheconfidnecethatIwillhaveagreattime.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua第三段：表達意愿+期待答復(fù)1.__________：Hopefully,thiswonderfulchancewouldbeofferedtome.2.___________:(I'm)lookingforwardtoyourreply.二、范例分析（b.結(jié)構(gòu)分析）表達意愿期待回復(fù)DearSirorMadam,Howareyoudoing?IamLiHua,a17-year-oldteenager,whoiscrazyaboutdifferentculturesaroundtheworld.Recently,IlearnedinyourofficialwebsitethatavolunteerisneededforanexhibitionofChinesetraditionalpaintinginLondon.SoIamwritingtoapplyforthisposition.HerearethreemainreasonswhyIamthebestchoiceforyou.Firstandforemost,havinglivedinLondonforhalfayearbeforeasanexchangestudent,IamundoubtedlygoodatEnglish;asaresult,itisapieceofcakeformetointroduceeverythingtointernationalfriends.Besides,IlearnedChinesepaintingformorethantenyearsinmychildhood;therefore,Idoknowalotaboutthisgreatartform.

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Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua自我介紹+寫作目的總括句/主題句+自身優(yōu)勢(+應(yīng)聘目的)表達意愿+期待答復(fù)二、范例分析（b.結(jié)構(gòu)分析）1.我寫信來申請......I'mwritingtoapplyfor…/applytobe…/applytojoin…2.從你們的廣告中得知你們正在招聘一名……Ilearnedfromyouradvertisementthatyouareinneedofa…3.我對報紙上登的銷售經(jīng)理一職很感興趣。Thepositionofsalesmanageradvertisedinthenewspaperinterestsmeverymuch.4.我認(rèn)為我正是你廣告中所需要的人，原因如下。IthinkIamtherightpersonforthejobyouadvertisedandmyreasonsareasfollows.5.我認(rèn)為我能勝任你所提供的職位。

IthinkI’mqualifiedforthepositionyouofferedintheadvertisement.三、拓展（常用表達）自我介紹+寫作目的總括句/主題句主修……專業(yè)_______________________2.(可)勝任……_______________________3.精通/對……掌握熟練_____________________

4.與……相處融洽______________________5.獲得一等獎____________________6.對……樂觀____________________7.良好的人際關(guān)系____________________8.富有合作精神____________________9.滿足你們的要求_______________________getalongwellwith…majorin…bequalifiedfor…h(huán)aveagoodcommand/knowledgeof三、拓展（常用表達）winthefirstprizebeoptimisticaboutgoodinterpersonalrelationshipcooperative/withteamworkspiritmeetyourqualifications/requirements自身優(yōu)勢（履歷、性格、經(jīng)驗等）+應(yīng)聘目的三、拓展（常用表達）10.責(zé)任感/成就感senseofresponsibility/senseofachievement11.在……方面有豐富的經(jīng)驗haverichexperiencein…/beexperiencedin…12.之前的經(jīng)驗可幫我輕松解決一些潛在問題等Thepreviousexperiencehelpsmesolvesomepotentialproblems.13.可以毫無障礙地和外國學(xué)生交流havenodifficultyincommunicatingwithforeighstudents

14.通過這次活動，我能更加了解……Fromthisactivity,Icanknowmoreabout...一句多譯。1.如果你們能夠給我提供這樣的機會，我將十分感激。(一句三譯)A:Iwouldreallyappreciateitifyoucouldgivemetheopportunity.B:

IwouldappreciateitifIcouldbegiventhechance.C:Shouldyouoffermetheopportunity,Iwouldbegrateful.2.一旦被錄用/如果有幸被錄用，我將竭盡所能把工作做好。(一句兩譯)A:Oncehired,Iwilldevotemyselftothepost.B:IfIamluckyenoughtobeadmitted,I’llworkhardandtrytobeagoodemployee.三、拓展（常用表達）3.感謝你考慮我的申請，期待收到你的回復(fù)。(一句兩譯)A:ThanksforconsideringmyapplicationandIamlookingforwardtoyourreply.B:ThankyoufortakingmyapplicationintoaccountandIamlookingforwardtoyourreply.三、拓展（常用表達）四、實戰(zhàn)演練Assignment【2006全國Ⅱ卷：應(yīng)征運動會志愿者】假定你是李華，亞洲冬季運動會將在你居住的地方舉辦，現(xiàn)正在招募志愿者，你希望成為其中一員。請按要求用英文給組委會寫一封信。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：1.個人情況：年齡，性別，學(xué)歷；2